CanadianBaka wrote:
m4m
[Hard]
00:19:371 (4) - this would go better with the music if it was an "S" shape
00:28:371 (1,1) - make these the same shape please doesnt really fits imo
[Normal]
00:12:371 (1,3) - this doesn't look so aesthetically pleasing, also awkward angle for noobies.
00:15:371 (3,1) - these overlap too much
00:18:121 (4,1) - make (4) point more downward for a better movement good point
00:23:371 (3,1) - again, these overlap too much. I like the overlapping idea and I see what your going for but in my opinion this is just too much
[Easy]
00:04:371 (1,2) - I wouldn't overlap here. it's inconsistent with your other slider did what blue dragon said, fits better imo
sorry I couldn't find much every mod counts <3
unmentioned = fixed pretty much everything lolBlue Dragon wrote:
[General][Easy]
- Preview point times are inconsistent between difficulties (Hard's is different than the rest) fixed
[Normal]
- 00:05:371 (2) - maybe move this to 104;76 so this sliderend doesn't nearly touch (1)'s sliderend? (don't forget to fix spacing with next note if you apply)
- 00:09:371 (2) - blanket can be improved by moving this slider to 95;248
- 00:17:371 (2) - for consistency, you only used whistles to follow the "ding" sound in other places of the song, so this shouldn't have a whistle at the end
- 00:20:371 (1) - move to 384;160 to make blanket look nicer?
- 00:24:371 (1) - This wave can be improved by moving the second sliderpoint to 348;208
- 00:26:371 (1) - same, just copy the previous slider
I think that near the end of your map, you can change your NCing pattern so you NC every 2 measures, so it doesn't look like every note has a NC. Would make it look less spammy in my opinion
fixed everything here[Hard]
- 00:08:371 (1) - Moving this slider to 344;212 would make it aligned with (4)'s direction
- 00:13:371 (3) - looks a bit weird, i'd rather make the slider completely horizontal and place it at 332;79 (don't forget to fix spacing afterwards)
- 00:15:371 (3,1) - this overlaps looks pretty ugly tbh, i would probably move 00:16:371 (1) - to 400;264 then move 00:17:121 (2) - to 420;60 so it looks nicer
- 00:18:371 (1) - maybe make this slider completely vertical and align (2) with it?
- 00:23:371 (3,1,2,3) - this whole part looks a bit ugly with the overlaps in my opinion, so here's what i did:
- move 00:23:371 (3) - to 336;108
- move 00:24:371 (1) - to 460;168
- move 00:25:371 (2) - to 268;332 (spacing adjust) did it just like that~- 00:31:371 (1) - no need to NC this, feels inconsistent
- 00:37:371 (3) - i think making this slider 1/2 shorter so it ends on the strong flute-ish beat would fit better with the song
pretty good map thanks!
- 00:08:246 (1,2) - NC should be in (2), not (1) since (2) is the start of the new measure
- 00:15:621 (1) - this NC feels inconsistent since you're NCing every 1 measure
- 00:23:621 (1) - ^
- 00:30:871 (2) - missing a whistle? you mean clap <:
- 00:32:371 (1) - missing a finish?
- 00:37:371 (1,3) - (3) should have NC, not (1), for consistency
- 00:39:871 (6) - move this to 388;0 for alignment
thanks for the mods c: