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Naomile - LAST CHRISTMAS

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Lust
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Lust
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, December 24, 2013 at 5:38:28 PM

Artist: Naomile
Title: LAST CHRISTMAS
Tags: holidays winter xmas utau
BPM: 123
Filesize: 3700kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.71 stars, 262 notes)
  2. Normal (2.71 stars, 120 notes)
Download: Naomile - LAST CHRISTMAS
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♥ Merry Christmas! ♥

I'd just wanted to say thank you to everyone who made this year fantastic for me - the friends I met here on osu!, the people that have changed my life in and out of the game, my family, everyone!
My life has changed a lot this past year. Made new friends, lost old ones, but that only made me a stronger person. I lost someone very close to me, and I will never forget what she's done for me. I found this game, which is now taking up a lot of my free time. All in all I do not regret this year one bit, and it is all thanks to you guys! Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New year!
I hope you get what you wish for >w>
Last edited by Lust , edited 32 times in total.
DenoisoGoiso
681 posts
Joined April 2013
DenoisoGoiso
Hi! M4M

[General]
  1. add to tags : Kagamine Len Rin
  2. The offset is 879 (+2)
[Hard]
  • 00:02:340 (4,2) - fix this two stack
    00:03:803 (4) - don't make this too curve.
    00:06:242 (4) - don't try to overlap with next slider
    00:14:291 (5) - Fix distancing
    00:14:535 (1) - don't try to overlap with next slider
    00:14:535 (1,2) - i suggest make blanket here
    00:15:998 (3) - i suggest move it into White Tick. suggestion :
    Example
    00:18:194 (5) - this slider is too curve
    00:18:925 (1) - i think NC in here is not Rhythmable. remove nc at 00:18:925 (1) so add nc at 00:18:194 (5)
    00:19:901 (3) - fix stack
    00:53:559 (1) - too curve
    01:00:876 (4,1) - blanket is worse
    01:04:291 - Add break time?
    01:18:681 (6,1) - fix blanket
  1. Please do hitsounding D:
Just that.
Good luck ~
Lust
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Lust
DenoisoGoiso

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

Hi! M4M

[General]
  1. add to tags : Kagamine Len Rin :o why?
  2. The offset is 879 (+2) its fine how it is
[Hard]
  • 00:02:340 (4,2) - fix this two stack
    00:03:803 (4) - don't make this too curve.
    00:06:242 (4) - don't try to overlap with next slider
    00:14:291 (5) - Fix distancing its fine o.o
    00:14:535 (1) - don't try to overlap with next slider ?
    00:14:535 (1,2) - i suggest make blanket here its fine how it is
    00:15:998 (3) - i suggest move it into White Tick. suggestion :
    00:18:194 (5) - this slider is too curve its fine
    00:18:925 (1) - i think NC in here is not Rhythmable. remove nc at 00:18:925 (1) so add nc at 00:18:194 (5) done
    00:19:901 (3) - fix stack
    00:53:559 (1) - too curve its fine
    01:00:876 (4,1) - blanket is worse fixed
    01:04:291 - Add break time? nah
    01:18:681 (6,1) - fix blanket not really a blanket
  1. Please do hitsounding D:
Just that.
Good luck ~ thanks

not many changes, but thank you anyways!
Ioka
96 posts
Joined September 2013
Ioka
you asked for it so here it is~~~~ :)

Hard -

00:07:462 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - try a different pattern, this one is too clunky and feels way to compact
00:08:681 (1,2) - change it to this rhythm
SPOILER
00:12:584 (1,2) - switch these
00:14:535 (1) - replace with a circle, the slider gives it a kind of funky rhythm, circle sounds a lot better.
00:15:023 (7) - move this to 00:14:779 - as it will sound a lot better with the change to the slider ^
00:50:389 (2,3) - swap these so they look like this.
SPOILER
00:49:657 (1,2,3) - change to
SPOILER
01:27:462 (2) - ctrl+h then rotate to -97° and place at x:256 y:352
01:42:828 (2) - change to a slider that ends at 01:43:072 - then add a circle at 01:43:316 -
01:07:462 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - change to this rhythm
SPOILER
01:32:340 (5) - replace to a circle
01:47:950 (1) - (THIS IS OPTIONAL) change to this.
SPOILER

sorry would do normal mod but u already kno y i didnt :o
Lust
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Lust
Amir

