well. this picture of Celty should better be used as comboburst, imo
there's no point in making her spin D:
sorry for not explaining in my first post
there's no point in making her spin D:
sorry for not explaining in my first post
Odaril wrote:
Sorry for the late mod, I've had a lot of problems lately.
Please remember that these are only suggestions. Feel free to ignore any of them.
General:
Your mp3 bitrate is 320kbps, which is unrankable. You have to scale it down to 256kbps at most. Scaled down to 256kbps
Moreover, storyboard pictures must be below 800x600px. This concerns: Resized all. ;-;
- Oversharpened.png
- Blured.png
- Blackandwhite.png
- WhiteBEAT.png (edit: forgot .png)
I'd recommend you to add a approachcircle.png Addedapproach circle[attachment=0:17f09]approachcircle.png[/attachment:17f09]
Storyboard:
00:16:514 - For a reason I don't understand, the Storyboard load goes above 10 right before this point. It might go down when you scale the pictures down, though. It still happens. Oh well...
Normal (Blow):
This feels more like a Easy to me. If you set the circle size to 1 (that is, the biggest) it will be a decent Easy. Then it's an easy.
01:14:669 (1) - I think it would be better moved 18 grids lvl 3 down - it would be symmetrical to (3) and wouldn't hidden by the spinner. Fixed.
Hard (Out):
This whole diff feels bland at times in my humble opinion: too many times there are gaps between the notes. The low spacing makes it slow, too, which reinforces the bland feeling. Moreover, the beginning is the same pattern that repeats 6 times: here again, it reinforces the bland feeling. You should try to fill in the blanks between notes, based on the music.
00:16:514 (1) - This crescendo is great <3
00:26:541 - This is an example of a gap that should have had notes in it. Added notes.
00:31:889 - ^ No music, no notes.
00:53:279 - here again - add a spinner here that ends at 00:53:947 - ? Or a slider Added
01:25:365 - same ? a spinner that starts here and ends at 01:26:033 - ? Or a slider Added
Insane (Louder):
The blandness strikes again )= though a lot less than on Hard
00:16:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - This stream and the crescendo with it are really good <3
00:26:541 - add circles somehow here ? fixed
00:29:549 (1) - This note is too high and touches the HP bar, it looks bad to mefixed
00:34:730 (4) - maybe... make a slider that starts here and leads to the next note ? Won't fit.
00:40:077 (4) - ^ Won't fit.
01:04:977 (1) - the low slider speed and the low distance snapping starting here make this whole part confusingly overlapping, try to at least space the notes a bit more ? no.
This map is not bad ! it can be made pretty good relatively easily. Keep working on it ! Fix the unrankable stuff and I will give it a star (not the icon).
Thanks for the mod!noneed wrote:
Hi!
Blow:
✓ CS one more to large?
✓ 01:14:669 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j would look better imo
Out:
✓ 00:11:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ctrl+j
✓ 00:37:069 (6) - dat jump ;_;
✓ 01:15:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j
Louder:
X 00:37:905 (1) - delete that and make a spinner from 00:37:236 to 00:37:905
✓ 01:15:672 - ctrl+h and ctr+j
yeah that's it
Starrr!!!
Disoy wrote:
[Blow]
X 00:33:560 (1) - remove this circle?
X 00:38:908 (1) - ^
X 00:51:274 (1) - these slider change spinner?
X 01:23:359 (1) - ^
[Out]
✔ CS+1
✔ 00:27:042 (1) - add a hitclap?
✔ 00:27:209 (2) - add a hitfinish?
X 00:29:549 (1) - these slider is long..
X 00:35:231 (5) - add a note?
X 00:38:907 (4) - remove this circle?
X 00:49:603 (7) - add a note?
✔ 01:14:001 (1) - add a new combo?
[Louder]
X 00:19:857 (11) - add a note and spinner move to 00:20:024?
✔ 00:26:708 (3) - add a note?
X 00:33:560 (3) - remove this circle?
