Hello,
M4M from queue
00:18:592 (1) - I believe you could start this on the white tick 00:18:432, I think it will not catch players so off guard as well as I believe the sound of piano actually begins here
00:31:948 (3) - This makes such a significant drum sound passive, perhaps make the drum a circle, but even more-so the slider head seems less significant than the slider end which I disagree with
00:34:874 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm choice could be changed. https://puu.sh/uBMzX/e924349209.jpg (You did this rhythm for 00:39:996 (2,3,1,2) -)
00:37:801 (3) - Similar to previous statement, significant drum sound becomes passive
01:31:765 (1) - Imo I would start the kiai here
02:17:657 (4) - Previously, and after this, you emphasized the snare but now the snare became passive in this situation. Consider making the snare not passive.
02:56:092 (3) - I'm not too sure I agree with this because you have not done something similar where you end a slider a blue tick followed by a stream. I believe having 02:55:544 (2) - end on the white tick makes more sense.
02:56:641 (1) - Begin kiai
03:31:214 (1,2,3) - I do not believe this is a strong choice for this situation. I would follow the four distinct drums.
03:43:105 (1,2,1) - This spacing makes it seem like all three sounds are equally as powerful when they are not. Perhaps change to something like https://puu.sh/uBOrJ/a223b979b1.jpg or could change distances between.
03:45:849 (1) - Significant drum sound becomes passive
04:10:361 (1) - Begin kiai
04:30:117 (7,8) - This caught me off guard because I do not believe you a stack like this in the two previously similar kiais
04:33:409 (1) - Quite a strong strong, perhaps some larger spacing similar to that of 03:20:056 (3,1) -
Overall really solid in my opinion,
Gl with the map
M4M from queue
00:18:592 (1) - I believe you could start this on the white tick 00:18:432, I think it will not catch players so off guard as well as I believe the sound of piano actually begins here
00:31:948 (3) - This makes such a significant drum sound passive, perhaps make the drum a circle, but even more-so the slider head seems less significant than the slider end which I disagree with
00:34:874 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm choice could be changed. https://puu.sh/uBMzX/e924349209.jpg (You did this rhythm for 00:39:996 (2,3,1,2) -)
00:37:801 (3) - Similar to previous statement, significant drum sound becomes passive
01:31:765 (1) - Imo I would start the kiai here
02:17:657 (4) - Previously, and after this, you emphasized the snare but now the snare became passive in this situation. Consider making the snare not passive.
02:56:092 (3) - I'm not too sure I agree with this because you have not done something similar where you end a slider a blue tick followed by a stream. I believe having 02:55:544 (2) - end on the white tick makes more sense.
02:56:641 (1) - Begin kiai
03:31:214 (1,2,3) - I do not believe this is a strong choice for this situation. I would follow the four distinct drums.
03:43:105 (1,2,1) - This spacing makes it seem like all three sounds are equally as powerful when they are not. Perhaps change to something like https://puu.sh/uBOrJ/a223b979b1.jpg or could change distances between.
03:45:849 (1) - Significant drum sound becomes passive
04:10:361 (1) - Begin kiai
04:30:117 (7,8) - This caught me off guard because I do not believe you a stack like this in the two previously similar kiais
04:33:409 (1) - Quite a strong strong, perhaps some larger spacing similar to that of 03:20:056 (3,1) -
Overall really solid in my opinion,
Gl with the map