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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, August 30, 2017 at 7:58:57 PM

Artist: Chima
Title: Hajimari no Shirushi (Anime Size)
Source: ゼロから始める魔法の書
Tags: magic witch witchcraft sorcery furry furries mercenary beastfallen ezek Zero Kara Hajimeru Mahou no Sho Ending ED
BPM: 71.5
Filesize: 11465kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2.23 stars, 150 notes)
  2. Easy (1.07 stars, 58 notes)
  3. ezekyanna's Mercenary (3.41 stars, 205 notes)
  4. Hard (2.7 stars, 179 notes)
  5. Normal (1.81 stars, 126 notes)


Download: Chima - Hajimari no Shirushi (Anime Size)
Download: Chima - Hajimari no Shirushi (Anime Size) (no video)
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ezek >//<







ezekyanna's Mercenary collab with ezek and thx for the video.
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Thank you for mapping this ><

Will mod soon! :3
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KittyAdventure wrote:

Thank you for mapping this ><

Will mod soon! :3
yay thank you >w<
posted
Hi, mod from my queue.

[Easy]
01:28:922 - End the spinner here so players have enough time to actually react and spin it.

[Hard]
00:08:064 (1) - Remove NC to be consistent with the other combos
01:23:228 (7,8) - Spacing is slightly too big, since there's no particular stronger sound at 8. I suggest rotating 01:23:506 (8,9,10) -90 degrees and adjusting the placement to look more like a triangle.

Short mod, but hope it helps. Loved playing this one, very well done and polished :)
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LimePixel wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue.

[Easy]
01:28:922 - End the spinner here so players have enough time to actually react and spin it. wops fixed xd

[Hard]
00:08:064 (1) - Remove NC to be consistent with the other combos instead i added on other ncs to be consistent with that
01:23:228 (7,8) - Spacing is slightly too big, since there's no particular stronger sound at 8. I suggest rotating 01:23:506 (8,9,10) -90 degrees and adjusting the placement to look more like a triangle. fixed

Short mod, but hope it helps. Loved playing this one, very well done and polished :)
thank you for mod x)
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Hi, late M4M, sorry for the delay

Easy


00:07:225(1) - I feel like the blanket could be a bit more polished
00:18:137(2) - same
00:20:663(1) - same

Normal


01:21:006(1) - This slider shape could be improved

Hard


00:06:386(6,1) - Only time you stack 1/3 like this (end of the slider 6 + circle 1)
00:12:260(5,6) - Why not same slider ?
00:29:084(4) - Could blank better (3)
Timing point at 01:26:006 not on this diff neither on ezekyanna's Mercenary?

Nothing to say about the advanced or the zezkyanna's Mercenary even tho the timing point is missing on this last one

Diffs are pretty clean so not much to say, hope it helps tho, and your mapping is pretty good to play, gratz :3
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Ringer wrote:

Hi, late M4M, sorry for the delay

Easy


00:07:225(1) - I feel like the blanket could be a bit more polished
00:18:137(2) - same
00:20:663(1) - same fixed all

Normal


01:21:006(1) - This slider shape could be improved ye i changed it little bit

Hard


00:06:386(6,1) - Only time you stack 1/3 like this (end of the slider 6 + circle 1) okay fixed
00:12:260(5,6) - Why not same slider ? they dont need to be? they dont sound same also its just how i map
00:29:084(4) - Could blank better (3) fxied
Timing point at 01:26:006 not on this diff neither on ezekyanna's Mercenary?

Nothing to say about the advanced or the zezkyanna's Mercenary even tho the timing point is missing on this last one ay green timing lines doesnt have be consistent among difficulties but this one was mistake i though i end kiai there but then i left it unused in other difficulties so removed them fixed xd

Diffs are pretty clean so not much to say, hope it helps tho, and your mapping is pretty good to play, gratz :3
thank u for mod !
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Random mod!