X 00:33:894 (4) - add a note?
X 00:38:908 (4) - remove this circle?
wmfchris wrote:
[general]
mp3@320kbps, compress it to 128~192
[Louder]
✔ 0:31:220 (6,7) (6) left 1 grid, (7) left 2 grid?
✔ 1:02:303 (3,4,5) left 1 grid
✔ 1:34:723 (5) right 1 grid
nice diff~
[Out]
✔ 0:34:228 (1,2,3,4) this looks weird, (4) right down 1 grid?
removed bookmarks 0:35:398 *this is not important, but why there's so many bookmark 0.0
✔ 0:48:266 (1~6) uneven spacing, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/39392 ?
✔ 1:20:351 (1~6) ^
✔ 1:30:879 (1~6) ^
[Blow]
no problem
star~
ErufenRito wrote:
Sighs, i thought i posted my mod? I guess i never did, Anyways, here's a quick remod
First thoughts: The combo numbers could be bigger, they are almost invisible in the yellow combo colour. But this is just me.
Louder:
I used a slider in this point. 01:11:661 - Consider adding a circle here
Out:
✔ 00:43:586 (1,2,3) - Im really against positioning them at the center. The combo hits of 00:42:250 (3,4) and the spinner's hits are still visible, making them hard to see, besides... They are yellow, and the combo numbers are so small, and the spacing is so small, making them even harder to see. So ill suggest to move them away from the center
x 01:11:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Hard to see
Anyways, as a general recommendation for your maps in the future, is to not use such small spacing, i personally thinks that it makes it harder cause its harder to see, and it doesn't look so good anyways.
Blow:
Found nothing wrong
HOLY DOO-DOO BISCUIT'S THAT'S HOT.galvenize wrote:
Here it is =).
Awesome song btw.
Download: DJ Sharpnel - Drrrrrrr! (LesTrucsRose) [galvenize's Another].osuLeorda wrote:
galvenize's Another
00:24:201 (5,1) - These jumps are surprising. Not really.
00:44:923 (7,8) - ^
00:46:427 (4) - New combo, since it's jumps, mkay.
00:57:457 (4,5) - These jumps are surprising[/color] Not really.
01:04:141 (2) - This 0,5x BPM slider are sudden!. Fits the song imo.
01:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The pattern are feels random for me, maybe? :/
01:11:327 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These pattern are messy Got to agree with you on this one, remapped.
Durarara remix are awesome <3
Leorda wrote:
Yo
General
✔1) Your MP3 Bit Rate is 320kbps, and it's unrankable. Please re-encode it to 128kbps or 192kbps
✔ 2) Remove "Techno" and "anime", since that words it's in the Genre when BAT ranked this map
Too much work.3) BPM : 179,50?
Roar out louder.4) The hitsound volume is too loud, please reduce it, otherwise, player's ear will be hurt
Easy00:27:209 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try something neat pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42485
✔ 01:15:338 (1,2,3) - Move 1 grid up to make diamond pattern?
Hard00:00:472 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Ugh, you copy paste this pattern too much >.<
✔ 00:22:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:08:988 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?01:12:998 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These pattern are strange for me, maybe?
✔ 01:14:001 (1) - Remove new combo?
Insane
✔ 00:22:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 00:48:767 (1) - ^
✔ 00:53:279 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music
✔ 00:59:462 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:03:974 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/801:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You should remap this, because when I test this, it's kinda overlapping. Please make it spread it out OR set the BPM Multiplier to 0.75x
✔ 01:20:853 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:25:365 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music
✔ 01:31:548 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:36:060 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music
Durarara remix are awesome <3
thanksMustaash wrote:
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG *W*
sorry for the 3 weeks late
[General]1. Offset: 470ms
[galvenize's]
✔ 00:00:472 - Down the volume 3 ticks
✔ 00:10:498 (8) - Whistle? *w*
✔ 00:10:832 - Same as 00:00:472
✔ 00:10:832 (9) - At the finish of slider, finish? *w*
✔ 00:25:037 (1) - Remove new combo
✔ 00:28:713 (1) - ^
✔ 00:38:573 (1) - ^
✔ 00:58:794 (1) - ^
✔ 01:26:367 (x) - Add a note
✔ 01:26:451 (x) - ^
✔ 01:26:534 (1) - Remove New Combo
Fine , Good Diff
[Insane]Why 1/8 ; That unrankable.What 'chu talkin' 'bout, Willis?
