For my sig.
SliderBorder : 0,0,0- Your mp3 is of 320, you need a 256 or 128 mp3 or something that is not 320, here, take this one but remember offset might change
lovhin456 wrote:
Hi ~
General;
- Meh, uhhm, border of the slider would look better with black, add this down the last combo color Fixed.SliderBorder : 0,0,0- Your mp3 is of 320, you need a 256 or 128 mp3 or something that is not 320, here, take this one but remember offset might change
http://www.mediafire.com/?adg43b11vypm442 I'm keeping my 320 unless it's a problem with filesize in the future. I also have a high-quality 525kbps .ogg. Maybe that?
Skin;
- Spinner-BG and spinner approach circle ... red ... ?? Why ?? I don't see any red on the BG, doesn't fit imo Fixed. It's now... orangish. (Included)
- Your hitcircle is so dark, that it makes the colors of the circle on the game all ... dark when in the BG they are very bright Fixed. It's lighter.
- Probably a good idea to add a spinner-clear, spinner-osu and spinner-spin I knew I forgot something. Added.
Blow;
- 01:04:977 >> remove whistle, add finish Fixed
- 01:08:152 (1,3) >> add whistle Fixed
- 01:10:324 >> add finish Fixed
- You can probably create a pattern with claps
- 1st kiai time ends here: 01:04:643 Fixed
- 2nd kiai time ends here: 01:36:728 Fixed
Out;
- I strongly believe those custom hitsounds don't fit at all, for me they sound horrible :<
- Better get a hitsound expert for this orz
- Wooops ~ Check kiai time, make it start and end on a note :< Fixed
Louder;
- Still get someone to check your hitsounds
- Uhmm, well paced notes on the timeline :>
- Curve some sliders better
- 00:26:541 >> unrankable spinner, auto must be able to do a bonus of 2000 Removed spinner
* Star !! :3
Ummm, I wonder, what is so bad about the spinner ?? Umm, specify, the spinner-circle ?? spinner-BG ?? :3La Cataline wrote:
star for the artwork
but the spinner is horrible...
No ;<LesTrucsRose wrote:
Happy now?
[attachment=0:b0b8a]spinner-circle.png[/attachment:b0b8a]
Down down down.Verdisphena wrote:
No ;<LesTrucsRose wrote:
Happy now?
[attachment=0:ac258]spinner-circle.png[/attachment:ac258]
Seriously, if you don't like it, then at least you could try to give some good explanations on why, or say what would make it look better :IVerdisphena wrote:
No ;<
Me, too. Damnit.Charles445 wrote:
I really liked the first one - the one with just the character.
Odaril wrote:
Sorry for the late mod, I've had a lot of problems lately.
Please remember that these are only suggestions. Feel free to ignore any of them.
General:
Your mp3 bitrate is 320kbps, which is unrankable. You have to scale it down to 256kbps at most. Scaled down to 256kbps
Moreover, storyboard pictures must be below 800x600px. This concerns: Resized all. ;-;
- Oversharpened.png
- Blured.png
- Blackandwhite.png
- WhiteBEAT.png (edit: forgot .png)
I'd recommend you to add a approachcircle.png Addedapproach circle[attachment=0:17f09]approachcircle.png[/attachment:17f09]
Storyboard:
00:16:514 - For a reason I don't understand, the Storyboard load goes above 10 right before this point. It might go down when you scale the pictures down, though. It still happens. Oh well...
Normal (Blow):
This feels more like a Easy to me. If you set the circle size to 1 (that is, the biggest) it will be a decent Easy. Then it's an easy.
01:14:669 (1) - I think it would be better moved 18 grids lvl 3 down - it would be symmetrical to (3) and wouldn't hidden by the spinner. Fixed.
Hard (Out):
This whole diff feels bland at times in my humble opinion: too many times there are gaps between the notes. The low spacing makes it slow, too, which reinforces the bland feeling. Moreover, the beginning is the same pattern that repeats 6 times: here again, it reinforces the bland feeling. You should try to fill in the blanks between notes, based on the music.
