[General]Your BG name is too long, could you please rename it to something like BG.jpg or something?
Source should be
Hayate no Gotoku!! (notice the 2 exclamation marks? that's the difference between season 1 and 2)
What does Sanzenin Nagi mean in the tags?
I see a slidertick sound that could sound pretty good in the map but it's not being used, to use custom hitsounds in the timing section which you want to use them select "Custom Override" 1 for the ones normally put in your song folder and 2 for the ones that have 2 at the end, in this case it would be "Custom Override 2".
Set slider tick rate 2 on all difficulties.
[Hard]00:44:444 - This slow section comes too suddenly and unexpected, can you do something about that. Or make the change less big, like using 0.75x instead or something
01:53:646 - ^
02:26:683 (3,4) - Dont use random doubles all of a sudden.
02:28:708 (6,1) - Since you're already using doubles you could stack these too.
02:29:812 (4) - Random Single in middle of a Doubles section?
03:37:726 (1,2) - This jump is a bit too much for a Hard, and considering the diff itself plays mostly like a Hard except on this spot, renaming it to Insane wont work.
[Normal]46. Offset: 222,051ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) Repeated / Unused Timing section
00:29:812 (1,2) - What's this big gap for?
01:05:517 (1,2) - ^
[Easy]Finish the map until the end