Hi, from M4M
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All are just suggestions
[Mako's Expert]
00:09:625 (6,7) - beat spacing, ignore if this is intentional
00:13:489 (4,5,6) - ^
00:51:898 (3,4) - why not make these a big jump like the rest too? (eg: 00:59:170 (4,5) - ) Note:Make these jumps the same distance? (say, 2.5x?)
The flow is fine, but still can be improved. No big problem though
[Master]
how about making 00:08:261 (3,4,5) - , 00:10:080 (3,4,5) - , 00:11:898 (3,4,5) - 00:13:716 (3,4,5) - , the same shape/pattern?
00:16:443 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - how about changing these(or the previous 8) into sliders?
00:21:670 (1,2,3) - stack?
00:24:966 - add circle
00:28:602 - ^
00:35:420 - ^ maybe?
00:38:034 (5,6,1) - space normally?
00:43:489 (3,4,1) - stack?
00:46:216 (4,5,6) - ^
00:48:602 - add circle, let 00:48:602 (5) - start at 00:48:716 - (remove next circle)
01:19:284 (1) - let slider start at 01:19:170 - (remove circle)
01:18:489 (1,2,1) - change these into triangular pattern if followed previous one
[Advanced]
00:58:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - change to different pattern? a little confusing to me
01:18:034 (5,1) - swap NC?
[Basic]
00:10:080 (2) - rotate so it creats a flow? (→)
01:08:943 (1,2,3) - hmm.. maybe a little too hard?
01:11:670 (3) - split to a circle and a 1/2 beat slider?
01:18:034 (1) - start this at 01:18:261 -
[Beginner]
00:25:534 (1,2) - swap NC?
00:29:170 (1,2) - swap NC?
00:40:080 (1,2) - ^
00:57:352 (3) - NC?
[Other Suggestions]
Change your hitsounds to a more consistent pattern?
Note : Refer to the spoilerbox in [Master], that's where most of the clap sounds should be (imo).
That's all I can find,Good Luck
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All are just suggestions
[Mako's Expert]
Hitsounds
00:08:943 (3,4,5) - might want to move to 170,14000:21:898 (1) - add clap to second end
00:22:807 (3) - change finish to clap
00:24:852 (7,8,9) - change clap to third circle
00:25:534 (1) - add clap to second end
00:26:443 (3) - change finish to clap
00:28:489 (8,9,10) - change clap to third circle
00:29:170 (1) - add clap to second end
00:32:125 (9) - change clap to third circle
00:32:807 (1) - add clap to second end
00:33:716 (3) - change finish to clap
00:35:989 (8) - add clap to first circle
00:36:670 (1) - add clap to second end
00:37:352 (3) - add clap to second circle
00:38:034 (4) - remove clap
00:39:398 (7,8,9) - change clap to third circle
00:40:080 (1) - add clap to second circle
00:40:989 (3) - change finish to clap
00:43:716 (1) - add clap to second circle
00:44:625 (3) - change finish to clap
00:51:443 (2) - add clap to second circle
00:51:898 (3) - remove clap
00:51:443 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:53:261 (2) - ^
00:53:716 (3,4,5) - remove claps
00:54:852 (2) - add clap to second circle
00:55:534 (3) - remove clap
00:56:898 (6) - add clap to first circle, remove clap on third circle
00:58:716 (3) - change clap to first circle
01:00:534 (3) - ^
00:59:170 (4) - remove clap
01:00:989 (4) - ^
01:02:807 (4) - ^
01:02:352 (3) - add clap to first circle
01:04:170 (2) - add clap to first circle
01:04:625 (3) - remove clap
01:05:080 (5) - add clap
01:05:307 (1,2,3) - remove claps
01:05:761 (4) - add clap to second circle
01:06:216 (5) - remove clap
01:07:125 (1) - ^
01:07:580 (2) - add clap to second circle
01:08:035 (3) - remove clap
01:08:489 (4,5,6) - change clap to third circle
01:08:943 (1) - remove clap
01:09:398 (2) - add clap to second circle
01:10:080 (5) - remove clap
01:11:216 (2) - add clap to second circle
01:11:670 (3) - remove clap
01:13:262 (3) - change clap to first circle
01:13:717 (4) - remove clap
01:15:080 (3) - add clap to first circle
01:15:534 (4) - remove clap
01:16:898 (2) - add clap to first circle
01:17:353 (3) - remove clap
01:18:261 (3) - remove clap
01:18:489 (4) - add clap to second circle
01:19:625 (1) - add clap maybe?
00:22:807 (3) - change finish to clap
00:24:852 (7,8,9) - change clap to third circle
00:25:534 (1) - add clap to second end
00:26:443 (3) - change finish to clap
00:28:489 (8,9,10) - change clap to third circle
00:29:170 (1) - add clap to second end
00:32:125 (9) - change clap to third circle
00:32:807 (1) - add clap to second end
00:33:716 (3) - change finish to clap
00:35:989 (8) - add clap to first circle
00:36:670 (1) - add clap to second end
00:37:352 (3) - add clap to second circle
00:38:034 (4) - remove clap
00:39:398 (7,8,9) - change clap to third circle
00:40:080 (1) - add clap to second circle
00:40:989 (3) - change finish to clap
00:43:716 (1) - add clap to second circle
00:44:625 (3) - change finish to clap
00:51:443 (2) - add clap to second circle
00:51:898 (3) - remove clap
00:51:443 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:53:261 (2) - ^
00:53:716 (3,4,5) - remove claps
00:54:852 (2) - add clap to second circle
00:55:534 (3) - remove clap
00:56:898 (6) - add clap to first circle, remove clap on third circle
00:58:716 (3) - change clap to first circle
01:00:534 (3) - ^
00:59:170 (4) - remove clap
01:00:989 (4) - ^
01:02:807 (4) - ^
01:02:352 (3) - add clap to first circle
01:04:170 (2) - add clap to first circle
01:04:625 (3) - remove clap
01:05:080 (5) - add clap
01:05:307 (1,2,3) - remove claps
01:05:761 (4) - add clap to second circle
01:06:216 (5) - remove clap
01:07:125 (1) - ^
01:07:580 (2) - add clap to second circle
01:08:035 (3) - remove clap
01:08:489 (4,5,6) - change clap to third circle
01:08:943 (1) - remove clap
01:09:398 (2) - add clap to second circle
01:10:080 (5) - remove clap
01:11:216 (2) - add clap to second circle
01:11:670 (3) - remove clap
01:13:262 (3) - change clap to first circle
01:13:717 (4) - remove clap
01:15:080 (3) - add clap to first circle
01:15:534 (4) - remove clap
01:16:898 (2) - add clap to first circle
01:17:353 (3) - remove clap
01:18:261 (3) - remove clap
01:18:489 (4) - add clap to second circle
01:19:625 (1) - add clap maybe?
00:09:625 (6,7) - beat spacing, ignore if this is intentional
00:13:489 (4,5,6) - ^
00:51:898 (3,4) - why not make these a big jump like the rest too? (eg: 00:59:170 (4,5) - ) Note:Make these jumps the same distance? (say, 2.5x?)
not really necassary, kinda felt like missing beats though -.-
00:52:352 - Add circle with clap?
00:54:170 - ^
00:55:989 - Add circle with clap? or extend slider 00:55:534 (3) - and add clap to third circle.
00:57:807 - ^
00:59:625 - ^
01:01:443 - ^
01:03:261 - ^
01:06:898 - ^
01:10:534 - ^
01:12:352 - ^
01:12:352 - ^
01:14:170 - ^
01:17:807 - ^
00:54:170 - ^
00:55:989 - Add circle with clap? or extend slider 00:55:534 (3) - and add clap to third circle.
00:57:807 - ^
00:59:625 - ^
01:01:443 - ^
01:03:261 - ^
01:06:898 - ^
01:10:534 - ^
01:12:352 - ^
01:12:352 - ^
01:14:170 - ^
01:17:807 - ^
The flow is fine, but still can be improved. No big problem though
[Master]
how about making 00:08:261 (3,4,5) - , 00:10:080 (3,4,5) - , 00:11:898 (3,4,5) - 00:13:716 (3,4,5) - , the same shape/pattern?
00:16:443 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - how about changing these(or the previous 8) into sliders?
00:21:670 (1,2,3) - stack?
add circle with clap/just add clap
00:23:375 (1) - remove circleNote: Ignore if it contrast with your whistles/patterns
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00:24:966 - add circle
00:28:602 - ^
00:35:420 - ^ maybe?
00:38:034 (5,6,1) - space normally?
00:43:489 (3,4,1) - stack?
00:46:216 (4,5,6) - ^
00:48:602 - add circle, let 00:48:602 (5) - start at 00:48:716 - (remove next circle)
01:19:284 (1) - let slider start at 01:19:170 - (remove circle)
01:18:489 (1,2,1) - change these into triangular pattern if followed previous one
[Advanced]
00:58:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - change to different pattern? a little confusing to me
01:18:034 (5,1) - swap NC?
[Basic]
00:10:080 (2) - rotate so it creats a flow? (→)
01:08:943 (1,2,3) - hmm.. maybe a little too hard?
01:11:670 (3) - split to a circle and a 1/2 beat slider?
01:18:034 (1) - start this at 01:18:261 -
[Beginner]
00:25:534 (1,2) - swap NC?
00:29:170 (1,2) - swap NC?
00:40:080 (1,2) - ^
00:57:352 (3) - NC?
[Other Suggestions]
Change your hitsounds to a more consistent pattern?
Note : Refer to the spoilerbox in [Master], that's where most of the clap sounds should be (imo).
That's all I can find,Good Luck