✔ 01:08:152 (1) - Remove New Combo01:16:842 (7) - Made this slider like : http://puu.sh/AQS
✔ 01:25:365 (3) - make longer 1 1/8 tick.
✔ 01:36:060 (3) - ^
Good Work
[Hard]It isn't like a Hard, rename to [Normal+]?
or make harder the start of the song, because the kiai is a lot hardest compaired to the start.
Already , Nice diff.
[Easy]
Sorry i'm really bad to modding Easys xD ( because i'm bad on easy mapping )00:41:582 (1) - Remove new combo
Well
+STAR *0*
Antu Villegas wrote:
Hi
General:
The HQ audio hasn't the same offset than the original. O: I'll fix this.
I liked the skin
Easy:
✔ 01:14:669 (1): Remove New combo. ✔
Hard:
✔ 00:58:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Correct the spacing, it can be confusing and it isn't too much work to fix it
✔ 01:20:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6): ^
Selee wrote:
[General]Fixed. it's a mono track now.
- Source shouldn't be the album title...(viewtopic.php?f=6&t=24765)
So, Source: DuRaRaRa!! But the dong itsn't from Durarara, 'tis a remix. Oh well...
Tags: drrr! remix Cyclick(you missed a k) C78 (Release during C78?...) The album is called Cyclic. And I don't think the comiket matters.
Though the map needs countdown, a 2s is enough imo.
Adjust normal-hitclap if you could...The sound comes from right sound channel is much weaker than left.
[Easy][Hard]
- ✔ 00:32:557 (1,1,1,1) - huh, I prefer using only one combo here, also you'd better have a new combo at 00:34:228 (2)
✔ 00:37:905 (1,1,1,1,2) - ^ also 00:40:913 (3) - new combo instead of 00:41:582 (1)? o.o
✔ 00:57:289 (1) - Remove new combo
✔ 00:58:626 (3) - New combo here instead of 00:59:963 (1)
✔ 01:18:679 (1,2,3) - ^
✔ 01:29:374 (1,2,3) - ^
✔ AR+1~2 to reduce stacking issues like 01:11:996 (9,10,1) ... Also higher AR would make stream looks nicer.[Insane]
00:47:096 (6) - Finish end instead of slience?
✔ 01:11:996 (9,10,1) - kinda hard to read, change the ending position?[galvenize's Another]
- 00:19:857 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
✔ 01:00:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - No hitsounds? (Copy from second kiai?)
✔ 01:11:661 (T) - add a note here? (Just follow vocal here...? I don't know why you left a blank)Nice~
- ✔ 00:30:217 (1) - Remove new combo?
lol, SB is pretty nice!~Take my star~
done. will update in the next updategalvenize wrote:
Oh just a detail, would you please remove the note (2) at 01:26:451 in my diff?
Doesn't sounds good with it.
Thank you!
The tag is now Durarara!!,Selee wrote:
So, Source: DuRaRaRa!! But the dong itsn't from Durarara, 'tis a remix. Oh well...
Example:Touhou
http://j-corehaven.blogspot.com/2010/10 ... alert.html
C78 and Cyclick
Lol, you had the same reaction as I did.CracK wrote:
I couldn't resist making a guest diff for this
no. looks the same.ziin wrote:
Hi, good map, star for sharpnel.
Can you us this instead for your spinner? I hate non-symmetrical spinners.
http://puu.sh/LuN
wtf i have no [normal]ziin wrote:
[normal]
00:46:260 (1,2,3,4,5) - just a suggestion to make it like the previous section with whistles on the beat and not off the beat.
