Leorda wrote:

galvenize's Another
00:24:201 (5,1) - These jumps are surprising. Not really.
00:44:923 (7,8) - ^
00:46:427 (4) - New combo, since it's jumps, mkay.
00:57:457 (4,5) - These jumps are surprising[/color] Not really.
01:04:141 (2) - This 0,5x BPM slider are sudden!. Fits the song imo.
01:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The pattern are feels random for me, maybe? :/
01:11:327 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These pattern are messy Got to agree with you on this one, remapped.

Durarara remix are awesome <3

Leorda wrote:

Yo

General
✔1) Your MP3 Bit Rate is 320kbps, and it's unrankable. Please re-encode it to 128kbps or 192kbps
✔ 2) Remove "Techno" and "anime", since that words it's in the Genre when BAT ranked this map
Too much work.3) BPM : 179,50?
Roar out louder.4) The hitsound volume is too loud, please reduce it, otherwise, player's ear will be hurt

Easy
00:27:209 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try something neat pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42485
✔ 01:15:338 (1,2,3) - Move 1 grid up to make diamond pattern?

Hard
00:00:472 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Ugh, you copy paste this pattern too much >.<
✔ 00:22:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:08:988 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
01:12:998 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These pattern are strange for me, maybe?
✔ 01:14:001 (1) - Remove new combo?

Insane
✔ 00:22:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 00:48:767 (1) - ^
✔ 00:53:279 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music
✔ 00:59:462 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:03:974 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8
01:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You should remap this, because when I test this, it's kinda overlapping. Please make it spread it out OR set the BPM Multiplier to 0.75x
✔ 01:20:853 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:25:365 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music
✔ 01:31:548 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:36:060 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music


Durarara remix are awesome <3

Mustaash wrote:

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG *W*
sorry for the 3 weeks late

[General]

1. Offset: 470ms

[galvenize's]

✔ 00:00:472 - Down the volume 3 ticks
✔ 00:10:498 (8) - Whistle? *w*
✔ 00:10:832 - Same as 00:00:472
✔ 00:10:832 (9) - At the finish of slider, finish? *w*
✔ 00:25:037 (1) - Remove new combo
✔ 00:28:713 (1) - ^
✔ 00:38:573 (1) - ^
✔ 00:58:794 (1) - ^
✔ 01:26:367 (x) - Add a note
✔ 01:26:451 (x) - ^
✔ 01:26:534 (1) - Remove New Combo

Fine , Good Diff

[Insane]

Why 1/8 ; That unrankable. What 'chu talkin' 'bout, Willis?

✔ 01:08:152 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:16:842 (7) - Made this slider like : http://puu.sh/AQS
✔ 01:25:365 (3) - make longer 1 1/8 tick.
✔ 01:36:060 (3) - ^

Good Work

[Hard]
It isn't like a Hard, rename to [Normal+]?
or make harder the start of the song, because the kiai is a lot hardest compaired to the start.

Already , Nice diff.

[Easy]

Sorry i'm really bad to modding Easys xD ( because i'm bad on easy mapping )

00:41:582 (1) - Remove new combo

Well

+STAR *0*

Antu Villegas wrote:

Hi

General:

The HQ audio hasn't the same offset than the original. O: I'll fix this.

I liked the skin

Easy:

✔ 01:14:669 (1): Remove New combo. ✔

Hard:

✔ 00:58:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Correct the spacing, it can be confusing and it isn't too much work to fix it
✔ 01:20:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6): ^

• Source shouldn't be the album title...(viewtopic.php?f=6&t=24765)
  
  So, Source: DuRaRaRa!!
  
  Tags: drrr! remix Cyclick(you missed a k) C78 (Release during C78?...)
  
  Though the map needs countdown, a 2s is enough imo.
  
  Adjust normal-hitclap if you could...The sound comes from right sound channel is much weaker than left.

