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Masayoshi Minoshima - Lionheart [Osu|Taiko]

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Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Arusha Shuna
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, June 18, 2013 at 11:37:58 PM

Artist: Masayoshi Minoshima
Title: Lionheart
Tags: maimai halfpipe tokyo mako sakata nwolf
BPM: 132
Filesize: 2871kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (4.71 stars, 164 notes)
  2. Basic (3.49 stars, 107 notes)
  3. Beginner (1.45 stars, 67 notes)
  4. Mako's Expert (4.86 stars, 197 notes)
  5. Master (5 stars, 256 notes)
  6. NTaikashii (4.44 stars, 227 notes)
  7. NTaikOni (4.89 stars, 423 notes)
Download: Masayoshi Minoshima - Lionheart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Guest diff by Mako Sakata
Taiko diffs by NWolf

Scrapped expert difficulty
http://puu.sh/2MI0U
Last edited by Arusha Shuna , edited 19 times in total.
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Hai kak :)

GD: http://puu.sh/2KEEJ.rar

Maaf belum ada hitsoundnya, masih bingung o.o
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Update: http://puu.sh/2KOQw.rar
:)
Aunxfb
205 posts
Joined September 2011
Aunxfb
Hi, from M4M
-------------------------------------------------------------
All are just suggestions :)

[Mako's Expert]
Hitsounds
00:21:898 (1) - add clap to second end
00:22:807 (3) - change finish to clap
00:24:852 (7,8,9) - change clap to third circle
00:25:534 (1) - add clap to second end
00:26:443 (3) - change finish to clap
00:28:489 (8,9,10) - change clap to third circle
00:29:170 (1) - add clap to second end
00:32:125 (9) - change clap to third circle
00:32:807 (1) - add clap to second end
00:33:716 (3) - change finish to clap
00:35:989 (8) - add clap to first circle
00:36:670 (1) - add clap to second end
00:37:352 (3) - add clap to second circle
00:38:034 (4) - remove clap
00:39:398 (7,8,9) - change clap to third circle
00:40:080 (1) - add clap to second circle
00:40:989 (3) - change finish to clap
00:43:716 (1) - add clap to second circle
00:44:625 (3) - change finish to clap
00:51:443 (2) - add clap to second circle
00:51:898 (3) - remove clap
00:51:443 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:53:261 (2) - ^
00:53:716 (3,4,5) - remove claps
00:54:852 (2) - add clap to second circle
00:55:534 (3) - remove clap
00:56:898 (6) - add clap to first circle, remove clap on third circle
00:58:716 (3) - change clap to first circle
01:00:534 (3) - ^
00:59:170 (4) - remove clap
01:00:989 (4) - ^
01:02:807 (4) - ^
01:02:352 (3) - add clap to first circle
01:04:170 (2) - add clap to first circle
01:04:625 (3) - remove clap
01:05:080 (5) - add clap
01:05:307 (1,2,3) - remove claps
01:05:761 (4) - add clap to second circle
01:06:216 (5) - remove clap
01:07:125 (1) - ^
01:07:580 (2) - add clap to second circle
01:08:035 (3) - remove clap
01:08:489 (4,5,6) - change clap to third circle
01:08:943 (1) - remove clap
01:09:398 (2) - add clap to second circle
01:10:080 (5) - remove clap
01:11:216 (2) - add clap to second circle
01:11:670 (3) - remove clap
01:13:262 (3) - change clap to first circle
01:13:717 (4) - remove clap
01:15:080 (3) - add clap to first circle
01:15:534 (4) - remove clap
01:16:898 (2) - add clap to first circle
01:17:353 (3) - remove clap
01:18:261 (3) - remove clap
01:18:489 (4) - add clap to second circle
01:19:625 (1) - add clap maybe?
00:08:943 (3,4,5) - might want to move to 170,140
00:09:625 (6,7) - beat spacing, ignore if this is intentional
00:13:489 (4,5,6) - ^
00:51:898 (3,4) - why not make these a big jump like the rest too? (eg: 00:59:170 (4,5) - ) Note:Make these jumps the same distance? (say, 2.5x?)
not really necassary, kinda felt like missing beats though -.-
00:52:352 - Add circle with clap?
00:54:170 - ^
00:55:989 - Add circle with clap? or extend slider 00:55:534 (3) - and add clap to third circle.
00:57:807 - ^
00:59:625 - ^
01:01:443 - ^
01:03:261 - ^
01:06:898 - ^
01:10:534 - ^
01:12:352 - ^
01:12:352 - ^
01:14:170 - ^
01:17:807 - ^


The flow is fine, but still can be improved. No big problem though :)


[Master]
how about making 00:08:261 (3,4,5) - , 00:10:080 (3,4,5) - , 00:11:898 (3,4,5) - 00:13:716 (3,4,5) - , the same shape/pattern?
00:16:443 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - how about changing these(or the previous 8) into sliders?
00:21:670 (1,2,3) - stack?

add circle with clap/just add clap
Note: Ignore if it contrast with your whistles/patterns
00:22:352 -
00:23:261 -
00:24:170 -
00:25:080 -
00:25:989 -
00:27:807 -
00:28:716 -
00:29:625 -
00:31:443 -
00:33:261 -
00:34:170 -
00:35:080 -
00:36:898 -
00:38:716 -
00:39:625 -
00:40:534 -
00:42:352 -
00:40:534 -
00:42:352 -
00:43:261 -
00:44:170 -
00:47:807 -
00:51:443 -
00:52:352 -
00:53:261 -
00:55:080 -
00:58:716 -
01:00:534 -
01:02:352 -
01:04:170 -
01:05:080 -
01:05:989 -
01:07:807 -
01:09:625 -
01:11:443 -
01:12:352 -
01:13:261 -
01:15:080 -
01:16:898 -
01:18:716 -
00:23:375 (1) - remove circle
00:24:966 - add circle
00:28:602 - ^
00:35:420 - ^ maybe?
00:38:034 (5,6,1) - space normally?
00:43:489 (3,4,1) - stack?
00:46:216 (4,5,6) - ^
00:48:602 - add circle, let 00:48:602 (5) - start at 00:48:716 - (remove next circle)
01:19:284 (1) - let slider start at 01:19:170 - (remove circle)
01:18:489 (1,2,1) - change these into triangular pattern if followed previous one

[Advanced]
00:58:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - change to different pattern? a little confusing to me
01:18:034 (5,1) - swap NC?