Amir wrote:

you asked for it so here it is~~~~ :) <3

Hard -

00:07:462 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - try a different pattern, this one is too clunky and feels way to compact changed around
00:08:681 (1,2) - change it to this rhythm
SPOILER
nah i think it is fine
00:12:584 (1,2) - switch these done
00:14:535 (1) - replace with a circle, the slider gives it a kind of funky rhythm, circle sounds a lot better. i think it sounds fine, but if more people point it out i will change
00:15:023 (7) - move this to 00:14:779 - as it will sound a lot better with the change to the slider ^ read above
00:50:389 (2,3) - swap these so they look like this.
SPOILER
done
00:49:657 (1,2,3) - change to
SPOILER
done
01:27:462 (2) - ctrl+h then rotate to -97° and place at x:256 y:352 not sure what you mean here, it goes off screen if I do what you tell me
01:42:828 (2) - change to a slider that ends at 01:43:072 - then add a circle at 01:43:316 - nah its okay
01:07:462 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - change to this rhythm
SPOILER
unchanged
01:32:340 (5) - replace to a circledone
01:47:950 (1) - (THIS IS OPTIONAL) change to this.
SPOILER
ill keep this in mind, my slider isnt the prettiest xD

sorry would do normal mod but u already kno y i didnt :o

Thank you very much for mod!
YielShelion
78 posts
Joined December 2011
YielShelion
hello~

I don't think this map need modding anymore
Its already perfect :)
Hula
581 posts
Joined January 2013
Hula
Begging for mods off the great modder. Me.

[General]

This song is pretty gay
How about instead of blue you use a white/silvery white, wait more christmassy, also there's skins out there which sparkle, use one of those.

I'm no blanket slider master fyi

[Normal]
00:16:486 (1) - Kind of invert the slider to make it look like this, since it looks crap right now. It's better than nothing http://puu.sh/5GHW6.jpg
00:24:291 (1) - Not stacked properly with the 1 before it should be y:141.
00:49:657 (1) - Not stacked with the 1 before, should be y:189
01:07:218 (1) - Doesn't blanket perfectly, it tapers out where the repeating arrow shit is
01:35:023 (1) - Move this 1 to x:135 y:296
[Hard]
00:11:852 (4) - The beginning of this slider isn't completely in line with the end of slider 2, if it matters?
00:14:535 (1) - Make this slider look like this Imo, (I just flipped it and shit), http://puu.sh/5GHiu.jpg
00:19:901 (4) - Not stacked with the end of that slider
00:21:120 (3) - Rotate this slider by 7 degrees clockwise (selection field thing) Looks like this, http://puu.sh/5GHnL.jpg a blind sight neater if you ask me and in slight keeping with the next set of lsiders. Oh fuck now it's not 1.2x DS, fix that too.
00:24:779 (2) - ^

00:29:169 (3) - Make this parallel to the straight slider before, it's off point by a couple of degrees clockwise.
00:32:828 (2) - Move this a bit up and left to make it a better blanket for the next circle. x: 188, y:144

00:45:511 (5) - Use the same slider as the straight slider before and hit Ctrl+G, it's not parallel.
00:47:950 (2) - Rotate this 7 degrees like earlier
00:50:389 (2) - Not stacked on the end of the previous slider properly
01:30:633 (1) - Not stacked on the end of the slider properly
Lust
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Lust
Thanks hula! I changed a bunch
BounceBabe
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BounceBabe
Hey, just leaving this here. I made a Map Analysis on my YT channel for this map.

Lust
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Lust
:o I'm honored, I'll use your criticisms in improving my set!
Hard
696 posts
Joined February 2013
Hard
Mod because bored.

That song's bad. But well it's christmas. Be nice.

Normal


00:02:340 (3) - I think you should strg + g this. First the flow goes like this:
SPOILER
but if you strg + g it, it's
SPOILER
I think that plays much nicer because you have to change your pace only 2 times, not 3.
OFC you'd have to change the notes afterwards so that it fits.
00:20:876 (2) - ^ same like before. It's just some flow.
Actually I don't have to point out much more than this. It's just that this map plays... boring. Try to put some more interesting pattern or a pretty slider in it. Even if it's a normal only 1/1 and 1/2 are like no.