[General]
  1. Add video in Easy diff
  2. Why you used background dimensions is 1920x1200 in Advanced diff? I think 1920x1080 is rankable
  3. Metadata zzz: http://zeronosyo.com/news/
    SPOILER
    1. Title: はじまりのしるし (Anime Size)
    2. Romaji Title: Hajimari no Shirushi (Anime Size)
    3. Source: ゼロから始める魔法の書
    4. Tags: Zero Kara Hajimeru Mahou no Sho Ending ED

[Normal]
  1. 00:45:926 (4,5) - Maybe you can fix a bit the position like this? x:76|y:236
  2. 01:14:339 (1) - Hmm..The wave slider is not good, maybe you can fix in a tail a bit

[Advanced]

  • The Advanced BG is so NSFW, change it pleaseeee Just Kidding XD

  1. 00:20:663 (2) - I think you better NC it here than 00:19:821 (1) because the new sound is here

[Hard]
  1. 00:05:547 (5) - NC
  2. 00:12:260 (5) - I think the slider in tail it's almost closer with slider in tail in 00:11:421 (4), maybe are you can advance it a bit?
  3. 00:15:617 (3) - NC
  4. 00:55:989 (5) - ^
  5. 01:01:006 (1) - Remove NC and add NC in 01:02:673 (3) since new vocal sound is here
  6. 01:07:673 (1) - ^
  7. 01:14:339 (1) - ^
  8. 01:21:839 (4) - NC
  9. 01:26:006 (3,6) - Why you don't NC it like you doing on Insane diff?

[ezekyanna's Mercenary]
  1. 00:07:225 (1) - Well, it's up to you but I think it's confused to see this flow TwT
  2. 00:18:137 (2) - Overlap in 00:15:617 (1) - in head
  3. 00:31:610 (3) - It's almost near with 00:30:768 (1) - maybe give a bit the spacing
  4. 00:32:452 (1) - Overlap in 00:30:768 (1) - in tail
  5. 00:34:137 (1,2,3,4) - How about used this flow?
  6. 00:36:663 (2,3,4,1) - ^
  7. 01:04:895 (2,3,4,5) - It's square flow? If not, better you overlap in 01:03:784 (5) with repair the blanket 01:04:339 (1)
  8. 01:07:117 (3) - Overlap in 01:06:006 (1) - in head
  9. 01:21:700 (3) - I don't hear anything here, I try to used playback rate 25% and i'm up the volume, and still don't hear anything, so remove it

    I think last diff is more like Insane+ or Extra diff since the jumps is so big, but it's up to you I love this diff <3
Don't forget add in your mapset description: "Opening by KittyAdventure" /me runs
No KDS if my mod is not fixed all!

Good Luck~
posted
from my q

[ezekyanna]

00:05:547 (1,2,3,) - i don't know. i think this flow is kinda bad
00:16:456 (2,3,4) - i think this should be space?
00:25:716 (1) - ctrl + g is better . then stack this 00:26:558 (2) - here 00:24:873 (4) -
00:49:295 (1,2) - make it like this?

00:59:339 (1) - unstack this to emphasize the downbeat
01:01:006 (1) - ^
01:06:006 (1) - ^
01:12:673 (1) - ^

that's all good luck
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yow o/

Easy
  1. For a 1 star easy thats some pretty high od/hp/ar would reduce these by 1 atleast
  2. 00:56:831 (2,1) - maybe switch hitsounds here, second cymbals are stronger and better kick into start of the kiai, and you got the finish moving up
  3. 01:24:339 (1,2) - having this a slider would be good here for the extended vocal and calmer part that starts back also bit of a diff spike with 4 concecutive circles atm


Normal
  1. 00:50:137 (5,6,1) - OCD here but could make the visual stuff here equal since its a bit off due to bpm shift
  2. 01:24:339 (1,2) - maybe just go for 2 sliders for this diff , 3 returns after eachother even though the music gets less intense at 01:24:339 (1,2) - felt a bit off, also vocal following


advanced
  1. 00:07:225 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - breaks your Downbeat NC pattern compared to the rest of the diff
  2. 00:19:821 (1,2) - NC swap here
    Good diff nothing noteworthy! Though after playing easy-normal-advanced I'd get a BN to check on the spread, this advanced feels almost the same as your normal and the easy diff uses only 1/1 rythms were as your normal goes 1/3 all the way already like your advanced so might need to nerf normal a bit if it comes up again


Hard
  1. 01:06:839 (6,7,1) - bit hard transistion here and reduces the impact of 01:07:673 (1) - a bit, maybe keep 01:06:839 (6,7) - ds wise and have the jump on 01:07:673 (1) - instead?
  2. 01:11:006 (1,2,3,4) - maybe control g 2-3 so its bit flowy? this pattern felt forced to play and out of line with the rest of the of the kiai
  3. 01:21:006 (1,2,3,4) - the linear flow here feels odd, I'd get a small angle here in somewhere so its a bit flowier
  4. 01:26:839 (6) - NC here to divide them in groups of 3 like the rest?


Mercenary
  1. 00:24:312 (2,4,1) - ocd double blanket
  2. 00:50:137 (2) - move this a bit more to the right for some more momentum for 00:50:137 (2,1,2) - felt a bit too linear
  3. 00:57:673 (1) - enable Kiai on red timing point aswell
  4. 01:13:228 (2,3) - 01:18:228 (2,3) - you usually stack on strong sounds so it feels a bit off here, second one not that much but first one 01:12:673 (1,2,3,4,1) - this flow and movement is really different form the rest of the kiai though the song is just generally the same
  5. 01:15:173 (3,4,5,1) - can make a diamond shape here if you adjust (1) a little for visuals
  6. 01:25:172 (2,3,4) - just a slider would be nice here for the softer section and makes these sounds 01:26:006 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - stand out more


Good set! Would get a check on if the spread between easy-normal-advanced is acceptable and should be ready to go imo
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sorry for late ill reply mods as soon as possible >w<
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KittyAdventure wrote:

Random mod!

[General]
  1. Add video in Easy diff fixed
  2. Why you used background dimensions is 1920x1200 in Advanced diff? I think 1920x1080 is rankable ezek help me xd
  3. Metadata zzz: http://zeronosyo.com/news/ woah i suck at japanese meta fixed ty
    SPOILER
    1. Title: はじまりのしるし (Anime Size)
    2. Romaji Title: Hajimari no Shirushi (Anime Size)
    3. Source: ゼロから始める魔法の書
    4. Tags: Zero Kara Hajimeru Mahou no Sho Ending ED

[Normal]
  1. 00:45:926 (4,5) - Maybe you can fix a bit the position like this? x:76|y:236 fixed
  2. 01:14:339 (1) - Hmm..The wave slider is not good, maybe you can fix in a tail a bit ye fixed better with grid snap

[Advanced]

  • The Advanced BG is so NSFW, change it pleaseeee Just Kidding XD blame ezek XD

  1. 00:20:663 (2) - I think you better NC it here than 00:19:821 (1) because the new sound is here oh that was mistake fixed xd

[Hard]
  1. 00:05:547 (5) - NC
  2. 00:12:260 (5) - I think the slider in tail it's almost closer with slider in tail in 00:11:421 (4), maybe are you can advance it a bit? its not that close its clean overlap
  3. 00:15:617 (3) - NC
  4. 00:55:989 (5) - ^
  5. 01:01:006 (1) - Remove NC and add NC in 01:02:673 (3) since new vocal sound is here
  6. 01:07:673 (1) - ^
  7. 01:14:339 (1) - ^
  8. 01:21:839 (4) - NC
  9. 01:26:006 (3,6) - Why you don't NC it like you doing on Insane diff? ok for the ncs its based on how i mapped it i put nc on each downbeat but if i do these kind of jumps 00:07:225 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and 00:27:400 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i put nc on upbeats just so the combo dont go too long and its easier to read the jumps

