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rezoons
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lundi 24 juin 2013 at 13:32:03

Artist: Aoi Shoudo
Title: Steel Samurai
Source: Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney
Tags: Gyakuten Saiban Appellate Project
BPM: 140
Filesize: 2758kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,62 stars, 120 notes)
  2. Hard (4,89 stars, 283 notes)
  3. Normal (4,42 stars, 196 notes)
  4. Path Of Glory (4,97 stars, 288 notes)
Download: Aoi Shoudo - Steel Samurai
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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(map #1)
It's a remix of the Steel Samurai's theme from Phoenix Wright/Gyakuten Saiban 1 taken from the Gyakuten Saiban Appellate Project.
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Shout out to kosiga for the hitsounds suggestions. :)
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Historical
13/01: Add "Path Of Glory" difficulty.
15/01: Add "Normal" difficulty / Add "Easy" difficulty.
19/01: Add Cirno's mod.
20/01: Add Supermoutarde's mod.
25/01: Add ThoomyyxD's mod.
08/02: Change the hitsounds in all difficulties.
13/02: Add Quiz-chan's mod. / Add shARPII's mod.
16/02: Harden the "Path Of Glory" difficulty.
17/02: Add Kattie Pie's mod. / Remap some part of "Normal".
04/03: Add RikiH_'s mod.
09/03: Add Gloria Guard's mod.
10/03: Add KiyoshiX101's mod.
11/03: Add angelfix's mod.
13/03: Add Zazalng's mod.
16/03: Add Verlaren's mod.
26/03: Add kosiga's mod.
05/04: Add Wolf's mod.
06/04: Add ChivaCookie's mod / Add Kitsuneko's mod / Add Teara's mod / Add PortalLife's mod.
08/04: Start mapping "Hard".
10/04: "Hard" finished / Add Cobra's mod.
11/04: Add DakeDekaane's mod / Add HabiHolic's mod.
12/04: Add Dolphin's mod.
13/04: Add JauiPlaY's mod / Add Laurier's mod.
27/04: Add Kokatsu's mod / Add tutuhaha's mod.
03/05: Add luxoDeh's mod.
09/05: Add Deadlyneliel's mod.
02/06: Add Sonnyc's mod.
10/06: Add Zero__wind's mod.
12/06: Add Hollow Wings's mod / Add Yasora's mod.
13/06: Add Smoothie's mod / Add Xinely's mod44
14/06: Add xxheroxx's mod. / Add Ayu's mod.
15/06: Add CDFA's mod.
17/06: Add Jemmmmy's mod.
18/06: received by Teara
24/06: by NoHitter.
cirno-_old
General
Yay I love Pheonix wright <3
I love your old school style. It really fits this song well

Easy
It plays well. Just needs hitsounds to be fixed.

I think there is a rule that the easiest diff in a mapset has to be 2.25 stars or lower now. Not entirely sure. But this easy is good for an easy diff, I'm sure the BATs won't mind.
CS3 looks better imo. It is easy enough for it. I mean I don't do this that often, even on easy diffs
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/574588
btw that's with CS3 ^
00:06:856 (1) - starting with a clap sounds kinda bad. finish sounds better

00:08:999 (3) - claps on slider head and end
00:12:428 (3) - clap
00:10:285 (1) - clap slider end
00:12:857 (4) - finish
00:15:428 (1) - consider finish on slider head, and a clap at the end
00:17:571 (1) - clap slider head
00:18:428 (2) - clap

Try to follow the rhythym of clap every white tick before and after the big tick.
http://i.imgur.com/NpXgeo3.png
like that ^^

00:41:142 (1,1,1) - read below
00:51:428 (1,2,3) - stuff like this shouldn't be all claps. Finish or whistle would sound better. If you think it doesn't, consider using a custom hitsound.

00:46:285 (1) - could use whistle maybe.
00:14:142 (1,2) - consider finish instead. fits the instrumentation

Finish mapping easy? I was told that all diffs should end at about the same point. I know it's probably boring to you, but I guess easy players like it.


Normal
same thing with the hitsounds pretty much as easy

00:07:499 (3) - This slider being so long throws you off when you had a 1/4 reverse right before it.
00:10:285 (1) - this stack doesn't play well. I think this plays better http://i.imgur.com/KW4Gxmw.png [[ 00:08:785 (2) - remove reverse then delete 00:10:285 (1) - and make a slider from 00:09:642 to 00:10:285

00:11:786 (1,2,3) - this plays well. do more of this in the intro
00:18:642 (1,2,3,4) - This confused me. And it will confuse new peeps too.
00:27:428 (1,1,1,1) - this actually plays well. Surprising that it does for a normal
00:34:285 (1,1,1,1) - ^
Keep those NC's the way they are cause it helps read the map.
00:41:142 (1,2,1,2) - easy for me to read, not sure about others. It's probably okay. Why am I putting this here. eh w/e lol
01:00:642 (1,1) - same crap as the intro, needs to be fixed
01:09:214 (3) - spacing between 2 and 4 is off
01:17:999 (4) - touching HP bar. Unrankable
01:27:428 (1,1,1,1,1) - I love this :)

Hard
Same thing with the hitsounds as above diffs

I'd try to focus more on the guitar than the beat more. Especially during the intro

00:27:107 (5,6) - Awkward when playing
00:34:285 (1) - weird jump that breaks the flow. I love the sliders tho
00:50:357 (1) - Auto gets 2k so it's okay, but I hate it. I think it should be mapped over instead
01:02:357 (6) - remove reverse, but make it end at same time? idk. a C-shaped 3 point/bezier slider should do. It'll match the guitar.