Hard


00:12:828 - I think you should emphasize a bit at this point. The map is easygoing and straight but maybe some kind of surprise or sth would be nice, like you are surprised while listening to that song and all... I don't like it how that basedrum is on the smaller end of the slider. It's just not... I think it just doesn't fit with the music and all.
00:13:559 - ^
00:14:291 - ^
00:14:779 - ^
00:15:998 - I don't think you should miss those 3 1/4 drums. Even if it's a hard you could make it a bit harder.
00:16:486 - I think I would change the SV a bit for the refrain. The musics getting faster and more exciting so why not using faster sliders? Would fit, imo.
00:28:437 - same as at 00:12:828
00:44:047 - ^
somehow this map is 1/2 's all the time. Try to play around with the beats and stuff. Try to emphasize and make the map more interesting. Also try to pretty your blankets up. I'm not blanket master but maybe ... Well.. You know...
Lust
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Lust
No changes except

Chiva

ChivaCookie wrote:

Normal


00:02:340 (3) - I think you should strg + g this. First the flow goes like this:
SPOILER
but if you strg + g it, it's
SPOILER
I think that plays much nicer because you have to change your pace only 2 times, not 3.
OFC you'd have to change the notes afterwards so that it fits. You are right about the flow, I reverse the first slider instead so the flow is fixed.

Ah thanks for the mod anyways! I appreciate it~
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
Hey Lust :D

Special M4M from #modreqs


[Hard]
♥ Found it flows so good (very well :3)
00:02:340 (4,2) - Make their heads overlap each other perfectly. It could be achieved more easily by using Grid Snap (turning it ON in the Editor).
00:11:120 (2) - Move the last node to x:316 y:196, so its tail will perfectly fit to the 00:11:852 (4) - 's head.
00:11:608 (3,5) - They aren't stacked properly. The easiest solution is delete 00:12:340 (5) - and copy it from 00:11:608 (3) - so they'll get the same place (:
00:13:072 (2,3) - ^
00:18:925 (2) - Move the last node to x:57 y:209 (disabling Grid Snap to do this), so they will be perfect with 00:19:901 (4) -
00:28:194 (1) - Make the blanket better with moving it to x:436 y:204, then move the 2nd node to x:436 y:256 and the 3rd node to x:424 y:276.
00:29:901 (4) - Move slightly to x:298 y:224 for perfect overlapping.
00:34:291 (2) - For a perfect blanket, move the 2nd node to x:432 y:176 and the 3rd node to x:452 y:148.
00:35:511 (5,1) - Overlap perfectly (5) with (1)'s head.
00:36:974 (4,6) - Same thing, (6) with (4)'s head.
:?: 00:47:218 (5,1,2) - The distance between (5) and (1) feels a bit tricky, but it maybe due to my current playing skills. Hearing the song at this part, there's a small stop, what makes the pattern fine.
00:48:681 (4,1,2) - Where they meet each other (i.e., overlap), could be more perfect (some little adjustement with Grid Snap disabled).
01:06:974 (5,1) - Could make them like this ? → http://puu.sh/5HGw6.jpg
01:18:437 (5,1) - Overlap perfectly (5) with (1)'s head.
01:19:413 (2,4) - Overlap perfectly (4) with (2)'s head.
01:21:364 (2) - Move the 2nd node by 1 grid up, then move the 3rd node to x:156 y:236 to make its tail overlap perfect with 01:22:340 (4) -
01:22:584 (5) - Move the 2nd node to x:264 y:272 and then move the 3rd node to x:316 y:268. For better blanket here.
01:35:755 (3,2) - Overlap perfectly (2) with (3)'s head.
* 01:47:950 (1) - This slider is really not symmetrical, but, specially in this case, I don't care. Its head is part of the former square and also it feels not possible fixing symmetry with no drastic damage on further patterns, so better keep it as is.

