Shad0w1and wrote:
yeah
One diff
00:16:950 - clap volume is too annoying, same to later, better adjust hs file
00:26:457 - fill? keep consistent with your previous rhythm no cuz like this i emphasize the slider end
00:39:556 (1,2) - stacking error
02:39:133 (1) - flow to me better this waymeh i dont like it
02:51:175 (3) - nc for finish
03:03:852 - clap feels awkward
03:14:415 (4) - nc feels better
05:35:197 (1,2) - swap nc
05:37:668 (6,7) - still feeling awkward, to me better as eh i like the 2 piano notes, it's small spacing anyway. plus i get more jump to next slider
05:43:491 - same
05:46:668 (4,5) - i still suggest make it a slider to follow vocal because you did not nc here its confusing to switch tracks ya but those drums r really loud, not that confusing imo
05:53:462 - fill
05:56:286 -
05:59:462 - fill with sliderend like 05:58:138 (2) - zz i dont want to overmap filler triples lol
06:15:256 (1) - intentional? recurve? it's my style
06:52:580 - guitar 06:52:756 - drum might fill as a stream no -_-
07:44:727 - hs
08:29:354 (5) - ??? intended, it's some extra reading challenge :3
08:51:244 - end slider?
10:35:197 (4,5,1) - equal spacing
10:39:470 - 1/2 enough
10:44:267 - same ya but the map has ton of 3/4 on held vocals , just continuing that here
if you can check this and see if you might icon this instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/437797 no i will do todokanai, that map is jump training -_-
kwk wrote:
perhaps you can look at this instead if you dont want to mod incomplete sets
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[one diff]
00:07:232 (7,2) - stack miss
00:16:950 (4,5) - maybe space these out more if your going to emphasise them with claps? Don't see why they are spaced the same as 00:16:105 (1,2) - especially with how loud the claps are lol ya ill nerf the clap volume or something, the claps are just there to sound nice xd
00:22:443 (5) - i think ctrl+g plays better single the angle isnt as harsh but up to you then 1 gets kinda overspaced
00:33:006 (2,3,4) - feels a bit out of place since your usual rhythm has your triples here 00:32:690 -, maybe you can instead change your rhythm to something like this? http://puu.sh/xyyDF/d798bb2b84.png uh but the triple is in the song >.>
00:55:401 (4,5,1) - is this supposed to be straight
00:56:457 - ohhh so this is 'that' song
01:26:880 (1) - maybe stack this on 01:25:823 (3) - ? the movement from 01:26:457 (2,1,2) - feels more natural
02:28:147 (2) - maybe split into two notes? Just current rhythm feels a bit strange with slider body going through the vocals uhh there isnt rly percussion support so nah
03:13:781 (1) - remove NC?
04:06:433 (2,3) - might be cool if u ctrl+g these kinda breaks my entire concept lo
04:43:315 (2,3) - increase ds here a bit?
05:17:727 (2,4) - move this to the left a bit more so you get an equal triangle here 05:17:374 (1,2,3) - ?
05:36:609 (4,5) - 05:41:903 (2,3) -05:51:256 (1,3) - maybe its just me but i feel like these dont fit with the way you mapped the song since the rest of it is pretty clean and theres a lack of slider intersects but then in this section you suddenly have these i guess you're right but i think they look nice =/ not a big issue imo
06:15:256 (1) - nice 4 point slider its my STYLE
06:25:844 (2,3) - move these a bit so 3 doesnt overlap?
08:20:023 (2,3) - just 1/1 slider here? not sure what the slider here is supposed to be following it was following the vocals but it was kkinda dumb on offbeat so i flipped it
10:01:883 (1,2,3) - is this dsing intentional
11:29:790 (4,1) - swap nc and nc here 11:31:185 (4) -
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Narcissu wrote:
[haru]
00:08:077 (2) - drum sampleset in sliderbody
01:34:485 (3,5) - ↑↑↑, because you use ctrl+shift+r (shift+r=drum sampleset)
02:49:802 - 02:50:542 - guitar unsnap/even, 02:50:119 (1,2,3) - 3+3 inappropriate fixed nc but i think unsnap is not that noticeable
03:03:851 (2) - need't clap ? …… try add clap 03:04:274 (2,1) -
03:19:908 (6,1) - same as 01:08:077 (5,6,1) - 02:07:232 (5,6,1) - ?