• 00:32:557 (1,1,1,1) - huh, I prefer using only one combo here, also you'd better have a new combo at 00:34:228 (2)
  00:37:905 (1,1,1,1,2) - ^ also 00:40:913 (3) - new combo instead of 00:41:582 (1)? o.o
  00:57:289 (1) - Remove new combo
  00:58:626 (3) - New combo here instead of 00:59:963 (1)
  01:18:679 (1,2,3) - ^
  01:29:374 (1,2,3) - ^

• 00:47:096 (6) - Finish end instead of slience?
  01:11:996 (9,10,1) - kinda hard to read, change the ending position?

• 00:19:857 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
  01:00:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - No hitsounds? (Copy from second kiai?)
  01:11:661 (T) - add a note here? (Just follow vocal here...? I don't know why you left a blank)

• 00:30:217 (1) - Remove new combo?

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Source shouldn't be the album title...(viewtopic.php?f=6&t=24765)
  
  So, Source: DuRaRaRa!! But the dong itsn't from Durarara, 'tis a remix. Oh well...
  
  Tags: drrr! remix Cyclick(you missed a k) C78 (Release during C78?...) The album is called Cyclic. And I don't think the comiket matters.
  
  Though the map needs countdown, a 2s is enough imo.
  
  Adjust normal-hitclap if you could...The sound comes from right sound channel is much weaker than left.

Fixed. it's a mono track now.

[Easy]

• ✔ 00:32:557 (1,1,1,1) - huh, I prefer using only one combo here, also you'd better have a new combo at 00:34:228 (2)
  ✔ 00:37:905 (1,1,1,1,2) - ^ also 00:40:913 (3) - new combo instead of 00:41:582 (1)? o.o
  ✔ 00:57:289 (1) - Remove new combo
  ✔ 00:58:626 (3) - New combo here instead of 00:59:963 (1)
  ✔ 01:18:679 (1,2,3) - ^
  ✔ 01:29:374 (1,2,3) - ^

[Hard]

✔ AR+1~2 to reduce stacking issues like 01:11:996 (9,10,1) ... Also higher AR would make stream looks nicer.

• 00:47:096 (6) - Finish end instead of slience?
  ✔ 01:11:996 (9,10,1) - kinda hard to read, change the ending position?

[Insane]

• 00:19:857 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
  ✔ 01:00:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - No hitsounds? (Copy from second kiai?)
  ✔ 01:11:661 (T) - add a note here? (Just follow vocal here...? I don't know why you left a blank)

[galvenize's Another]

• ✔ 00:30:217 (1) - Remove new combo?

Nice~

lol, SB is pretty nice!~Take my star~

galvenize wrote:

Oh just a detail, would you please remove the note (2) at 01:26:451 in my diff?

Doesn't sounds good with it.

Thank you!

Selee wrote:

So, Source: DuRaRaRa!! But the dong itsn't from Durarara, 'tis a remix. Oh well...

Example：Touhou

http://j-corehaven.blogspot.com/2010/10 ... alert.html

C78 and Cyclick

CracK wrote:

I couldn't resist making a guest diff for this

ziin wrote:

Hi, good map, star for sharpnel.

Can you us this instead for your spinner? I hate non-symmetrical spinners.
http://puu.sh/LuN

ziin wrote:

[normal]
00:46:260 (1,2,3,4,5) - just a suggestion to make it like the previous section with whistles on the beat and not off the beat.

CracK wrote:

I couldn't resist making a guest diff for this
Tell me if you like it! I think it came out quite good =)

LesTrucsRose wrote:

no. looks the same.

LesTrucsRose wrote:

wtf i have no [normal]

galvenize wrote:

Where are the MATs :<

Shiirn wrote:

General
I really liked what you did, except for the fact that every difficulty pretty much only had a few chunks of it actually mapped, the rest just copy+pasted in. Even if the background beat is identical, you could at least put some variation in there. This doesn't apply to cracked or galvenize's difficulty.