[Normal]
00:00:877 (1) - Move the 2nd and the 3rd nodes by 1 grid up for perfect blanket.
00:08:681 (1) - Move the 2nd node by 1 grid down and move the 3rd node by 1 grid left, so the blanket will get perfect.
00:19:901 (2) - Move to x:140 y:200 for nicer blanket, and...
00:20:389 (1) - ...move to x:220 y:236 for same reason.
00:48:194 (2) - Move the 2nd node by 1 grid right and 1 grid up to perfect the blanket.
00:50:145 (2) - Move the 2nd node to x:336 y:148, same reason.
00:52:096 (2) - Move the 2nd node to x:72 y:148, same reason. Or, if you applied the last mod, copy from 00:50:145 (2) and make Ctrl-H (flip horizontally), then move to x:125 y:105.
00:55:023 (3) - Move the 2nd node to x:412 y:200 and the 3rd node to x:416 y:240, for perfect blanket too.
00:56:974 (2) - Move the middle node by 2 grids down, same reason.
00:59:901 (2) - Move the niddle node by 1 grid down, more perfect blanket.
01:01:852 (2) - For same reason, move the middle node by 1 grid left.
01:03:316 (3,1) - Not stacked perfectly.
01:24:291 (5) - Add clap (missing clap here)
01:27:218 (1) - ^
01:35:511 (2) - Move the middle node to x:216 y:168, perfect blanket.
01:36:974 (2) - Move the middle node by 1 or 2 grids down, same reason.
01:44:291 (1) - Move the 2nd node to x:412 y:228, same reason.
01:46:242 (1,2) - Move the 3rd node of 01:46:242 (1) - to x:188 y:64, then move the note 01:47:218 (2) - by 1 grid right.

Well, I recognize I gone Nazi on depth >< because the flow is amazing :3 imho. Both Hard and Normal. And feel it's so close to be ranked this year :3 Nothing unrankable (standard diff naming, no slider with extra red nodes making it unreadable, and perfect spacing with a few -- and song-suitable - exceptions).

Good luck and I wanted this map RANKED soon ^^

Merry Christmas <3 Happy New Year

Att.
Lust
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Topic Starter
Lust
Thanks alarido! I fixed everything
[ Raphael ]
[ Raphael ]
Hi~! from my queue!

[Normal]
  • 00:05:755 (4) - What about to be symmetry with 00:04:291 (1)?
    01:03:803 - add 4/4 slider with 1 reverse (Suggestion :3)

    [Hard]
    • 00:02:340 (4,2) - accurate overlap
      00:11:852 (4) - move to (316,198) for accurate overlap with 00:11:120 (2)
      00:19:901 (4) - move to (61,211) for accurate overlap with 00:18:925 (2)
      00:43:803 (1) - add finish on mid ┓
      00:44:779 (3) - add finish on start ┣ for follow song's rhythm :3
      00:45:511 (5) - ^ ┛
      00:47:706 (1) - add finish
      00:49:657 (1) - move to (223,204) for accurate overlap with 00:47:950 (2)
      00:50:389 (2) - if you follow the above, move to (342,136) for accurate overlap with 00:49:657 (1)
      00:55:511 (1,3) - it would be better if you remove that overlap lightly
      01:03:803 - add 4/4 slider with 1 reverse (Suggestion :3)
      01:15:755 (3) - add finish on mid
      01:28:194 (3,3) - accurate overlap

      Nice BG and nice song~! I like it >w<
      and Good luck~ :3
Ethercastle
116 posts
Joined March 2013
Ethercastle
From my queue~ Guess Xmas song should get priority ^ ^

Well didn't expect a Japanese version...

[General]
Considering adding a custom clap for the non-kiai part?

[Hard]
Overall in good state. Personally find it a bit too monotonous with 1/2 spamming & constant ds. Try to suggest some variety, but merely suggestions.

00:04:535 (1) - rotate by about -15 degree?
00:06:242 (4) - prefer just a circle at the red line, follows the vocal better
00:08:681 (1) - fix blanket
00:14:535 (1) - guess this should be rotated anti-clockwise for better flow
00:16:486 (1) - 3/4 slider?
00:18:925 (2) - replace it with a slider (either 1/2 or 3/4) plus a circle
00:20:389 (1) - 3/4 slider? and either way you could rotate this anticlockwise & probably ctrl + G
00:24:291 (1) - 3/4 slider?
00:35:023 (3,4,5,6) - fixed ds
00:38:194 (2) - rotation?
00:43:803 (1) - blanket?
00:46:242 (1,2,3,4,5) - gradually increase the ds?
00:49:657 (1,2) - may consider a jump here?
00:53:559 (1) - 3/4 slider? (same suggestions, not gonna repeat for later parts....)
00:55:755 (2,3) - may consider follow vocal here
00:57:950 (2,3) - ^
00:57:462 (1) - rotate this anticlockwise?
00:59:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - may consider increasing the ds and add some jumps to fit the music (feels back-and-forth)
01:15:023 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^ (Guess you can also consider jumps for other similar parts)
01:17:950 (3,4,5,6) - gradually increase the ds
01:19:413 (2) - also prefer slider + circle
01:21:364 (2) - ^
01:22:584 (5) - rotate anticlockwise?
01:46:242 (1,2,3,4) - fix ds

