Soaprman wrote:

General
You appear to be using skin elements from Loogiesquared's Speed Racer 2008 beatmap. Do you have permission? If so, state this in your opening post. If not, get permission before continuing to use them. Same goes for any other skin elements you might have borrowed.

Soaprman wrote:

Out
You said in your last post that this is meant to be a normal diff, so I'll mod under that assumption.

In general, this is mapped too densely for me to think of it as a normal. I'll let you make of this what you want. I do have some specific things that need to be fixed though:

00:35:398 (1) - the zigzag here... definitely not normal difficulty. Map this differently. Fixed. Added some sliders.

01:04:977 (1) - un-jump the spacing here. it's not appropriate for normal. Also do three four-point sliders instead of four three-point sliders. Fixed.

01:10:324 (1) - reduce spacing and don't use all these sharp corners. Fixed.

01:12:998 (2) - same goes here with the zigzag. Fixed.

Soaprman wrote:

Louder
Going to second karenying's comment that there's a lot of copy-paste going on in a rather short map here. Consider remapping parts of it.

00:40:746 (1,2) - hiding a slider endpoint with a repeat on it underneath another slider like this... not sure this is rankable. Might want to rearrange them just in case. They are now side-by-side.
00:48:099 (1,1) - same here. They are now side-by-side.
00:58:794 (1,1) - same here. They are now side-by-side.
01:20:184 (1,1) - same here. They are now side-by-side.
01:30:879 (1,1) - same here. look at these as opportunities to vary up your mapping a bit.

00:53:279 (1,2) - this sounds kind of weird. Maybe just make this a single slider without bouncing shenanigans? This is really a suggestion, it's fine as it is if you like it. Keeping it, but I see what you mean.

01:04:977 (1,2,3,4) - same as in Out... three sliders instead of four makes more sense. Keeping it, but I see what you mean.

SliderBorder : 0,0,0

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~

General;
- Meh, uhhm, border of the slider would look better with black, add this down the last combo color Fixed.

SliderBorder : 0,0,0

- Your mp3 is of 320, you need a 256 or 128 mp3 or something that is not 320, here, take this one but remember offset might change
http://www.mediafire.com/?adg43b11vypm442 I'm keeping my 320 unless it's a problem with filesize in the future. I also have a high-quality 525kbps .ogg. Maybe that?

Skin;
- Spinner-BG and spinner approach circle ... red ... ?? Why ?? I don't see any red on the BG, doesn't fit imo Fixed. It's now... orangish. (Included)
- Your hitcircle is so dark, that it makes the colors of the circle on the game all ... dark when in the BG they are very bright Fixed. It's lighter.
- Probably a good idea to add a spinner-clear, spinner-osu and spinner-spin I knew I forgot something. Added.

Blow;
- 01:04:977 >> remove whistle, add finish Fixed
- 01:08:152 (1,3) >> add whistle Fixed
- 01:10:324 >> add finish Fixed
- You can probably create a pattern with claps
- 1st kiai time ends here: 01:04:643 Fixed
- 2nd kiai time ends here: 01:36:728 Fixed

Out;
- I strongly believe those custom hitsounds don't fit at all, for me they sound horrible :<
- Better get a hitsound expert for this orz
- Wooops ~ Check kiai time, make it start and end on a note :< Fixed

Louder;
- Still get someone to check your hitsounds
- Uhmm, well paced notes on the timeline :>
- Curve some sliders better
- 00:26:541 >> unrankable spinner, auto must be able to do a bonus of 2000 Removed spinner

* Star !! :3

La Cataline wrote:

star for the artwork
but the spinner is horrible...

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Happy now?

[attachment=0:b0b8a]spinner-circle.png[/attachment:b0b8a]

Verdisphena wrote:

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Happy now?

[attachment=0:ac258]spinner-circle.png[/attachment:ac258]

No ;<

Verdisphena wrote:

No ;<

Charles445 wrote:

I really liked the first one - the one with just the character.

