Looking much better already~! :3
The offset still feels too early to me, but because I'm not good with timing myself, I'm not going to guess the right one.... >~<
[Normal]
I would make the hitcircles bigger by one tick~
00:45:515 - Spinner starting here and ending at 00:48:515 would fit here in my opinion very well~ But then you need to take the first three notes of the chorus off, choice is yours. :3
00:57:515 (6) - New combo
01:36:515 (6) - ^
01:42:515 (6) - ^
01:48:515 (7) - ^
01:54:515 (7) - ^
[Hard]
Same spinner as in normal would be cool here too, but your choice~
00:28:641 (4) - Nazi, but maybe two grids right?
[Insane]
00:04:828 (5) - Just one little idea I got, but I think it would look cool like this: http://puu.sh/J48 (Slider ending at the place where (2) was~) And if you do this, move 00:05:953 (6,7) - to place where (1) was to match the distance snap~
01:06:890 (1) - Maybe starting here use soft hitsounds and end them before the spinner~?
Oh, and sure I can help with storyboarding, but I'd prefer if I had the lyrics to storyboard ready.. Because right now I have quite little time, and to do some extra photoshopping may be difficult.. ;u;''
But anyways, now I can give this a star, good luck~ :3
This song makes me so happy~ *goes off singing future lab~~ with a chipmunk-helium-like voice*
The offset still feels too early to me, but because I'm not good with timing myself, I'm not going to guess the right one.... >~<
[Normal]
I would make the hitcircles bigger by one tick~
00:45:515 - Spinner starting here and ending at 00:48:515 would fit here in my opinion very well~ But then you need to take the first three notes of the chorus off, choice is yours. :3
00:57:515 (6) - New combo
01:36:515 (6) - ^
01:42:515 (6) - ^
01:48:515 (7) - ^
01:54:515 (7) - ^
[Hard]
Same spinner as in normal would be cool here too, but your choice~
00:28:641 (4) - Nazi, but maybe two grids right?
[Insane]
00:04:828 (5) - Just one little idea I got, but I think it would look cool like this: http://puu.sh/J48 (Slider ending at the place where (2) was~) And if you do this, move 00:05:953 (6,7) - to place where (1) was to match the distance snap~
01:06:890 (1) - Maybe starting here use soft hitsounds and end them before the spinner~?
Oh, and sure I can help with storyboarding, but I'd prefer if I had the lyrics to storyboard ready.. Because right now I have quite little time, and to do some extra photoshopping may be difficult.. ;u;''
But anyways, now I can give this a star, good luck~ :3
This song makes me so happy~ *goes off singing future lab~~ with a chipmunk-helium-like voice*