00:16:514 (1) - This crescendo is great <3
00:26:541 - This is an example of a gap that should have had notes in it. Added notes.
00:31:889 - ^ No music, no notes.
00:53:279 - here again - add a spinner here that ends at 00:53:947 - ? Or a slider Added
01:25:365 - same ? a spinner that starts here and ends at 01:26:033 - ? Or a slider Added
Insane (Louder):
The blandness strikes again )= though a lot less than on Hard
00:16:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - This stream and the crescendo with it are really good <3
00:26:541 - add circles somehow here ? fixed
00:29:549 (1) - This note is too high and touches the HP bar, it looks bad to mefixed
00:34:730 (4) - maybe... make a slider that starts here and leads to the next note ? Won't fit.
00:40:077 (4) - ^ Won't fit.
01:04:977 (1) - the low slider speed and the low distance snapping starting here make this whole part confusingly overlapping, try to at least space the notes a bit more ? no.
This map is not bad ! it can be made pretty good relatively easily. Keep working on it ! Fix the unrankable stuff and I will give it a star (not the icon).
Thanks for the mod!noneed wrote:
Hi!
Blow:
✓ CS one more to large?
✓ 01:14:669 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j would look better imo
Out:
✓ 00:11:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ctrl+j
✓ 00:37:069 (6) - dat jump ;_;
✓ 01:15:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j
Louder:
X 00:37:905 (1) - delete that and make a spinner from 00:37:236 to 00:37:905
✓ 01:15:672 - ctrl+h and ctr+j
yeah that's it
Starrr!!!
Disoy wrote:
[Blow]
X 00:33:560 (1) - remove this circle?
X 00:38:908 (1) - ^
X 00:51:274 (1) - these slider change spinner?
X 01:23:359 (1) - ^
[Out]
✔ CS+1
✔ 00:27:042 (1) - add a hitclap?
✔ 00:27:209 (2) - add a hitfinish?
X 00:29:549 (1) - these slider is long..
X 00:35:231 (5) - add a note?
X 00:38:907 (4) - remove this circle?
X 00:49:603 (7) - add a note?
✔ 01:14:001 (1) - add a new combo?
[Louder]
X 00:19:857 (11) - add a note and spinner move to 00:20:024?
✔ 00:26:708 (3) - add a note?
X 00:33:560 (3) - remove this circle?
X 00:33:894 (4) - add a note?
X 00:38:908 (4) - remove this circle?
wmfchris wrote:
[general]
mp3@320kbps, compress it to 128~192
[Louder]
✔ 0:31:220 (6,7) (6) left 1 grid, (7) left 2 grid?
✔ 1:02:303 (3,4,5) left 1 grid
✔ 1:34:723 (5) right 1 grid
nice diff~
[Out]
✔ 0:34:228 (1,2,3,4) this looks weird, (4) right down 1 grid?
removed bookmarks 0:35:398 *this is not important, but why there's so many bookmark 0.0
✔ 0:48:266 (1~6) uneven spacing, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/39392 ?
✔ 1:20:351 (1~6) ^
✔ 1:30:879 (1~6) ^
[Blow]
no problem
star~
ErufenRito wrote:
Sighs, i thought i posted my mod? I guess i never did, Anyways, here's a quick remod
First thoughts: The combo numbers could be bigger, they are almost invisible in the yellow combo colour. But this is just me.
Louder:
I used a slider in this point. 01:11:661 - Consider adding a circle here
Out:
✔ 00:43:586 (1,2,3) - Im really against positioning them at the center. The combo hits of 00:42:250 (3,4) and the spinner's hits are still visible, making them hard to see, besides... They are yellow, and the combo numbers are so small, and the spacing is so small, making them even harder to see. So ill suggest to move them away from the center
x 01:11:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Hard to see
Anyways, as a general recommendation for your maps in the future, is to not use such small spacing, i personally thinks that it makes it harder cause its harder to see, and it doesn't look so good anyways.
Blow:
Found nothing wrong
HOLY DOO-DOO BISCUIT'S THAT'S HOT.galvenize wrote:
Here it is =).
Awesome song btw.