[Basic]
00:10:080 (2) - rotate so it creats a flow? (→)
01:08:943 (1,2,3) - hmm.. maybe a little too hard?
01:11:670 (3) - split to a circle and a 1/2 beat slider?
01:18:034 (1) - start this at 01:18:261 -

[Beginner]
00:25:534 (1,2) - swap NC?
00:29:170 (1,2) - swap NC?
00:40:080 (1,2) - ^
00:57:352 (3) - NC?


[Other Suggestions]
Change your hitsounds to a more consistent pattern?
Note : Refer to the spoilerbox in [Master], that's where most of the clap sounds should be (imo).

That's all I can find,Good Luck :)
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Arusha Shuna

Aunxfb wrote:

Hi, from M4M
-------------------------------------------------------------
All are just suggestions :)

[Mako's Expert]
Hitsounds
00:21:898 (1) - add clap to second end
00:22:807 (3) - change finish to clap
00:24:852 (7,8,9) - change clap to third circle
00:25:534 (1) - add clap to second end
00:26:443 (3) - change finish to clap
00:28:489 (8,9,10) - change clap to third circle
00:29:170 (1) - add clap to second end
00:32:125 (9) - change clap to third circle
00:32:807 (1) - add clap to second end
00:33:716 (3) - change finish to clap
00:35:989 (8) - add clap to first circle
00:36:670 (1) - add clap to second end
00:37:352 (3) - add clap to second circle
00:38:034 (4) - remove clap
00:39:398 (7,8,9) - change clap to third circle
00:40:080 (1) - add clap to second circle
00:40:989 (3) - change finish to clap
00:43:716 (1) - add clap to second circle
00:44:625 (3) - change finish to clap
00:51:443 (2) - add clap to second circle
00:51:898 (3) - remove clap
00:51:443 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:53:261 (2) - ^
00:53:716 (3,4,5) - remove claps
00:54:852 (2) - add clap to second circle
00:55:534 (3) - remove clap
00:56:898 (6) - add clap to first circle, remove clap on third circle
00:58:716 (3) - change clap to first circle
01:00:534 (3) - ^
00:59:170 (4) - remove clap
01:00:989 (4) - ^
01:02:807 (4) - ^
01:02:352 (3) - add clap to first circle
01:04:170 (2) - add clap to first circle
01:04:625 (3) - remove clap
01:05:080 (5) - add clap
01:05:307 (1,2,3) - remove claps
01:05:761 (4) - add clap to second circle
01:06:216 (5) - remove clap
01:07:125 (1) - ^
01:07:580 (2) - add clap to second circle
01:08:035 (3) - remove clap
01:08:489 (4,5,6) - change clap to third circle
01:08:943 (1) - remove clap
01:09:398 (2) - add clap to second circle
01:10:080 (5) - remove clap
01:11:216 (2) - add clap to second circle
01:11:670 (3) - remove clap
01:13:262 (3) - change clap to first circle
01:13:717 (4) - remove clap
01:15:080 (3) - add clap to first circle
01:15:534 (4) - remove clap
01:16:898 (2) - add clap to first circle
01:17:353 (3) - remove clap
01:18:261 (3) - remove clap
01:18:489 (4) - add clap to second circle
01:19:625 (1) - add clap maybe?
00:08:943 (3,4,5) - might want to move to 170,140
00:09:625 (6,7) - beat spacing, ignore if this is intentional
00:13:489 (4,5,6) - ^
00:51:898 (3,4) - why not make these a big jump like the rest too? (eg: 00:59:170 (4,5) - ) Note:Make these jumps the same distance? (say, 2.5x?)
not really necassary, kinda felt like missing beats though -.-
00:52:352 - Add circle with clap?
00:54:170 - ^
00:55:989 - Add circle with clap? or extend slider 00:55:534 (3) - and add clap to third circle.
00:57:807 - ^
00:59:625 - ^
01:01:443 - ^
01:03:261 - ^
01:06:898 - ^
01:10:534 - ^
01:12:352 - ^
01:12:352 - ^
01:14:170 - ^
01:17:807 - ^


The flow is fine, but still can be improved. No big problem though :)
Will contact Mako about the mod

[Master]
how about making 00:08:261 (3,4,5) - , 00:10:080 (3,4,5) - , 00:11:898 (3,4,5) - 00:13:716 (3,4,5) - , the same shape/pattern? i have to disagree with this one, i want some diversity in patterns here
00:16:443 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - how about changing these(or the previous 8) into sliders? got to disagree with this one, sorry
00:21:670 (1,2,3) - stack? no, it's intended to be like that

add circle with clap/just add clap
Note: Ignore if it contrast with your whistles/patterns
00:22:352 -
00:23:261 -
00:24:170 -
00:25:080 -
00:25:989 -
00:27:807 -
00:28:716 -
00:29:625 -
00:31:443 -
00:33:261 -
00:34:170 -
00:35:080 -
00:36:898 -
00:38:716 -
00:39:625 -
00:40:534 -
00:42:352 -
00:40:534 -
00:42:352 -
00:43:261 -
00:44:170 -
00:47:807 -
00:51:443 -
00:52:352 -
00:53:261 -
00:55:080 -
00:58:716 -
01:00:534 -
01:02:352 -
01:04:170 -
01:05:080 -
01:05:989 -
01:07:807 -
01:09:625 -
01:11:443 -
01:12:352 -
01:13:261 -
01:15:080 -
01:16:898 -
01:18:716 -
thanks, this'll save me some time
00:23:375 (1) - remove circle i suppose i should...
00:24:966 - add circle in the middle of a jump?
00:28:602 - ^ ^
00:35:420 - ^ maybe? might work out
00:38:034 (5,6,1) - space normally? it'll ruin the 1/4 jump...
00:43:489 (3,4,1) - stack? it's intended to be like that
00:46:216 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:48:602 - add circle, let 00:48:602 (5) - start at 00:48:716 - (remove next circle)
01:19:284 (1) - let slider start at 01:19:170 - (remove circle) i have to disagree with this one, sorry
01:18:489 (1,2,1) - change these into triangular pattern if followed previous one

