ok as mod4mod request here.
all text below this are suggestion.General Offset seem to early . i'm not pro with timing but i feel it's realy early.
[easy]+1circle -1 drain OD APP coz your note cluster seems for beginner of osu players.
use grid lv 3 for better beats placing.
00:35:015 (2) - whistle
00:52:828 (5) - split this slider to 2 piece to follow a vocal fucha- fucha.
start same position length is 1 start at 00:52:828 (5) - and 00:53:578 (6) -
01:18:515 (1) - finish
01:21:515 (3) - remove clap add whistle
01:23:015 (4) - add note + whistle
01:24:515 (1) - remove whistle add finish
01:26:015 (2) - whistle
01:27:515 (3) - remove clap at tail
01:33:515 (1) - remove whistle add finish
01:37:828 (5) - same as 00:52:828 (5)
01:49:265 (6) - add note + whistle
01:49:828 (7) - same as 00:52:828 (5)
[normal]-1drain
00:12:515 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern are same you change it
sample 00:30:515 (1,2,3) - can be change to 1/1 return slider or just 1/1 slider then note or note then 1/1slider .
^ this also apply to the rest of the songs if you want your map more interesting.
00:52:828 (4) - all fucha fucha like easy diff
also about my hitsounds you can apply to other diff if you agreed i'll not mod again
01:23:015 (2) - clap at tail
01:37:828 (4) - fucha fucha
[hard]+1od +1app
00:15:328 (8) - addnote + whistle if you follow vocal
00:21:328 (8) - ^
00:27:328 (8) - ^
00:33:328 (8) - ^
00:56:390 (3) - add note
00:59:765 (6) - delete this note , add note here 00:59:203 (6) - make it 1/2 return slider end at 01:00:328 set this note low volume.
01:35:390 (3) - add note
01:41:390 (3) - ^
01:44:765 (6) - same as 00:59:765 (6
01:47:390 (3) - add note + whistle
01:53:390 (3) - ^
01:56:015 (5) - same as 00:59:765 (6)
01:57:515 (1) - finish
[insane]**Honestly i think your insane are too much easy imo if you want to improve this diff more harder follow this.
+1app +1 od
01:30:890 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - you can delete spinner and put 1/4 stream here but make volume quite at start and make it louder at later ( like a music )
01:32:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:37:828 (1,2,3,4) - make this note JUMP!
01:49:828 (1,2,3,4) - ^
***NOT BAD for first map*** Star
I can't mod taiko. (already told you)
I want mod4mod this.
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24332 Hashimoto Miyuki - L
You 'll be Pro soon .Good luck