Odaril wrote:

Sorry for the late mod, I've had a lot of problems lately.

Please remember that these are only suggestions. Feel free to ignore any of them.

General:
Your mp3 bitrate is 320kbps, which is unrankable. You have to scale it down to 256kbps at most. Scaled down to 256kbps
Moreover, storyboard pictures must be below 800x600px. This concerns: Resized all. ;-;
- Oversharpened.png
- Blured.png
- Blackandwhite.png
- WhiteBEAT.png (edit: forgot .png)
I'd recommend you to add a approachcircle.png Added

approach circle

[attachment=0:17f09]approachcircle.png[/attachment:17f09]

Storyboard:
00:16:514 - For a reason I don't understand, the Storyboard load goes above 10 right before this point. It might go down when you scale the pictures down, though. It still happens. Oh well...

Normal (Blow):
This feels more like a Easy to me. If you set the circle size to 1 (that is, the biggest) it will be a decent Easy. Then it's an easy.
01:14:669 (1) - I think it would be better moved 18 grids lvl 3 down - it would be symmetrical to (3) and wouldn't hidden by the spinner. Fixed.

Hard (Out):
This whole diff feels bland at times in my humble opinion: too many times there are gaps between the notes. The low spacing makes it slow, too, which reinforces the bland feeling. Moreover, the beginning is the same pattern that repeats 6 times: here again, it reinforces the bland feeling. You should try to fill in the blanks between notes, based on the music.
00:16:514 (1) - This crescendo is great <3
00:26:541 - This is an example of a gap that should have had notes in it. Added notes.
00:31:889 - ^ No music, no notes.
00:53:279 - here again - add a spinner here that ends at 00:53:947 - ? Or a slider Added
01:25:365 - same ? a spinner that starts here and ends at 01:26:033 - ? Or a slider Added

Insane (Louder):
The blandness strikes again )= though a lot less than on Hard
00:16:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - This stream and the crescendo with it are really good <3
00:26:541 - add circles somehow here ? fixed
00:29:549 (1) - This note is too high and touches the HP bar, it looks bad to mefixed
00:34:730 (4) - maybe... make a slider that starts here and leads to the next note ? Won't fit.
00:40:077 (4) - ^ Won't fit.
01:04:977 (1) - the low slider speed and the low distance snapping starting here make this whole part confusingly overlapping, try to at least space the notes a bit more ? no.

This map is not bad ! it can be made pretty good relatively easily. Keep working on it ! Fix the unrankable stuff and I will give it a star (not the icon).

noneed wrote:

Hi!


Blow:
✓ CS one more to large?
✓ 01:14:669 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j would look better imo

Out:
✓ 00:11:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ctrl+j
✓ 00:37:069 (6) - dat jump ;_;
✓ 01:15:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j

Louder:
X 00:37:905 (1) - delete that and make a spinner from 00:37:236 to 00:37:905
✓ 01:15:672 - ctrl+h and ctr+j

yeah that's it
Starrr!!!

Disoy wrote:

[Blow]
X 00:33:560 (1) - remove this circle?
X 00:38:908 (1) - ^
X 00:51:274 (1) - these slider change spinner?
X 01:23:359 (1) - ^

[Out]
✔ CS+1
✔ 00:27:042 (1) - add a hitclap?
✔ 00:27:209 (2) - add a hitfinish?
X 00:29:549 (1) - these slider is long..
X 00:35:231 (5) - add a note?
X 00:38:907 (4) - remove this circle?
X 00:49:603 (7) - add a note?
✔ 01:14:001 (1) - add a new combo?

[Louder]
X 00:19:857 (11) - add a note and spinner move to 00:20:024?
✔ 00:26:708 (3) - add a note?
X 00:33:560 (3) - remove this circle?
X 00:33:894 (4) - add a note?
X 00:38:908 (4) - remove this circle?