01:10:285 - guitar has a note here, why not a circle? nevermind makes more sense the way it is


GL ~star
Topic Starter
rezoons

cirno- wrote:

General
Yay I love Pheonix wright <3
I love your old school style. It really fits this song well

Easy
It plays well. Just needs hitsounds to be fixed.Yeah. It's kind of my weak point

I think there is a rule that the easiest diff in a mapset has to be 2.25 stars or lower now. Not entirely sure. But this easy is good for an easy diff, I'm sure the BATs won't mind.
CS3 looks better imo. It is easy enough for it. I mean I don't do this that often, even on easy diffs -Fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/574588
btw that's with CS3 ^
00:06:856 (1) - starting with a clap sounds kinda bad. finish sounds better -Fixed

00:08:999 (3) - claps on slider head and end -Fixed
00:12:428 (3) - clap -Fixed
00:10:285 (1) - clap slider end -Fixed
00:12:857 (4) - finish -Fixed
00:15:428 (1) - consider finish on slider head, and a clap at the end -Fixed
00:17:571 (1) - clap slider head -Fixed
00:18:428 (2) - clap -Fixed

Try to follow the rhythym of clap every white tick before and after the big tick.
http://i.imgur.com/NpXgeo3.png
like that ^^ -Fixed

00:41:142 (1,1,1) - read below -Fixed
00:51:428 (1,2,3) - stuff like this shouldn't be all claps. Finish or whistle would sound better. If you think it doesn't, consider using a custom hitsound. -Fixed

00:46:285 (1) - could use whistle maybe. -Fixed
00:14:142 (1,2) - consider finish instead. fits the instrumentation -Fixed

Finish mapping easy? I was told that all diffs should end at about the same point. I know it's probably boring to you, but I guess easy players like it.
Yeah. But since it's txice the same thing i thought that for an easy diff. It was enough. But when i see the maximum score with CS3 i think you're right and i will map this.

Normal
same thing with the hitsounds pretty much as easy OK. I will start from scratch for the hitsound and follow all your advice. I'm bad at this and i thank you for all your advice.

00:07:499 (3) - This slider being so long throws you off when you had a 1/4 reverse right before it. I'm not sure if i understand it right. But i don't agree with what i think you're saying. But i put it on hold until someone else make the same suggestion as you.
00:10:285 (1) - this stack doesn't play well. I think this plays better http://i.imgur.com/KW4Gxmw.png [[ 00:08:785 (2) - remove reverse then delete 00:10:285 (1) - and make a slider from 00:09:642 to 00:10:285 -Fixed but in another way that i prefer.

00:11:786 (1,2,3) - this plays well. do more of this in the intro
00:18:642 (1,2,3,4) - This confused me. And it will confuse new peeps too. -Fixed
00:27:428 (1,1,1,1) - this actually plays well. Surprising that it does for a normal
00:34:285 (1,1,1,1) - ^
Keep those NC's the way they are cause it helps read the map. I've noticed that without these it's nearly impossible to read it. but i find it kinda cool with the NC.
00:41:142 (1,2,1,2) - easy for me to read, not sure about others. It's probably okay. Why am I putting this here. eh w/e lol
01:00:642 (1,1) - same crap as the intro, needs to be fixed Same thing here. I don't totally agree with you but i've modified it in order to be more readable.
01:09:214 (3) - spacing between 2 and 4 is off -Fixed
01:17:999 (4) - touching HP bar. Unrankable -Fixed
01:27:428 (1,1,1,1,1) - I love this :)

Hard
Same thing with the hitsounds as above diffs

I'd try to focus more on the guitar than the beat more. Especially during the intro

00:27:107 (5,6) - Awkward when playing I know. In fact i have trouble playing it but it's what follows the song the best. But i think i will fix it. But i don't know yet how.
00:34:285 (1) - weird jump that breaks the flow. I love the sliders tho -Fixed..... I think.
00:50:357 (1) - Auto gets 2k so it's okay, but I hate it. I think it should be mapped over instead -Fixed. Replaced with a slider.
01:02:357 (6) - remove reverse, but make it end at same time? idk. a C-shaped 3 point/bezier slider should do. It'll match the guitar. -Fixed. I prefer this way.

01:10:285 - guitar has a note here, why not a circle? nevermind makes more sense the way it is


GL ~star Thanks ^^
Thanks a lot for your very helpful mod and the star :) . I don't have yet make all the change (especially for the hitsounds) but i will.
SuperMoutarde
Salut,

Voilà mon mod :)

[General]
Les hitsounds sont un peu forts, et le clap rend pas très bien avec le son de ta chanson, tu pourrais essayer de trouver un clap custom plus adapté. Arpès, ça c'est aussi une question de goût ^^

[Easy]

00:25:714 (1) - ajoute finish

00:27:428 (1,1,1,1) - je trouve que cette forme rend pas avec cette slider speed à cause des cercles qui dépassent les uns sur les autres. Je ferais plutôt quelque chose comme ça :


D'ailleurs j'ai vu que t'utilisais des points rouges aux extrémités des sliders, pour info ça sert à rien ^^

00:37:714 (1,3) - j'éviterais ce genre de dédoublement en mode facile, ça induit vite les débutants en erreur

00:39:428 (1) - finish

00:41:142 (1,1) - comme pour 00:37:714 (1,3)

01:11:999 (1,2) - j'homogénéiserais plus ce combo

01:18:857 (1) - finish

01:25:714 (1) - finish

01:32:571 (1) - finish

01:46:714 (1) - finish


[Normal]

00:25:714 (1) - finish

00:32:571 (1) - finish

00:39:428 (1) - finish

00:50:357 (5) - je le bougerais en x:216 y:182

01:18:857 (1) - finish

01:25:714 (1) - finish

01:32:571 (1) - finish

01:43:500 (4) - je le bougerais en x:254 y:128. si oui, resnap 01:44:571 (1,2,3)

[Path of Glory]

finish sur les spinners sinon pas de remarque, bonne map :)
Topic Starter
rezoons
Salut ;) ,

SuperMoutarde wrote:

Salut,

Voilà mon mod :)

[General]
Les hitsounds sont un peu forts, et le clap rend pas très bien avec le son de ta chanson, tu pourrais essayer de trouver un clap custom plus adapté. Arpès, ça c'est aussi une question de goût ^^ -Fixed. J'ai tout baissé de 25%

[Easy]
00:25:714 (1) - ajoute finish -Fixed.
00:27:428 (1,1,1,1) - je trouve que cette forme rend pas avec cette slider speed à cause des cercles qui dépassent les uns sur les autres. A vrai dire cette forme me pose des problèmes de chevauchement des autres slider à cause du faible distance snapping. De plus j'ai pas trop l'impression que ça gène. Pour le moment je ne change rien mais si quelqu'un d'autre le suggère je le ferais.
D'ailleurs j'ai vu que t'utilisais des points rouges aux extrémités des sliders, pour info ça sert à rien ^^ Je sais. c'est juste moi qui ai fait un double clic à la fin par accident et ça c'est propagé à cause du copier-coller. Et j'ai eu de la flemme de l'enlever après :o.
00:37:714 (1,3) - j'éviterais ce genre de dédoublement en mode facile, ça induit vite les débutants en erreur -Fixed.
00:39:428 (1) - finish -Fixed.
00:41:142 (1,1) - comme pour 00:37:714 (1,3) -Fixed.
01:11:999 (1,2) - j'homogénéiserais plus ce combo -Fixed.
01:18:857 (1) - finish -Fixed.
01:25:714 (1) - finish -Fixed.
01:32:571 (1) - finish -Fixed.
01:46:714 (1) - finish -Fixed.

