timing
00:03:043 - why not have this red line at 00:02:677 - already? this way you woudln't need another one on 00:07:068 -
00:08:531 - sliderend here sounds kinda late for drums, same for head of 00:08:714 - ?
00:10:018 - piano and drums seem way before this
00:10:749 (2) - kinda snapped to vocals, really late for drums
00:11:115 (3) - idk what this is supposed to land on, too early for piano
00:18:592 (1) - could also be off
some other things too0 2:19:485 (3,4) - really early
01:05:423 (6,7) - 1/6 sounds closer here I think, either way whistles on all notes of this would be nice with the high pitched thing // similar on 01:30:392 - maybe 02:30:301 (4,5) -
things in the guitar part overall like 03:29:019 (1,2,1) -
04:58:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not sure about these, especially 04:59:315 (6) -
and probably more stuff
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some of your hitsounding in the S:C2 parts seemed really hard to hear while playing this on 80/80 cause you used the default soft-slidertick as hitnormal, could at least increase volume of the sample a bit I think
00:29:204 (2) - since this has drum additions for that kind of sound, also doing so on 00:29:752 (5,6) - would be nice
00:41:368 (3,4) - this is so weird to read, just stack it normally with the slider or overlap it like similar patterns. 00:11:389 (4,1) - is much better
00:41:825 (6,7) - should probably have claps for snares
00:49:508 - now for this part your hitnormals seem a bit too loud with the song lol
00:53:716 (5) - why the noticeable spacing from for 4=>5? looks really weird and song would fit better with consitent or increasing ds
01:21:704 (1,2) - spacing seems a bit much for a rather weak sound on 2 in such a calm part
01:30:484 (1) - I think a gap would be better here, there's no real noticeable held sound on this. // 02:55:544 (2) - similar here, I think http://lasse.s-ul.eu/fiHoDPo8.jpg would fit the atmosphere of the song better
01:37:526 - with this custom hitnormal, sliderends like this should really be muted I think (or at least lower volume) // same for 01:43:106 (2) - etc
also as a personal comment: I think having a noticeable sv difference between things like 01:37:252 (2,1) - would fit really well
01:51:155 (2,3) - shouldnt this be a triple? I'm also a bit concerned about the jump sequence on 01:50:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - in general as it seems to blend so many layers together making it feel like it's just there cause the song is a bit more intense, but not really following anything. Don't really get why things like 01:51:155 (2) - have to be clickable and even be jumps. feels so weird after 01:49:874 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - which fits the vocals well rhythm wise
also 01:52:435 (1,2,3) - seems more intense due to the change in drums and 1/2 vocals + violins or whatever seeming a bit more intense, but suddenly it's a small spacing triangle when the song still seems to build intensity
02:06:978 (6) - missing whistle?
02:22:595 (4) - why is the biggest jump here when vocal is on 3 and 5?
02:46:580 (1,3) - piano on these but not on 2+4, so a square seems really unfitting. think either stacks or something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/KcSmYHdb.jpg would make more sense
03:03:501 - 1/4 is so weak, I think deleting this and making the pattern follow vocals fully would feel much better
03:16:031 (2) - similar issue with the jump pattern here as first chorus, at least 03:17:312 (1,2,3) - is executed a bit better here
03:30:666 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why is the spacing on this so broken?
03:34:323 (1,1) - 1/4 sliders seem too "long" for this kind of sound, either circles or 1/8 seems nicer (also mute ends cause) // 03:37:251 (1,1) - etc
03:45:849 (1) - nice idea with the sliderslide sound, but you should use a sampleset with muted normal-slidertick for that cause the tick is loud and unfitting
03:50:879 (5) - dont think this one fits at all
03:52:983 (2,1,2,1,2) - seems pretty overdone for such a calm bridge
04:10:269 - would be much better if muted/lower volume
04:10:361 (1) - what is this rhythm lol. song rhythm is similar to 01:32:313 (2,3,4,5,6) - here, you're like half a measure off or something
04:29:202 (2) - same issue with jumps here as other kiais
and then stack on 04:30:300 (8) - vocal kills intensity a bit :c
04:31:214 (1,2,3) - now these feel really unfitting, the vocal is held from before and drums don't seem that intense, lower spacing more linear patterning would ffit better I think
05:07:783 (1) - might be cuter if the curves http://lasse.s-ul.eu/MMZVL6Z5.jpg here were more similar
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get timing/snapping checked cause it seems kinda lol
00:03:043 - why not have this red line at 00:02:677 - already? this way you woudln't need another one on 00:07:068 -
00:08:531 - sliderend here sounds kinda late for drums, same for head of 00:08:714 - ?