Added, changes I made:CracK wrote:
I couldn't resist making a guest diff for this
Tell me if you like it! I think it came out quite good =)
http://puu.sh/LXcLesTrucsRose wrote:
no. looks the same.
sorry, hard.LesTrucsRose wrote:
wtf i have no [normal]
in b4 "We didn't mod this map because LTR _____"galvenize wrote:
Where are the MATs :<
thanksShiirn wrote:
General
I really liked what you did, except for the fact that every difficulty pretty much only had a few chunks of it actually mapped, the rest just copy+pasted in. Even if the background beat is identical, you could at least put some variation in there. This doesn't apply to cracked or galvenize's difficulty.
Easy
Nothing.
HardAt least change the copy+pasted parts by flipping them or rotating them.
Also, the entire thing was copy+pasted...
Insane
✔ 00:53:279 (3) - change the volume on this.
✔ 01:03:974 (3) - ^
✔ 01:36:060 (3) - ^
CracKed
They barely made it. I made them a little bit longer just now. Deal with it. Even if auto can get 2000s on spinners like the ranking requirements say, it's still an extremely dick move. Please consider changing it.
k. i'll ask you on irc or whatever.CracK wrote:
Why do you make changes in my diff, without asking me >_<
2Shiirn I am not very fond of spinners also, and I am very bad at completing spinners ~_~. But these ones I can easily 300.
Also they perfectly fit in my opinion and I can't think of any other better way to map these parts.
Anyway, here is my updated version.
I decreased AR by 1 and made one jump a bit easier.
galvenize wrote:
Where are the MATs :<
^that may be a reason.footix31 wrote:
Wait why are you giving kudo to all the post? D:
try to edit the post instead of making more postsShiirn wrote:
^it didn't add my star for some reason.
Why was my Kudosu denied? ;OLesTrucsRose wrote:
Antu Villegas wrote:
Hi
General:
The HQ audio hasn't the same offset than the original. O: I'll fix this.
I liked the skin
Easy:
✔ 01:14:669 (1): Remove New combo. ✔
Hard:
✔ 00:58:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Correct the spacing, it can be confusing and it isn't too much work to fix it
✔ 01:20:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6): ^
Kudosu Guidelines
Did the post help you in any way to improve your map?
Did the modder post things that AIMod cannot pick up?
Did the post show that the modder has knowledge of modding?
Did the modder post things that generally make sense to you and seem not too terribly picky? If their post did seem picky, are you sure that the things pointed out can improve your mapset anyways?
Even if you don't follow the modder's advice, did you not follow it because of your personal choice only, and not because the modding seemed pointless to you?
Did you not already give the modder kudosu for a mod post on the same map recently?
If you can answer yes to all of these questions, feel free to give the modder their well-earned kudosu!
arien666 wrote:
[Easy]
:3
:3
[Hard]
:3
:3
[Insane]
would make it a jumpstream. o: 01:01:969 (1,2,3,4) - [Nazi] Consider about 2-3 spacing :3?
✔ 01:09:155 - [Suggestion] Delete this break?
[CracKed]
00:11:000 (5,1) - Wonder about this holding change trick but orz
00:32:390 (5,1) - ^
[galvenize's Another]
So Expert orz
So Insane map orz
Anyway good luck ;_;
ps. I think it's star-symbol-worth but need 1 more MAT checking as I saw since there're too many INSANE patterns ;_;
edit.
'Post is exempt of kudosu.'
I wonder if this is possible on Pending forum, NOT Ranked/Approved forum orz
I kudosu'd many posts in this thread and abalee denied them.
many AKA almost all of them.LesTrucsRose wrote:
I kudosu'd many posts in this thread and abalee denied them.
