Xinely wrote:

ohai ~
from m4m in my queue

[General]
remove osb? There isn't any.....

[Easy]
00:15:439 (1) - 1 grid down to avoid spacing 1,06x? Fixed
00:25:725 (1) - remove NC for consistency This NC seems good to me.
00:27:439 (1,2,3,4) - it's better if you make square shape like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/808517 I prefer my shape. sry.
01:10:295 (2) - 280,124 Fixed
01:12:868 (3) - it's better if curved with whitle node (not red) Since everybody ask me to do it.... Fixed
01:41:153 (1) - don't make unconsistency spacing although to make branket Fixed
01:48:011 (1) - finish head Fixed
01:49:724 (1) - finish head too Fixed

[Normal]
00:22:296 (3,1) - swap NC? Fixed
00:24:868 (3) - ctrl+g for better flow? Fixed
00:32:582 (5) - NC for consistency Fixed
00:46:296 (1) - 105,139 for avoid spacing issue Fixed
00:49:725 (4) - NC consistency Fixed
01:00:653 (3,4,5) - actually i don't like saw them touched together Fixed
01:01:939 (5) - NC Fixed but one note earlier.
01:02:796 (6,7) - 188,244, bad to this not stacked in 01:00:653 (3) - , so better if its moved imo I prefer this way.

[Hard]
00:07:617 - add note? follow music Actually, i'm following the guitar,so no.
00:19:617 - ^ ^
00:21:438 (2) - 1 grid down? to avoid almost touched with previous But, they don't touch... at all.
00:22:295 (3) - it's better if you stacked with 00:20:581 (1) - 's head Fixed
00:26:581 (1,2) - spacing 0,5x same as previous? The slider are 1x speed.
00:31:295 (2) - 264,280. avoid almost touched with 00:30:652 (8) - Fixed but another way.
00:33:652 (6) - NC? Nope.
00:42:867 - until 00:51:224 - why no hitsound? it's make boring imo Tried to do some.
01:19:295 (1) - no need NC imo They are here for consistency
01:27:438 (1,2,3,4) - give whistle in all's head I prefer the pattenr Finish/Blank
01:39:438 (1) - remove NC for consistency I don't think this one needs to be removed.

[Glory]
00:07:617 - add note Same as before.
00:32:581 (5,1) - swap NC due stanza What?
00:35:152 (2) - you forgot finish in head Fixed
00:36:867 (2) - ^ Fixed Fixed
i'm suck mod insane =w= We are more free on these diff so there are less to mod XD

GL ~_~

• • Are you sure Aoi Shoudo is the correct artist? Shouldn't it be Masakazu Sugimori since he composed the music? Also, since Aoi Shoudo is a japanese name don't forget to translate it in kanji.
  • Kiai doesn't really fit with this song imo, remove it. (or just add some kiai fountains at 00:41:581/01:34:724, 00:42:438/01:35:581 and 00:42:867/01:36:010.

• • 00:17:582 (2) - Move this slider at x:204 y:152 for a better flow.
  • 00:20:582 (1) - You forgot to add a finish on start.
  • 01:10:295 (2) - Add a new combo here and remove the one on the next slider.
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:582.
  • 01:30:008 (4) - Check AIMod, this slider is unsnapped, fix it.
  • 01:48:652 (2) - Delete this circle, then start a slider here and end it at 01:49:295.

• • HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty 4 to keep a consistency with the other diffs.
  • 00:07:510 (3) - I don't understand what this slider is following, try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:10:938 (3) - ^
  • 00:20:582 (1) - Finish on start.
  • 00:30:008 (2) - Unsnapped slider, fix it.
  • 00:41:153 (1) - Reverse this slider (Ctrl + g) for a better flow.
  • 01:00:653 (3) - Same as 00:07:510.
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:582.
  • 01:18:868 (1) - Why a spinner here? Delete it and map this part like you did before. (00:25:724 ~ 00:27:438)
  • 01:25:724 (1) - ^

• • 00:20:581 (1) - Finish on start.
  • 00:26:152 (1) and 00:26:581 (1) - Remove these new combo, they're useless imo.
  • 00:54:867 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I don't like the rhythm you used here, try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:581.
  • 01:19:295 (1) and 01:19:724 (1) - Same as 00:26:152.
  • 01:48:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 00:54:867.

• • Stack leniency: 3
  • 00:07:724 (3) - Delete this slider and try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:15:652 (3) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a repeat.
  • 00:20:581 (1) - Finish on start.
  • 00:26:152 (1) and 00:26:581 (1) - Remove these new combo.
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:581.
  • 01:19:295 (1) and 01:19:724 (1) - Same as 00:26:152.