Again just suggestions...Didn't even check myself if these will work....

[Normal]

00:22:828 (2) - rotate slightly?
00:28:681 (2,3,4) - guess this is intended to be a triangle? should fix imo.
00:30:145 (1) - feels weird not following the vocal. It's normal diff so I guess some red line objects are fine
01:05:755 (2,3,1) - could be a better blanket

Good normal~


Good luck xD
Lust
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Lust
Ethercastle

Ethercastle wrote:

From my queue~ Guess Xmas song should get priority ^ ^

Well didn't expect a Japanese version...

[General]
Considering adding a custom clap for the non-kiai part? nah

[Hard]
Overall in good state. Personally find it a bit too monotonous with 1/2 spamming & constant ds. Try to suggest some variety, but merely suggestions.

00:04:535 (1) - rotate by about -15 degree? that will mess up the pattern I have going there
00:06:242 (4) - prefer just a circle at the red line, follows the vocal better done
00:08:681 (1) - fix blanket fixed
00:14:535 (1) - guess this should be rotated anti-clockwise for better flow its fine how it is
00:18:925 (2) - replace it with a slider (either 1/2 or 3/4) plus a circle not feeling it
00:20:389 (1) - 3/4 slider? and either way you could rotate this anticlockwise & probably ctrl + G nope
00:24:291 (1) - 3/4 slider? ^
00:35:023 (3,4,5,6) - fixed ds the DS is already fine ?
00:38:194 (2) - rotation? nah
00:43:803 (1) - blanket? its for the flow afterwards, not every pattern needs to be blanket...
00:46:242 (1,2,3,4,5) - gradually increase the ds? doesn't fit in well in this type of hard
00:49:657 (1,2) - may consider a jump here? ^
00:53:559 (1) - 3/4 slider? (same suggestions, not gonna repeat for later parts....) good, because it doesnt fit
00:55:755 (2,3) - may consider follow vocal here its fine
00:57:950 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:57:462 (1) - rotate this anticlockwise? done
00:59:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - may consider increasing the ds and add some jumps to fit the music (feels back-and-forth) doesnt fit with an easier hard
01:15:023 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^ (Guess you can also consider jumps for other similar parts) ^
01:17:950 (3,4,5,6) - gradually increase the ds ^
01:19:413 (2) - also prefer slider + circle nah
01:21:364 (2) - ^ ^
01:22:584 (5) - rotate anticlockwise? nope
01:46:242 (1,2,3,4) - fix ds again the DS is fine...

Again just suggestions...Didn't even check myself if these will work....
Good luck xD

No changes to normal

Raphael

[ Raphael ] wrote:

Hi~! from my queue!

[Normal]
  • 00:05:755 (4) - What about to be symmetry with 00:04:291 (1)? done
    01:03:803 - add 4/4 slider with 1 reverse (Suggestion :3) i like the pause there~

    [Hard]
    • 00:02:340 (4,2) - accurate overlap fixed
      00:11:852 (4) - move to (316,198) for accurate overlap with 00:11:120 (2) done
      00:19:901 (4) - move to (61,211) for accurate overlap with 00:18:925 (2) done
      00:43:803 (1) - add finish on mid ┓ done
      00:44:779 (3) - add finish on start ┣ for follow song's rhythm :3 done
      00:45:511 (5) - ^ ┛ done
      00:47:706 (1) - add finish done
      00:49:657 (1) - move to (223,204) for accurate overlap with 00:47:950 (2) done
      00:50:389 (2) - if you follow the above, move to (342,136) for accurate overlap with 00:49:657 (1) done
      00:55:511 (1,3) - it would be better if you remove that overlap lightly done
      01:03:803 - add 4/4 slider with 1 reverse (Suggestion :3) as said before i like the pause ^^
      01:15:755 (3) - add finish on mid done
      01:28:194 (3,3) - accurate overlap done

      Nice BG and nice song~! I like it >w<
      and Good luck~ :3 me too >w>

Thanks for the mods!
Ioka
96 posts
Joined September 2013
Ioka
oh look. a star.
Lust
osu! Alumni
2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Lust

Amir wrote:

oh look. a star.
<3
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Hi,Lust,I'm late. In-game req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

None.