[ezekyanna's Mercenary]
  1. 00:07:225 (1) - Well, it's up to you but I think it's confused to see this flow TwT
  2. 00:18:137 (2) - Overlap in 00:15:617 (1) - in head there is no overlap (2) has already totaly dissapeared when (1) is there
  3. 00:31:610 (3) - It's almost near with 00:30:768 (1) - maybe give a bit the spacing
  4. 00:32:452 (1) - Overlap in 00:30:768 (1) - in tail
  5. 00:34:137 (1,2,3,4) - How about used this flow?
  6. 00:36:663 (2,3,4,1) - ^
  7. 01:04:895 (2,3,4,5) - It's square flow? If not, better you overlap in 01:03:784 (5) with repair the blanket 01:04:339 (1)
  8. 01:07:117 (3) - Overlap in 01:06:006 (1) - in head
  9. 01:21:700 (3) - I don't hear anything here, I try to used playback rate 25% and i'm up the volume, and still don't hear anything, so remove it yes fixed i thought i heard the piano but ye XD

    I think last diff is more like Insane+ or Extra diff since the jumps is so big, but it's up to you I love this diff <3
we intentionaly went for that because we want it harder than the hard and seem like and insane regardless of the sr if i didnt reply on stuuf on last diff its for ezek's part

Don't forget add in your mapset description: "Opening by KittyAdventure" /me runs
No KDS if my mod is not fixed all!

Good Luck~
thx ur mod was helpful specialy the meta XD

Shishou wrote:

from my q

[ezekyanna]

00:05:547 (1,2,3,) - i don't know. i think this flow is kinda bad
00:16:456 (2,3,4) - i think this should be space?
00:25:716 (1) - ctrl + g is better . then stack this 00:26:558 (2) - here 00:24:873 (4) - i think it should be fine
00:49:295 (1,2) - make it like this? fixed

00:59:339 (1) - unstack this to emphasize the downbeat
01:01:006 (1) - ^
01:06:006 (1) - ^
01:12:673 (1) - ^ i think its fine tho idk i see if ezek changes i will for consistency

that's all good luck
thx for mod

Wishkey wrote:

yow o/

Easy
  1. For a 1 star easy thats some pretty high od/hp/ar would reduce these by 1 atleast fixed
  2. 00:56:831 (2,1) - maybe switch hitsounds here, second cymbals are stronger and better kick into start of the kiai, and you got the finish moving up i think this way fits better since the one before kiai does actualy sound as finish in music and the other is drum with whistle so it should be fine
  3. 01:24:339 (1,2) - having this a slider would be good here for the extended vocal and calmer part that starts back also bit of a diff spike with 4 concecutive circles atm okay fixed


Normal
  1. 00:50:137 (5,6,1) - OCD here but could make the visual stuff here equal since its a bit off due to bpm shift ocd XD fixed
  2. 01:24:339 (1,2) - maybe just go for 2 sliders for this diff , 3 returns after eachother even though the music gets less intense at 01:24:339 (1,2) - felt a bit off, also vocal following but there is pianoo should be fine


advanced
  1. 00:07:225 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - breaks your Downbeat NC pattern compared to the rest of the diff fixed
  2. 00:19:821 (1,2) - NC swap here fixed
    Good diff nothing noteworthy! Though after playing easy-normal-advanced I'd get a BN to check on the spread, this advanced feels almost the same as your normal and the easy diff uses only 1/1 rythms were as your normal goes 1/3 all the way already like your advanced so might need to nerf normal a bit if it comes up again okay thx ill ask


