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La Cataline
well. this picture of Celty should better be used as comboburst, imo

there's no point in making her spin D:
sorry for not explaining in my first post
Verdisphena
The picture in the spinner sucks.
Take:


And...
Nice song and sb
lovhin456
Maybe use this ??
http://www.mediafire.com/?l975jm3ts85rat8
There are two spinner circles for you to choose also use your spinner BG for this
Verdisphena
Why the kodosu? ._.
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses
Because you put in your effort.
Shiro
Sorry for the late mod, I've had a lot of problems lately.

Please remember that these are only suggestions. Feel free to ignore any of them.

General:
Your mp3 bitrate is 320kbps, which is unrankable. You have to scale it down to 256kbps at most.
Moreover, storyboard pictures must be below 800x600px. This concerns:
- Oversharpened.png
- Blured.png
- Blackandwhite.png
- WhiteBEAT.png
(edit: forgot .png)
I'd recommend you to add a approachcircle.png

Storyboard:
00:16:514 - For a reason I don't understand, the Storyboard load goes above 10 right before this point. It might go down when you scale the pictures down, though.

Normal (Blow):
This feels more like a Easy to me. If you set the circle size to 1 (that is, the biggest) it will be a decent Easy.
01:14:669 (1) - I think it would be better moved 18 grids lvl 3 down - it would be symmetrical to (3) and wouldn't hidden by the spinner.

Hard (Out):
This whole diff feels bland at times in my humble opinion: too many times there are gaps between the notes. The low spacing makes it slow, too, which reinforces the bland feeling. Moreover, the beginning is the same pattern that repeats 6 times: here again, it reinforces the bland feeling. You should try to fill in the blanks between notes, based on the music.
00:16:514 (1) - This crescendo is great <3
00:26:541 - This is an example of a gap that should have had notes in it.
00:31:889 - ^
00:53:279 - here again - add a spinner here that ends at 00:53:947 - ? Or a slider
01:25:365 - same ? a spinner that starts here and ends at 01:26:033 - ? Or a slider

Insane (Louder):
The blandness strikes again )= though a lot less than on Hard
00:16:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - This stream and the crescendo with it are really good <3
00:26:541 - add circles somehow here ?
00:29:549 (1) - This note is too high and touches the HP bar, it looks bad to me
00:34:730 (4) - maybe... make a slider that starts here and leads to the next note ?
00:40:077 (4) - ^
01:04:977 (1) - the low slider speed and the low distance snapping starting here make this whole part confusingly overlapping, try to at least space the notes a bit more ?

This map is not bad ! it can be made pretty good relatively easily. Keep working on it ! Fix the unrankable stuff and I will give it a star (not the icon).
Dragvon
Sorry for being late as hell, i couldn't mod these weeks xD but hey! Here i am o/
Queue response: Normal Mod

Info
Suggstions! You can ignore these.
Problems! You should take a look at these.
Errors! Please fix those.

<General & Timingl>
These timing sections have the same volume and BPM Multiplier (1x) in Blow and Out. Remove one of them?

<Blow>
• Nothing bothered me besides sliders like 00:51:274 (1). I would break them in 2 or something like that but you don't need to worry about it xD it's fine as is.

<Out>
00:23:701 (1) - Remove new combo? If 00:24:369 (1) - weren't so close i wouldn't point it out but that may confuse some players.
00:38:239 (2,4) - Maybe whistles here?

<Loud>
00:38:239 (2,4) - Refer to Out
00:53:279 (1) - Remove this combo? #1
00:53:948 (2) - A Finish sound's nice here #2
From 00:54:282 (1) - to 00:57:791 (6) - Did you forgot adding hitsounds here? It's the only time that this pattern have no sounds. If you did on purpose, sorry xD!
01:00:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:03:974 (1,1) - ^ Check #1 & #2 ^
01:11:661 (x) -I'm not sure about this, but i think a note would fit here.
01:25:365 (1,2) - Here comes that same section again (#1 & #2).
01:36:060 (1,2) - ^ And here too.

Final comment: It's a balanced mapset, some patterns could be flipped or moved but that's fine with me. Oh, and i loved your sb :O
Star!
sveta-insane
!
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

Odaril wrote:

Sorry for the late mod, I've had a lot of problems lately.

Please remember that these are only suggestions. Feel free to ignore any of them.

General:
Your mp3 bitrate is 320kbps, which is unrankable. You have to scale it down to 256kbps at most. Scaled down to 256kbps
Moreover, storyboard pictures must be below 800x600px. This concerns: Resized all. ;-;
- Oversharpened.png
- Blured.png
- Blackandwhite.png
- WhiteBEAT.png
(edit: forgot .png)
I'd recommend you to add a approachcircle.png Added
approach circle
[attachment=0:17f09]approachcircle.png[/attachment:17f09]

Storyboard:
00:16:514 - For a reason I don't understand, the Storyboard load goes above 10 right before this point. It might go down when you scale the pictures down, though. It still happens. Oh well...