[natsu]
07:45:080 - look like miss whistle
[kibou]
08:29:354 (5) - off 1/4
thanks for modding!Noffy wrote:
Ok so hi, my half of the m4m as arranged in PM (f)
christ how have you mapped so much harumachi clover without getting sick of the song i dont listen to the song when i map
SB soontm
speaking of which
could you tell me where you got the bg image from, all i can find is the poster art with the sakura tree stuff in the bg. I'd like to edit and make it where they're against some color besides white. Or even a cute pattern! like.. like.. stripes or polka dots!
it feels like they're in a void rn.
a large, gaping, empty void.
+if you can tell me the names for each song in jp/romaji maybe i could add little title cards for each song? tell me what ya think of that idea
will forum pm
gonna label each part per the song
[OneDiff]
nice diffname
Maybe "OneRoom Theme Compilation" would be better as a title for this mapset, as just simply Songs Compilation when it's ALSO "Various Artists" gives someone browsing beatmaps NO idea what this is a compilation of. Most recently ranked mapsets I see at least have a specific artist they're compiling, so people know to expect "compilations of songs from this one artist".
I mean if https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1002859 this can have a fitting "xxx Compilation" why not this----
-Ed1-
00:08:605 (3) - I get the idea this is going for, but the positioning relative to the notes around it looks kind of random? like it's just. there. 00:10:401 (5,6,1) - much better
00:12:830 - personal opinion, but the high volume of these hitsounds here sounds weird and distracting.
00:39:556 (1,2) - stack is off http://puu.sh/xyPQZ/af3f844b82.jpg eeee ):<
00:51:387 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - careful about the sapcing here, it's easily mistakable for being 1/1 like 00:50:331 (4,5) - was. maybe this pattern could grow in spacing as it continues instead? like 03:03:218 - uhh i dont think so
01:22:443 (3,4,5) - the stacking is off, and yes, that effects autostacking too. http://puu.sh/xyRaf/37662f1275.jpg l-look at it.. you can see color of (4) but not of (5) ;-;
03:31:739 (3) - not offscreen or gamebreaking or anything but this goes pretty far under the hiterror bar.. its ok the clickable part isnt under it
03:33:429 - TITLE DROP
-Ed2-
04:04:844 (1,2,3,4) - piano roll here is 1/6, and as a result the 1/4 doesn't feel quite right.. but at the same time you can't really map it as 1/6.. oh no... yea lol.. as much as i'd love to open up with a random 280 bpm burst i dont think that would work too well
04:06:433 (2,3) - actually possibly ctrl+g this, not only cause it would play more cleanly, but so that 04:06:080 (1,2) - is more like 04:07:491 (1,1) - , making 04:07:491 (1,1) - feel like it is initially another repetition of the flipped/increasing in size pattern before it wanders off into doing something different.
06:15:256 (1) - why on EARTH is this randomly a bezier??? Edit: why on EARTH is there randomly a fourth point on this slider. all no change
06:39:962 (3,1) -
07:53:197 (2,3,4,5) - what happened here? 5 looks like you just plopped it in a random position.
-Ed3-
08:54:383 (3,4,5) - maybe 3 reverse sliders like this instead? http://puu.sh/xyRZ7/96681fa975.jpg . Primary reason is what 4 follows is not as obvious as, say, 08:52:465 (6) - and so its multiple repeats feel out of place. hmm but the sound is definitely there, i think its ok
10:05:720 (4,5,1) - whaa? I think it'd be a good idea to extend 4 to the blue tick instead, and THEN have a jump to 1. Like 09:54:209 (3,4) - , 09:52:116 (1,2) - , 09:56:999 (1,2) - etc. As currently the jump + the smaller spaced 1/4 between circles 10:05:982 (5,1) - is out of place for this map so far.