gottagof4ast wrote:
ezekyanna's Mercenary
00:10:022 (4,1) - the way these overlap now is just not so nice, maybe try and fit it better inside of the slider? applied
00:16:456 (2,3,4,1) - this feels so out of place as it's the only spot where the 1/2 gaps are stacked like this, I would just keep going with those jumps like at 00:14:498 (2,3,4,5) - but maybe a bit smaller as they are quieter the reason why these are different from the rest is because they're marking/emphasizing a change in the music; it's like a symbolical transition~
The only thing thats weird is this diff spike in the kiai 01:02:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -, Diff spike seems way too large. It's like "Ok, I'm mapping this song with like 2.5x ds max" and then suddenly you place 6 consecutive almost 3.5x ds jumps. But thats probably just me as 01:09:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - feels fine to me (probably beacause of a better builup in spacing and the shape continues as expected) I don't believe the diff spike is too large. The song is slow, so the jumps look scary in the editor, but they're not that challenging when you actually play them. It also emphasizes vocals + this is kiai time + this is the highest diff, so nah, I'm not chaging stuff here~
Also I don't know how geometrically correct you want this hexagon shape to be but it's pretty off https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/6LLIvs8.png it's not intended to be a shape
Gl with the map
[ L u k a s ] wrote:
short mod, modding only last diff since others were p good
ezekyanna
00:03:869 (1) - Why so big spacing? It doesn't have that much of an emphasizing in the song. I believe this is correctly emphasized. The sound is important enough to deserve that jump imo
00:07:225 (1) - ^
00:11:980 (3) - ^ same with these two
00:32:452 (1) - Why NC? uh? for consistency, we're putting nc every half downbeat :/
01:02:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This song is overall very calm and slow so the big jumps aren't really reflecting any of the song, no sudden change in intensity or something, it's not even pp xd since you're the second person complaining, I've decided to reduce the spacing a bit~
Thanks for the mods! ^w^Nokashi wrote:
ezekyanna's Mercenary
- 00:04:708 (4,1,2,3) - To be honest you could form a consistent rhythm with 00:11:980 (3,1) - . It compliments the song better imo They don't sound the same, so I don't see why make them consistent
- 00:16:456 (2,3,4) - having 3 clickable objects so close together to represent something that you used higher spacing to accentuate previously seems really underwhelming. I would suggest something more spaced or a rhythm incorporating sliders I'm using these antijumps to emphasize a change in the music, as I explained before "the reason why these are different from the rest is because they're marking/emphasizing a change in the music; it's like a symbolical transition~"
- 00:42:277 (6,1) - I Dont understand why this was directly stacked tbh. the beat on the slider is really strong but theres no movement to get to it both sounds (circle and slider head) are very noticeable and stand out more than the rest of surrounding sounds, so I decided to emphasize them together in a stack rather than making a sudden jump
- 00:59:061 (5,1) - Again having this stacked is really awkward, as its really underwhelming . Same here 01:05:728 (5,1) - After testing, I can agree on this one, so yeah, applied
- 00:59:895 (2,3) - CTRLGing the rhythm here would emphasize the vocal better. same here 01:13:228 (2,3) - I worked on these patterns for that now~
- 01:01:839 (3,4) - In order to disperse the jumps a bit you could make this a 1/2 slider to emphasize the instrument thats kinda prominent on 01:01:841 - I agree, applied!
- 01:05:173 (3,4) - Similar point here^ I disagree on this one, I need the circle for the vocal
Best of Luck~!
sr dropped from 3.54 to 3.49 :v
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