[Normal]
00:25:714 (1) - finish -Fixed.
00:32:571 (1) - finish -Fixed.
00:39:428 (1) - finish -Fixed.
00:50:357 (5) - je le bougerais en x:216 y:182 -Fixed.
01:18:857 (1) - finish -Fixed.
01:25:714 (1) - finish -Fixed.
01:32:571 (1) - finish -Fixed.
01:43:500 (4) - je le bougerais en x:254 y:128. si oui, resnap 01:44:571 (1,2,3) -Fixed.

[Path of Glory]

finish sur les spinners sinon pas de remarque -Fixed., bonne map Merci ^^ :)
Merci beaucoup pour le mod :) .
Loooctav
Bonjour!!
[General]
Tags: Phoenix Whrigt :!:Ace Attoerny :!:
The song needs a "Preview Point" in 01:00:000
Like putting Preview Point
1)There will be a diff ..
2)Go to the top bar where it says "Timing"
3)Click On "Set Current Position as Preview Point" This should be placed on all diff and this second "01:00:000"

For serving the "Preview Point" is so that when you leave the song, always heard a piece of the song, but what you hear is what comes after the "Preview point" you got ..
[Easy]
00:12:000 (2,4) Delete
00:13:285 Add Circle x:392 y:136
00:14:999 (2) Moved x:240 y:296
00:25:285 (3) Moved x:416 y:240
00:38:142 (1,2) Ctrl + G
00:41:142 (1,2) Change it as I leave it in the picture, it should be changed, because the circle lid that comes after... 01:18:857 Add Line Green with 50% Volume
01:19:285 ^ 30%
01:19:714 ^ 20%
01:20:000 ^ 10%
01:32:142 (4) x:256 y:360

[Normal]
00:09:857 (4) x:296 y:128
00:41:571 (2) x:192 y:88
00:42:428 (2) x:320 y:296
00:44:571 (1,1,1,1) Separate them, put them on everyone and beginners will not know where they are :3

[Path Of Glory]
Beat Snap Divisor 1/4
00:06:964 (1,2,3,4) Image
00:13:821 (6) Delete
00:14:250 > 00:14:892 Complete Map Plz..
00:15:642 (3) Delete
00:15:857 Image
00:18:428 Add Circle x:72 y:448
00:46:285 (5) Image
00:47:999 (1) ^
01:39:428 (1,2,1,2) ^

Has a long way to your map ... You have to improve the space and time .. I hope to help serve you, there are many things that you just pass only because you'll notice;)

[GOOD LUCK!]
Topic Starter
rezoons
Hello :),

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Bonjour!!
[General]
Tags: Phoenix Whrigt :!:Ace Attoerny :!: -Fixed
The song needs a "Preview Point" in 01:00:000 -I didn't know that. Thanks for the tip ^^

[Easy]
00:12:000 (2,4) Delete -Fixed, replaced by a single slider ffrom 00:12:000 to 00:12:857
00:13:285 Add Circle x:392 y:136 I follow the guitar not the drums.
00:14:999 (2) Moved x:240 y:296 It causes a distance snapping issue. And i don't think it's very hard to read for beginner since there is one second between the notes.
00:25:285 (3) Moved x:416 y:240 It causes a distance snapping issue but for this time i agree that it could be hard to read for beginner. I still wait to see if anyone make the same suggestion.
00:41:142 (1,2) Change it as I leave it in the picture, it should be changed, because the circle lid that comes after... -Fixed but not as it is on the picture (big distance snapping issue).
01:18:857 Add Line Green with 50% Volume -I don't see the point here.
01:19:285 ^ 30% ^
01:19:714 ^ 20% ^
01:20:000 ^ 10% ^
01:32:142 (4) x:256 y:360 -I want to finish at the center. It's easier to spin.

[Normal]
00:09:857 (4) x:296 y:128 -Bad distance snapping and the stack shouldn't be a problem in a "normal" diff when the notes are separated by only 1/2 beat.
00:41:571 (2) x:192 y:88 ^
00:42:428 (2) x:320 y:296 ^
00:44:571 (1,1,1,1) Separate them, put them on everyone and beginners will not know where they are :3 -Fixed. And i also change the next slider. Now it's cooler.
Thanks for the mod :) .
quiz-chan_DELETED
Hellow~ from my queue

[General]
Seems to be fine.

[Easy]
00:12:000 (2,1,2,1) - Wrong spacing. Please fix these.
00:27:428 (1,1,1,1) - Unnecessary new combos here. Perhaps place a NC every 2nd slider.
00:34:285 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:01:714 (2) - Unnecessary new combo.
01:08:571 (3) - lolwat, you don't need a thousand nodes for a cool slider. Besides, it isn't cool. Remake this.
01:20:571 (1,1,1,1) - Unnecessary combos again.
01:27:428 (1,1,1,1) - ^
Not going to point this issue out anymore.

[Normal]
In this diff, I found the same NC issues everywhere. Fix them by yourself.
00:46:285 (1) - Erase one repeat.
01:00:642 (1) - Unnecessary new combo.
01:39:428 (1) - Erase one repeat again.

[Path Of Glory]
00:09:642 (10,1) - Definitely increase spacing here.
00:20:571 (1,2) - Slider ends are offbeat. Try to make them end on the red tick.

Nice diff!

Good luck with this.
Topic Starter
rezoons
Hello :) ,

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hellow~ from my queue

[General]
Seems to be fine.