Normal (Blow):
This feels more like a Easy to me. If you set the circle size to 1 (that is, the biggest) it will be a decent Easy. Then it's an easy.
01:14:669 (1) - I think it would be better moved 18 grids lvl 3 down - it would be symmetrical to (3) and wouldn't hidden by the spinner. Fixed.

Hard (Out):
This whole diff feels bland at times in my humble opinion: too many times there are gaps between the notes. The low spacing makes it slow, too, which reinforces the bland feeling. Moreover, the beginning is the same pattern that repeats 6 times: here again, it reinforces the bland feeling. You should try to fill in the blanks between notes, based on the music.
00:16:514 (1) - This crescendo is great <3
00:26:541 - This is an example of a gap that should have had notes in it. Added notes.
00:31:889 - ^ No music, no notes.
00:53:279 - here again - add a spinner here that ends at 00:53:947 - ? Or a slider Added
01:25:365 - same ? a spinner that starts here and ends at 01:26:033 - ? Or a slider Added

Insane (Louder):
The blandness strikes again )= though a lot less than on Hard
00:16:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - This stream and the crescendo with it are really good <3
00:26:541 - add circles somehow here ? fixed
00:29:549 (1) - This note is too high and touches the HP bar, it looks bad to mefixed
00:34:730 (4) - maybe... make a slider that starts here and leads to the next note ? Won't fit.
00:40:077 (4) - ^ Won't fit.
01:04:977 (1) - the low slider speed and the low distance snapping starting here make this whole part confusingly overlapping, try to at least space the notes a bit more ? no.

This map is not bad ! it can be made pretty good relatively easily. Keep working on it ! Fix the unrankable stuff and I will give it a star (not the icon).
noneed
Hi!


Blow:
CS one more to large?
01:14:669 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j would look better imo

Out:
00:11:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ctrl+j
00:37:069 (6) - dat jump ;_;
01:15:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j

Louder:
00:37:905 (1) - delete that and make a spinner from 00:37:236 to 00:37:905
01:15:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2) -
ctrl+h and ctr+j

yeah that's it
Starrr!!!
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

noneed wrote:

Hi!


Blow:
CS one more to large?
01:14:669 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j would look better imo

Out:
00:11:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ctrl+j
00:37:069 (6) - dat jump ;_;
01:15:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j

Louder:
X 00:37:905 (1) - delete that and make a spinner from 00:37:236 to 00:37:905
01:15:672 - ctrl+h and ctr+j

yeah that's it
Starrr!!!
Thanks for the mod!
Disoy
[Blow]
00:33:560 (1) - remove this circle?
00:38:908 (1) - ^
00:51:274 (1) - these slider change spinner?
01:23:359 (1) - ^

[Out]
CS+1
00:27:042 (1) - add a hitclap?
00:27:209 (2) - add a hitfinish?
00:29:549 (1) - these slider is long..
00:35:231 (5) - add a note?
00:38:907 (4) - remove this circle?
00:49:603 (7) - add a note?
01:14:001 (1) - add a new combo?

[Louder]
00:19:857 (11) - add a note and spinner move to 00:20:024?
00:26:708 (3) - add a note?
00:33:560 (3) - remove this circle?
00:33:894 (4) - add a note?
00:38:908 (4) - remove this circle?
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

Disoy wrote:

[Blow]
X 00:33:560 (1) - remove this circle?
X 00:38:908 (1) - ^
X 00:51:274 (1) - these slider change spinner?
X 01:23:359 (1) - ^

[Out]
CS+1
00:27:042 (1) - add a hitclap?
00:27:209 (2) - add a hitfinish?
X 00:29:549 (1) - these slider is long..
X 00:35:231 (5) - add a note?
X 00:38:907 (4) - remove this circle?
X 00:49:603 (7) - add a note?
01:14:001 (1) - add a new combo?

[Louder]
X 00:19:857 (11) - add a note and spinner move to 00:20:024?
00:26:708 (3) - add a note?
X 00:33:560 (3) - remove this circle?
X 00:33:894 (4) - add a note?
X 00:38:908 (4) - remove this circle?
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses
One-day only reopening vacation/weekend fuk year.
Kert
Hi! Great song out there! =)

Can I make a guest diff? *_*
wmfchris
[general]
mp3@320kbps, compress it to 128~192

[Louder]
0:31:220 (6,7) (6) left 1 grid, (7) left 2 grid?
1:02:303 (3,4,5) left 1 grid
1:34:723 (5) right 1 grid
nice diff~

[Out]
0:34:228 (1,2,3,4) this looks weird, (4) right down 1 grid?
0:35:398 *this is not important, but why there's so many bookmark 0.0
0:48:266 (1~6) uneven spacing, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/39392 ?
1:20:351 (1~6) ^
1:30:879 (1~6) ^

[Blow]
no problem

star~
Luvdic
Sighs, i thought i posted my mod? I guess i never did, Anyways, here's a quick remod :(

First thoughts: The combo numbers could be bigger, they are almost invisible in the yellow combo colour. But this is just me.