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
mp3@320kbps, compress it to 128~192

[Louder]
✔ 0:31:220 (6,7) (6) left 1 grid, (7) left 2 grid?
✔ 1:02:303 (3,4,5) left 1 grid
✔ 1:34:723 (5) right 1 grid
nice diff~

[Out]
✔ 0:34:228 (1,2,3,4) this looks weird, (4) right down 1 grid?
removed bookmarks 0:35:398 *this is not important, but why there's so many bookmark 0.0
✔ 0:48:266 (1~6) uneven spacing, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/39392 ?
✔ 1:20:351 (1~6) ^
✔ 1:30:879 (1~6) ^

[Blow]
no problem

star~

ErufenRito wrote:

Sighs, i thought i posted my mod? I guess i never did, Anyways, here's a quick remod

First thoughts: The combo numbers could be bigger, they are almost invisible in the yellow combo colour. But this is just me.

Louder:

I used a slider in this point. 01:11:661 - Consider adding a circle here

Out:

✔ 00:43:586 (1,2,3) - Im really against positioning them at the center. The combo hits of 00:42:250 (3,4) and the spinner's hits are still visible, making them hard to see, besides... They are yellow, and the combo numbers are so small, and the spacing is so small, making them even harder to see. So ill suggest to move them away from the center
x 01:11:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Hard to see
Anyways, as a general recommendation for your maps in the future, is to not use such small spacing, i personally thinks that it makes it harder cause its harder to see, and it doesn't look so good anyways.

Blow:

Found nothing wrong

galvenize wrote:

Here it is =).

Awesome song btw.

Leorda wrote:

galvenize's Another
00:24:201 (5,1) - These jumps are surprising. Not really.
00:44:923 (7,8) - ^
00:46:427 (4) - New combo, since it's jumps, mkay.
00:57:457 (4,5) - These jumps are surprising[/color] Not really.
01:04:141 (2) - This 0,5x BPM slider are sudden!. Fits the song imo.
01:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The pattern are feels random for me, maybe? :/
01:11:327 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These pattern are messy Got to agree with you on this one, remapped.

Durarara remix are awesome <3

Leorda wrote:

Yo

General
✔1) Your MP3 Bit Rate is 320kbps, and it's unrankable. Please re-encode it to 128kbps or 192kbps
✔ 2) Remove "Techno" and "anime", since that words it's in the Genre when BAT ranked this map
Too much work.3) BPM : 179,50?
Roar out louder.4) The hitsound volume is too loud, please reduce it, otherwise, player's ear will be hurt

Easy
00:27:209 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try something neat pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42485
✔ 01:15:338 (1,2,3) - Move 1 grid up to make diamond pattern?

Hard
00:00:472 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Ugh, you copy paste this pattern too much >.<
✔ 00:22:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:08:988 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
01:12:998 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These pattern are strange for me, maybe?
✔ 01:14:001 (1) - Remove new combo?

Insane
✔ 00:22:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 00:48:767 (1) - ^
✔ 00:53:279 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music
✔ 00:59:462 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:03:974 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8
01:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You should remap this, because when I test this, it's kinda overlapping. Please make it spread it out OR set the BPM Multiplier to 0.75x
✔ 01:20:853 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:25:365 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music
✔ 01:31:548 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:36:060 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music


Durarara remix are awesome <3

Mustaash wrote:

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG *W*
sorry for the 3 weeks late

[General]

1. Offset: 470ms

[galvenize's]

✔ 00:00:472 - Down the volume 3 ticks
✔ 00:10:498 (8) - Whistle? *w*
✔ 00:10:832 - Same as 00:00:472
✔ 00:10:832 (9) - At the finish of slider, finish? *w*
✔ 00:25:037 (1) - Remove new combo
✔ 00:28:713 (1) - ^
✔ 00:38:573 (1) - ^
✔ 00:58:794 (1) - ^
✔ 01:26:367 (x) - Add a note
✔ 01:26:451 (x) - ^
✔ 01:26:534 (1) - Remove New Combo

Fine , Good Diff

[Insane]

Why 1/8 ; That unrankable. What 'chu talkin' 'bout, Willis?

✔ 01:08:152 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:16:842 (7) - Made this slider like : http://puu.sh/AQS
✔ 01:25:365 (3) - make longer 1 1/8 tick.
✔ 01:36:060 (3) - ^

Good Work

[Hard]
It isn't like a Hard, rename to [Normal+]?
or make harder the start of the song, because the kiai is a lot hardest compaired to the start.

Already , Nice diff.

[Easy]

Sorry i'm really bad to modding Easys xD ( because i'm bad on easy mapping )

00:41:582 (1) - Remove new combo

Well

+STAR *0*

Antu Villegas wrote:

Hi

General:

The HQ audio hasn't the same offset than the original. O: I'll fix this.

I liked the skin

Easy:

✔ 01:14:669 (1): Remove New combo. ✔

Hard:

✔ 00:58:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Correct the spacing, it can be confusing and it isn't too much work to fix it
✔ 01:20:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6): ^

• Source shouldn't be the album title...(viewtopic.php?f=6&t=24765)
  
  So, Source: DuRaRaRa!!
  
  Tags: drrr! remix Cyclick(you missed a k) C78 (Release during C78?...)
  
  Though the map needs countdown, a 2s is enough imo.
  
  Adjust normal-hitclap if you could...The sound comes from right sound channel is much weaker than left.

• 00:32:557 (1,1,1,1) - huh, I prefer using only one combo here, also you'd better have a new combo at 00:34:228 (2)
  00:37:905 (1,1,1,1,2) - ^ also 00:40:913 (3) - new combo instead of 00:41:582 (1)? o.o
  00:57:289 (1) - Remove new combo
  00:58:626 (3) - New combo here instead of 00:59:963 (1)
  01:18:679 (1,2,3) - ^
  01:29:374 (1,2,3) - ^

• 00:47:096 (6) - Finish end instead of slience?
  01:11:996 (9,10,1) - kinda hard to read, change the ending position?

• 00:19:857 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
  01:00:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - No hitsounds? (Copy from second kiai?)
  01:11:661 (T) - add a note here? (Just follow vocal here...? I don't know why you left a blank)

• 00:30:217 (1) - Remove new combo?

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Source shouldn't be the album title...(viewtopic.php?f=6&t=24765)
  
  So, Source: DuRaRaRa!! But the dong itsn't from Durarara, 'tis a remix. Oh well...
  
  Tags: drrr! remix Cyclick(you missed a k) C78 (Release during C78?...) The album is called Cyclic. And I don't think the comiket matters.
  
  Though the map needs countdown, a 2s is enough imo.
  
  Adjust normal-hitclap if you could...The sound comes from right sound channel is much weaker than left.

Fixed. it's a mono track now.

[Easy]

• ✔ 00:32:557 (1,1,1,1) - huh, I prefer using only one combo here, also you'd better have a new combo at 00:34:228 (2)
  ✔ 00:37:905 (1,1,1,1,2) - ^ also 00:40:913 (3) - new combo instead of 00:41:582 (1)? o.o
  ✔ 00:57:289 (1) - Remove new combo
  ✔ 00:58:626 (3) - New combo here instead of 00:59:963 (1)
  ✔ 01:18:679 (1,2,3) - ^
  ✔ 01:29:374 (1,2,3) - ^

[Hard]

✔ AR+1~2 to reduce stacking issues like 01:11:996 (9,10,1) ... Also higher AR would make stream looks nicer.

• 00:47:096 (6) - Finish end instead of slience?
  ✔ 01:11:996 (9,10,1) - kinda hard to read, change the ending position?