[Easy]
00:12:000 (2,1,2,1) - Wrong spacing. Please fix these. -Heu... I don't see where is the issue there....
00:27:428 (1,1,1,1) - Unnecessary new combos here. Perhaps place a NC every 2nd slider. -Fixed
00:34:285 (1,1,1,1) - ^ -Fixed
01:01:714 (2) - Unnecessary new combo. -Fixed
01:08:571 (3) - lolwat, you don't need a thousand nodes for a cool slider. Besides, it isn't cool. Remake this. -Fixed, i suck at drawing sliders
01:20:571 (1,1,1,1) - Unnecessary combos again. -Fixed
01:27:428 (1,1,1,1) - ^ -Fixed
Not going to point this issue out anymore.

[Normal]
In this diff, I found the same NC issues everywhere. Fix them by yourself. -This time it's done on purpose in order for the map to be more readable because of the overlapping. (For the easy it was just for design)
00:46:285 (1) - Erase one repeat. -I don't think it's a problem for a "normal" diff. to have a slider that long. Maybe if someone else suggest it...
01:00:642 (1) - Unnecessary new combo. -Fixed
01:39:428 (1) - Erase one repeat again. -Same here.

[Path Of Glory]
00:09:642 (10,1) - Definitely increase spacing here. -Fixed
00:20:571 (1,2) - Slider ends are offbeat. Try to make them end on the red tick. -Fixed, i wasn't sure for that.

Nice diff! -Thanks :)

Good luck with this.
Thank you for the mod! ;)
shARPII
Salut rezoons, désolé du retard, j'ai eu pas mal de chose à faire et avoir été malade m'a pas aidé --' x)
Bref allons-y ^^

[General]

C'est ok pour moi

[Easy]

/!\Le easy a été fait avant ton fix du mod à Quiz-chan

  1. 00:15:428 (1) retire le combo
  2. 00:17:142 (4,1) inverse le combo
  3. 00:23:571 (1,2,3) Je trouve que stacker (2,3) est pas une bonne idée ici. Essaye quelque chose dans ce style là http://puu.sh/220Ok (c'est pas très soigné là mais c'est une idée de style, pour avoir un truc bien symétrique par rapport au centre, utilise aussi le grille de niveau 4)
  4. D'ailleurs petite parenthèse là dessus, vu que tu utilises la grille 3, la distance entre les différents objets sont vachement irréguliers. Sur ta map, elle varie entre x0.94 environ et x1.1 : c'est trop grand (c'est peut être pas grand chose au niveau de l'oeil mais c'est toujours mieux de corriger ça. Normalement tu devrais être entre x0.98 et x1.02 max. ça fera un travail en moins aux MAT ^^) Essaye donc de revoir le DS de tous tes points et de mettre tout entre x0.98 et x1.02
  5. 00:27:428 (1) On m'avait dit que mettre un objet en plein milieu après un spinner était pas autorisé parce que le 300 cachait l'objet. Faudrait que je vérifie l'info, j'ai un doute dessus. (en tout cas pour du easy, tu devrais pas le planquer derrière le 300 ça c'est une certitude pour moi ^^)
  6. 00:27:428 (1,1,1,1) Pas sûr que tous ces nouveaux combos soient nécessaires. Rassemble les tous en un seul combo ou sépare au moins en deux combos. (la meilleur idée selon moi)
  7. 00:34:285 (1,1,1,1) ^
  8. 00:46:285 (1) /!\ le spacing est pas bon entre (4) et (1) rapproche le (grid level 4)
  9. 01:01:714 (1) tu peux retirer ce combo (la guitare continue et le combo d'après, tu le coupes pas donc ça sert à rien à mon avis).
  10. 01:20:571 (1,1,1,1) Toujours pareil pour les combos
  11. 01:27:428 (1,1,1,1) ^
  12. 01:30:857 (1) /!\ spacing entre le slider et ce cercle. Rapproche le.
[Normal]

Toujours même conseil, utilise la grille de niveau 4, tu seras beaucoup plus précis avec plus de marge (replace tes objets, même problème que dans easy, il y a une discontinuité sur la distance entre les objets, c'est un peu trop grand (entre ~0.94 et 1.1). Replace le tout.

  1. 00:10:285 (1) /!\spacing entre (4) et (1)
  2. 00:15:428 (1,2,3,4) grille niveau 4 et déplace 2,3 pour qu'ils soient un peu plus éloigné de 1 et 4 (x1.02 environ max)
  3. 00:27:428 (1,1,1,1) Toujours la même pour les combos, sépare en 2 ou fait un seul bloc avec ces 4 objets comme je l'ai dis précédemment.
  4. 00:34:285 (1,1,1,1) Bon je vais arrêter de le rabâcher ^^ repasse toi toutes tes difficultés et règle le problème quand tu as 4 sliders qui ont des combos différents à la suite. ^^
  5. 00:46:285 (1) Pas fan de ce slider. Et en plus je trouve pas qu'il suit la musique. Essaye plutôt ce rythme : http://puu.sh/2227S
  6. 00:51:857 rajoute une note
  7. 00:52:714 ^ (pour les deux, je trouve que ça passe mieux avec la musique ça fait beaucoup moins vide alors que la guitare est assez présente à ce moment là)
  8. 01:02:785 (2) /!\spacing entre (1) et (2). Rapproche le cercle du slider.
  9. 01:42:642 (1) ^ entre (1) et (1)
  10. 01:43:500 (4) ^ entre (3) et (4)
[Path Of Glory]

Toujours la même, utilise la grille level 4 et replace tout tes objets pour qu'ils aient une distance à peu près équivalente entre x0.98 et x1.02 (sur les moments où tu n'as pas changé le Distance Spacing ou quand tu fais un saut)

  1. 00:11:785 (8) Je pense qu'il y aurait besoin d'un nouveau combo ici. En plus, tu commences un nouveau pattern donc c'est le bon moment ^^
  2. 00:25:714 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) J'aime! =D
  3. 00:32:571 (5) Nouveau combo ici!
  4. 00:34:285 (1,2,3,4) Pas fan de la gueule des sliders. Refait les peut-être (on te le dira peut être, enfin moi quand j'ai fais des trucs comme ça, on m'a fait la remarque ^^)
  5. 01:16:071 (1) enlève le nouveau combo
  6. 01:25:714 (5) nouveau combo (tu as fini ton pattern)
Pas grand chose d'autre à dire sur cette difficulté ^^ elle est assez plaisante à jouer :)

