M4M, sorry for late
00:08:605 (3) - feels a bit inconsistent on the way you deal with this, and actually i dont hear any sound at there...
00:16:950 (4,5) - ctrl+g? why not jump here
01:09:344 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ctrl+j can improve the flow imo
01:16:739 (1) - ctrl+h to fit 01:17:584 (5,6) - will make more sense
and i see many stack error and overlap
04:27:256 (3) - can't feel the emphasize on this slider... maybe just ctrl+g 04:26:550 (1) -
05:21:433 (4) - also point down will be better
05:35:021 (7,8) - make a triple here just like 04:10:315 (7,8,1) -
06:15:256 (1) - lol
07:20:374 (1) - ctrl+g
08:23:337 - why suddenly ignored guitar here? u r follow the guitar right
guess that's all i get hope helped
00:08:605 (3) - feels a bit inconsistent on the way you deal with this, and actually i dont hear any sound at there...
00:16:950 (4,5) - ctrl+g? why not jump here
01:09:344 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ctrl+j can improve the flow imo
SPOILER
https://puu.sh/xz8aV/d98b6d8e35.png
01:16:739 (1) - ctrl+h to fit 01:17:584 (5,6) - will make more sense
and i see many stack error and overlap
04:27:256 (3) - can't feel the emphasize on this slider... maybe just ctrl+g 04:26:550 (1) -
05:21:433 (4) - also point down will be better
05:35:021 (7,8) - make a triple here just like 04:10:315 (7,8,1) -
07:20:374 (1) - ctrl+g
08:23:337 - why suddenly ignored guitar here? u r follow the guitar right
guess that's all i get hope helped