[Insane]

• 00:19:857 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
  ✔ 01:00:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - No hitsounds? (Copy from second kiai?)
  ✔ 01:11:661 (T) - add a note here? (Just follow vocal here...? I don't know why you left a blank)

[galvenize's Another]

• ✔ 00:30:217 (1) - Remove new combo?

Nice~

lol, SB is pretty nice!~Take my star~

galvenize wrote:

Oh just a detail, would you please remove the note (2) at 01:26:451 in my diff?

Doesn't sounds good with it.

Thank you!

Selee wrote:

So, Source: DuRaRaRa!! But the dong itsn't from Durarara, 'tis a remix. Oh well...

Example：Touhou

http://j-corehaven.blogspot.com/2010/10 ... alert.html

C78 and Cyclick

CracK wrote:

I couldn't resist making a guest diff for this

ziin wrote:

Hi, good map, star for sharpnel.

Can you us this instead for your spinner? I hate non-symmetrical spinners.
http://puu.sh/LuN

ziin wrote:

[normal]
00:46:260 (1,2,3,4,5) - just a suggestion to make it like the previous section with whistles on the beat and not off the beat.

CracK wrote:

I couldn't resist making a guest diff for this
Tell me if you like it! I think it came out quite good =)

LesTrucsRose wrote:

no. looks the same.

LesTrucsRose wrote:

wtf i have no [normal]

galvenize wrote:

Where are the MATs :<

Shiirn wrote:

General
I really liked what you did, except for the fact that every difficulty pretty much only had a few chunks of it actually mapped, the rest just copy+pasted in. Even if the background beat is identical, you could at least put some variation in there. This doesn't apply to cracked or galvenize's difficulty.

Easy
Nothing.

Hard
At least change the copy+pasted parts by flipping them or rotating them.
Also, the entire thing was copy+pasted...
Insane
✔ 00:53:279 (3) - change the volume on this.
✔ 01:03:974 (3) - ^
✔ 01:36:060 (3) - ^

CracKed
They barely made it. I made them a little bit longer just now. Deal with it. Even if auto can get 2000s on spinners like the ranking requirements say, it's still an extremely dick move. Please consider changing it.

CracK wrote:

Why do you make changes in my diff, without asking me >_<
2Shiirn I am not very fond of spinners also, and I am very bad at completing spinners ~_~. But these ones I can easily 300.
Also they perfectly fit in my opinion and I can't think of any other better way to map these parts.
Anyway, here is my updated version.
I decreased AR by 1 and made one jump a bit easier.

galvenize wrote:

Where are the MATs :<

footix31 wrote:

Wait why are you giving kudo to all the post? D:

Shiirn wrote:

^it didn't add my star for some reason.

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Antu Villegas wrote:

Hi

General:

The HQ audio hasn't the same offset than the original. O: I'll fix this.

I liked the skin

Easy:

✔ 01:14:669 (1): Remove New combo. ✔

Hard:

✔ 00:58:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Correct the spacing, it can be confusing and it isn't too much work to fix it
✔ 01:20:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6): ^

Kudosu Guidelines


Did the post help you in any way to improve your map?
Did the modder post things that AIMod cannot pick up?
Did the post show that the modder has knowledge of modding?
Did the modder post things that generally make sense to you and seem not too terribly picky? If their post did seem picky, are you sure that the things pointed out can improve your mapset anyways?
Even if you don't follow the modder's advice, did you not follow it because of your personal choice only, and not because the modding seemed pointless to you?
Did you not already give the modder kudosu for a mod post on the same map recently?
If you can answer yes to all of these questions, feel free to give the modder their well-earned kudosu!

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
:3
:3

[Hard]
:3
:3

[Insane]
would make it a jumpstream. o: 01:01:969 (1,2,3,4) - [Nazi] Consider about 2-3 spacing :3?
✔ 01:09:155 - [Suggestion] Delete this break?