00:10:018 - piano and drums seem way before this
00:10:749 (2) - kinda snapped to vocals, really late for drums
00:11:115 (3) - idk what this is supposed to land on, too early for piano
00:18:592 (1) - could also be off
some other things too0 2:19:485 (3,4) - really early
01:05:423 (6,7) - 1/6 sounds closer here I think, either way whistles on all notes of this would be nice with the high pitched thing // similar on 01:30:392 - maybe 02:30:301 (4,5) -
things in the guitar part overall like 03:29:019 (1,2,1) -
04:58:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not sure about these, especially 04:59:315 (6) -
and probably more stuff
map
some of your hitsounding in the S:C2 parts seemed really hard to hear while playing this on 80/80 cause you used the default soft-slidertick as hitnormal, could at least increase volume of the sample a bit I think
00:29:204 (2) - since this has drum additions for that kind of sound, also doing so on 00:29:752 (5,6) - would be nice
00:41:368 (3,4) - this is so weird to read, just stack it normally with the slider or overlap it like similar patterns. 00:11:389 (4,1) - is much better
00:41:825 (6,7) - should probably have claps for snares
00:49:508 - now for this part your hitnormals seem a bit too loud with the song lol
00:53:716 (5) - why the noticeable spacing from for 4=>5? looks really weird and song would fit better with consitent or increasing ds
01:21:704 (1,2) - spacing seems a bit much for a rather weak sound on 2 in such a calm part
01:30:484 (1) - I think a gap would be better here, there's no real noticeable held sound on this. // 02:55:544 (2) - similar here, I think http://lasse.s-ul.eu/fiHoDPo8.jpg would fit the atmosphere of the song better
01:37:526 - with this custom hitnormal, sliderends like this should really be muted I think (or at least lower volume) // same for 01:43:106 (2) - etc
also as a personal comment: I think having a noticeable sv difference between things like 01:37:252 (2,1) - would fit really well
01:51:155 (2,3) - shouldnt this be a triple? I'm also a bit concerned about the jump sequence on 01:50:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - in general as it seems to blend so many layers together making it feel like it's just there cause the song is a bit more intense, but not really following anything. Don't really get why things like 01:51:155 (2) - have to be clickable and even be jumps. feels so weird after 01:49:874 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - which fits the vocals well rhythm wise
also 01:52:435 (1,2,3) - seems more intense due to the change in drums and 1/2 vocals + violins or whatever seeming a bit more intense, but suddenly it's a small spacing triangle when the song still seems to build intensity
02:06:978 (6) - missing whistle?
02:22:595 (4) - why is the biggest jump here when vocal is on 3 and 5?
02:46:580 (1,3) - piano on these but not on 2+4, so a square seems really unfitting. think either stacks or something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/KcSmYHdb.jpg would make more sense
03:03:501 - 1/4 is so weak, I think deleting this and making the pattern follow vocals fully would feel much better
03:16:031 (2) - similar issue with the jump pattern here as first chorus, at least 03:17:312 (1,2,3) - is executed a bit better here
03:30:666 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why is the spacing on this so broken?
03:34:323 (1,1) - 1/4 sliders seem too "long" for this kind of sound, either circles or 1/8 seems nicer (also mute ends cause) // 03:37:251 (1,1) - etc
03:45:849 (1) - nice idea with the sliderslide sound, but you should use a sampleset with muted normal-slidertick for that cause the tick is loud and unfitting
03:50:879 (5) - dont think this one fits at all
03:52:983 (2,1,2,1,2) - seems pretty overdone for such a calm bridge
04:10:269 - would be much better if muted/lower volume
04:10:361 (1) - what is this rhythm lol. song rhythm is similar to 01:32:313 (2,3,4,5,6) - here, you're like half a measure off or something
04:29:202 (2) - same issue with jumps here as other kiais
and then stack on 04:30:300 (8) - vocal kills intensity a bit :c
04:31:214 (1,2,3) - now these feel really unfitting, the vocal is held from before and drums don't seem that intense, lower spacing more linear patterning would ffit better I think
05:07:783 (1) - might be cuter if the curves http://lasse.s-ul.eu/MMZVL6Z5.jpg here were more similar
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get timing/snapping checked cause it seems kinda lol