[Advanced]
00:58:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - change to different pattern? a little confusing to me k
01:18:034 (5,1) - swap NC? k


[Basic]
00:10:080 (2) - rotate so it creats a flow? (→) i dont really understand what you mean...
01:08:943 (1,2,3) - hmm.. maybe a little too hard? fixed, maybe...
01:11:670 (3) - split to a circle and a 1/2 beat slider? k
01:18:034 (1) - start this at 01:18:261 - fixd my own way

[Beginner]
00:25:534 (1,2) - swap NC?
00:29:170 (1,2) - swap NC?
00:40:080 (1,2) - ^
00:57:352 (3) - NC?
sorry, can't agree with all the NC mods in here : (


[Other Suggestions]
Change your hitsounds to a more consistent pattern?
Note : Refer to the spoilerbox in [Master], that's where most of the clap sounds should be (imo).

That's all I can find,Good Luck :)
Thanks for the (rather long) mod!
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai

Aunxfb wrote:

Hi, from M4M
-------------------------------------------------------------
All are just suggestions :)

[Mako's Expert]
Hitsounds
00:21:898 (1) - add clap to second end
00:22:807 (3) - change finish to clap
00:24:852 (7,8,9) - change clap to third circle
00:25:534 (1) - add clap to second end
00:26:443 (3) - change finish to clap
00:28:489 (8,9,10) - change clap to third circle
00:29:170 (1) - add clap to second end
00:32:125 (9) - change clap to third circle
00:32:807 (1) - add clap to second end
00:33:716 (3) - change finish to clap
00:35:989 (8) - add clap to first circle
00:36:670 (1) - add clap to second end
00:37:352 (3) - add clap to second circle
00:38:034 (4) - remove clap
00:39:398 (7,8,9) - change clap to third circle
00:40:080 (1) - add clap to second circle
00:40:989 (3) - change finish to clap
00:43:716 (1) - add clap to second circle
00:44:625 (3) - change finish to clap
00:51:443 (2) - add clap to second circle
00:51:898 (3) - remove clap
00:51:443 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:53:261 (2) - ^
00:53:716 (3,4,5) - remove claps
00:54:852 (2) - add clap to second circle
00:55:534 (3) - remove clap
00:56:898 (6) - add clap to first circle, remove clap on third circle
00:58:716 (3) - change clap to first circle
01:00:534 (3) - ^
00:59:170 (4) - remove clap
01:00:989 (4) - ^
01:02:807 (4) - ^
01:02:352 (3) - add clap to first circle
01:04:170 (2) - add clap to first circle
01:04:625 (3) - remove clap
01:05:080 (5) - add clap
01:05:307 (1,2,3) - remove claps
01:05:761 (4) - add clap to second circle
01:06:216 (5) - remove clap
01:07:125 (1) - ^
01:07:580 (2) - add clap to second circle
01:08:035 (3) - remove clap
01:08:489 (4,5,6) - change clap to third circle
01:08:943 (1) - remove clap
01:09:398 (2) - add clap to second circle
01:10:080 (5) - remove clap
01:11:216 (2) - add clap to second circle
01:11:670 (3) - remove clap
01:13:262 (3) - change clap to first circle
01:13:717 (4) - remove clap
01:15:080 (3) - add clap to first circle
01:15:534 (4) - remove clap
01:16:898 (2) - add clap to first circle
01:17:353 (3) - remove clap
01:18:261 (3) - remove clap
01:18:489 (4) - add clap to second circle
01:19:625 (1) - add clap maybe?
Fixed~ Added
00:08:943 (3,4,5) - might want to move to 170,140 Rejected~ It's not necessary
00:09:625 (6,7) - beat spacing, ignore if this is intentional Rejected~ Ignore
00:13:489 (4,5,6) - ^ Rejected~ Ignore
00:51:898 (3,4) - why not make these a big jump like the rest too? (eg: 00:59:170 (4,5) - ) Note:Make these jumps the same distance? (say, 2.5x?) Rejected~ It would be nice if have variant jumps distance
not really necassary, kinda felt like missing beats though -.-
00:52:352 - Add circle with clap?
00:54:170 - ^
00:55:989 - Add circle with clap? or extend slider 00:55:534 (3) - and add clap to third circle.
00:57:807 - ^
00:59:625 - ^
01:01:443 - ^
01:03:261 - ^
01:06:898 - ^
01:10:534 - ^
01:12:352 - ^
01:12:352 - ^
01:14:170 - ^
01:17:807 - ^
Fixed~ Added


The flow is fine, but still can be improved. No big problem though :)
Thank you for modding :)
--
Update: http://puu.sh/2Ndp7.osu
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Maaaf bgt kakak salah upload :cry: 
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Lionheart.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50989
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 7239,50989
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Lionheart
TitleUnicode:Lionheart
Artist:Masayoshi Minoshima
ArtistUnicode:Masayoshi Minoshima
Creator:Arusha Shuna
Version:Mako's Expert
Source:
Tags:maimai halfpipe tokyo mako sakata
BeatmapID:247271
BeatmapSetID:91123