Louder:

01:11:661 - Consider adding a circle here

Out:

00:43:586 (1,2,3) - Im really against positioning them at the center. The combo hits of 00:42:250 (3,4) and the spinner's hits are still visible, making them hard to see, besides... They are yellow, and the combo numbers are so small, and the spacing is so small, making them even harder to see. So ill suggest to move them away from the center
01:11:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Hard to see :(
Anyways, as a general recommendation for your maps in the future, is to not use such small spacing, i personally thinks that it makes it harder cause its harder to see, and it doesn't look so good anyways.

Blow:

Found nothing wrong

Also, i could see that in your 3 difficulties you are using some random new combos, you should just avoid them
blacksymbian
Star! I love Drrrrrr! :lol:
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
mp3@320kbps, compress it to 128~192

[Louder]
0:31:220 (6,7) (6) left 1 grid, (7) left 2 grid?
1:02:303 (3,4,5) left 1 grid
1:34:723 (5) right 1 grid
nice diff~

[Out]
0:34:228 (1,2,3,4) this looks weird, (4) right down 1 grid?
removed bookmarks 0:35:398 *this is not important, but why there's so many bookmark 0.0
0:48:266 (1~6) uneven spacing, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/39392 ?
1:20:351 (1~6) ^
1:30:879 (1~6) ^

[Blow]
no problem

star~
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

ErufenRito wrote:

Sighs, i thought i posted my mod? I guess i never did, Anyways, here's a quick remod :(

First thoughts: The combo numbers could be bigger, they are almost invisible in the yellow combo colour. But this is just me.

Louder:

I used a slider in this point. 01:11:661 - Consider adding a circle here

Out:

00:43:586 (1,2,3) - Im really against positioning them at the center. The combo hits of 00:42:250 (3,4) and the spinner's hits are still visible, making them hard to see, besides... They are yellow, and the combo numbers are so small, and the spacing is so small, making them even harder to see. So ill suggest to move them away from the center
x 01:11:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Hard to see :(
Anyways, as a general recommendation for your maps in the future, is to not use such small spacing, i personally thinks that it makes it harder cause its harder to see, and it doesn't look so good anyways.

Blow:

Found nothing wrong
frost-b-spec
thx request

[Out]
0.33.560(4) - 1grid down?

[Louder]
1.07.985(9) - 1grid left

+starrrrrr
wmfchris
check you star list first, I've modded your map before <_<
galvenize
theMikeAG
This is outstanding... I don't think I've ever seen such an awesome beatmap in my life. It's stylish, fun to play, and really creative. The only thing I can think of that would need changing is the difficulty names. You've got Blow, Out, and Louder as difficulties, when the lyrics of the song say Blow, Up, Louder. You might want to fix that small inconsistency, but other than that, I can't see anything wrong with this.

Outstanding. Starred.
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

galvenize wrote:

Here it is =).

Awesome song btw.
HOLY DOO-DOO BISCUIT'S THAT'S HOT.
Dotsu
~STAR~ ;)
Leorda
Yo

General
1) Your MP3 Bit Rate is 320kbps, and it's unrankable. Please re-encode it to 128kbps or 192kbps
2) Remove "Techno" and "anime", since that words it's in the Genre when BAT ranked this map
3) BPM : 179,50?
4) The hitsound volume is too loud, please reduce it, otherwise, player's ear will be hurt

Easy
00:27:209 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try something neat pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42485
01:15:338 (1,2,3) - Move 1 grid up to make diamond pattern?

Hard
00:00:472 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Ugh, you copy paste this pattern too much >.<
00:22:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:08:988 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
01:12:998 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These pattern are strange for me, maybe?
01:14:001 (1) - Remove new combo?

Insane

00:22:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:48:767 (1) - ^
00:53:279 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music
00:59:462 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:03:974 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8
01:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You should remap this, because when I test this, it's kinda overlapping. Please make it spread it out OR set the BPM Multiplier to 0.75x
01:20:853 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:25:365 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music
01:31:548 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:36:060 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music

galvenize's Another
00:24:201 (5,1) - These jumps are surprising
00:44:923 (7,8) - ^

00:46:427 (4) - New combo, since it's jumps
00:57:457 (4,5) - These jumps are surprising

01:04:141 (2) - This 0,5x BPM slider are sudden!
01:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The pattern are feels random for me, maybe?
01:11:327 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These pattern are messy

Durarara remix are awesome <3
galvenize

Leorda wrote:

galvenize's Another
00:24:201 (5,1) - These jumps are surprising. Not really.
00:44:923 (7,8) - ^
00:46:427 (4) - New combo, since it's jumps, mkay.
00:57:457 (4,5) - These jumps are surprising[/color] Not really.
01:04:141 (2) - This 0,5x BPM slider are sudden!. Fits the song imo.
01:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The pattern are feels random for me, maybe? :/
01:11:327 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These pattern are messy Got to agree with you on this one, remapped.

