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[Sorrow]
nice job!- 00:23:716 (2) - maybe increase the spacing to (3) a bit more for emphasis, like you've done else where in the section like 00:22:252 (2) - 00:24:448 (4) - etc
- 00:35:240 (4) - this slider feels a bit weird compared to the following two as it starts on a weaker sound but ends on a much more stronger sound where as the following two both start on strong sounds. Maybe try two singles instead?
- 00:42:191 - probably not something you can/want to change but the SV in this section seems a little fast as the music feels less intense than the previous section
- 00:44:935 (5) - shouldn't this be close to (4) than (1) like in the rest of the section?
- 01:35:057 (2) - try moving this slider either 1/2 forward or backward, doesn't really fit right now as its kinda not mapping anything. It's undermapping 01:35:240 - and the vocals end 01:35:148 - mid way through the slider.
- 02:17:657 (4) - consider adding a note here 02:18:021 - so that its clickable, consistency with what you've done elsewhere like 02:11:826 (2,3) - 02:14:752 (2,3) - etc
- 02:28:837 (1) - clap?
- 02:29:203 (2) - 02:29:203 (2) - keeping this in DS feels a bit weird as the hitsound is pretty strong, additionally musically I think its the same as 02:28:837 (1) - so maybe more emphasis here?
- 03:04:141 (1,2,3) - jump here doesn't really fit as the vocals here become long and sustained when compared to 03:03:044 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - right before where its every 1/2. 04:17:312 (1) - like what you did here better.
- 03:45:849 (1) - imo looks better if you make the top part rounder? https://puu.sh/uBXGz.png
- 04:18:958 (2) - try moving this forward or back 1/2, 04:19:141 - really should be clickable with the drastic change in vocals and instruments.
- 04:48:408 (2) - try two singles here, matches the vocals better i think
Good luck! hope this was helpful