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",1,1
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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6898,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
7352,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
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50989,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
80080,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
81443,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 70,70,255
Combo2 : 10,125,220
Combo3 : 97,5,152
Combo4 : 255,0,128

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264,104,19284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,104,19398,2,0,L|316:132,3,40,0|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,152,19852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,168,19966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,184,20080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20307,12,0,21670,0:0:0:0:
56,216,21898,6,0,P|88:280|168:304,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,22580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,22807,2,0,P|256:192|288:256,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,328,23489,2,0,L|416:288,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,208,23943,2,0,L|456:168,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,88,24398,2,0,L|496:48,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
493,49,24852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
493,49,24966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
493,49,25080,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,88,25534,6,0,B|120:104|120:104|152:176,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,175,26216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,176,26443,2,0,B|72:248|72:248|152:264,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,320,27125,2,0,P|272:328|312:320,1,80
376,256,27580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,27807,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,190,28034,2,0,P|200:150|208:112,1,80
208,112,28489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,28602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,28716,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,320,29170,6,0,B|459:336|459:336|443:376|427:336|427:336|379:320,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,288,29852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,320,30080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,208,30307,2,0,L|291:168,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,160,30761,2,0,L|211:120,1,80
291,88,31216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,128,31443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
387,224,31670,2,0,L|459:184,1,80
459,96,32125,2,0,L|459:56,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,156,32807,6,0,P|117:156|213:108,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,244,33489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
61,244,33716,2,0,P|117:244|213:292,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,252,34398,2,0,P|325:276|365:276,1,80
365,180,34852,2,0,L|365:100,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,4,35307,2,0,P|326:4|294:28,1,80
294,28,35761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,72,35989,2,8,L|197:44,4,40,8|8|8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,192,36670,6,0,L|112:136,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,288,37125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,288,37352,2,0,B|80:320|80:320|160:288,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,38034,2,0,L|211:220,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,38489,2,0,L|384:248,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,136,38943,2,0,L|344:80,1,80
248,80,39398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,80,39511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,80,39625,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,264,40080,6,0,P|208:264|304:312,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,352,40761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,352,40989,2,0,P|96:352|0:304,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,224,41670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,41783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,176,41897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,88,42125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,42352,2,0,P|264:24|344:40,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,43034,2,0,L|432:144,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,32,43716,6,0,P|48:88|16:160,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,155,44398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
127,145,44625,2,0,P|104:208|32:264,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,336,45307,2,0,L|240:336,1,80
200,248,45761,2,0,L|280:216,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,128,46216,2,0,L|312:56,1,80
136,128,46670,2,0,L|56:56,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,280,47352,6,0,L|56:208,1,80
232,280,47807,2,0,L|312:208,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,208,48261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,88,48489,2,0,L|291:141,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,88,48944,2,0,L|76:141,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,216,49284,2,0,L|32:248,3,40,0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,248,49739,2,0,L|96:280,3,40
128,280,50193,2,0,L|160:312,5,40,0|0|0|8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,200,50989,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,200,51443,2,0,L|296:144,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,144,51898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,144,52125,1,4,0:0:0:0:
232,64,52352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,192,52580,6,0,L|56:136,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,264,53261,2,0,L|112:320,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,320,53716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,320,53830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,320,53943,1,4,0:0:0:0:
112,320,54170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,256,54398,6,0,P|376:256|408:272,1,80
320,160,54852,2,0,P|264:160|232:144,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,55534,2,0,P|264:56|296:72,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,136,55989,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,136,56216,2,0,L|144:192,1,80
64,248,56670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,248,56898,2,0,L|120:304,3,80,8|0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,304,57807,5,8,0:0:0:0:
288,304,58034,2,0,L|368:304,1,80
480,216,58488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,216,58716,2,0,L|312:216,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,59170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,59398,1,4,0:0:0:0:
72,128,59625,5,8,0:0:0:0:
72,128,59852,2,0,L|128:184,1,80
128,184,60307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,60534,2,0,L|195:243,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,272,60989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,61216,1,4,0:0:0:0:
416,64,61443,5,8,0:0:0:0:
416,64,61670,2,0,L|416:144,1,80
320,144,62125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,62352,2,0,L|264:88,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,88,62807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,88,63034,1,4,0:0:0:0:
16,144,63261,5,8,0:0:0:0:
16,144,63489,2,0,L|72:88,2,80
72,216,64170,2,0,L|128:272,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,272,64625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,128,64852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,272,65080,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,192,65307,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,65420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,65534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,328,65761,2,0,L|216:272,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,56,66216,2,0,L|216:112,1,80
136,192,66670,1,4,0:0:0:0:
0,192,66898,5,8,0:0:0:0:
0,192,67125,2,0,L|40:192,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,88,67580,2,0,L|152:32,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,296,68035,2,0,L|152:352,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,328,68489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,328,68603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,328,68716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,68943,6,0,L|408:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,8,69398,2,0,L|408:64,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,128,69852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,128,69966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,128,70080,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,128,70307,1,4,0:0:0:0:
88,48,70534,5,8,0:0:0:0:
88,48,70761,2,0,L|32:104,1,80
64,216,71216,2,0,L|120:160,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,71670,2,0,L|88:328,2,80,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,328,72352,5,8,0:0:0:0:
296,328,72580,2,0,L|240:272,1,80
240,272,73035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,168,73262,2,0,L|300:196,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,64,73717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,64,73944,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,200,74170,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,200,74398,2,0,L|368:120,1,80
232,192,74853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,192,75080,2,0,L|176:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,136,75535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,136,75762,1,4,0:0:0:0:
88,320,75989,5,8,0:0:0:0:
88,320,76217,2,0,L|144:264,2,80
272,136,76898,2,0,L|216:192,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,264,77353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,77580,1,4,0:0:0:0:
432,80,77807,5,8,0:0:0:0:
432,80,78035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,80,78148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,80,78261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,232,78489,2,0,L|328:176,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,24,78944,2,0,L|232:80,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,360,79625,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80080,12,0,81443,0:0:0:0:
Uchiha_sorayuki
118 posts
Joined January 2012
Uchiha_sorayuki
#modreq taiko
__________________________________________

