hi
everything is a suggestion except for the offset.
[general]
BPM 160 <-Might need to be changed a little, I can't tell.
Offset 545 <-good Idea to put red timing sections at the start of the song, so when you change the offset, all the notes are changed. If not, when you change offsets, notes before the red timing won't be resnapped automatically.
Can you find a better quality background?
[easy]
00:15:140 - add note
00:21:140 - add 2 notes, 2nd one new combo
both repeat
00:36:515 - map this
00:48:890 - add 2 notes, repeats
01:18:515 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - half note sliders
01:33:515 - like previous kiai section
01:45:890 - add note, repeats. groups of 3 would work better here: http://puu.sh/Pe8
01:57:515 - add something, repeats: http://puu.sh/Pe5 maybe
[normal]
same as easy, unless you've already got something there.
[hard]
00:12:891 (2,3,4) - sliders to red tick?
00:50:953 - (5) make repeating slider starting here.
00:59:203 (6) - repeat on all 3 white ticks? or http://puu.sh/Pev
01:21:515 (1,2) - red tick before and longer
01:25:828 (4) - slider into (5)
01:44:015 - http://puu.sh/Pev
02:02:578 (7) - slider
[insane]
please go through and use grid 4 on this map or make the distance multiplier higher (preferred). There's symmetry there that you're just not getting. (and will lead to nazi mods)
as with normal/easy, if there's anything in hard I recommended you do and it isn't in insane, do it in insane too.
00:10:828 (1) - bad practice. sliders should have a clear beginning and ending. You may think this is clear, but it won't hurt to make the beginning and end a little bit further apart: http://puu.sh/Pfy
00:52:828 (1,2,3,4) - jumps please. 1.8+
00:59:390 (2,4) - sliders please
01:08:390 (6,7,8) - clean up sliders OR make a long repeating slider.
01:57:609 - add a note
02:06:703 (1,2,3) - I hate you for doing this. there's nothing wrong with it, but I hate notes after spinners.
If you like my suggestions to add/remove/change notes, chances are they repeat! Double check to see that you do it later in the map.
This is a very good song, very fun to play. Star~
everything is a suggestion except for the offset.
[general]
SPOILER
AAAAAA TIMING.bpm 160, offset 2016

bpm 160, offset 2050

bpm 160, offset 2050
BPM 160 <-Might need to be changed a little, I can't tell.
Offset 545 <-good Idea to put red timing sections at the start of the song, so when you change the offset, all the notes are changed. If not, when you change offsets, notes before the red timing won't be resnapped automatically.
Can you find a better quality background?
[easy]
00:15:140 - add note
00:21:140 - add 2 notes, 2nd one new combo
both repeat
00:36:515 - map this
00:48:890 - add 2 notes, repeats
01:18:515 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - half note sliders
01:33:515 - like previous kiai section
01:45:890 - add note, repeats. groups of 3 would work better here: http://puu.sh/Pe8
01:57:515 - add something, repeats: http://puu.sh/Pe5 maybe
[normal]
same as easy, unless you've already got something there.
[hard]
00:12:891 (2,3,4) - sliders to red tick?
00:50:953 - (5) make repeating slider starting here.
00:59:203 (6) - repeat on all 3 white ticks? or http://puu.sh/Pev
01:21:515 (1,2) - red tick before and longer
01:25:828 (4) - slider into (5)
01:44:015 - http://puu.sh/Pev
02:02:578 (7) - slider
[insane]
please go through and use grid 4 on this map or make the distance multiplier higher (preferred). There's symmetry there that you're just not getting. (and will lead to nazi mods)
as with normal/easy, if there's anything in hard I recommended you do and it isn't in insane, do it in insane too.
00:10:828 (1) - bad practice. sliders should have a clear beginning and ending. You may think this is clear, but it won't hurt to make the beginning and end a little bit further apart: http://puu.sh/Pfy
296,264,10828,6,0,B|368:240|368:176|368:88|256:88|144:88|144:176|144:248|216:264,1,455,0|400:50:203 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - jumps please. 1.2+ spacing
00:52:828 (1,2,3,4) - jumps please. 1.8+
00:59:390 (2,4) - sliders please
01:08:390 (6,7,8) - clean up sliders OR make a long repeating slider.
01:57:609 - add a note
02:06:703 (1,2,3) - I hate you for doing this. there's nothing wrong with it, but I hate notes after spinners.
If you like my suggestions to add/remove/change notes, chances are they repeat! Double check to see that you do it later in the map.
This is a very good song, very fun to play. Star~