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Imai Asami - Hoshikuzu no Ring

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Lasse
looks fine now
#1

there are some green lines that got unsnapped by a few ms, but anything below 5ms still functions like it was snapped to the closest tick, so that shouldn't be an issue

some things still sound a little off, but should be alright at 100% and having them "simplified" as they are currently is way nicer for gameplay anyways
Topic Starter
Kalibe

IamKwan wrote:

where did you find ring?

It should be Ring instead of ring because it is a noun, not a particle.

Source: コープスパーティー Tortured Souls -暴虐された魂の呪叫- (seems different from yours)

http://5pb.jp/records/sp/asami/discogra ... /11th.html
http://mages.co.jp/wp/wp-content/upload ... 86_fix.pdf
confirmed meta
Lasse
Ring
Sotarks
<3
Lilyanna
woah nice
Rizia
just few thing

  1. 00:30:392 (7,1) - Y axis should be on 118, so it can have perfect manual stacking
  2. 00:42:191 - volume feel a bit noise, how about reduce to 30%
  3. 00:49:508 - ^
  4. 00:53:898 - set 40% volume will be better
  5. 04:32:129 (2,3) - how about this placement, 04:32:129 (2) - to 04:32:495 (3) - flow feel got cut here
    this will also work imo
call me back
Topic Starter
Kalibe
fixed all!! :3
Irohas
sofast
Rizia
#2
Topic Starter
Kalibe
thx rizia !
Garden
irc modded
2017-03-25 01:13 Garden: 00:07:800 - this part
2017-03-25 01:14 Garden: do u think volume is a bit too much there
2017-03-25 01:14 Garden: the clap sound is covering the music
2017-03-25 01:14 Garden: when i played this i thought i didnt turn music volume full on ;w;
2017-03-25 01:15 Kalibe: ooh
2017-03-25 01:15 Kalibe: probably
2017-03-25 01:16 Kalibe: 35% ?
2017-03-25 01:16 Garden: m works better
2017-03-25 01:17 Garden: 00:35:606 (6,7) - swap the drum clap-finish would fit imo
2017-03-25 01:18 Garden: 00:35:972 - pitch is lower it seems
2017-03-25 01:18 Kalibe: so
2017-03-25 01:19 Kalibe: add 00:35:606 (6) - head clap end finish?
2017-03-25 01:19 Kalibe: and same for 7 ?
2017-03-25 01:20 Garden: uh slider ends are optional here imo cuz it's passive
2017-03-25 01:20 Garden: i mean 00:35:606 - clap 00:35:972 - finish
2017-03-25 01:20 Kalibe: aa get it
2017-03-25 01:22 Garden: 03:17:314 (1,2) - hope its more spacing than 03:16:949 (7,8) - so best emphasize is laid on 03:17:314 (1,2,3,1) - the last vocals
2017-03-25 01:23 Garden: like 01:52:435 (1,2) - tho just a bit more spacing there but its something
2017-03-25 01:24 Kalibe: okay did something
2017-03-25 01:25 Kalibe: reduced 03:16:949 (7,8) - and increased a little bit 03:17:314 (1,2) -
2017-03-25 01:25 Garden: 03:58:013 - maybe 5% volume here like u did to same vocal pattern in kiais
2017-03-25 01:25 Garden: k
2017-03-25 01:25 Kalibe: okay
2017-03-25 01:26 Garden: 04:30:483 (1,2,1,2) -
2017-03-25 01:26 Garden: same i think it's even more intense
2017-03-25 01:27 Kalibe: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7644228
2017-03-25 01:27 Kalibe: ?
2017-03-25 01:29 Garden: looks nice
2017-03-25 01:30 Garden: 05:00:504 (1,2) - whistle on sliders is placed differently?
2017-03-25 01:30 Garden: happen to notice this
2017-03-25 01:31 Kalibe: 05:00:504 (1) - added whistle on repeat

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iYiyo
that was so fast o: Congrats!
Topic Starter
Kalibe
thx garden asdf

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Lilyanna
Gratsss \owo/
Agatsu
gratss! :3
Delis
BG is creepy :( sotarks is god
Reillia
PLZ TEACH ME MAPPING SENPAI :D
Kimitakari
CORPSE PARTY HOLY :0
NightlyNiko_old
these jumps are so hard :'v
meii18
gratz Kalibu!! i'm in love with creepy things <3
Komi-San7w7
orales :v
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