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

• • Are you sure Aoi Shoudo is the correct artist? Shouldn't it be Masakazu Sugimori since he composed the music? Also, since Aoi Shoudo is a japanese name don't forget to translate it in kanji. It's a remix which comes from a project called the GSAP ans i took the mp3 directly at them. So i think it's the name of the one who did this remix.
  • Kiai doesn't really fit with this song imo, remove it. (or just add some kiai fountains at 00:41:581/01:34:724, 00:42:438/01:35:581 and 00:42:867/01:36:010.

Well, i think this kiai is fine. Besides, it's the only thing still here after 33 mod and nobody said anything about it so i think it's cool.


Easy

• • 00:17:582 (2) - Move this slider at x:204 y:152 for a better flow. Fixed
  • 00:20:582 (1) - You forgot to add a finish on start. Fixed
  • 01:10:295 (2) - Add a new combo here and remove the one on the next slider. Fixed
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:582. Fixed
  • 01:30:008 (4) - Check AIMod, this slider is unsnapped, fix it. Fixed
  • 01:48:652 (2) - Delete this circle, then start a slider here and end it at 01:49:295. Fixed but i did another thing.

Normal

• • HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty 4 to keep a consistency with the other diffs. No, this diff is harder than a Normal
  • 00:07:510 (3) - I don't understand what this slider is following, try this: Fixed
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:10:938 (3) - ^ Fixed
  • 00:20:582 (1) - Finish on start. Fixed
  • 00:30:008 (2) - Unsnapped slider, fix it. Fixed
  • 00:41:153 (1) - Reverse this slider (Ctrl + g) for a better flow. Fixed
  • 01:00:653 (3) - Same as 00:07:510. Fixed
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:582. Fixed
  • 01:18:868 (1) - Why a spinner here? Delete it and map this part like you did before. (00:25:724 ~ 00:27:438) Fixed
  • 01:25:724 (1) - ^ Fixed

Hard

• • 00:20:581 (1) - Finish on start.Fixed
  • 00:26:152 (1) and 00:26:581 (1) - Remove these new combo, they're useless imo. I think they are good.
  • 00:54:867 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I don't like the rhythm you used here, try this: This time, i don't agree. Sorry but i prefer my rythm
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:581. Fixed
  • 01:19:295 (1) and 01:19:724 (1) - Same as 00:26:152. Same
  • 01:48:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 00:54:867.Same

Path of Glory

• • Stack leniency: 3 It would kill a stack
  • 00:07:724 (3) - Delete this slider and try this: Well, no
  • 00:15:652 (3) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a repeat. Fixed
  • 00:20:581 (1) - Finish on start. Fixed
  • 00:26:152 (1) and 00:26:581 (1) - Remove these new combo. Nope
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:581. Fixed
  • 01:19:295 (1) and 01:19:724 (1) - Same as 00:26:152.Nope

Ayu wrote:

M4M. Hard and Path Of Glory difficulty as requested.

Hard
00:21:438 (2) - I think this pattern could be more awesome, by letting it blanket around the bobble of (1). Do something like my example. Fixed

SPOILER

Note: The same happens 01:14:581 (2) - here. Fixed
00:27:117 (3) - This looked pretty confusing to me, atleast when using for example Hidden and Doubletime But, when you play it normally it's ok....
01:04:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The overlaps here look pretty messy, I suggest to just either increase the spacing here so it won't overlap anymore or use another pattern. Fixed
01:21:438 (3) - I guess you're missing a clap here. Fixed
01:43:510 (7) - Could be a nice blanket over the sliderend of (6) Fixed

Path Of Glory
00:11:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Just as in Hard, these overlaps look pretty messy. I'd increase the spacing here to prevent them. Fixed
Note: The same happens 00:32:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - here. Fixed
00:20:581 (1) - Blanket this around (2), then fix (2) accordingly. Fixed
00:47:795 (3) - Would fit better on the sliderend to keep a nice flow. The flow is still good this way
Note: The same happens 00:49:510 (3) - here.^
01:02:367 (6) - Sliders like these look pretty horrible, especially how it's used here as the middle point doesn't emphasize the music. Fixed
01:13:724 (1) - Could make a nicer blanket over (2) Fixed
01:27:438 (1,1) - I don't really suggest to use sliders like these unless they would emphasize the music, but it doesn't here. I want some slider a little bit original....

Good luck with your map.

CDFA wrote:

wtf every map I'm mod4modding is a phoenix wright map Wait... I'm not the only one mapping PW? Cool ^^

Insane:
00:07:081 (2) - Possibly rotate this more so the slider goes right into the next note? fixed
00:22:295 (3) - Maybe re-organize it like this so it flows a little bit better while still making pretty patterns? owo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/813373 Actually.... That's a good idea ^^
01:18:438 (5) - Make this slider fit into the pattern. Even if it's like in the same place as (3). Or maybe make a five-point shape? Sorry, i prefer like this.
01:20:581 (1) - CTRL + G? Well, the jump is a little bit exagerated so... i'll try to do something.