[Normal]

00:20:876 (2) - Forget to add clap in slider end?
00:22:828 (2) - ^
00:24:779 (2) - Forget to add clap in slider head?
00:28:681 (2) - Add clap.
00:29:169 (3) - Remove clap (Because 24clap.)
00:32:096 (3) - Strong beat,can add finish is good better.
01:03:316 (3) - ^

[Hard]

00:07:950 (4,5) - Select this 2 notes,use ctrl+g?
00:13:559 (4) - Strong beat,move to (244|312),be triangle.
00:26:974 (2,3,4,5) - Make a pattern? (Christmas tree XD)
SPOILER
00:35:023 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -
SPOILER
00:39:657 (6) - Place (180|300) is better flow,try it.
00:44:779 (3,4,5) - Can make a jump,it will be better flow:
SPOILER
00:57:462 (1) - Make a jump.Try this:
SPOILER
01:07:462 (1) - Feel move to (388|80) is good pattern.
01:15:755 (3,4) - Try this rhythm,and (4) stack (3) slider head:
SPOILER
01:24:779 (1) - (152|136)? (Feel stack a lot at this here.)
01:31:608 (4) - The same with 01:15:755.
01:42:340 (1) - Try this part add 24clap?
01:46:242 (1,2,3,4) - Strong beat,can make jump:
SPOILER

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked "in christmas" :p
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

Wow I have 400post!
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu


Mod Info:
  1. Unrankable or very questionable stuff
  2. Highly suggestion
  3. Coment or opinions about some
  4. nazi stuff or normal suggestions

General:
  1. the white combo colour its really annoying in the kiai part also the repeat arrow are kinda hard to notice with it maybe try another colour?

Hard:
  1. I will focus on rhythm since its the main issue here imo also you should ad claps you are missing alot of them thought
  2. 00:00:877 (1) - anyways I dont agree with your first rhythm since It dond follow the vocals orthe music properly try to add some like:

    Ok I'll explain you why in firts the 1/1 slider in 00:00:877 (1) - represent the vocals ¨LAST¨ its just one word thats why the long slider empathize it better, 00:01:608 the repeat slider its cuz the vocals ¨christmas¨ start in 00:01:608 but yeah we have to use some repeat cuz the sound in 00:01:852 its also important and should be mapped also the vocals en at 00:02:096 you will ask why a repeat cuz the vocals ¨christmas¨its just one wordand the repeat will represent that conecction between vocals and music sounds and here 00:02:218 you can hear a bell? yeahI like if you map that sound properly 00:02:584 an this one have to be a single beat cuz the vocals start again here thats why >.<
  3. 00:02:218 not sure why you ignore this important sound in the song try to map it properly you will get a better empathize with the song if you do
  4. 00:02:340 (4,2) - stack this properly :c
  5. 00:03:072 ending sliders in downbeats dont follow the song properly and make the game play weird try to change the rhythm and try to map the heavy beats with a circle or slider start cuz that beats are really important and them needa clickeable action maybeyou want to improve the rhythm and try some like:
  6. 00:03:803 really nazi but the curve of this slider its to much o.o try to make em like your previous one
  7. 00:04:535 symilar case as the above you are ignoring the stronges beat here in 00:04:779 and its pretty bad for the rhythm try this one instead:
  8. 00:04:779 also this will need finish sound for better empathize with the music
  9. 00:05:267 In my opinion you should use a 1/2 slider here since you can hear how the vocal get holded for some time also this spot 00:05:511 end with a sound on it
  10. 00:06:120 adding a 1/8 repeat slider here will represent themusic better imo like this:
  11. 00:06:730 this should be a 1/2 repeat slider following the vocals properly thought
  12. 00:07:706 (3,4,5) - I feel really weird this part o.o cuz the circles dont sound like the main vocal since you are trying to follo the echo and then the volume of your hitsounds make this 00:07:706 (3,4,5) - sound really off place solution 2 low the volume o.oi really will not like this solution thought xD I preffer if you follow the main vocal and do a 1/1 slider following the main vocal and drums like:
  13. 00:08:681 (1) - this long repeat dont represent the music really well 00:09:169 here not a real music sound if you listen at 25% but I like the idea of follow the hold vocals since I do it on my maps too then lets try to improve this section try to use this rhythm:

    Ok lets explain it the first long slider will follow the hold vocal like was your idea but will not add a repeat why? if you listen carefull the piano sounds start here 00:09:413 so if you map the 4 beats as circles you will do a nice empathize with rhythm here also if you like and get my idea reduce the volume here 00:09:169 maybe 50% or 40% and up it again at 00:09:413 andwill be really nice owo
  14. 00:10:389 this is symilar at 00:03:072 you use a repeats slider in downbeats here if you listen to the music the stronger sounds are on it same to 00:11:852 so yes the rhythm in this section can be some like:
    http://puu.sh/5K45Q.jpg
  15. 00:12:584 in this case is above the same thing when you found a stonger beats in the music like 00:12:828 you have to map them with a slider start or with a circle since you know its a really stronger beat u add finish on it so lets map it properly
  16. 00:12:828 you add finish here so be concistent and add it on 00:13:559 - 00:14:291 - its the same sound in music if you dont like how the finish sound here maybe claps but yea whistles dont do the work here
  17. 00:15:755 kinda wonder why you stop mapping here since the music its very symilar at what you are following in 00:15:023 try this rhythm instead:
  18. 00:16:486 (1,2) - this its symilar to what I suggest you before in the ¨last christmas¨ word sinc its the tittle of the song lets make a cool rhythm with them like I suggest you before this will follow better this:
  19. 00:18:194 same with this repeat dont follow the music properly I explain you before about heavy beats and stuff try this:
  20. 00:21:120 same here try to follow the main sound in the music and map them properly conver this slider 00:21:120 in 2 circles
  21. 00:21:608 symilar problem as above since if you ignore 00:21:852 you broke your clap pattern also you ignore thedrums in music thought
  22. 00:24:779 (2,3) - nazi again but not afan of your ¨overlap¨ look like a mistake x.x try to blank it better like:
    SPOILER
  23. 00:26:730 missing clap
  24. 00:26:974 remove clap o.o maybe its a mistake? if not it sound pretty bad better remove it
  25. 00:28:194 make this 2 circles same explain as before 00:28:437 this strong have to be mapped properly like you did with the symilar one at 00:29:901
  26. 00:32:584 Im wonder why you stop with claps in this section? o.o they fit alot in some spots mainly 2 and 4 downbeat
  27. 00:35:023 (3,4,5,6) - i love this cirles since them follow the bells pretty nice but not like this spot 00:36:730 the sound here its kinda out of place try to convert it in 1/2 slider with previous 00:36:486 to keep the bells sound as the main beats in this section will be great imo just like you did on 00:36:974
  28. 00:45:998 the NC should be here you may know why >.<
  29. 00:45:998 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - also where are the claps x.x ahaha if you add claps here u will bring more empathize at what are u following in the music
  30. 00:47:950 same issue about the rhythm try this instead:
  31. 00:56:730 same as above
  32. 00:59:169 ^
  33. 00:59:657 ^
  34. 01:01:364 if you ctrl g this you will improve alot the flow and will make your dif more interesting to play
  35. 01:02:340 and yes dont ignore the main sounds on the music
  36. 00:48:194 (3,4) - yeah this overlaps look like mistakes better blank them thought
  37. 00:55:023 (5,6) - If you ask me since this have to be a 1/2 slider since the sound in the upbeat its really low and the vocal its the same also that triple stack break the flow of the map for not special reason
  38. 00:59:169 same ending slider on the main beats of the song try this instead:
  39. 01:06:974 symilar this have to be 2 circles instead
  40. 01:07:462 dont ignore the main beats of the song this 01:07:706 should be mapped properly
  41. 01:11:852 same as above
  42. 01:09:047 im kinda wonder why you ignore this sound? should be a triplet here
  43. 01:12:950 same as above
  44. 01:14:291 same as 00:59:169
  45. 01:18:681 (6,1) - avoid the overlap look pretty bad
  46. 01:18:925 (1,2) - the same as the previous kiai start at 00:16:486
  47. 01:22:584 same dont map the main sounds in the music like this, 01:22:828 should be mapped properly
  48. 01:23:316 (1,2,3) - same as the previous kiai part did you copy past o.o?
  49. 01:25:023 same as 00:47:950
  50. 01:25:511 same as 01:07:462
  51. 01:27:462 remove the clap of the slider start o.o
  52. 01:29:657 (3,1) - stack this properly lol nazi
  53. 01:32:584 kiai should end here also add NC on that beat
  54. 01:34:535 same as 00:16:486
  55. 01:40:145 another rhythm issue that downbeats should be mapped with a slider start or a circle
  56. 01:42:340 your rhythm its kinda messed i dint get what are you trying to follow here try to using this one sound alot better:
  57. 01:47:950 just pointing this slider look really symple maybe you can try to add some slider art here?

