Mustaash wrote:

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG *W*
sorry for the 3 weeks late

[General]

1. Offset: 470ms

[galvenize's]

✔ 00:00:472 - Down the volume 3 ticks
✔ 00:10:498 (8) - Whistle? *w*
✔ 00:10:832 - Same as 00:00:472
✔ 00:10:832 (9) - At the finish of slider, finish? *w*
✔ 00:25:037 (1) - Remove new combo
✔ 00:28:713 (1) - ^
✔ 00:38:573 (1) - ^
✔ 00:58:794 (1) - ^
✔ 01:26:367 (x) - Add a note
✔ 01:26:451 (x) - ^
✔ 01:26:534 (1) - Remove New Combo

Fine , Good Diff

[Insane]

Why 1/8 ; That unrankable. What 'chu talkin' 'bout, Willis?

✔ 01:08:152 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:16:842 (7) - Made this slider like : http://puu.sh/AQS
✔ 01:25:365 (3) - make longer 1 1/8 tick.
✔ 01:36:060 (3) - ^

Good Work

[Hard]
It isn't like a Hard, rename to [Normal+]?
or make harder the start of the song, because the kiai is a lot hardest compaired to the start.

Already , Nice diff.

[Easy]

Sorry i'm really bad to modding Easys xD ( because i'm bad on easy mapping )

00:41:582 (1) - Remove new combo

Well

+STAR *0*

Antu Villegas wrote:

Hi

General:

The HQ audio hasn't the same offset than the original. O: I'll fix this.

I liked the skin

Easy:

✔ 01:14:669 (1): Remove New combo. ✔

Hard:

✔ 00:58:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Correct the spacing, it can be confusing and it isn't too much work to fix it
✔ 01:20:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6): ^

• Source shouldn't be the album title...(viewtopic.php?f=6&t=24765)
  
  So, Source: DuRaRaRa!!
  
  Tags: drrr! remix Cyclick(you missed a k) C78 (Release during C78?...)
  
  Though the map needs countdown, a 2s is enough imo.
  
  Adjust normal-hitclap if you could...The sound comes from right sound channel is much weaker than left.

• 00:32:557 (1,1,1,1) - huh, I prefer using only one combo here, also you'd better have a new combo at 00:34:228 (2)
  00:37:905 (1,1,1,1,2) - ^ also 00:40:913 (3) - new combo instead of 00:41:582 (1)? o.o
  00:57:289 (1) - Remove new combo
  00:58:626 (3) - New combo here instead of 00:59:963 (1)
  01:18:679 (1,2,3) - ^
  01:29:374 (1,2,3) - ^

• 00:47:096 (6) - Finish end instead of slience?
  01:11:996 (9,10,1) - kinda hard to read, change the ending position?

• 00:19:857 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
  01:00:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - No hitsounds? (Copy from second kiai?)
  01:11:661 (T) - add a note here? (Just follow vocal here...? I don't know why you left a blank)

• 00:30:217 (1) - Remove new combo?

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Source shouldn't be the album title...(viewtopic.php?f=6&t=24765)
  
  So, Source: DuRaRaRa!! But the dong itsn't from Durarara, 'tis a remix. Oh well...
  
  Tags: drrr! remix Cyclick(you missed a k) C78 (Release during C78?...) The album is called Cyclic. And I don't think the comiket matters.
  
  Though the map needs countdown, a 2s is enough imo.
  
  Adjust normal-hitclap if you could...The sound comes from right sound channel is much weaker than left.

Fixed. it's a mono track now.

[Easy]

• ✔ 00:32:557 (1,1,1,1) - huh, I prefer using only one combo here, also you'd better have a new combo at 00:34:228 (2)
  ✔ 00:37:905 (1,1,1,1,2) - ^ also 00:40:913 (3) - new combo instead of 00:41:582 (1)? o.o
  ✔ 00:57:289 (1) - Remove new combo
  ✔ 00:58:626 (3) - New combo here instead of 00:59:963 (1)
  ✔ 01:18:679 (1,2,3) - ^
  ✔ 01:29:374 (1,2,3) - ^

[Hard]

✔ AR+1~2 to reduce stacking issues like 01:11:996 (9,10,1) ... Also higher AR would make stream looks nicer.

• 00:47:096 (6) - Finish end instead of slience?
  ✔ 01:11:996 (9,10,1) - kinda hard to read, change the ending position?

[Insane]

• 00:19:857 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
  ✔ 01:00:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - No hitsounds? (Copy from second kiai?)
  ✔ 01:11:661 (T) - add a note here? (Just follow vocal here...? I don't know why you left a blank)

[galvenize's Another]

• ✔ 00:30:217 (1) - Remove new combo?