Bonne chance pour la suite!
Topic Starter
rezoons
Salut à toi :) ,

shARPII wrote:

Salut rezoons, désolé du retard, j'ai eu pas mal de chose à faire et avoir été malade m'a pas aidé --' x) Pas de problème ^-^, de toutes façon je ne prévois pas de ranker cette map avant un an donc c'est pas à quelques jours près que ça changera grand chose. :D
Bref allons-y ^^

[General]

C'est ok pour moi

[Easy]

/!\Le easy a été fait avant ton fix du mod à Quiz-chan

  1. 00:15:428 (1) retire le combo Je trouve que ça fait pas super comme ça. 00:14:142 (1,2) sont vraiment à part donc ils meritent leur combo à part.
  2. 00:17:142 (4,1) inverse le combo -Fixed
  3. 00:23:571 (1,2,3) Je trouve que stacker (2,3) est pas une bonne idée ici. Essaye quelque chose dans ce style là http://puu.sh/220Ok (c'est pas très soigné là mais c'est une idée de style, pour avoir un truc bien symétrique par rapport au centre, utilise aussi le grille de niveau 4) -Fixed
  4. D'ailleurs petite parenthèse là dessus, vu que tu utilises la grille 3, la distance entre les différents objets sont vachement irréguliers. Sur ta map, elle varie entre x0.94 environ et x1.1 : c'est trop grand (c'est peut être pas grand chose au niveau de l'oeil mais c'est toujours mieux de corriger ça. Normalement tu devrais être entre x0.98 et x1.02 max. ça fera un travail en moins aux MAT ^^) Essaye donc de revoir le DS de tous tes points et de mettre tout entre x0.98 et x1.02 A vrai dire j'ai plusieurs autres map utiliser la grille 3 sans grand problème. Je sais qu'il m'arrive quelque fois de tricher un peu sur le DS pour avoir des trucs plus beau ce qui peu expliquer pourquoi c'est aussi disparate. En tout cas le changement risque d'être long. Je ne sais pas si je le ferais mais en tout cas, là, je n'ai pas le temps.
  5. 00:27:428 (1) On m'avait dit que mettre un objet en plein milieu après un spinner était pas autorisé parce que le 300 cachait l'objet. Faudrait que je vérifie l'info, j'ai un doute dessus. (en tout cas pour du easy, tu devrais pas le planquer derrière le 300 ça c'est une certitude pour moi ^^) -Fixed
  6. 00:27:428 (1,1,1,1) Pas sûr que tous ces nouveaux combos soient nécessaires. Rassemble les tous en un seul combo ou sépare au moins en deux combos. (la meilleur idée selon moi) -Fixed
  7. 00:34:285 (1,1,1,1) ^ -Fixed
  8. 00:46:285 (1) /!\ le spacing est pas bon entre (4) et (1) rapproche le (grid level 4) -Fixed
  9. 01:01:714 (1) tu peux retirer ce combo (la guitare continue et le combo d'après, tu le coupes pas donc ça sert à rien à mon avis). -Fixed
  10. 01:20:571 (1,1,1,1) Toujours pareil pour les combos -Fixed
  11. 01:27:428 (1,1,1,1) ^ -Fixed
  12. 01:30:857 (1) /!\ spacing entre le slider et ce cercle. Rapproche le.-Fixed
[Normal]

Toujours même conseil, utilise la grille de niveau 4, tu seras beaucoup plus précis avec plus de marge (replace tes objets, même problème que dans easy, il y a une discontinuité sur la distance entre les objets, c'est un peu trop grand (entre ~0.94 et 1.1). Replace le tout.

  1. 00:10:285 (1) /!\spacing entre (4) et (1) -Fixed
  2. 00:15:428 (1,2,3,4) grille niveau 4 et déplace 2,3 pour qu'ils soient un peu plus éloigné de 1 et 4 (x1.02 environ max) -Fixed
  3. 00:27:428 (1,1,1,1) Toujours la même pour les combos, sépare en 2 ou fait un seul bloc avec ces 4 objets comme je l'ai dis précédemment. La pour le coup je ne peux pas vraiment car sinon la superposition des sliders rend la map assez difficile à lire pour des débutants. C'était à la base la raison pour laquelle j'avais fait ces NC. Et je l'avais propager aux autres pour que ce soit cohérent. (Et je l'avais fait aux Easy parce que je trouve ça esthétique mais finalement je l'ai enlevé.)
  4. 00:34:285 (1,1,1,1) Bon je vais arrêter de le rabâcher ^^ repasse toi toutes tes difficultés et règle le problème quand tu as 4 sliders qui ont des combos différents à la suite. ^^ Au final j'ai tout changé en Easy et changé une partie au Normal.
  5. 00:46:285 (1) Pas fan de ce slider. Et en plus je trouve pas qu'il suit la musique. Essaye plutôt ce rythme : http://puu.sh/2227S -Fixed
  6. 00:51:857 rajoute une note -Fixed
  7. 00:52:714 ^ (pour les deux, je trouve que ça passe mieux avec la musique ça fait beaucoup moins vide alors que la guitare est assez présente à ce moment là) -Fixed
  8. 01:02:785 (2) /!\spacing entre (1) et (2). Rapproche le cercle du slider. -Fixed
  9. 01:42:642 (1) ^ entre (1) et (1) -Fixed
  10. 01:43:500 (4) ^ entre (3) et (4) -Fixed
[Path Of Glory]

Toujours la même, utilise la grille level 4 et replace tout tes objets pour qu'ils aient une distance à peu près équivalente entre x0.98 et x1.02 (sur les moments où tu n'as pas changé le Distance Spacing ou quand tu fais un saut)

  1. 00:11:785 (8) Je pense qu'il y aurait besoin d'un nouveau combo ici. En plus, tu commences un nouveau pattern donc c'est le bon moment ^^ -Fixed
  2. 00:25:714 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) J'aime! =D -Merci ^^
  3. 00:32:571 (5) Nouveau combo ici! -Fixed
  4. 00:34:285 (1,2,3,4) Pas fan de la gueule des sliders. Refait les peut-être (on te le dira peut être, enfin moi quand j'ai fais des trucs comme ça, on m'a fait la remarque ^^) -OK. Je les referais surement plus tard. Je suis pas trop inspiré pour le moment.
  5. 01:16:071 (1) enlève le nouveau combo -Fixed
  6. 01:25:714 (5) nouveau combo (tu as fini ton pattern) -Fixed
Pas grand chose d'autre à dire sur cette difficulté ^^ elle est assez plaisante à jouer :) Merci ^^, à vrai dire les Hard sont les seules diffs que je sais vraiment mapper. Pour ce qui est des Easy, Normal et Insane. C'est pas mon truc :o.

