The same mod but now fixed (with images)!
Don't give me Kudosu again, you already gave me one, but please answer the fixed mod though.
HEAVENLY
1) 00:04:500 (4500|1,4500|0,4500|6,4500|2) - If you wanted to emphasize the "piano chord" it is one 1/4 snap above, there are more "mistakes" like that in the beginning, that's why I don't know if it was make on purpose.
2) 00:05:925 (5925|5) - I just want that note there; very little detail but I think it feels better.
3) 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22425|3,22500|1,22575|2,22650|3,22725|4) - boring staris D: what about this? 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22350|4,22425|3,22425|0,22500|2,22500|5,22575|0,22575|4,22650|1,22650|3) |
boring stairs D: 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23700|2,23775|4,23850|6,23925|5,24000|4,24075|3) - what about this? 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23625|6,23700|1,23700|4,23775|2,23775|6,23850|3,23850|5,23925|2,23925|4,24000|6,24075|4)
4) 00:24:375 (24375|3,24450|2) - Add these two here, it feels better in my opinion.
5) 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|5,25125|4,25200|3,25275|2,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|3,25650|4) - This has to be more "lively", you can do it with your own patterns, but this is my suggestion: 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24750|1,24825|5,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|4,25050|1,25050|5,25125|0,25125|3,25200|2,25200|1,25200|4,25275|3,25275|5,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|1,25575|3,25650|0,25650|4)
6) 00:27:075 (27075|3,27150|4,27225|5,27300|3,27300|1,27300|6,27375|4,27450|5,27525|3,27600|1,27675|4,27750|2,27750|6,27750|5,27825|3,27900|4,27900|1,27900|6) - This also has to be more lively. 00:28:275 (28275|4,28350|3,28425|2,28500|5,28500|0,28500|1,28575|3,28650|1,28725|2,28800|3,28875|4,28950|0,28950|5,28950|2,29025|5,29025|2,29025|0,29100|3,29175|4,29250|5,29325|3) - this one too, I won't suggest patterns for those two because I don't want to impose that much my style over your map,
do it lively with your style or you can also leave it like that, it's your decision, but I feel it has to be more lively :B ////// 00:37:875 (37875|3,37950|4,38025|5,38100|1,38100|3,38100|6,38175|4,38250|5,38325|3,38400|1,38475|2,38550|6,38550|5,38550|3,38625|2,38700|5,38700|4,38700|1,38775|3,38850|2,38925|4) - same here haha, if you want me to suggest I'll do it though.
7) Little detail, but you can add this note 01:31:830 (91830|5) - to emphasize the end of that part in conjunction with the "tiny bells" you can hear. Didn't add image because you understood where the note was
2) 00:05:925 (5925|5) - I just want that note there; very little detail but I think it feels better.
3) 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22425|3,22500|1,22575|2,22650|3,22725|4) - boring staris D: what about this? 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22350|4,22425|3,22425|0,22500|2,22500|5,22575|0,22575|4,22650|1,22650|3) |
boring stairs D: 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23700|2,23775|4,23850|6,23925|5,24000|4,24075|3) - what about this? 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23625|6,23700|1,23700|4,23775|2,23775|6,23850|3,23850|5,23925|2,23925|4,24000|6,24075|4)
4) 00:24:375 (24375|3,24450|2) - Add these two here, it feels better in my opinion.
5) 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|5,25125|4,25200|3,25275|2,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|3,25650|4) - This has to be more "lively", you can do it with your own patterns, but this is my suggestion: 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24750|1,24825|5,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|4,25050|1,25050|5,25125|0,25125|3,25200|2,25200|1,25200|4,25275|3,25275|5,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|1,25575|3,25650|0,25650|4)
6) 00:27:075 (27075|3,27150|4,27225|5,27300|3,27300|1,27300|6,27375|4,27450|5,27525|3,27600|1,27675|4,27750|2,27750|6,27750|5,27825|3,27900|4,27900|1,27900|6) - This also has to be more lively. 00:28:275 (28275|4,28350|3,28425|2,28500|5,28500|0,28500|1,28575|3,28650|1,28725|2,28800|3,28875|4,28950|0,28950|5,28950|2,29025|5,29025|2,29025|0,29100|3,29175|4,29250|5,29325|3) - this one too, I won't suggest patterns for those two because I don't want to impose that much my style over your map,
do it lively with your style or you can also leave it like that, it's your decision, but I feel it has to be more lively :B ////// 00:37:875 (37875|3,37950|4,38025|5,38100|1,38100|3,38100|6,38175|4,38250|5,38325|3,38400|1,38475|2,38550|6,38550|5,38550|3,38625|2,38700|5,38700|4,38700|1,38775|3,38850|2,38925|4) - same here haha, if you want me to suggest I'll do it though.
7) Little detail, but you can add this note 01:31:830 (91830|5) - to emphasize the end of that part in conjunction with the "tiny bells" you can hear. Didn't add image because you understood where the note was
jachnokads' MAXIMUM
How to make the images tinier?1) 00:14:025 (14025|6) - add this note here
and erase this one 00:14:100 (14100|6) //// add these notes 00:14:175 (14175|6,14250|5) 0014:475 (14475|6,14550|5)
all of that to make the stairs funnier.
2) 00:21:675 (21675|6,21675|3,21750|2,21750|5,21825|1,21825|4,21900|3,21900|0,21900|6,21975|5,21975|2,22050|1,22050|4,22125|0,22125|3) - You used that pattern previously for "piano stairs" sounds, try to use other for those sounds you heard there (you can still use them though, is just a suggestion), try this: 00:21:675 (21675|6,21675|2,21675|3,21675|5,21750|1,21750|4,21750|0,21825|5,21825|6,21825|3,21900|0,21900|4,21975|5,21975|2,21975|3,22050|4,22050|1)
3) This
start here 00:42:450 (42450|5)
4) Little detail: add this note 01:23:550 (83550|1) - feels better.
5) This is more lively 01:29:805 (89805|5,89880|4,89955|3,90030|2,90105|1) - you can try this: 01:29:880 (89880|4,89880|1,89955|2,89955|5,90030|1,90030|6,90030|3,90105|2)
or something else, but you understand what I try to say.
and erase this one 00:14:100 (14100|6) //// add these notes 00:14:175 (14175|6,14250|5) 0014:475 (14475|6,14550|5)
all of that to make the stairs funnier.
2) 00:21:675 (21675|6,21675|3,21750|2,21750|5,21825|1,21825|4,21900|3,21900|0,21900|6,21975|5,21975|2,22050|1,22050|4,22125|0,22125|3) - You used that pattern previously for "piano stairs" sounds, try to use other for those sounds you heard there (you can still use them though, is just a suggestion), try this: 00:21:675 (21675|6,21675|2,21675|3,21675|5,21750|1,21750|4,21750|0,21825|5,21825|6,21825|3,21900|0,21900|4,21975|5,21975|2,21975|3,22050|4,22050|1)
3) This
start here 00:42:450 (42450|5)
4) Little detail: add this note 01:23:550 (83550|1) - feels better.
5) This is more lively 01:29:805 (89805|5,89880|4,89955|3,90030|2,90105|1) - you can try this: 01:29:880 (89880|4,89880|1,89955|2,89955|5,90030|1,90030|6,90030|3,90105|2)
or something else, but you understand what I try to say.
Don't give me Kudosu again, you already gave me one, but please answer the fixed mod though.