Nice~

lol, SB is pretty nice!~Take my star~

galvenize wrote:

Oh just a detail, would you please remove the note (2) at 01:26:451 in my diff?

Doesn't sounds good with it.

Thank you!

Selee wrote:

So, Source: DuRaRaRa!! But the dong itsn't from Durarara, 'tis a remix. Oh well...

Example：Touhou

http://j-corehaven.blogspot.com/2010/10 ... alert.html

C78 and Cyclick

CracK wrote:

I couldn't resist making a guest diff for this

ziin wrote:

Hi, good map, star for sharpnel.

Can you us this instead for your spinner? I hate non-symmetrical spinners.
http://puu.sh/LuN

ziin wrote:

[normal]
00:46:260 (1,2,3,4,5) - just a suggestion to make it like the previous section with whistles on the beat and not off the beat.

CracK wrote:

I couldn't resist making a guest diff for this
Tell me if you like it! I think it came out quite good =)

LesTrucsRose wrote:

no. looks the same.

LesTrucsRose wrote:

wtf i have no [normal]

galvenize wrote:

Where are the MATs :<

Shiirn wrote:

General
I really liked what you did, except for the fact that every difficulty pretty much only had a few chunks of it actually mapped, the rest just copy+pasted in. Even if the background beat is identical, you could at least put some variation in there. This doesn't apply to cracked or galvenize's difficulty.

Easy
Nothing.

Hard
At least change the copy+pasted parts by flipping them or rotating them.
Also, the entire thing was copy+pasted...
Insane
✔ 00:53:279 (3) - change the volume on this.
✔ 01:03:974 (3) - ^
✔ 01:36:060 (3) - ^

CracKed
They barely made it. I made them a little bit longer just now. Deal with it. Even if auto can get 2000s on spinners like the ranking requirements say, it's still an extremely dick move. Please consider changing it.

CracK wrote:

Why do you make changes in my diff, without asking me >_<
2Shiirn I am not very fond of spinners also, and I am very bad at completing spinners ~_~. But these ones I can easily 300.
Also they perfectly fit in my opinion and I can't think of any other better way to map these parts.
Anyway, here is my updated version.
I decreased AR by 1 and made one jump a bit easier.

galvenize wrote:

Where are the MATs :<

footix31 wrote:

Wait why are you giving kudo to all the post? D:

Shiirn wrote:

^it didn't add my star for some reason.

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Antu Villegas wrote:

Hi

General:

The HQ audio hasn't the same offset than the original. O: I'll fix this.

I liked the skin

Easy:

✔ 01:14:669 (1): Remove New combo. ✔

Hard:

✔ 00:58:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Correct the spacing, it can be confusing and it isn't too much work to fix it
✔ 01:20:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6): ^

Kudosu Guidelines


Did the post help you in any way to improve your map?
Did the modder post things that AIMod cannot pick up?
Did the post show that the modder has knowledge of modding?
Did the modder post things that generally make sense to you and seem not too terribly picky? If their post did seem picky, are you sure that the things pointed out can improve your mapset anyways?
Even if you don't follow the modder's advice, did you not follow it because of your personal choice only, and not because the modding seemed pointless to you?
Did you not already give the modder kudosu for a mod post on the same map recently?
If you can answer yes to all of these questions, feel free to give the modder their well-earned kudosu!

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
:3
:3

[Hard]
:3
:3

[Insane]
would make it a jumpstream. o: 01:01:969 (1,2,3,4) - [Nazi] Consider about 2-3 spacing :3?
✔ 01:09:155 - [Suggestion] Delete this break?

[CracKed]
00:11:000 (5,1) - Wonder about this holding change trick but orz
00:32:390 (5,1) - ^

[galvenize's Another]
So Expert orz



So Insane map orz
Anyway good luck ;_;

ps. I think it's star-symbol-worth but need 1 more MAT checking as I saw since there're too many INSANE patterns ;_;



edit.
'Post is exempt of kudosu.'
I wonder if this is possible on Pending forum, NOT Ranked/Approved forum orz
I kudosu'd many posts in this thread and abalee denied them.

LesTrucsRose wrote:

I kudosu'd many posts in this thread and abalee denied them.

1. make the 2nd KIAI in all diff start at 01:15:338.
2. you'll meet problem while ranking this. 3 insane is unrankable now. remove 1 Insane and try to map a Normal for this.
3. remove 'Techno' from the tags, it'll be the genre when this get ranked
4. enable the epliepsy warning.

1. 00:00:472 (T) - don't set more than 1 section at the same point. ask the creator to set the offset -864.
2. AR 9 is perferred
3. 00:21:361 (5,6,7) - HP touch
4. 01:15:672 (T) - 1 note here.

1. what happened to the source?

1. 01:02:136 (2,3,4) - spacing

1. disable audio lean-in in this diff

Colin Hou wrote:

[galvenize's Another]:

1. 00:00:472 (T) - don't set more than 1 section at the same point. ask the creator to set the offset -864.
2. AR 9 is perferred Gladly.
3. 00:21:361 (5,6,7) - HP touch fixed
4. 01:15:672 (T) - 1 note here. Fixed

peppy wrote:

[*]A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc.

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
✔

1. make the 2nd KIAI in all diff start at 01:15:338.
2. you'll meet problem while ranking this. 3 insane is unrankable now. remove 1 Insane and try to map a Normal for this.
   ✔
3. remove 'Techno' from the tags, it'll be the genre when this get ranked
   There's no flashing colours in this map.
4. enable the epliepsy warning.

[Insane]:
✔

1. 01:02:136 (2,3,4) - spacing

[Easy]:
✔

1. disable audio lean-in in this diff

star~

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. ✔ make the 2nd KIAI in all diff start at 01:15:338.
2. Remapping my insane to make it Hard+ you'll meet problem while ranking this. 3 insane is unrankable now. remove 1 Insane and try to map a Normal for this.
3. ✔ remove 'Techno' from the tags, it'll be the genre when this get ranked
4. See post below this. enable the epliepsy warning.

[Insane]:

• ✔

1. 01:02:136 (2,3,4) - spacing

[Easy]:

• ✔

1. disable audio lean-in in this diff

star~

thanks

CracK wrote:

Here is a fixed version:
[attachment=0:78cd5]DJ Sharpnel - Drrrrrrr! (LesTrucsRose) [CracKed].osu[/attachment:78cd5]

galvenize wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

[galvenize's Another]:

1. 00:00:472 (T) - don't set more than 1 section at the same point. ask the creator to set the offset -864.
2. AR 9 is perferred Gladly.
3. 00:21:361 (5,6,7) - HP touch fixed
4. 01:15:672 (T) - 1 note here. Fixed

• ✔

1. make the 2nd KIAI in all diff start at 01:15:338.

Teta wrote:

You should enable it anyway because of the white flashes at the sides.

Teta wrote:

oh you XD
Edit: Btw, remove durarara from tags since its the source.

LesTrucsRose wrote:

y u always in ma bzns?

The British Health and Safety Executive recommend that a net flash rate for a bank of strobe lights does not exceed 5 flashes per second, at which only 5% of photosensitive epileptics are at risk. It also recommends that no strobing effect continue for more than 30 seconds, due to the potential for discomfort and disorientation.

ziin wrote:

it's called modding. You don't have to respond to nazi stuff.

Teta wrote:

The "remove durarara from tags" etc isn't nazi, it's needed.

ziin wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59093
looks kinda bad IMO. The non-blurred background shows through at multiple times.

CracK wrote:

ziin wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59093
looks kinda bad IMO. The non-blurred background shows through at multiple times.

Are you sure you're not using the old osb? Because I fixed this and uploaded new version a page before

CracK wrote:

ziin wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59093
looks kinda bad IMO. The non-blurred background shows through at multiple times.

Are you sure you're not using the old osb? Because I fixed this and uploaded new version a page before

Faust wrote:

Why haven't I starred this yet.

Charles445 wrote:

General
Easy
Okay, the approach rate is WAY TOO SMALL, make it AT LEAST +2
01:16:006 - New combo

Normal
AR +2
00:06:822 - Add a circle
00:09:496 - ^^
00:12:002 - ^^
00:12:169 - ^^
Those circles will make the beginning a lot more fun and gradual
01:06:982 (4) - Move this once to the right (Grid 3)

Harder
00:00:472 to 00:16:180 - The spacing in this part is a bit irregular, it looks awful, and it moves around the center too much.
01:36:645 - Move this inheriting section to 01:36:728 to make kiai work better

CracKed
Herregud

galvenize's Another
01:04:141 - Enable kiai for this inheriting section
01:14:502 (1) - Spinner needs a new combo
Awesomely nuts

CLEARRRRRRRRR
oh, and go get a MAT

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Antu Villegas wrote:

Hi

General:

The HQ audio hasn't the same offset than the original. O: I'll fix this.