Bonne chance pour la suite!
Merci beaucoup pour le mod :).
Poggo
Hi from my queue :3

[Path Of Glory]

00:09:214(7,8,9,10) - It's looks ugly and slider 10 overlap with stream~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616756 This will be looks better
00:12:214(3,4) - remove whistle from this notes
00:14:357 - add double slider 1/2 It's better follow for music
00:17:142 - add NC here
00:20:571(1,2) - looks ugly and not playable~ Put it here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616761 and correct pattern after
00:52:714 - add note here for better flow~
00:56:571 - add NC
01:00:000(2) - add NC here
01:12:214(3,4) - put this sliders on centre Y http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616765
01:18:000 - you forget add finish here
01:27:000(6,7,1) - looks realy ugly >.< Plz fix this overlap
01:29:142 - add NC
01:43:285 - add nc on spin
01:45:857 - add note here

[Normal]

00:28:285 - remove NC
00:30:000 - ^
00:34:285 (1,1,1,1) - This pattern unrankable bct start slider very overlapped and It not readable and very hard to play~ Plz change this pattern
00:50:357 - repeat is hide~ It's unrankable too~

This diff is very hard for Normal~ You shoud remove all sliders on 1/4 bcz It's hard to play and correct all spacing~

[Easy]

00:27:000 - very close to note plz replace this spin on notes it will be easier to play http://puu.sh/23YYt
00:32:571 - the same ^
00:41:142 - here better make so http://puu.sh/23Z9v
00:42:857 - remove NC here
00:46:285 - ^
00:53:142 - put this note on x416 y192 for smooth triangle and remove clap
01:06:857 - better add note here~ It will be more playable for beginners
01:20:142 - replace this spin on notes! Bcz note very close to spin for easy
01:27:000 - ^
01:34:285 - remove this slider and end spin here
01:36:428 - repeat is hide~ It's unranable fix this


Map need more work~ I hope you can make this map much better :3 Good luck :oops:
Topic Starter
rezoons
Hi :),

Wow, a mod from a really good mapper. It's my lucky day ^^. (btw i really love your maps. Osu! need more lindsey stirling. :D )

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my queue :3

[Path Of Glory]

00:09:214(7,8,9,10) - It's looks ugly and slider 10 overlap with stream~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616756 This will be looks better -Fixed
00:12:214(3,4) - remove whistle from this notes -Fixed
00:14:357 - add double slider 1/2 It's better follow for music -You're sure? I have trouble seeing it. For the moment i won't change anything.
00:17:142 - add NC here -Fixed
00:20:571(1,2) - looks ugly and not playable~ Put it here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616761 and correct pattern after -Fixed
00:52:714 - add note here for better flow~ -Fixed
00:56:571 - add NC -Fixed
01:00:000(2) - add NC here -Fixed
01:12:214(3,4) - put this sliders on centre Y http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616765 -Fixed
01:18:000 - you forget add finish here -Fixed
01:27:000(6,7,1) - looks realy ugly >.< Plz fix this overlap -Fixed
01:29:142 - add NC -Fixed
01:43:285 - add nc on spin -Fixed
01:45:857 - add note here -Fixed

[Normal]

00:28:285 - remove NC -Fixed
00:30:000 - ^ -Fixed
00:34:285 (1,1,1,1) - This pattern unrankable bct start slider very overlapped and It not readable and very hard to play~ Plz change this pattern -Fixed
00:50:357 - repeat is hide~ It's unrankable too~ -Fixed

This diff is very hard for Normal~ You shoud remove all sliders on 1/4 bcz It's hard to play and correct all spacing~ -Ok, i fixed all the spacing, remap nearly all the parts with 1/4 sliders. I hope it's better now.

[Easy]

00:27:000 - very close to note plz replace this spin on notes it will be easier to play http://puu.sh/23YYt -Fixed but not the same way as you suggested.
00:32:571 - the same ^ - ^
00:41:142 - here better make so http://puu.sh/23Z9v -Fixed
00:42:857 - remove NC here -Fixed
00:46:285 - ^ -Fixed
00:53:142 - put this note on x416 y192 for smooth triangle and remove clap -Fixed
01:06:857 - better add note here~ It will be more playable for beginners -Fixed
01:20:142 - replace this spin on notes! Bcz note very close to spin for easy -Fixed
01:27:000 - ^ -Fixed
01:34:285 - remove this slider and end spin here -Fixed
01:36:428 - repeat is hide~ It's unranable fix this -Fixed


Map need more work~ I hope you can make this map much better :3 Good luck :oops: I hope too. I will work on this harder and i'll make some big changes. I'm still a beginner so i'm not used to all this. Anyway, thank you for your very helpful mod.
Thank you ^^.
RikiH_
Modding from my queue!

Easy

00:12:857 to 00:14:142
I don't like this gap, it's really odd... You should add some notes here...
00:36:000 - Remove NC like you did here in this pattern 00:29:142
00:41:142 (1,1) - Please remove claps from slider's tails and add whistles, they sound much better!
00:42:000 - Bad overlap, please move this one grid down (ignore distance snap here)
00:52:285 (2) - Move to 252|308 where you put the previous note
01:08:571 (4) - Make this a bit better, I'm noob at sliders and I don't know how to improve it unfortunately :C
01:25:714 (5,1) - I don't like this overlap, try to do something
01:29:142 (1) - Remove NC
01:32:571 (5,1) - Ugly overlap
01:34:285 (1,1) - Like you did before, remove claps from slider's tails and add whistles

Normal

00:14:142 (1,2) - Try to replace claps with whistles
00:24:857 (3) - Ctrl+g on this, it flows better
00:41:571 (2,2) - Add whistles on these notes
00:54:857 - Add a note
01:07:285 (1,2) - Whistles
01:24:428 (2,4) - Put these 4 grid up
01:34:714 (2,2) - Whistles
01:48:000 (1,2) - ^
01:49:714 (1,2) - ^

Path of glory

00:14:142 (1,2) - Wh...I think you know
00:27:000 - Add a note and make an unique stream, there is a sound here!
00:41:571 (2,4) - ...
01:00:214 (1) - I don't think MAT/BATs will approve this NC
01:07:285 (1,2) - :V
01:20:142 - The same as before, make an unique stream
01:34:714 (2,2) - Blahblahblah

Well, you need to improve Normal because I didn't like your sliders in that diff.
I loved sliders in Path of glory.
Star because Phoenix Wright is win.
Topic Starter
rezoons
Hi :),

RikiH_ wrote:

Modding from my queue!