Easy
Nothing.

Hard
At least change the copy+pasted parts by flipping them or rotating them.
Also, the entire thing was copy+pasted...
Insane
✔ 00:53:279 (3) - change the volume on this.
✔ 01:03:974 (3) - ^
✔ 01:36:060 (3) - ^

CracKed
They barely made it. I made them a little bit longer just now. Deal with it. Even if auto can get 2000s on spinners like the ranking requirements say, it's still an extremely dick move. Please consider changing it.

CracK wrote:

Why do you make changes in my diff, without asking me >_<
2Shiirn I am not very fond of spinners also, and I am very bad at completing spinners ~_~. But these ones I can easily 300.
Also they perfectly fit in my opinion and I can't think of any other better way to map these parts.
Anyway, here is my updated version.
I decreased AR by 1 and made one jump a bit easier.

galvenize wrote:

Where are the MATs :<

footix31 wrote:

Wait why are you giving kudo to all the post? D:

Shiirn wrote:

^it didn't add my star for some reason.

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Antu Villegas wrote:

Hi

General:

The HQ audio hasn't the same offset than the original. O: I'll fix this.

I liked the skin

Easy:

✔ 01:14:669 (1): Remove New combo. ✔

Hard:

✔ 00:58:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Correct the spacing, it can be confusing and it isn't too much work to fix it
✔ 01:20:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6): ^

Kudosu Guidelines


Did the post help you in any way to improve your map?
Did the modder post things that AIMod cannot pick up?
Did the post show that the modder has knowledge of modding?
Did the modder post things that generally make sense to you and seem not too terribly picky? If their post did seem picky, are you sure that the things pointed out can improve your mapset anyways?
Even if you don't follow the modder's advice, did you not follow it because of your personal choice only, and not because the modding seemed pointless to you?
Did you not already give the modder kudosu for a mod post on the same map recently?
If you can answer yes to all of these questions, feel free to give the modder their well-earned kudosu!

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
:3
:3

[Hard]
:3
:3

[Insane]
would make it a jumpstream. o: 01:01:969 (1,2,3,4) - [Nazi] Consider about 2-3 spacing :3?
✔ 01:09:155 - [Suggestion] Delete this break?

[CracKed]
00:11:000 (5,1) - Wonder about this holding change trick but orz
00:32:390 (5,1) - ^

[galvenize's Another]
So Expert orz



So Insane map orz
Anyway good luck ;_;

ps. I think it's star-symbol-worth but need 1 more MAT checking as I saw since there're too many INSANE patterns ;_;



edit.
'Post is exempt of kudosu.'
I wonder if this is possible on Pending forum, NOT Ranked/Approved forum orz
I kudosu'd many posts in this thread and abalee denied them.

LesTrucsRose wrote:

I kudosu'd many posts in this thread and abalee denied them.

1. make the 2nd KIAI in all diff start at 01:15:338.
2. you'll meet problem while ranking this. 3 insane is unrankable now. remove 1 Insane and try to map a Normal for this.
3. remove 'Techno' from the tags, it'll be the genre when this get ranked
4. enable the epliepsy warning.

1. 00:00:472 (T) - don't set more than 1 section at the same point. ask the creator to set the offset -864.
2. AR 9 is perferred
3. 00:21:361 (5,6,7) - HP touch
4. 01:15:672 (T) - 1 note here.

1. what happened to the source?

1. 01:02:136 (2,3,4) - spacing

1. disable audio lean-in in this diff

Colin Hou wrote:

[galvenize's Another]:

1. 00:00:472 (T) - don't set more than 1 section at the same point. ask the creator to set the offset -864.
2. AR 9 is perferred Gladly.
3. 00:21:361 (5,6,7) - HP touch fixed
4. 01:15:672 (T) - 1 note here. Fixed

peppy wrote:

[*]A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc.