1) 00:04:500 (4500|1,4500|0,4500|6,4500|2) - If you wanted to emphasize the "piano chord" it is one 1/4 snap above, there are more "mistakes" like that in the beginning, that's why I don't know if it was make on purpose.
I emphasized all kick sounds with 4 notes in that section2) 00:05:925 (5925|5) - I just want that note there; very little detail but I think it feels better.
It's a good suggestion, but i'll keep it because i want this part to run smoothly3) 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22425|3,22500|1,22575|2,22650|3,22725|4) - boring staris D: what about this? 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22350|4,22425|3,22425|0,22500|2,22500|5,22575|0,22575|4,22650|1,22650|3) | boring stairs D: 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23700|2,23775|4,23850|6,23925|5,24000|4,24075|3) - what about this? 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23625|6,23700|1,23700|4,23775|2,23775|6,23850|3,23850|5,23925|2,23925|4,24000|6,24075|4)
It's hard for me to know what you suggested because clicking those won't show me what you're trying to show me. If you could edit the post with links so that i can see them on a screenshot i'd appreciate it. You can take a screenshot and upload at the same time by pressing Shift + F124) 00:24:375 (24375|3,24450|2) - Add these two here, it feels better in my opinion.
I'd put them if the kick sound were clear enough, but no.
It's almost unhearable5) 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|5,25125|4,25200|3,25275|2,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|3,25650|4) - This has to be more "lively", you can do it with your own patterns, but this is my suggestion: 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24750|1,24825|5,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|4,25050|1,25050|5,25125|0,25125|3,25200|2,25200|1,25200|4,25275|3,25275|5,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|1,25575|3,25650|0,25650|4)
I think the current pattern works out nice considering the piano pitch. Once again i'm gonna need a screenshot to know what you're trying to show me6) 00:27:075 (27075|3,27150|4,27225|5,27300|3,27300|1,27300|6,27375|4,27450|5,27525|3,27600|1,27675|4,27750|2,27750|6,27750|5,27825|3,27900|4,27900|1,27900|6) - This also has to be more lively. 00:28:275 (28275|4,28350|3,28425|2,28500|5,28500|0,28500|1,28575|3,28650|1,28725|2,28800|3,28875|4,28950|0,28950|5,28950|2,29025|5,29025|2,29025|0,29100|3,29175|4,29250|5,29325|3) - this one too, I won't suggest patterns for those two because I don't want to impose that much my style over your map,
do it lively with your style or you can also leave it like that, it's your decision, but I feel it has to be more lively :B ////// 00:37:875 (37875|3,37950|4,38025|5,38100|1,38100|3,38100|6,38175|4,38250|5,38325|3,38400|1,38475|2,38550|6,38550|5,38550|3,38625|2,38700|5,38700|4,38700|1,38775|3,38850|2,38925|4) - same here haha, if you want me to suggest I'll do it though.
Hmm yes please, I am going to need examples because it seems fine for me in its current state. Only hearing that you feel it has to be more lively doesn't give me a clear explanation on how to improve those patterns 7) Little detail, but you can add this note 01:31:830 (91830|5) - to emphasize the end of that part in conjunction with the "tiny bells" you can hear.
I personally wouldn't add a jack there