Easy

00:12:857 to 00:14:142
I don't like this gap, it's really odd... You should add some notes here... Fixed
00:36:000 - Remove NC like you did here in this pattern 00:29:142 Fixed
00:41:142 (1,1) - Please remove claps from slider's tails and add whistles, they sound much better! Fixed
00:42:000 - Bad overlap, please move this one grid down (ignore distance snap here) Fixed
00:52:285 (2) - Move to 252|308 where you put the previous note Fixed (but i prefered moving the other note)
01:08:571 (4) - Make this a bit better, I'm noob at sliders and I don't know how to improve it unfortunately :C Fixed.... i guess.
01:25:714 (5,1) - I don't like this overlap, try to do something Fixed
01:29:142 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
01:32:571 (5,1) - Ugly overlap Fixed
01:34:285 (1,1) - Like you did before, remove claps from slider's tails and add whistles Fixed

Normal

00:14:142 (1,2) - Try to replace claps with whistles Fixed
00:24:857 (3) - Ctrl+g on this, it flows better Indeed, fixed
00:41:571 (2,2) - Add whistles on these notes Fixed
00:54:857 - Add a note Fixed
01:07:285 (1,2) - Whistles Fixed
01:24:428 (2,4) - Put these 4 grid up Fixed (i even slightly changed the pattern)
01:34:714 (2,2) - Whistles Fixed
01:48:000 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:49:714 (1,2) - ^ Fixed

Path of glory

00:14:142 (1,2) - Wh...I think you know Let me guess... Whistles? Fixed
00:27:000 - Add a note and make an unique stream, there is a sound here! No. There is no sound here if you listen closely.
00:41:571 (2,4) - ... Hum.... Whistles? Fixed
01:00:214 (1) - I don't think MAT/BATs will approve this NC Well, it's Katty Pie who said to me to put one here.She has more ranked beatmap than you so i'll trust her/him/it on this one. Sorry.....
01:07:285 (1,2) - :V Fixed
01:20:142 - The same as before, make an unique stream The same as before, no.
01:34:714 (2,2) - Blahblahblah Fixed

Well, you need to improve Normal because I didn't like your sliders in that diff. Well.... Betxeen this map and my other map, i think i'm definitely unable to do a decent "Normal". I'll remap it. Again..... :o
I loved sliders in Path of glory. Really? Thank you. I wasn't really sure about them. :D
Star because Phoenix Wright is win.Wouah. Thank you very much, Grazie mille :) . Osu! needs more Phoenix Wright :P
Thank you for your mod. :)
Gloria Guard
Hi rezoons (:3 」_)=3

From my queue m4m :)

[Easy]

00:12:857 (2) slider end remove finish

00:17:142 (2,3) be confusing pattern, Recommends widening the interval.

00:15:000 (3) remove finish

00:15:428 (1) slider head remove finish and slider end 00:16:714

00:34:285 (1) slider head add finish

00:42:000 remove new combo

00:48:000 (1) slider head add finish

00:53:357 ~ 00:59:785 The short length of the songs, And break time to put in this section is not recommended.
please add note

01:00:000 (1) slider head add finish

01:08:571 (4) slider end move 01:09:857

01:11:357 (1,3) overlap this is patter change please -> http://puu.sh/2eu9n

01:27:428 (1) slider head add finish

01:35:142 (1) remove new combo


[Normal]

00:13:714 add note?

00:27:000 remove finish

00:33:857 remove finish

00:34:285 (1) slider head add finish

00:40:714 remove finish

00:42:000 (1) remove new combo

01:00:642 (1) remove new combo

01:00:000 (1) add finish

01:06:857 add note?

01:20:142 (1) remove finish

01:27:000 (1) ^

01:27:428 (1) slider head add finish

01:33:857 (1) remove finish

01:35:142 (1) remove new combo


[Path Of Glory]

00:08:571 (5) add NC

00:34:285 (1) slider head add finish

00:48:000 (1) slider head add finish

01:20:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) This beat is very awkward. change please -> http://puu.sh/2eurc

01:27:428 (1) slider head add finish

01:43:285 ... Abrupt spin remove please and add note



Good luck
Topic Starter
rezoons
Hi :),

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi rezoons (:3 」_)=3

From my queue m4m :)

[Easy]

00:12:857 (2) slider end remove finish Fixed

00:17:142 (2,3) be confusing pattern, Recommends widening the interval. It's beacause when i modified the slider i didn't make it long enough. Fixed

00:15:000 (3) remove finish Fixed.... Wait! In fact no, the finish is good.

00:15:428 (1) slider head remove finish and slider end 00:16:714 Fixed and already Fixed

00:34:285 (1) slider head add finish Fixed

00:42:000 remove new combo Fixed

00:48:000 (1) slider head add finish Fixed

00:53:357 ~ 00:59:785 The short length of the songs, And break time to put in this section is not recommended.
please add note I'll fix it... Later.

01:00:000 (1) slider head add finish Fixed

01:08:571 (4) slider end move 01:09:857 Fixed

01:11:357 (1,3) overlap this is patter change please -> http://puu.sh/2eu9n Fixed

01:27:428 (1) slider head add finish Fixed

01:35:142 (1) remove new combo Fixed


[Normal]
Well.... It's basically the same mistakes as you pointed out in the Easy Diff so i fixed everything.
00:13:714 add note?

00:27:000 remove finish

00:33:857 remove finish

00:34:285 (1) slider head add finish

00:40:714 remove finish

00:42:000 (1) remove new combo

01:00:642 (1) remove new combo

01:00:000 (1) add finish

01:06:857 add note?