Hard
  1. 01:06:839 (6,7,1) - bit hard transistion here and reduces the impact of 01:07:673 (1) - a bit, maybe keep 01:06:839 (6,7) - ds wise and have the jump on 01:07:673 (1) - instead? fixed
  2. 01:11:006 (1,2,3,4) - maybe control g 2-3 so its bit flowy? this pattern felt forced to play and out of line with the rest of the of the kiai i like it that way is not big problem
  3. 01:21:006 (1,2,3,4) - the linear flow here feels odd, I'd get a small angle here in somewhere so its a bit flowier tbh i intended that to flow better with the vocal because it holds to it while she saying "iihhhh"
  4. 01:26:839 (6) - NC here to divide them in groups of 3 like the rest? fixed


Mercenary
  1. 00:24:312 (2,4,1) - ocd double blanket fixed
  2. 00:50:137 (2) - move this a bit more to the right for some more momentum for 00:50:137 (2,1,2) - felt a bit too linear changed the flow so it should be fixed
  3. 00:57:673 (1) - enable Kiai on red timing point aswell fixed XD i should do this on all diff
  4. 01:13:228 (2,3) - 01:18:228 (2,3) - you usually stack on strong sounds so it feels a bit off here, second one not that much but first one 01:12:673 (1,2,3,4,1) - this flow and movement is really different form the rest of the kiai though the song is just generally the same well its mapped by 2 different people idont see any big differency its just variations
  5. 01:15:173 (3,4,5,1) - can make a diamond shape here if you adjust (1) a little for visuals fixed
  6. 01:25:172 (2,3,4) - just a slider would be nice here for the softer section and makes these sounds 01:26:006 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - stand out more okay fixed


Good set! Would get a check on if the spread between easy-normal-advanced is acceptable and should be ready to go imo
thank you for the mod :D
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KittyAdventure wrote:

[ezekyanna's Mercenary]
  1. 00:07:225 (1) - Well, it's up to you but I think it's confused to see this flow TwT I don't see what makes it confusing
  2. 00:18:137 (2) - Overlap in 00:15:617 (1) - in head they're too far in time...
  3. 00:31:610 (3) - It's almost near with 00:30:768 (1) - maybe give a bit the spacing I don't see why, there's not overlap or weirdly close
  4. 00:32:452 (1) - Overlap in 00:30:768 (1) - in tail it's not necessary since they're too far in time
  5. 00:34:137 (1,2,3,4) - How about used this flow? The flow is pretty much the same, but since the design looks cleaner that way, I've applied this suggestion~
  6. 00:36:663 (2,3,4,1) - ^ nah
  7. 01:04:895 (2,3,4,5) - It's square flow? If not, better you overlap in 01:03:784 (5) with repair the blanket 01:04:339 (1) idk what you mean with the square flow thing , but I repaired my blanket and made the overlap with the notes that were supposed to blanket the slider
  8. 01:07:117 (3) - Overlap in 01:06:006 (1) - in head it's intentional and I don't see why this would be a problem

Shishou wrote:

[ezekyanna]

00:05:547 (1,2,3,) - i don't know. i think this flow is kinda bad if you think the flow is not good, then you have to explain why and give a suggestion
00:16:456 (2,3,4) - i think this should be space? I don't know what you mean, but I guess you want me to have a larger spacing; however, I used these anti-jumps to emphasize the transition in change in the music~
00:59:339 (1) - unstack this to emphasize the downbeat stacks can be used for emphasis too
01:01:006 (1) - ^ this is not even stacked
01:06:006 (1) - ^ same as the first one
01:12:673 (1) - ^ ^
Thanks for the mods! No reply on Wishkey cuz I don't drink alcohol I got nothing there :p

UpDaTe
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57673
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 6
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Hajimari no Shirushi (Anime Size)
TitleUnicode:はじまりのしるし (Anime Size)
Artist:Chima
ArtistUnicode:Chima
Creator:Lilyanna
Version:ezekyanna's Mercenary
Source:ゼロから始める魔法の書
Tags:magic witch witchcraft sorcery furry furries mercenary beastfallen ezek Zero Kara Hajimeru Mahou no Sho Ending ED
BeatmapID:1292861
BeatmapSetID:612207