    the main problem its the rhythms you regulary ignore heavy beats also the other issue its the hitsounds o.o you ignore alot of sections since claps fit most of the song you should add them also following always the distance look really bored in some parts you have to make some jumps when the music fit and try to make a concistent patterns with your hitsounds

Normal:
  1. 00:06:242 no real sound in this spot thats why it sound pretty bad try to change the rhythm maybe like this with follow bettrer the song:
  2. 00:02:340 this is symilar as above since its a normal you can use some 1/2 to follow better the song
  3. 00:08:194 If you ask me I remove this beat since that downbeat dont have sound in the music thought
  4. 00:12:828 you need to add some here since this beat its really strong btw I see you are trying to map just downbeats but that make your rhythm dont fit the song pretty nice and thats bad since you have to try to follow the music the best you can and yeah you should not ignore beats like 00:12:828 cuz them will be not hard to play for newbies but will be easy for them to click this strong beats
  5. 00:14:047 same issue here since the downbeat dont have empathize in the song and yeah the spots like 00:14:291 - 00:14:779 - have to be mapped due the strong feeling them represent in the song the more suitable rhythm you can follow its this one:
  6. 00:28:437 this is the same case as 00:12:828
  7. 00:29:901 same as above since that beats should be mapped your rhythm there dont follow the song properly for the whole combo I suggest you:
  8. 00:30:389 - maybe remove and add a spinner like you did the other kiai? since the rhythm here its kinda complex for a normal diff a spinner will fit better for this diff
  9. 00:55:023 this slider have the repeat on a main beat in the sound here 00:55:511 - same with 00:56:974 thats why the rhythm its bad again and also you combo pattern its broken here try to fix this maybe with this rhythm:
  10. 01:05:267 (1,2,3,1,2) - kinda nazi try to make this pattern symetrical actually look kinda bad thought
  11. 01:12:584 another rhythm issue here try this one will fit alot better:
  12. 01:17:950 (1) - we have 3 issues here first one the spinner its tho short for a normal/easy diff second issue this 01:19:413 come to fast after the spinner third issue starting the kiai 01:18:925 in the end of a spinner dont represent the music well the best solution for me its remove the spinner and map maynbe with this rhythm:
  13. 01:22:340 same issue as the others repeats try another rhythm here also try to fix your combo pattern maybe like:
  14. 01:23:803 (4,5) - avoid the stack since you should not use them on the easy diff of the set cuz newbies cant play em
  15. 01:25:755 symilar to 01:22:340 use some like:
  16. 01:30:876 you should map this beat too
  17. 01:32:340 symilar here try to use some more fiting with the song like:
  18. 01:35:023 you better remove this beat to soon after the spinner for the easy diff of the set
  19. 01:41:852 same as the othes ones try to use:
  20. 01:47:950 the spinner its to long and bored I'll like if you improve the rhythm and add a slider before starting it like:


I'll continue tomorrow kinda tired now 2 am x.x Ok I focus on the rhythm issues also remember to add more claps patterns in the song maybe add some custom clap
Lust
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Lust
Thanks natsu! I took every single one of your suggestions except for the ones where it was recommending not to stack. I decided to keep them to make the diff more interesting.
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