01:20:142 (1) remove finish

01:27:000 (1) ^

01:27:428 (1) slider head add finish

01:33:857 (1) remove finish

01:35:142 (1) remove new combo


[Path Of Glory]

00:08:571 (5) add NC Fixed (but not here)

00:34:285 (1) slider head add finish Fixed

00:48:000 (1) slider head add finish Fixed

01:20:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) This beat is very awkward. change please -> http://puu.sh/2eurc Sorru but it's the actual beat. Listen closely.

01:27:428 (1) slider head add finish Fixed

01:43:285 ... Abrupt spin remove please and add note Fixed but with a slider instead



Good luck Thanks :)
As always your mod are very helpful. Thanks :)
[Luxord]
Hello from my Queue~!

[General]
Consider using some custom hit sounds for parts of the song like 00:27:642 - 00:27:857 and so on.
This thread might be helpful: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/15407

[Easy]
00:10:285 (1) - Put a Finish?
00:14:142 (2,3) - Remove clap - Add Finish. Fits better with the music.
00:51:428 (1) - Remove clap, the song doesn't ask for Clap there.
01:07:285 (2,3) - Remove clap and put Finish.

[Normal]
00:27:428 (1,2,1,2) - Why this overlapping? It doesn't look nice. Something like this would help: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/648603
When sliders are not overlapping each other or their self and the player can see clearly the slider border is more enjoyable and looks beautiful.
00:41:571 (2,4) - Whistle + Finish. Whistle + Clap sounds bad. .-.
00:45:857 (4,1) - Slider border overlap D:< Fix this as well
00:51:428 (1) - Finish :c No clap
00:52:285 (3,5) - ^
01:00:642 (3,4,1) - Slider border overlap. They do not look beautiful like this ~
01:07:285 (2,3) - Whistle + Finish
01:13:714 (1,2) - Slider overlap~
01:34:714 (2,4) - Whistle + Finish
01:37:714 (1,2,3,4) - Just few grids away from each other just to not touch each other's border.
01:44:571 (1) - Finish, No Clap~
01:46:285 (5) - ^
01:47:999 (1,2) - Whistle + Finish
01:49:713 (1,2) - ^
01:50:784 (1) - Remove clap.


[Path to Glory]
00:06:857 (1) - Finish
00:14:142 (1,2) - Whistle + Finish
00:41:571 (2,4) - ^
00:46:285 (1,2) - Slider border overlap~ Fix this as well, ignoring a bit the distance snap wont hurt your map ;)
00:48:000 (1,2) - ^
00:51:428 (1,2) - Replace Clap with FInish
00:54:857 (1) - ^
00:56:571 (1,4) - No clap, put Finish :<
00:59:999 (1) - NC - I know it is already NC but only visible because it's after spinner.
01:07:285 (1,2) - Whistle + Finish
01:34:714 (2,2) - ^
01:41:142 (1,2) - Slider border overlap~ Fix this as well


Besides the hitsound errors and the sliders the map is good made. Good luck!
Topic Starter
rezoons
Hi :),

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Queue~!

[General]
Consider using some custom hit sounds for parts of the song like 00:27:642 - 00:27:857 and so on. I already use custom hitsounds for these parts.
This thread might be helpful: t/15407 I didn't know this tread. Thanks for the tip ^^

[Easy]
00:10:285 (1) - Put a Finish? Fixed
00:14:142 (2,3) - Remove clap - Add Finish. Fits better with the music. Fixed
00:51:428 (1) - Remove clap, the song doesn't ask for Clap there. Fixed
01:07:285 (2,3) - Remove clap and put Finish. Fixed

[Normal]
00:27:428 (1,2,1,2) - Why this overlapping? It doesn't look nice. Something like this would help: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/648603
When sliders are not overlapping each other or their self and the player can see clearly the slider border is more enjoyable and looks beautiful. Fixed.... I guess....
00:41:571 (2,4) - Whistle + Finish. Whistle + Clap sounds bad. .-. Fixed
00:45:857 (4,1) - Slider border overlap D:< Fix this as well Fixed
00:51:428 (1) - Finish :c No clap Fixed
00:52:285 (3,5) - ^ Fixed
01:00:642 (3,4,1) - Slider border overlap. They do not look beautiful like this ~ Fixed
01:07:285 (2,3) - Whistle + Finish Fixed
01:13:714 (1,2) - Slider overlap~ Fixed
01:34:714 (2,4) - Whistle + Finish Fixed
01:37:714 (1,2,3,4) - Just few grids away from each other just to not touch each other's border. Fixed
01:44:571 (1) - Finish, No Clap~ Fixed
01:46:285 (5) - ^ Fixed
01:47:999 (1,2) - Whistle + Finish Fixed
01:49:713 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:50:784 (1) - Remove clap. Fixed


[Path to Glory]
Let me guess: Remove claps, add finishes and fix ugly overlapping...*see your mod*... Yeah! i was right :D .
00:06:857 (1) - Finish Fixed
00:14:142 (1,2) - Whistle + Finish Fixed
00:41:571 (2,4) - ^ Fixed
00:46:285 (1,2) - Slider border overlap~ Fix this as well, ignoring a bit the distance snap wont hurt your map ;) Fixed
00:48:000 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
00:51:428 (1,2) - Replace Clap with FInish Fixed
00:54:857 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:56:571 (1,4) - No clap, put Finish :< Fixed
00:59:999 (1) - NC - I know it is already NC but only visible because it's after spinner. Fixed
01:07:285 (1,2) - Whistle + Finish Fixed
01:34:714 (2,2) - ^ Fixed
01:41:142 (1,2) - Slider border overlap~ Fix this as well Fixed


Besides the hitsound errors and the sliders the map is good made. Good luck! Thanks. And you discovered my two major weaknesses: the sliders and the hitsounds. I followed all your suggestions and i will take a look at your link of differents custom hitsounds.
Thanks for your mod :). It was very helpful. ^^
wonders
[Easy]
01:18:157 01:19:714 fix these two slides' shape
01:03:428 usually we don't use this shape in easy
[Normal]
00:12:857 clap
01:20:571 - 01:23:785 it is not recommoned to use slider's end stack with slider's head in normal
01:34:285 - 01:35:571 too hard in normal
[Part of Glory]
00:27:000 why miss the note?
01:16:071 unrankable
01:20:142 the same
01:39:428 check the blanket

small tips: try to use less blanket and symmetry next time
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