NTaikoOni

00:04:057 - add d
00:20:080 (82) - d
00:20:534 (85) - k
00:21:898 - i think that speed change isnt necessary here, make it 1,0x speed before this timing points
00:25:875 (25) - d
00:27:125 (31) - k
00:50:875 (84) - remove k
00:57:920 (41) - d
00:58:034 (42) - k

______________________________________________

NTaikoFutsuu

00:55:989 (16) - remove k

nice map
go go rank :)
Nwolf
2,607 posts
Joined September 2012
Nwolf

Uchiha_sorayuki wrote:

#modreq taiko
__________________________________________

NTaikoOni

00:04:057 - add d Too soon
00:20:080 (82) - d
00:20:534 (85) - k Music goes down here, kat sounds for me like it goes up and.... well I just like it better this way :3
00:21:898 - i think that speed change isnt necessary here, make it 1,0x speed before this timing points
00:25:875 (25) - d
00:27:125 (31) - k (32) changed to k
00:50:875 (84) - remove k
00:57:920 (41) - d
00:58:034 (42) - k

______________________________________________

NTaikoFutsuu

00:55:989 (16) - remove k Move it by 1/2

nice map
go go rank :)
Thanks for mod :3
nanda2009
925 posts
Joined October 2009
nanda2009
Hi. M4M.

[Beginner]

  1. Slider Tick 1. Slider tick 2 membuat map ini susah. Apalagi untuk pemula. Karena harus terus mengikuti jalur slider dengan benar. Ngga bagus.
  2. 00:14:625 (1,2) - Lengkungannya ga keliatan karena CS yang besar. Buat yang simpel aja.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:36:443 (1) - whistle di repeater biar konsisten sama hitsound 00:39:170 - 00:42:807
  4. 00:47:352 (1) - Agar terlihat bagus. Geser objek ini ke 80,96 agar terlihat sejajar dengan 00:46:443 (2). Geser juga 00:48:261 (2) agar jaraknya seimbang dengan (2,1)
  5. 01:01:443 (2) - terhalang oleh 01:00:080 (1).
[Basic]

  1. AR+1 atau 2? Agak bingung mau klik yang mana soalnya ada kalanya banyak yang objek yang muncul dalam layar karena AR yang rendah.
  2. 00:08:261 (3) - Whistle di repeater. biar konsisten
  3. 00:10:080 (2) - ^
  4. 00:11:898 (2,2,1,2) - whistle di akhir slider
  5. 00:47:352 (1) - titik tengahnya agak digeser ke atas, biar curvenya ke atas dan membentuk flow dengan (2)
  6. 00:57:352 (2) - Jadiin slider lurus aja. Kayaknya lebih ngepas flownya.
  7. 01:03:716 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Di bagian ini. coba bikin jarak antar clapnya 2 Upbeat. agar konsisten dengan 00:51:443 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2)
  8. 01:10:989 (2,3) - terlalu dekat. tricky
[NTaikFutsuu]

  1. I think this isn't a Futsuu diff. Too much 1/2s and notes at blue tick. Change the diff name to Muzukashii.
  2. 00:20:080 - I prefer adding a big don here and move the end of 00:18:261 (1) to 00:19:852. So you can hear a Finish sound at 00:20:080
  3. 00:31:898 - put a don here.
  4. 00:32:807 (24,25,26,27,28) - change it to ddk d k. feels much better
  5. 00:50:989 (1) - change it to a big don.
  6. 01:05:534 (45) - ^
  7. 00:59:398 (27) - move it to 00:59:625
  8. 01:04:625 (42,43,44,45) - change it to k k kD
[NTaikOni]

  1. 00:10:761 (35) - change it to kat
  2. 00:12:807 (42) - It feels empty here when the Big dons pattern suddenly stop. Change it to a big don and delete 00:12:920 (43). If you want to keep the 1/4. add a note at 00:13:148. so 00:12:807 (42,43,44,45) will be D ddk
  3. 00:13:261 (45) - change it to kat
  4. 00:21:670 (91) - ^ I don't think a Big kat is needed here.
  5. 00:36:216 (82) - ^. Finish should be at 00:36:443 (1). Since it's a start of a new pattern on the music. If you do this, delete 00:36:557 (2)
  6. 00:39:511 (17) - kat. So It'll be consistent with 00:42:807 (34,36)
  7. 00:46:443 (54) - Big kat
  8. 00:51:898 (6) - kat. finish should be at 00:50:989 (1), same reason as 00:36:216 (82). Also, It'll be consistent with 01:05:534 (83)
  9. 00:55:761 (27,28,29,30,31) - I prefer ddkdd. or ddkkd
[Mako's Expert]

  1. 00:08:943 (3,4,5) - jangan di stack, bikin bingung
  2. 00:09:625 (6) - clap di awal slider
  3. 00:14:170 (6,7) - jangan stack juga dengan alasan yang sama
  4. 00:24:398 (6,7,8,9) - sama juga. jangan distack. Tapi kalau mau tetap distack, coba bikin kayak gini
    SPOILER
  5. 00:28:034 (7,8,9,10) - ^
  6. 00:29:170 (1) - Coba bikin kayak gini. Lebih cantik (:>) imo
    SPOILER
  7. 00:48:944 (5,6) - jaraknya terlalu jauh imo. deketin lagi.
  8. 00:53:261 (2,3,4,5,6) - Kalau yang ini bener2 bikin bingung. Jangan distack
  9. 01:03:034 (6,2) - geser (6). soalnya (6) menghalangi repeater (2) dan tentu saja membingungkan.
  10. 01:19:625 (1) - jangan pakai finish

    komentar dikit aja. Banyak banget bagian yang seharusnya dipasang finish tapi malah ga dikasih. dari 00:21:898 - 00:50:989. Kalau bisa coba pasang finish di daerah itu. Samain sama diff lain.
GL for rank
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai

nanda2009 wrote:

[Mako's Expert]

  1. 00:08:943 (3,4,5) - jangan di stack, bikin bingung Rejected~ Gak begitu bingung kok, sama kaya nada lagu
  2. 00:09:625 (6) - clap di awal slider Fixed~ Added
  3. 00:14:170 (6,7) - jangan stack juga dengan alasan yang sama Rejected~ Dengan alasan yang sama
  4. 00:24:398 (6,7,8,9) - sama juga. jangan distack. Tapi kalau mau tetap distack, coba bikin kayak gini Fixed~ Added
    SPOILER
  5. 00:28:034 (7,8,9,10) - ^ Fixed~ Added
  6. 00:29:170 (1) - Coba bikin kayak gini. Lebih cantik (:>) imo Fixed~ Added
    SPOILER
  7. 00:48:944 (5,6) - jaraknya terlalu jauh imo. deketin lagi. Rejected~ Gak ah masih terjangkau kok
  8. 00:53:261 (2,3,4,5,6) - Kalau yang ini bener2 bikin bingung. Jangan distack Fixed~ Added
  9. 01:03:034 (6,2) - geser (6). soalnya (6) menghalangi repeater (2) dan tentu saja membingungkan. Fixed~ Added
  10. 01:19:625 (1) - jangan pakai finish Fixed~ Added

    komentar dikit aja. Banyak banget bagian yang seharusnya dipasang finish tapi malah ga dikasih. dari 00:21:898 - 00:50:989. Kalau bisa coba pasang finish di daerah itu. Samain sama diff lain. Beda sedikit gak apa-apa kan :PIya masih butuh mod tentang hitsound
GL for rank Go for rank XD
Thank you for modding :)
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Update: http://puu.sh/2Xb2e.osu
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Arusha Shuna

nanda2009 wrote:

Hi. M4M.

[Beginner]

  1. Slider Tick 1. Slider tick 2 membuat map ini susah. Apalagi untuk pemula. Karena harus terus mengikuti jalur slider dengan benar. Ngga bagus.
  2. 00:14:625 (1,2) - Lengkungannya ga keliatan karena CS yang besar. Buat yang simpel aja.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:36:443 (1) - whistle di repeater biar konsisten sama hitsound 00:39:170 - 00:42:807
  4. 00:47:352 (1) - Agar terlihat bagus. Geser objek ini ke 80,96 agar terlihat sejajar dengan 00:46:443 (2). Geser juga 00:48:261 (2) agar jaraknya seimbang dengan (2,1)
  5. 01:01:443 (2) - terhalang oleh 01:00:080 (1).
[Basic]

  1. AR+1 atau 2? Agak bingung mau klik yang mana soalnya ada kalanya banyak yang objek yang muncul dalam layar karena AR yang rendah.
  2. 00:08:261 (3) - Whistle di repeater. biar konsisten
  3. 00:10:080 (2) - ^
  4. 00:11:898 (2,2,1,2) - whistle di akhir slider
  5. 00:47:352 (1) - titik tengahnya agak digeser ke atas, biar curvenya ke atas dan membentuk flow dengan (2) gw agak kurang ngerti gimana yang ini
  6. 00:57:352 (2) - Jadiin slider lurus aja. Kayaknya lebih ngepas flownya.mungkin gw ganti aja arah curvenya
  7. 01:03:716 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Di bagian ini. coba bikin jarak antar clapnya 2 Upbeat. agar konsisten dengan 00:51:443 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2)
  8. 01:10:989 (2,3) - terlalu dekat. tricky
[NTaikFutsuu]

  1. I think this isn't a Futsuu diff. Too much 1/2s and notes at blue tick. Change the diff name to Muzukashii.
  2. 00:20:080 - I prefer adding a big don here and move the end of 00:18:261 (1) to 00:19:852. So you can hear a Finish sound at 00:20:080
  3. 00:31:898 - put a don here.
  4. 00:32:807 (24,25,26,27,28) - change it to ddk d k. feels much better
  5. 00:50:989 (1) - change it to a big don.
  6. 01:05:534 (45) - ^
  7. 00:59:398 (27) - move it to 00:59:625
  8. 01:04:625 (42,43,44,45) - change it to k k kD
[NTaikOni]

  1. 00:10:761 (35) - change it to kat
  2. 00:12:807 (42) - It feels empty here when the Big dons pattern suddenly stop. Change it to a big don and delete 00:12:920 (43). If you want to keep the 1/4. add a note at 00:13:148. so 00:12:807 (42,43,44,45) will be D ddk
  3. 00:13:261 (45) - change it to kat
  4. 00:21:670 (91) - ^ I don't think a Big kat is needed here.
  5. 00:36:216 (82) - ^. Finish should be at 00:36:443 (1). Since it's a start of a new pattern on the music. If you do this, delete 00:36:557 (2)
  6. 00:39:511 (17) - kat. So It'll be consistent with 00:42:807 (34,36)
  7. 00:46:443 (54) - Big kat
  8. 00:51:898 (6) - kat. finish should be at 00:50:989 (1), same reason as 00:36:216 (82). Also, It'll be consistent with 01:05:534 (83)
  9. 00:55:761 (27,28,29,30,31) - I prefer ddkdd. or ddkkd
[Mako's Expert]