I liked the skin

Easy:

✔ 01:14:669 (1): Remove New combo. ✔

Hard:

✔ 00:58:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Correct the spacing, it can be confusing and it isn't too much work to fix it
✔ 01:20:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6): ^

superoven wrote:

I hope this gets ranked. .

theMikeAG wrote:

Hello remember me? I gave you a star back before I actually modded stuff.

~Easy~
Who give a crap about Easy? Drrrrrrrr

~Normal~
I think it would sound pretty cool if you added notes to 00:01:474, 00:02:143, 00:04:148, 00:04:816... basically, any spot in the intro with a heavier beat. Of course it sounds great already. Do as you will.

~Harder~
...Is there any reason why this is Harder rather than Hard? I seem to remember Easy being named Normal a long time ago.
I couldn't have 3 Insane difficulties.

00:27:209 (4) - Maybe add a whistle?
00:53:948 (4) - Maybe add a finish?
00:54:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe add whistles to (1,3, and 5) like at 00:43:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6).
00:46:260 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ like at at 00:56:956 (1,2,3,4,5)

~CracKed~
Pure Epic Concentrate. I love how you used the regular hitsounds here. They sound really good.

~galvenize's Another~

~WARNING~
While this post contains several worthy things to change/fix, it was mostly created to bump this map. So, ignore if you want, apply if you want. I don't care.

Oops. I seem to have "accidently" bumped your map up. Silly me.

1. You should put the same audio lead in on all diffs (except [Easy])
2. On some parts of the SB(especially in the black/white part) You can see the other images at the edge of the screen
3. Is the normal-hitnormal left-only on purpose? I find it a bit distracting, so maybe reconvert the hitsound to mono.

Dangaard wrote:

[Cracked]
remove the inherited point that is exactly on the offset (472ms)

CracK wrote:

I can only think of moving offset to minuses..

Dangaard wrote:

Overall

1. You should put the same audio lead in on all diffs (except [Easy])
2. On some parts of the SB(especially in the black/white part) You can see the other images at the edge of the screen
3. Is the normal-hitnormal left-only on purpose? I find it a bit distracting, so maybe reconvert the hitsound to mono.
   I don't have a normal-hitnormal. However, Converted Normal-Hitclap to Mono.

[Easy]
00:39:576 (5) - The new-combos are different on the repeat, make it consistent
00:57:289 (4,5) - same goes for the repeat in the chorus
There might be more combos with inconsistencies on the copy-paste counterpart you should take care of.

[Normal]
Seems quite hard for a normal diff with all those return sliders and 1/2 streams.
00:13:506 (1,2,3,4,5) - Did you forget to flip/rotate this?

[Harder]
seems fine

[Cracked]
remove the inherited point that is exactly on the offset (472ms)
It's making it x0.65 bpm.

[Another]
remove green line on 472ms here too
It's making it x0.80 bpm.
00:45:090 (8) - somehow seems out of place
01:02:971 (4,5,1,2,1,2) - pretty extreme pattern, hard to read and tough spacing (maybe flip the whole purple combo before - horizontally)

The mapset is quite on the harder side and the jump from [Easy] to [Normal] in difficulty is a bit harsh, since [Easy] is very simple and [Normal] can actually be considered as hard diff already.

RandomJibberish wrote:

There is no longer any issue with adding multiple timing sections on top of each other.

General
Aaaah this SB makes me feel drunk. Great job.
Decrease the opacity or size of the hit lighting slightly? It gets pretty distracting on the more clustered sections
I'd probably add a centrepoint to the spinner, since some people find spinning difficult without one.
I'd suggest tick 2 on all diffs. Tick 1 at least, 0.5 should never be used on anything ever

galvenize's Another
00:10:498 (8) - Please don't silence hitobjects.
00:26:708 (1,2,1) - Wow this spacing is confusing as fuck
In fact generally the spacing here is pretty ridiculous but I guess I just suck too much to appreciate it :/

Harder
00:52:945 (1,2,3,4) (+copypasta) - Flip this horizontally? Makes things a bit less clustered
01:12:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'd probably kill the stacks here and make it evenly spaced, like this

01:36:060 (3) - Increase the volume a bit so it isn't so almost silenced, then move 1/2 forward? (spacing appropriately of course)

Easy
If you're going to map from the beginning on the other diffs please do so on this one. The map isn't even long :/
The use of super low spacing compared to sliderspeed is much more confusing and difficult than just using 1.0 DS IMO, but nothing technically wrong I guess.

So yeah, call be back when this is done