Durarara remix are awesome <3
Download: DJ Sharpnel - Drrrrrrr! (LesTrucsRose) [galvenize's Another].osu
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

Leorda wrote:

Yo

General
1) Your MP3 Bit Rate is 320kbps, and it's unrankable. Please re-encode it to 128kbps or 192kbps
2) Remove "Techno" and "anime", since that words it's in the Genre when BAT ranked this map
Too much work.3) BPM : 179,50?
Roar out louder.4) The hitsound volume is too loud, please reduce it, otherwise, player's ear will be hurt

Easy
00:27:209 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try something neat pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42485
01:15:338 (1,2,3) - Move 1 grid up to make diamond pattern?

Hard
00:00:472 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Ugh, you copy paste this pattern too much >.<
00:22:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:08:988 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
01:12:998 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These pattern are strange for me, maybe?
01:14:001 (1) - Remove new combo?

Insane

00:22:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:48:767 (1) - ^
00:53:279 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music
00:59:462 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:03:974 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8
01:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You should remap this, because when I test this, it's kinda overlapping. Please make it spread it out OR set the BPM Multiplier to 0.75x
01:20:853 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:25:365 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music
01:31:548 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:36:060 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music


Durarara remix are awesome <3
Musty
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG *W*
sorry for the 3 weeks late

[General]

1. Offset: 470ms

[galvenize's]

00:00:472 - Down the volume 3 ticks
00:10:498 (8) - Whistle? *w*
00:10:832 - Same as 00:00:472
00:10:832 (9) - At the finish of slider, finish? *w*
00:25:037 (1) - Remove new combo
00:28:713 (1) - ^
00:38:573 (1) - ^
00:58:794 (1) - ^
01:26:367 (x) - Add a note
01:26:451 (x) - ^
01:26:534 (1) - Remove New Combo

Fine , Good Diff

[Insane]

Why 1/8 ; That unrankable.

01:08:152 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:16:842 (7) - Made this slider like : http://puu.sh/AQS
01:25:365 (3) - make longer 1 1/8 tick.
01:36:060 (3) - ^

Good Work :D

[Hard]

It isn't like a Hard, rename to [Normal+]?
or make harder the start of the song, because the kiai is a lot hardest compaired to the start.

Already , Nice diff.

[Easy]

Sorry i'm really bad to modding Easys xD ( because i'm bad on easy mapping )

00:41:582 (1) - Remove new combo

Well

+STAR *0*
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

Mustaash wrote:

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG *W*
sorry for the 3 weeks late

[General]

1. Offset: 470ms

[galvenize's]

00:00:472 - Down the volume 3 ticks
00:10:498 (8) - Whistle? *w*
00:10:832 - Same as 00:00:472
00:10:832 (9) - At the finish of slider, finish? *w*
00:25:037 (1) - Remove new combo
00:28:713 (1) - ^
00:38:573 (1) - ^
00:58:794 (1) - ^
01:26:367 (x) - Add a note
01:26:451 (x) - ^
01:26:534 (1) - Remove New Combo

Fine , Good Diff

[Insane]

Why 1/8 ; That unrankable. What 'chu talkin' 'bout, Willis?

01:08:152 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:16:842 (7) - Made this slider like : http://puu.sh/AQS
01:25:365 (3) - make longer 1 1/8 tick.
01:36:060 (3) - ^

Good Work :D

[Hard]
It isn't like a Hard, rename to [Normal+]?
or make harder the start of the song, because the kiai is a lot hardest compaired to the start.

Already , Nice diff.

[Easy]

Sorry i'm really bad to modding Easys xD ( because i'm bad on easy mapping )

00:41:582 (1) - Remove new combo

Well

+STAR *0*
thanks
Antu Villegas
Hi :)

General:

The HQ audio hasn't the same offset than the original.

I liked the skin :D


Easy:

01:14:669 (1): Remove New combo.

Hard:

00:58:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Correct the spacing, it can be confusing and it isn't too much work to fix it :)
01:20:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6): ^
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

Antu Villegas wrote:

Hi :)

General:

The HQ audio hasn't the same offset than the original. O: I'll fix this.

I liked the skin :D


Easy:

01:14:669 (1): Remove New combo.

Hard:

00:58:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Correct the spacing, it can be confusing and it isn't too much work to fix it :)
01:20:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6): ^
Selee
[General]

  • Source shouldn't be the album title...(viewtopic.php?f=6&t=24765)

    So, Source: DuRaRaRa!!

    Tags: drrr! remix Cyclick(you missed a k) C78 (Release during C78?...)

    Though the map needs countdown, a 2s is enough imo.

