Hello M4M from my queue~
Good luck!
Normal
- 00:34:282 (1,2) - these could be made to blanket each other
- 00:45:532 (1,2) - fix blanket
- 02:41:313 (3) - would be better to have the sound under this sliderend clickable instead
- 03:42:719 (2,3) - tune it so that the visual distance is the same (probably what you wanted anyways) similarly to for example 03:17:407 (1,2) -
Hard
- 00:32:407 (1,2) - similar to what I last said in Normal
- 00:34:985 (3,1) - probably not noticeable while playing but still overlap which you most of the time avoid
- 00:51:157 (1,2) - fix blanket
- 01:40:844 (3,1) - same here. Actually to do that lower the curve of 01:41:782 (1) - little, it's too strong atm for the blanket
- 02:34:282 (1,2,4) - fix stacks, seems off
- 02:54:907 (1,2) - fix blanket
- 03:42:836 (1) - not like it's really wrong tbh, but why use spinner here when you mapped it until the end in Normal (or alternatively, since it looks like Wonder has spinner too, why is Normal not spinnered? The difference isn't really massive or gamebreaking but it'd be nice touch on the consistency inside the mapset)
Wonder
Overall pretty clean so not much to complain, just nitpicking on some stuff I guess.- 00:10:844 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - seems like vocal priority hmm?
- 00:38:032 (1,4) - fix stack (and also then fix the triple after)
- 00:53:032 (1,2) - doesn't look good, there'd probably be better alternatives for this (same with the others that are the same later on before the latter kiais)
- 01:32:875 (3,4) - there have been things kinda like this but this is so clear it jumps on ya. So why is 01:33:109 (4) - with massively larger spacing than the ones before, especially 01:32:875 (3) - which actually has fairly strong sound on it. Vocals don't match either. More fitting would be smth like early on 00:30:766 (2,3,4) -
- For the solo section, up to you but I think it would be recommendable to apply some streams instead of only using kicksliders. It doesn't feel very fitting. Something like beginning with kicksliders and when the intensity goes up with the pitch towards 02:41:782 (1) - you could use more and more streams instead of kicksliders for the build-up.
Good luck!