[Normal]
- 00:57:719 (1,2,1) - In this place, I don't really agree with the placement of those circles, cause it makes a triple stack that can be misunderstood by the player, since it's new to him. Since those beats are strong, it would have been better to have them spaced instead of stacked, or at least having this slider: 00:58:657 (1) - moved. (If you apply it here, don't forget to do same for this one: 01:59:594 (1,2,1) - / 02:44:594 (1,2,1) - )
- 01:16:000 (5,6) - This might be too hard for a new player this is the only times you see it in the song, two circles next to them can be misread, especially when they have a small gap like this, why not making this 01:15:532 (4) - as a reversed slider instead? So it would look more friendly towards beginners. (Same thing for here 02:17:407 (4,5,6) - / 02:58:657 (4,5,6) - but if you want, you can add diversity in your patterns)
- 01:16:469 - to 01:17:407 (1) - I feel this is pretty undermapped compared to the rest of the kiai, especially cause the part I timestamped is still in the kiai. Having a spinner here is making the map less representative of the song, cause it's avoiding a lot of important beat that could have been mapped. I noticed that you mapped the vocals here, so if you're focused on the vocals, you should map this too: 01:16:703 - (Same thingy here: 02:18:813 (7,1) - )
- 01:49:282 (3) - Having the slider going back on the previous slider isn't making the thing easier for the new player, it can confuse the player, and also, it's making the flow less fluid on this part. In my opinion, it should be moved elsewhere, cause there is no real reason in the sound to doing a step backwards, you see...
- 03:05:688 (2,3,4) - Make the slider "1" in the same way as "3" for consistancy, like this, so it will be enhancing your pattern, since it will be more emphasized with the song.
- 03:45:532 (1) - Why you mapped the first beat of the bell, and not the rest? I guess that's important to finish something you have started.
[Hard]
- 00:11:782 (1,2,3,4) - This is more intense in terms of rhythm here, having 5 circles in line on a opening part that is "calm" is quite high for a normal. I would have think about something less intense, like 3 circles → 1 1/2 slider, so it would add more impact on this beat: 00:12:719 (5) - that is quite strong.
- 01:07:563 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - In my opinion, this part doesn't flow well, you made something too sharp for this kind of diff. It makes the player doing a rollback on each NC, and it's not confortable. The flow you've been using here: 01:00:063 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - is better since it's using a triangular flow, so it's more fluid. In summary, I think you should rework the flow of this pattern a bit, to make it fluid.
- 01:40:610 - You're missing a strong beat here. Moreover, since you're focused on vocals, it's important to map it.
- 02:09:438 (2,3,1,2) - This beat is not using the same flow as the previous one. This is the only part on all the similar pattern you used on the Hard where the flow isn't something with triangular movement. This is something pretty linear here, so I suggest you to remove it for consistancy, and also to be more representative of the song.
- 02:37:094 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - In my opinion, that would have been better to space the circle from the slider a bit more on each beats since the intensity is getting higher on each time.
- 03:21:625 (1,2) - The jump here is pretty high, even if the sound is strong, I don't think it can be good to play for a usually Hard players. Try to reduce the distance here.
- For the end, it's same as the Normal diffs about the bells.