    Adjust normal-hitclap if you could...The sound comes from right sound channel is much weaker than left.
[Easy]

  • 00:32:557 (1,1,1,1) - huh, I prefer using only one combo here, also you'd better have a new combo at 00:34:228 (2)
    00:37:905 (1,1,1,1,2) - ^ also 00:40:913 (3) - new combo instead of 00:41:582 (1)? o.o
    00:57:289 (1) - Remove new combo
    00:58:626 (3) - New combo here instead of 00:59:963 (1)
    01:18:679 (1,2,3) - ^
    01:29:374 (1,2,3) - ^
[Hard]

AR+1~2 to reduce stacking issues like 01:11:996 (9,10,1) ... Also higher AR would make stream looks nicer.

  • 00:47:096 (6) - Finish end instead of slience?
    01:11:996 (9,10,1) - kinda hard to read, change the ending position?
[Insane]

  • 00:19:857 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
    01:00:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - No hitsounds? (Copy from second kiai?)
    01:11:661 (T) - add a note here? (Just follow vocal here...? I don't know why you left a blank)
[galvenize's Another]

  • 00:30:217 (1) - Remove new combo?
Nice~

lol, SB is pretty nice!~Take my star~
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

Selee wrote:

[General]

  • Source shouldn't be the album title...(viewtopic.php?f=6&t=24765)

    So, Source: DuRaRaRa!! But the dong itsn't from Durarara, 'tis a remix. Oh well...

    Tags: drrr! remix Cyclick(you missed a k) C78 (Release during C78?...) The album is called Cyclic. And I don't think the comiket matters.

    Though the map needs countdown, a 2s is enough imo.

    Adjust normal-hitclap if you could...The sound comes from right sound channel is much weaker than left.
Fixed. it's a mono track now.

[Easy]

  • 00:32:557 (1,1,1,1) - huh, I prefer using only one combo here, also you'd better have a new combo at 00:34:228 (2)
    00:37:905 (1,1,1,1,2) - ^ also 00:40:913 (3) - new combo instead of 00:41:582 (1)? o.o
    00:57:289 (1) - Remove new combo
    00:58:626 (3) - New combo here instead of 00:59:963 (1)
    01:18:679 (1,2,3) - ^
    01:29:374 (1,2,3) - ^
[Hard]

AR+1~2 to reduce stacking issues like 01:11:996 (9,10,1) ... Also higher AR would make stream looks nicer.

  • 00:47:096 (6) - Finish end instead of slience?
    01:11:996 (9,10,1) - kinda hard to read, change the ending position?
[Insane]

  • 00:19:857 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
    01:00:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - No hitsounds? (Copy from second kiai?)
    01:11:661 (T) - add a note here? (Just follow vocal here...? I don't know why you left a blank)
[galvenize's Another]

  • 00:30:217 (1) - Remove new combo?
Nice~

lol, SB is pretty nice!~Take my star~
Selee
So, Source: DuRaRaRa!! But the dong itsn't from Durarara, 'tis a remix. Oh well...

Example:Touhou

http://j-corehaven.blogspot.com/2010/10 ... alert.html

C78 and Cyclick
galvenize
Oh just a detail, would you please remove the note (2) at 01:26:451 in my diff?

Doesn't sounds good with it.

Thank you!
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

galvenize wrote:

Oh just a detail, would you please remove the note (2) at 01:26:451 in my diff?

Doesn't sounds good with it.

Thank you!
done. will update in the next update

Selee wrote:

So, Source: DuRaRaRa!! But the dong itsn't from Durarara, 'tis a remix. Oh well...

Example:Touhou

http://j-corehaven.blogspot.com/2010/10 ... alert.html

C78 and Cyclick
The tag is now Durarara!!, but it's called Cyclic. why would you lie to me, Google? D:
DerekMcD
I got something to say about this modding...

On Easy.

01:29:041 (Blank): Forgetting a note to add...

On Hard.
00:44:756 (Orange 4, Slider): Don't you think that needs a right spacing after Orange 3?

That's all I say.

Thank you and good luck.;-)
Kamure
and hello again...

By Mod Request:

Easy
01:29:374 (4) - new combo

Hard
Lower the HP drain by 1
01:07:149 (5) - right 6 grids

Insane
maybe you should put in a storyboard 2x warning at 00:22:196


ok star...
ziin
Hi, good map, star for sharpnel.

Can you us this instead for your spinner? I hate non-symmetrical spinners.
http://puu.sh/LuN

[normal]
00:46:260 (1,2,3,4,5) - just a suggestion to make it like the previous section with whistles on the beat and not off the beat.
Kert
I couldn't resist making a guest diff for this :)
Tell me if you like it! I think it came out quite good =)

Download: DJ Sharpnel - Drrrrrrr! (LesTrucsRose) [CracKed].osu
galvenize

CracK wrote:

I couldn't resist making a guest diff for this :)
Lol, you had the same reaction as I did.

The funniest part is that I'm not even familiar with either Durarara or Dj Sharpnel. It's just that this song begs to be mapped.
Anyhow, I can't see why he wouldn't accept your diff, I personally liked it a lot.
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

ziin wrote:

Hi, good map, star for sharpnel.