[CracKed]
00:11:000 (5,1) - Wonder about this holding change trick but orz
00:32:390 (5,1) - ^

[galvenize's Another]
So Expert orz



So Insane map orz
Anyway good luck ;_;

ps. I think it's star-symbol-worth but need 1 more MAT checking as I saw since there're too many INSANE patterns ;_;



edit.
'Post is exempt of kudosu.'
I wonder if this is possible on Pending forum, NOT Ranked/Approved forum orz
I kudosu'd many posts in this thread and abalee denied them.

LesTrucsRose wrote:

I kudosu'd many posts in this thread and abalee denied them.

1. make the 2nd KIAI in all diff start at 01:15:338.
2. you'll meet problem while ranking this. 3 insane is unrankable now. remove 1 Insane and try to map a Normal for this.
3. remove 'Techno' from the tags, it'll be the genre when this get ranked
4. enable the epliepsy warning.

1. 00:00:472 (T) - don't set more than 1 section at the same point. ask the creator to set the offset -864.
2. AR 9 is perferred
3. 00:21:361 (5,6,7) - HP touch
4. 01:15:672 (T) - 1 note here.

1. what happened to the source?

1. 01:02:136 (2,3,4) - spacing

1. disable audio lean-in in this diff

Colin Hou wrote:

[galvenize's Another]:

1. 00:00:472 (T) - don't set more than 1 section at the same point. ask the creator to set the offset -864.
2. AR 9 is perferred Gladly.
3. 00:21:361 (5,6,7) - HP touch fixed
4. 01:15:672 (T) - 1 note here. Fixed

peppy wrote:

[*]A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc.

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
✔

1. make the 2nd KIAI in all diff start at 01:15:338.
2. you'll meet problem while ranking this. 3 insane is unrankable now. remove 1 Insane and try to map a Normal for this.
   ✔
3. remove 'Techno' from the tags, it'll be the genre when this get ranked
   There's no flashing colours in this map.
4. enable the epliepsy warning.

[Insane]:
✔

1. 01:02:136 (2,3,4) - spacing

[Easy]:
✔

1. disable audio lean-in in this diff

star~

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. ✔ make the 2nd KIAI in all diff start at 01:15:338.
2. Remapping my insane to make it Hard+ you'll meet problem while ranking this. 3 insane is unrankable now. remove 1 Insane and try to map a Normal for this.
3. ✔ remove 'Techno' from the tags, it'll be the genre when this get ranked
4. See post below this. enable the epliepsy warning.

[Insane]:

• ✔

1. 01:02:136 (2,3,4) - spacing

[Easy]:

• ✔

1. disable audio lean-in in this diff

star~

thanks

CracK wrote:

Here is a fixed version:
[attachment=0:78cd5]DJ Sharpnel - Drrrrrrr! (LesTrucsRose) [CracKed].osu[/attachment:78cd5]

galvenize wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

[galvenize's Another]:

1. 00:00:472 (T) - don't set more than 1 section at the same point. ask the creator to set the offset -864.
2. AR 9 is perferred Gladly.
3. 00:21:361 (5,6,7) - HP touch fixed
4. 01:15:672 (T) - 1 note here. Fixed

• ✔

1. make the 2nd KIAI in all diff start at 01:15:338.

Teta wrote:

You should enable it anyway because of the white flashes at the sides.

Teta wrote:

oh you XD
Edit: Btw, remove durarara from tags since its the source.

LesTrucsRose wrote:

y u always in ma bzns?

The British Health and Safety Executive recommend that a net flash rate for a bank of strobe lights does not exceed 5 flashes per second, at which only 5% of photosensitive epileptics are at risk. It also recommends that no strobing effect continue for more than 30 seconds, due to the potential for discomfort and disorientation.

ziin wrote:

it's called modding. You don't have to respond to nazi stuff.

Teta wrote:

The "remove durarara from tags" etc isn't nazi, it's needed.