hi Finally weekend ~_~
cute songs... is the first song the famous/infamous harumachi? o.o?
- I felt this first song a bit off... I tried to check the offset, but because I did not played many days ago, I'm not sure if it is because wrong offset or just because it is 142 bpm.
- 00:00:471 (1,2,3) -
Not perfectly aligned?xD Very nazi, i know. - 00:08:605 (3) - well... removing this could be better imo, because there is not any sound here for support this note, and this jump feels out of place at play. Also, this sections feels like in 00:01:844 - , and you did not used a note there.
- 00:39:556 (1,2) - Unique in all diff?? (01:38:489 (4,5,1,2) - is not exactly equal )
- you are skipping some nice claps in 00:42:091 - , 00:43:781 - and 00:45:471 - , my idea for this is maybe adding a circle and stacking:SPOILER
yeah, I know there are very low possibilities you apply this ^^U - 01:41:246 - 01:42:936 - 01:44:626 - Similar here
- 02:39:133 (1) - waaaa, idk, this is very fast but only because what?, Playing this was a surprise. Personally, I found this weird.
- 03:23:288 (6) - unique use in this song?.
- 04:13:844 (3) - you can align those nodes better, I like them, don't be lazy please >.< (not only here, of course not all look bad, but some of they could improve yet :3)
- 05:27:256 (3,3) - are they unstacked for design or for accident?
- 07:08:197 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing feels weird in playing, I feel a same spacing more comfortable:
- 08:18:104 (3) - here you used to follow the guitar, but then you did nothing in 08:18:976 - , And after this, you used to follow only the voice. This feels weird because guitar deserved a more complex rhythm, but following voice is nice too. I wanna suggest something like this in order of avoid the guitar:
- 10:37:116 (1) - oopppssss....
cute songs... is the first song the famous/infamous harumachi? o.o?