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:2.6
SliderTickRate:1

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bad m4m sorry :(
hard
00:28:242 (1) - maybe make this one the same distance away from the note its overlapping like the others
instead of what it currently is
01:12:117 (4) - the flow from 01:11:839 (3) - back to 4 and then down to 01:12:673 (5) - just doesn't feel all the good imo

01:24:339 (1) - perhaps blanket this to 01:23:784 (2) - or make it symmetrical to 01:24:062 (3) -

tbh all the diffs seem completely fine
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Hello,..
hmm actually i want to map this song by myself but find this set Orz... and it's pretty good...
i hope You willn't mind if i leave some thoughts about it? :o
i will be a bit picky, since i like song, don't be mad about it pls

[Easy]
  1. 00:47:610 (1,1) - If it's not supose to be similar shape sliders, so mb make a bit more calm visual flow like https://puu.sh/w4QLI.jpg
  2. 01:14:339 (1,2) - could be more even blanket ...
  3. 01:17:673 (1,2) - why these have different shape and 01:19:339 (2,1) - same? imo make 01:17:673 (1,1) - same visually better cause of geometric mirror... Also less curved wave looks better when placed on horizontal line. Hmm maybe 01:17:673 (1,2) - swap shapes or make all 3 of them equal?
  4. 01:21:006 (1,2,3,1) - it could be more symetry structured pattern by 01:21:006 (1,2) - 01:24:339 (1) - placed 2 this lines with same curve arounnd 01:22:672 (2,3) - 01:24:339 - triangle. Something like https://puu.sh/w4RDD.jpg . I thought about it because now your last slider looks like wanna go out from this map Xp, centralize it before spinner looks more neat imo


[Normal]
  1. 00:03:869 (1,2,3) - i feel like visual spacing could be a bit cleaner, like 00:04:708 (3) - spaced from 2 a bit more then from 1
  2. 00:13:099 (5,1) - imo just ctrl-j for 00:13:099 (5) - is enough since it's make clear follow way https://puu.sh/w4Tvj.jpg like -10 rotated (5)
  3. 00:31:610 (2,3,4) - i belive You can make more clear visual spacing as You did before. (4 degree rotate for 00:33:295 (4) - https://puu.sh/w4U2E.jpg)
    Also 00:32:452 (3) - blanket a bit off as You can see on SS
  4. 00:51:779 (3) - might be make more sharp shape on this slider? For example: https://puu.sh/w4V77.jpg Right now it looks like You have lack of place and because of it You made 00:51:498 (2,3,4) - uneven visual flow, also You somewhy used sharp (with red anchors i mean) sliders only once at the beggining
  5. 00:24:873 (3,4) - and once at the end 01:19:339 (5) - , i think You may give them one more chance to show themself in place where it fits well . It's only my opinion orz (adress to 00:53:463 (6) - too)
  6. 00:59:339 (4,5,6) - Why did You ctrl-g rhythm here? 00:57:673 (1,2,3) - this part make emphasis in vocal plan in same way like next part, i think will be more intuitive to repeat rhythm to still folow vocal as You did in other diffs.
  7. 01:13:506 (6) - i think less curved slider like 01:16:006 (4) - looks nicer here. https://puu.sh/w4WE5.jpg (also same side curved sliders make more neat pattern and more clear flow imo)


[Advanced]
  1. 00:10:862 - i guess there is no beat... orz, or its too calm to make it clicable... but i can clearly hear 00:11:701 - beat wich is much stronger but still unclicable. i think https://puu.sh/w4XRU.jpg rhythm might work much better tbh
  2. 00:29:645 - i think it should be clicable since there is no vocals and beat here really strong, i can suggesst smthing like https://puu.sh/w4ZhE.jpg for emphasis stretched sounds 00:29:084 - 00:29:645 - . imo it works pretty well
  3. 00:29:926 (4,5,6,1) - i think spacing between these 4 objects can be cleaner(like equal visual spacing from 1 or 00:29:926 (4,5) - 00:30:487 (6,1) - parallel lines)
  4. 00:45:645 (3,4,5,1) - i belive these blankets could be a bit cleaner (https://puu.sh/w4YlW.jpg instead of https://puu.sh/w4Ynp.jpg)