Can you us this instead for your spinner? I hate non-symmetrical spinners.
http://puu.sh/LuN
no. looks the same.

ziin wrote:

[normal]
00:46:260 (1,2,3,4,5) - just a suggestion to make it like the previous section with whistles on the beat and not off the beat.
wtf i have no [normal]
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

CracK wrote:

I couldn't resist making a guest diff for this :)
Tell me if you like it! I think it came out quite good =)
Added, changes I made:
~! I made the custom hitsounds..sound.
thanks for the diff.
ziin

LesTrucsRose wrote:

no. looks the same.
http://puu.sh/LXc

LesTrucsRose wrote:

wtf i have no [normal]
sorry, hard.
Hamuko
Awesome map and storyboard, star!
Saten
Starred because of awesomeness~
galvenize
Where are the MATs :<
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

galvenize wrote:

Where are the MATs :<
in b4 "We didn't mod this map because LTR _____"
Kurosanyan
This is so awesum <3

Edit: Wait why are you giving kudo to all the post? D:
Shiirn
General
I really liked what you did, except for the fact that every difficulty pretty much only had a few chunks of it actually mapped, the rest just copy+pasted in. Even if the background beat is identical, you could at least put some variation in there. This doesn't apply to cracked or galvenize's difficulty.

Easy
Nothing.

Hard
At least change the copy+pasted parts by flipping them or rotating them.
Also, the entire thing was copy+pasted...

Insane
00:53:279 (3) - change the volume on this.
01:03:974 (3) - ^
01:36:060 (3) - ^

CracKed
Even if auto can get 2000s on spinners like the ranking requirements say, it's still an extremely dick move. Please consider changing it.

galvenize's Another
ihateyouihateyouihateyouihateyouihateyouihateyouihateyou
This difficulty is EVIL. In a good way.
Shiirn
^it didn't add my star for some reason.
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

Shiirn wrote:

General
I really liked what you did, except for the fact that every difficulty pretty much only had a few chunks of it actually mapped, the rest just copy+pasted in. Even if the background beat is identical, you could at least put some variation in there. This doesn't apply to cracked or galvenize's difficulty.

Easy
Nothing.

Hard
At least change the copy+pasted parts by flipping them or rotating them.
Also, the entire thing was copy+pasted...

Insane
00:53:279 (3) - change the volume on this.
01:03:974 (3) - ^
01:36:060 (3) - ^

CracKed
They barely made it. I made them a little bit longer just now. Deal with it. Even if auto can get 2000s on spinners like the ranking requirements say, it's still an extremely dick move. Please consider changing it.
thanks
Kert
Why do you make changes in my diff, without asking me >_<
2Shiirn I am not very fond of spinners also, and I am very bad at completing spinners ~_~. But these ones I can easily 300.
Also they perfectly fit in my opinion and I can't think of any other better way to map these parts.
Anyway, here is my updated version.
I decreased AR by 1 and made one jump a bit easier.

Download: DJ Sharpnel - Drrrrrrr! (LesTrucsRose) [CracKed].osu
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

CracK wrote:

Why do you make changes in my diff, without asking me >_<
2Shiirn I am not very fond of spinners also, and I am very bad at completing spinners ~_~. But these ones I can easily 300.
Also they perfectly fit in my opinion and I can't think of any other better way to map these parts.
Anyway, here is my updated version.
I decreased AR by 1 and made one jump a bit easier.
k. i'll ask you on irc or whatever.
abalee

galvenize wrote:

Where are the MATs :<

footix31 wrote:

Wait why are you giving kudo to all the post? D:
^that may be a reason.

Shiirn wrote:

^it didn't add my star for some reason.
try to edit the post instead of making more posts

I just post to deny the KDs. :o
Antu Villegas

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Antu Villegas wrote:

Hi :)

General:

The HQ audio hasn't the same offset than the original. O: I'll fix this.

I liked the skin :D


Easy:

01:14:669 (1): Remove New combo.

Hard:

00:58:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Correct the spacing, it can be confusing and it isn't too much work to fix it :)
01:20:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6): ^
Why was my Kudosu denied? ;O
Kudosu Guidelines


Did the post help you in any way to improve your map?
Did the modder post things that AIMod cannot pick up?
Did the post show that the modder has knowledge of modding?
Did the modder post things that generally make sense to you and seem not too terribly picky? If their post did seem picky, are you sure that the things pointed out can improve your mapset anyways?
Even if you don't follow the modder's advice, did you not follow it because of your personal choice only, and not because the modding seemed pointless to you?
Did you not already give the modder kudosu for a mod post on the same map recently?
If you can answer yes to all of these questions, feel free to give the modder their well-earned kudosu!
arien666
[Easy]
:3

[Hard]
:3

[Insane]
01:01:969 (1,2,3,4) - [Nazi] Consider about 2-3 spacing :3?
01:09:155 - [Suggestion] Delete this break?