Download: DJ Sharpnel - Drrrrrrr! (LesTrucsRose) [galvenize's Another].osuColin Hou wrote:
[galvenize's Another]:
- 00:00:472 (T) - don't set more than 1 section at the same point. ask the creator to set the offset -864.
- AR 9 is perferred Gladly.
- 00:21:361 (5,6,7) - HP touch fixed
- 01:15:672 (T) - 1 note here. Fixed
While I agree that it's bad form to call the guidelines only guidelines, cracked and another are clearly very difficult. Insane on the other hand is quite easy by comparison, enough to make me say it's a different difficulty or hard. I actually thought the current hard was a normal when I played it.peppy wrote:
[*]A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc.
thanksColin Hou wrote:
[General]:
✔[Insane]:
- make the 2nd KIAI in all diff start at 01:15:338.
- you'll meet problem while ranking this. 3 insane is unrankable now. remove 1 Insane and try to map a Normal for this.
✔- remove 'Techno' from the tags, it'll be the genre when this get ranked
There's no flashing colours in this map.- enable the epliepsy warning.
✔[Easy]:
- 01:02:136 (2,3,4) - spacing
✔star~
- disable audio lean-in in this diff
LesTrucsRose wrote:
thanksColin Hou wrote:
[General]:[Insane]:
- ✔ make the 2nd KIAI in all diff start at 01:15:338.
- Remapping my insane to make it Hard+ you'll meet problem while ranking this. 3 insane is unrankable now. remove 1 Insane and try to map a Normal for this.
- ✔ remove 'Techno' from the tags, it'll be the genre when this get ranked
- See post below this. enable the epliepsy warning.
- ✔
[Easy]:
- 01:02:136 (2,3,4) - spacing
- ✔
star~
- disable audio lean-in in this diff
updated.CracK wrote:
Here is a fixed version:
[attachment=0:78cd5]DJ Sharpnel - Drrrrrrr! (LesTrucsRose) [CracKed].osu[/attachment:78cd5]
updated, butgalvenize wrote:
Colin Hou wrote:
[galvenize's Another]:
- 00:00:472 (T) - don't set more than 1 section at the same point. ask the creator to set the offset -864.
- AR 9 is perferred Gladly.
- 00:21:361 (5,6,7) - HP touch fixed
- 01:15:672 (T) - 1 note here. Fixed
k.Teta wrote:
You should enable it anyway because of the white flashes at the sides.
y u always in ma bzns?Teta wrote:
oh you XD
Edit: Btw, remove durarara from tags since its the source.
it's called modding. You don't have to respond to nazi stuff.LesTrucsRose wrote:
y u always in ma bzns?
The British Health and Safety Executive recommend that a net flash rate for a bank of strobe lights does not exceed 5 flashes per second, at which only 5% of photosensitive epileptics are at risk. It also recommends that no strobing effect continue for more than 30 seconds, due to the potential for discomfort and disorientation.Anyone in the 5% shouldn't be playing osu, and should be extremely careful in what they play if they do. This is under 5 Hz and well under 30 second duration.
The "remove durarara from tags" etc isn't nazi, it's needed.ziin wrote:
it's called modding. You don't have to respond to nazi stuff.
what happens if he doesn't?Teta wrote:
The "remove durarara from tags" etc isn't nazi, it's needed.
Are you sure you're not using the old osb? Because I fixed this and uploaded new version a page beforeziin wrote:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59093
looks kinda bad IMO. The non-blurred background shows through at multiple times.
^CracK wrote:
Are you sure you're not using the old osb? Because I fixed this and uploaded new version a page beforeziin wrote:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59093
looks kinda bad IMO. The non-blurred background shows through at multiple times.
I thought I updated, apparently not. The only thing relevant in my mod now is the blackandwhite.png.CracK wrote:
Are you sure you're not using the old osb? Because I fixed this and uploaded new version a page beforeziin wrote:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59093
looks kinda bad IMO. The non-blurred background shows through at multiple times.
Because you liked this map before it was mainstream.Faust wrote:
Why haven't I starred this yet.