Hard:
01:20:581 (1) - This might just be a me thing, but slidertrains usually don't play or look nice I agree. But i have no idea how to change this. Sry
01:19:724 (1,2) - ^ ^

Normal:
00:21:439 (2) - Would it be possible to make this a kawaii pattern with (1)? I did my best.
00:57:331 (1) - Add finish on end of spiner? No, the finish is for the note right after.

Easy:
Tick Rate 1? The maximum combo is already small enough XD
01:32:582 (5) - Make this slider like you made the others, the curviness of this just makes it look not kawaii D: I don't now what you mean by "like the others" but i smoothened the curves and now it's 20% kawaiier ^^

Sorry for the really short mod D:. It's a pretty cool map :3. Sorry it took so long, my internet has been unstable.*cough* and you get silenced 42h *cough*

Jemmmmy wrote:

Normal
01:02:152 (3) -

Fixed

Hard
00:27:117 (3) - Nope, listen better.
01:20:260 (3) - ^ ^


Path Of Glory
00:13:724 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g? Fixed
00:44:581 (1,2,3,4) - - change shape I like this shape.
01:08:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - move to x:240 Fixed


really good mapset. good luck

Teara wrote:

Wow, I'm really impressed.

I already thought this was well mapped when I first modded it, but you went the extra mile and made it even better!

Good job!

Take this well deserved bubble.

rezoons wrote:

Teara wrote:

Wow, I'm really impressed.

I already thought this was well mapped when I first modded it, but you went the extra mile and made it even better!

Good job!

Take this well deserved bubble.

Well, i've changed Easy with a lesser SV for better blanket and Normal with a Higher SV for the same reason. I mapped a Hard like you suggested to me. And worked hard to find mod so i' really hoped it was good enough. XD

Anyway, thank you for checking my map despite my harrasment by PM and thank you for the bubble .

P.S. Should i give you kudos for checking my map? I don't know what to do in this case?

Teara wrote:

No kudosu in this case, since, in my eyes, the map is perfect and ready for rank. I didn't add anything constructive this time around.

Good luck with the rank!

Gabe wrote:

Ça n'as pas pris de temps, LOL.

rezoons wrote:

Gabe wrote:

Ça n'as pas pris de temps, LOL.

Désolé, je pensais pas que ça marcherait. XD

Gabe wrote:

C'est bon, t'inquiète! Je ne suis pas fâché. C'est quand même pas toi qui a décidé d'avoir une bulle ou non :3

rezoons wrote:

Gabe wrote:

C'est bon, t'inquiète! Je ne suis pas fâché. C'est quand même pas toi qui a décidé d'avoir une bulle ou non :3

Merci ^^. Bon je sais pas trop ce que je suis censé faire quand j'ai une map en bubble mais maintenant je peux me concentrer un peux plus sur mes autres maps en pending et ma modding queue.

Gabe wrote:

Tu demandes à un BAT de rank o:

rezoons wrote:

Gabe wrote:

Tu demandes à un BAT de rank o:

Gabe, tu veux bien la rank stp XD

Gabe wrote:

Je ne suis pas BAT

Teara wrote:

Bubble restored.

(He updated NC on Normal/Hard and didn't realize it would pop the bubble.)

NoHitter wrote:

Good mapset Thank you

[General]
Remove Gyakuten Saiban Appellate Project from the Source and add it to the Tags since it's the remix album where you got the song.
Go add Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney or Gyakuten Saiban to the Source instead. (Don't forget to remove the redundant tags i.e. words in the tags that are already in the source) I don't understand, the source is where the song come from so it's the album name? Anyway, i trust you and did what you say. Fixed.

[Easy]
- 00:14:153 (2) - The overlap with the slider doesn't look quite neat IMO. Fixed by rotating it 45°
- 00:51:439 (1,2,3) - Might as well make this into a perfect triangle? http://puu.sh/3n4nn.jpg Fixed
- 01:42:010 (2) - I don't recommend placing a slider underneath another slider especially on an Easy. It may be confusing. Fixed

[Normal]
- 00:24:868 (3) - Why not mirror 00:23:582 (1) instead for a more symmetrical combo?I don't think even more symmetry is needed here

Katty Pie wrote:

Map need more work~ I hope you can make this map much better :3 Good luck

Teara wrote:

I already thought this was well mapped when I first modded it, but you went the extra mile and made it even better!

Good job!

Demmon wrote:

Gratz !

-Umi- wrote:

GRATZ rezooons !!! :3 enfin ahah

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Congrats

Cobra wrote:

Good luck man

Konei wrote:

Hey, congratz on your first rank!

Kei wrote:

congrats on your 1st ranked. glad to see more phoenix wright stuff