[CracKed]
00:11:000 (5,1) - Wonder about this holding change trick but orz
00:32:390 (5,1) - ^

[galvenize's Another]
So Expert orz



So Insane map orz
Anyway good luck ;_;

ps. I think it's star-symbol-worth but need 1 more MAT checking as I saw since there're too many INSANE patterns ;_;



edit.
'Post is exempt of kudosu.'
I wonder if this is possible on Pending forum, NOT Ranked/Approved forum orz
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
:3
:3

[Hard]
:3
:3

[Insane]
would make it a jumpstream. o: 01:01:969 (1,2,3,4) - [Nazi] Consider about 2-3 spacing :3?
01:09:155 - [Suggestion] Delete this break?

[CracKed]
00:11:000 (5,1) - Wonder about this holding change trick but orz
00:32:390 (5,1) - ^

[galvenize's Another]
So Expert orz



So Insane map orz
Anyway good luck ;_;

ps. I think it's star-symbol-worth but need 1 more MAT checking as I saw since there're too many INSANE patterns ;_;



edit.
'Post is exempt of kudosu.'
I wonder if this is possible on Pending forum, NOT Ranked/Approved forum orz
I kudosu'd many posts in this thread and abalee denied them.
Hamuko

LesTrucsRose wrote:

I kudosu'd many posts in this thread and abalee denied them.
many AKA almost all of them.
Akosss
starrr :)
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. make the 2nd KIAI in all diff start at 01:15:338.
  2. you'll meet problem while ranking this. 3 insane is unrankable now. remove 1 Insane and try to map a Normal for this.
  3. remove 'Techno' from the tags, it'll be the genre when this get ranked
  4. enable the epliepsy warning.
[galvenize's Another]:
  1. 00:00:472 (T) - don't set more than 1 section at the same point. ask the creator to set the offset -864.
  2. AR 9 is perferred
  3. 00:21:361 (5,6,7) - HP touch
  4. 01:15:672 (T) - 1 note here.
[CracKed]:
  1. what happened to the source?
[Insane]:
  1. 01:02:136 (2,3,4) - spacing
[Easy]:
  1. disable audio lean-in in this diff
star~
galvenize

Colin Hou wrote:

[galvenize's Another]:
  1. 00:00:472 (T) - don't set more than 1 section at the same point. ask the creator to set the offset -864.
  2. AR 9 is perferred Gladly.
  3. 00:21:361 (5,6,7) - HP touch fixed
  4. 01:15:672 (T) - 1 note here. Fixed
Download: DJ Sharpnel - Drrrrrrr! (LesTrucsRose) [galvenize's Another].osu
Kert
ziin

peppy wrote:

[*]A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc.
While I agree that it's bad form to call the guidelines only guidelines, cracked and another are clearly very difficult. Insane on the other hand is quite easy by comparison, enough to make me say it's a different difficulty or hard. I actually thought the current hard was a normal when I played it.

I hope a map won't need to be removed, though you can always make insane a little easier to fit into a hard.
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. make the 2nd KIAI in all diff start at 01:15:338.
  2. you'll meet problem while ranking this. 3 insane is unrankable now. remove 1 Insane and try to map a Normal for this.
  3. remove 'Techno' from the tags, it'll be the genre when this get ranked
    There's no flashing colours in this map.
  4. enable the epliepsy warning.
[Insane]:
  1. 01:02:136 (2,3,4) - spacing
[Easy]:
  1. disable audio lean-in in this diff
star~
thanks
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. make the 2nd KIAI in all diff start at 01:15:338.
  2. Remapping my insane to make it Hard+ you'll meet problem while ranking this. 3 insane is unrankable now. remove 1 Insane and try to map a Normal for this.
  3. remove 'Techno' from the tags, it'll be the genre when this get ranked
  4. See post below this. enable the epliepsy warning.
[Insane]:
  1. 01:02:136 (2,3,4) - spacing
[Easy]:
  1. disable audio lean-in in this diff
star~
thanks

CracK wrote:

Here is a fixed version:
[attachment=0:78cd5]DJ Sharpnel - Drrrrrrr! (LesTrucsRose) [CracKed].osu[/attachment:78cd5]
updated.

galvenize wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

[galvenize's Another]:
  1. 00:00:472 (T) - don't set more than 1 section at the same point. ask the creator to set the offset -864.
  2. AR 9 is perferred Gladly.
  3. 00:21:361 (5,6,7) - HP touch fixed
  4. 01:15:672 (T) - 1 note here. Fixed
updated, but
  1. make the 2nd KIAI in all diff start at 01:15:338.
Hamuko
You should enable it anyway because of the white flashes at the sides.
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

Teta wrote:

You should enable it anyway because of the white flashes at the sides.
k.
Kert
The Blured BG image was moving the way that the original BG could also be seen resulting in ugly stripes on the sides :X
I guess I fixed this, take a look
Download: DJ Sharpnel - Drrrrrrr! (LesTrucsRose).osb
Hamuko
no rly, wtf at topic subject.
my first ranked map was +119 and i wasn't like "OH LAWDY, +119 STAR PRIORITY WHAT IS THIS I DON'T EVEN!?"
You should fix it because it's stupid. In my opinion, that's it.
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses
k
Hamuko
oh you XD
Edit: Btw, remove durarara from tags since its the source.
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

Teta wrote:

oh you XD
Edit: Btw, remove durarara from tags since its the source.
y u always in ma bzns?
Hamuko
what.
ziin

LesTrucsRose wrote:

y u always in ma bzns?
it's called modding. You don't have to respond to nazi stuff.

on [cracked] the epilepsy warning blocks 2 notes. There's 3 ways to fix this: Disable the epilepsy warning (put it in first post?), storyboard the epilepsy warning, or move the notes.

The British Health and Safety Executive recommend that a net flash rate for a bank of strobe lights does not exceed 5 flashes per second, at which only 5% of photosensitive epileptics are at risk. It also recommends that no strobing effect continue for more than 30 seconds, due to the potential for discomfort and disorientation.
Anyone in the 5% shouldn't be playing osu, and should be extremely careful in what they play if they do. This is under 5 Hz and well under 30 second duration.

I can't find the rules on the epilepsy warning, but I don't think it's a problem if you do any of the 3 fixes.
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses
wll Appy wit nxt updte
Hamuko

ziin wrote:

it's called modding. You don't have to respond to nazi stuff.
The "remove durarara from tags" etc isn't nazi, it's needed.
Pereira006
star
ziin

Teta wrote:

The "remove durarara from tags" etc isn't nazi, it's needed.
what happens if he doesn't?

Nothing. It's the equivalent of deleting the osb if there's no storyboard.
Colin Hou
the tag thing is necessary, sorry but I missed it when I check this +_+

/me escaped
lijialvs
nvm
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses
Tags should be correct and right and correct and right now right here.

edit: no, it's not. the upload is borked.
DeeN
dj sharpnel! :3333333

blue army is the best song from sharpnel imo
tekiya
nice map XD
Megaparadox
str -_- 8-)
ziin
So now that I'm better at storyboarding:

[storyboard]
you did everything in osu. I certainly can't do that. I need to know what's going on and the SBE doesn't make sense to me at all, but it leaves you with these ugly decimals. I mean really, who scales from 1.27648 to 0.6313599? Not that you have to change this, I'm just pointing it out. In the future, you can use loops too to make the repeating fading effects a WHOLE lot easier to make.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59093
looks kinda bad IMO. The non-blurred background shows through at multiple times.

16180 - you're over 5.0 here, so end the extreme zoom earlier or fix oversharpened.png so it's not rescaling when you can't even see it.

blackandwhite.png is slightly smaller than the screen size, so the color bleeds through on the edges. I would suggest you go through the osb and edit each scale which is close to 0.8 and make it 0.8 (800x600 * 0.8 = 640x480) so that you never have that problem.

EDIT: I just found out the SB counter is wrong. Apparently it counts stuff which is off screen, even though the actual load does not. So a zooming image which shoots it up to 10.0+ is still fine, so long as it doesn't lag. I still stand by the fact that it's possible to make the SB load lower than 5.0 though. However apparently over 5.0 is rankable (so long as it doesn't lag). You don't have to change it if you don't feel like it.
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses
I'll do it with the next update.

Kert

ziin wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59093
looks kinda bad IMO. The non-blurred background shows through at multiple times.
Are you sure you're not using the old osb? Because I fixed this and uploaded new version a page before
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

CracK wrote:

ziin wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59093
looks kinda bad IMO. The non-blurred background shows through at multiple times.
Are you sure you're not using the old osb? Because I fixed this and uploaded new version a page before
^
ziin

CracK wrote:

ziin wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59093
looks kinda bad IMO. The non-blurred background shows through at multiple times.
Are you sure you're not using the old osb? Because I fixed this and uploaded new version a page before
I thought I updated, apparently not. The only thing relevant in my mod now is the blackandwhite.png.
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses
it's stretched now.
HakuNoKaemi
[Easy]
Nothing ...
[Normal]
00:00:472 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i dislike how that part is mapped, just don't make sense... follow this http://puu.sh/1546
01:10:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Difficult pattern for normal
01:12:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ for this and ^ follow http://puu.sh/155h
01:14:502 (1) - Delete if you follow ^
01:15:338 (x) - Add Hit note if you follow ^

[Harder]
01:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing is too little, Larger spacing please?

Starred
Derekku

Don't do this again.
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses
bump
Faust
Why haven't I starred this yet.
Topic Starter
LesTrucsRoses

Faust wrote:

Why haven't I starred this yet.
Because you liked this map before it was mainstream.
kriers
Oups forgot to star this D:. Better late than never :D
Magicphoenix
Come on, rank this awsum piece of shit
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