  1. 00:08:943 (3,4,5) - jangan di stack, bikin bingung
  2. 00:09:625 (6) - clap di awal slider
  3. 00:14:170 (6,7) - jangan stack juga dengan alasan yang sama
  4. 00:24:398 (6,7,8,9) - sama juga. jangan distack. Tapi kalau mau tetap distack, coba bikin kayak gini
    SPOILER
  5. 00:28:034 (7,8,9,10) - ^
  6. 00:29:170 (1) - Coba bikin kayak gini. Lebih cantik (:>) imo
    SPOILER
  7. 00:48:944 (5,6) - jaraknya terlalu jauh imo. deketin lagi.
  8. 00:53:261 (2,3,4,5,6) - Kalau yang ini bener2 bikin bingung. Jangan distack
  9. 01:03:034 (6,2) - geser (6). soalnya (6) menghalangi repeater (2) dan tentu saja membingungkan.
  10. 01:19:625 (1) - jangan pakai finish

    komentar dikit aja. Banyak banget bagian yang seharusnya dipasang finish tapi malah ga dikasih. dari 00:21:898 - 00:50:989. Kalau bisa coba pasang finish di daerah itu. Samain sama diff lain.
GL for rank
thanks!
Nwolf
2,607 posts
Joined September 2012
Nwolf

nanda2009 wrote:

[NTaikFutsuu]

I think this isn't a Futsuu diff. Too much 1/2s and notes at blue tick. Change the diff name to Muzukashii.
00:20:080 - I prefer adding a big don here and move the end of 00:18:261 (1) to 00:19:852. So you can hear a Finish sound at 00:20:080
00:31:898 - put a don here.
00:32:807 (24,25,26,27,28) - change it to ddk d k. feels much better
00:50:989 (1) - change it to a big don.
01:05:534 (45) - ^
00:59:398 (27) - move it to 00:59:625
01:04:625 (42,43,44,45) - change it to k k kD

[NTaikOni]

00:10:761 (35) - change it to kat
00:12:807 (42) - It feels empty here when the Big dons pattern suddenly stop. Change it to a big don and delete 00:12:920 (43). If you want to keep the 1/4. add a note at 00:13:148. so 00:12:807 (42,43,44,45) will be D ddk
00:13:261 (45) - change it to kat
00:21:670 (91) - ^ I don't think a Big kat is needed here.
00:36:216 (82) - ^. Finish should be at 00:36:443 (1). Since it's a start of a new pattern on the music. If you do this, delete 00:36:557 (2)
00:39:511 (17) - kat. So It'll be consistent with 00:42:807 (34,36)
00:46:443 (54) - Big kat No, doesn't fit
00:51:898 (6) - kat. finish should be at 00:50:989 (1), same reason as 00:36:216 (82). Also, It'll be consistent with 01:05:534 (83)
00:55:761 (27,28,29,30,31) - I prefer ddkdd. or ddkkd Keeping it as it is right now, will change it if more people say that it would be better
nanda2009
925 posts
Joined October 2009
nanda2009
gw agak kurang ngerti gimana yang ini
bikin yang mirip2 kayak gini

SPOILER
Rei Hakurei
1,983 posts
Joined February 2011
Rei Hakurei
gw nemu di vgmdb yg nyanyinya Ayakura Mei, kalo mau tag terserah sih :P

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Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Update: http://puu.sh/37UZ0.osu
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NC Fixed :)
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Arusha Shuna

Rei Hakurei wrote:

gw nemu di vgmdb yg nyanyinya Ayakura Mei, kalo mau tag terserah sih :P

(no kds for this post)
Too bad, that's a kds worthy post. I wouldn't know about it myself.
And you're going to rike it.
Niko-nyan
1,990 posts
Joined June 2011
Niko-nyan
General~
looks good maybe but a little thing that you forgot - letterbox during breaks o3o

Futsuu
i hate you because you make the newbie player fail
00:01:443 - delete
00:05:080(6,7) - ^
00:08:716 - ^
00:10:534(16,17) - ^
00:12:352 - ^
00:14:170 (23,24) - ^
00:15:989 - ^
00:17:807(33) - ^
00:31:898 - add d
00:32:532 - delete
00:35:761 (33,34) - delete
00:37:693 (37,38) - delete
00:39:852 - ^
00:41:670 - ^
00:46:784 (60,61) - ^
00:48:602 (64,65) - ^
00:57:693 (21,22) - ^
01:04:966 (41,42) - ^
01:08:716 - ^
01:12:352 - ^
01:15:989 - ^

Oni
AR+2 plz
00:02:580 - delete
many unsnapped ;w;

Mako
Letterbox o3o you forgot o3o
00:29:170 - NC
01:19:625 - jgn NC
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai

Frans Niko wrote:

Mako
Letterbox o3o you forgot o3o Done
00:29:170 - NC Done
01:19:625 - jgn NC No
Didn't you see my post above?

Mako Sakata wrote:

Update: http://puu.sh/37UZ0.osu
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NC Fixed :)
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose
Trying for M4M. Hope you find my mod helpful!
Use 簑島 正佳 for the artist, it's his japanese name :P

[Mako's Expert]

Still has letterbox in breaks ):
00:18:034 (6) - bring this in closer? D:
00:55:534 (3) - Ctrl + G has better flow imo :P
00:56:898 (7) - the multiple repeats might trip people up D: maybe remove one repeat and put a circle there instead?
The sliders here are very straight O_O Not that it's a bad thing, but imo you could add in some more curvy sliders :P

[Master]

Remove letterbox during breaks
00:10:080 (3,4,5) - make these into a triangle like 00:08:261 (3,4,5)?
00:11:443 (2) - I think you can improve the blanket here
00:21:443 (1,1) - I don't think the new combos are necessary here D: but if you want, you can add NC to 00:21:898 (4) because that's where the singing starts
00:23:148 (6) - bring this in to make a smoother curve? maybe you can reduce spacing here too:
SPOILER
00:29:170 (1) - spacing is very misleading here, I'd interpret it as 1/2 instead of 1/4, bring them in closer? D:
00:32:352 (1) - ^ maybe ctrl + G previous slider
00:34:057 (4) - ^
00:41:330 (4) - ^
00:44:966 (4) - ^ won't list them out anymore :/
00:52:352 (4,5,6,7) - I suggest bringing the notes closer D;
01:18:943 (1) - I don't think NC is necessary here :P

[Advanced]

Remove letterbox during breaks
I think AR +1/2 will fit the note density
00:16:443 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - arrange these in a big circle?
00:28:034 (4) - I think it'll flow better if the slider curves the otherh way, toward the next slider
00:53:261 (3) - Since you've been following distance snap the whole map, I suggest you bring this in also to make spacing more accurate
01:03:716 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - arrange these in a big circle?
01:09:398 (2) - move this so that it doesn't overlap 01:07:352 (2)?
01:16:443 (2) - I think you can blanket (1) better

[Basic]

Remove letterbox during breaks
00:12:807 (3) - Following your NC patterns so far, NC fits here rather than in the next object
00:24:625 (3) - weird overlap, have the end stack on the tail of 00:22:807 (2)?
00:46:670 (4,5) - overlap looks odd, try this?
SPOILER
01:11:898 (3,4) - use a 1/2 slider instead? just having two objects like that looks a bit weird to me :/

[Beginner]

Remove letterbox during breaks
I think it's weird to have distance snap so that the 1/1 notes touch :/
00:46:443 (2) - make parallel to 1?
00:18:261 (1) - move to x:308 y:64 to better blanket (2)?
01:05:534 (1) - move left a bit for better flow, like 2,3, and head of 1 are in a line
01:10:989 (2) - NC here to keep your NC pattern

goodluck! :D
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Arusha Shuna

Raose wrote:

Trying for M4M. Hope you find my mod helpful!
Use 簑島 正佳 for the artist, it's his japanese name :P

[Mako's Expert]

Still has letterbox in breaks ):
00:18:034 (6) - bring this in closer? D:
00:55:534 (3) - Ctrl + G has better flow imo :P
00:56:898 (7) - the multiple repeats might trip people up D: maybe remove one repeat and put a circle there instead?
The sliders here are very straight O_O Not that it's a bad thing, but imo you could add in some more curvy sliders :P
awaiting Mako's reply
[Master]

Remove letterbox during breaks
00:10:080 (3,4,5) - make these into a triangle like 00:08:261 (3,4,5)? i did as best as i could
00:11:443 (2) - I think you can improve the blanket here
00:21:443 (1,1) - I don't think the new combos are necessary here D: but if you want, you can add NC to 00:21:898 (4) because that's where the singing starts
00:23:148 (6) - bring this in to make a smoother curve? maybe you can reduce spacing here too: i think i can, only all the way to 1.0x though
SPOILER
00:29:170 (1) - spacing is very misleading here, I'd interpret it as 1/2 instead of 1/4, bring them in closer? D: changed to triplets
00:32:352 (1) - ^ maybe ctrl + G previous slider ^
00:34:057 (4) - ^ it's noticable for expert players by looking at spacing between slider beginning
00:41:330 (4) - ^
00:44:966 (4) - ^ won't list them out anymore :/ it's noticable for expert players by looking at spacing between slider beginning
00:52:352 (4,5,6,7) - I suggest bringing the notes closer D; i keep the spacing constant here, in fact, i just made them further between each other (1.3x)
01:18:943 (1) - I don't think NC is necessary here :P just for cosmetics, i'll change if more people doesn't like it

[Advanced]

Remove letterbox during breaks
I think AR +1/2 will fit the note density
00:16:443 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - arrange these in a big circle?
00:28:034 (4) - I think it'll flow better if the slider curves the otherh way, toward the next slider
00:53:261 (3) - Since you've been following distance snap the whole map, I suggest you bring this in also to make spacing more accurate
01:03:716 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - arrange these in a big circle?
01:09:398 (2) - move this so that it doesn't overlap 01:07:352 (2)? they're pretty far apart and doesn't seem to obstruct object visibility
01:16:443 (2) - I think you can blanket (1) better

[Basic]

Remove letterbox during breaks
00:12:807 (3) - Following your NC patterns so far, NC fits here rather than in the next object
00:24:625 (3) - weird overlap, have the end stack on the tail of 00:22:807 (2)?
00:46:670 (4,5) - overlap looks odd, try this?
SPOILER
01:11:898 (3,4) - use a 1/2 slider instead? just having two objects like that looks a bit weird to me :/

[Beginner]

Remove letterbox during breaks
I think it's weird to have distance snap so that the 1/1 notes touch :/ well it's easy diff after all, the spacing needs to be close
00:46:443 (2) - make parallel to 1? i think
00:18:261 (1) - move to x:308 y:64 to better blanket (2)?
01:05:534 (1) - move left a bit for better flow, like 2,3, and head of 1 are in a line
01:10:989 (2) - NC here to keep your NC pattern

goodluck! :D
thanks!
Last edited by Arusha Shuna , edited 1 time in total.
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai

Raose wrote:

Trying for M4M. Hope you find my mod helpful!
Use 簑島 正佳 for the artist, it's his japanese name :P

[Mako's Expert]

Still has letterbox in breaks ):
00:18:034 (6) - bring this in closer? D: Rejected~ It was supposed to be a jump
00:55:534 (3) - Ctrl + G has better flow imo :P Fixed~Added
00:56:898 (7) - the multiple repeats might trip people up D: maybe remove one repeat and put a circle there instead? Rejected~I think It's not that hard and It flows good imo
The sliders here are very straight O_O Not that it's a bad thing, but imo you could add in some more curvy sliders :P Thanks for your concern, fixed some straight into curvy sliders :P

goodluck! :D
Thanks for modding :)
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[ Lionheart ]
87 posts
Joined July 2012
[ Lionheart ]
Well, i mistakenly typed my username into the beatmap field xD
Nice map though, really love it! <3


Replay: http://puu.sh/5E4th.osr
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