[Hard]

  • tbh i have no idea how your flow and patterns should works here...
  1. 00:04:708 (4,5,6) - 00:05:827 (6,7,8) - might create equel angle
  2. 00:07:505 (2,2,4) - changing angle ( not 00:08:064 (1,2,3) - not 00:07:785 (3,1,3) - not 00:07:225 (1,2,3) - not even 00:06:386 (9,1,2) - ) just randomly new one it's just randomly change direction... why?
  3. 00:38:347 (1,2,3,4) - also your choosing angles is pretty questionable for me. 00:37:505 (1,2,3) - maybe 00:38:347 (1,2,3) - make them equal cause now they are not. Also 00:36:663 (7,1,2,3,1) - might be more symmetric
  4. 00:29:084 (4) - this flow changing also looks pretty sharp since don't even use 00:26:558 (6,1,2) - angle for being at least a bit consistency... yeah in this way You can emphasize strong sounds by create sharp flow, but it should be consistent i guess and be used for sounds like 00:30:768 (1) - also...
    It looks like You are using strong geometric flow without strong geometric sence... it's prety wierd orz

    And about mechanics:
    i give most simple example: For sliders like 00:50:937 (1) - i should follow from start slider to middle, hold a bit (for pass it) and back to head. Same for 00:55:147 (4) - , but then i see 01:01:006 (1) - and actually the most simple way to follow it just don't come back to head (because next circle placed oposite cursor move and also ds somewhy increases which force me to do something different) and hold in middle more and after it continue move to next note..., so it's just different mechanics to pass this section, it feels pretty wierd since it's not high star technical map... :roll:

    So, this map need more thought maybe, because your idea looks unclear, at least for me... :?


All for now.
I stop now since here 4 am and i need to wake up at 6. :okill me someone pls
posted
NM from my queue
Might be a bad mod as I normally prefer to mod higher diffs but as I have to learn how to mod everything I am giving this a shot
General

For some reason B3 (background 3?) is .png so you might want to make it into .jpg to reduce filesize http://i.imgur.com/ciUj96x.png, B3 is also 1920x1200 instead of 1920x1080

I have no clue how you got the audio's filesize to 170kbps but you probably already know this
Hard

00:08:903 (4,5,6) - I like that 00:09:463 (5) - has a larger jump to it for the louder piano sound but then 00:09:743 (6) - is just spaced like you would with other normal notes although it also has that same volume piano

00:14:778 (2,3) - just my opinion but this just looks weird as you had this 00:13:938 (1,2) - flow very well into eachother but then suddenly you just make a 90 degree angle to get to the next object and then again to follow the slider

00:20:663 (1) - could use some more spacing, very important downbeat with loud vocal and piano

00:21:505 (4,5) - ^^

00:29:926 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - idk about this pattern, if it was your intention to use a wide angle to emphsise 00:30:768 (1) - then that may be a good idea but it just doesn't stand out enough beacause you are repeating the shape at 00:29:926 (5,6,7) - which doesn't have any important sounds (atleast not ones that are more way more important than the otehrs)
Maybe something like 00:37:505 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - where 00:38:347 (1) - really stands out would be better

01:16:006 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - I really like this pattern
ezekyanna's Mercenary

00:10:022 (4,1) - the way these overlap now is just not so nice, maybe try and fit it better inside of the slider?

00:16:456 (2,3,4,1) - this feels so out of place as it's the only spot where the 1/2 gaps are stacked like this, I would just keep going with those jumps like at 00:14:498 (2,3,4,5) - but maybe a bit smaller as they are quieter

00:18:137 (2,1,2) - I know it fits nicely as a blanket but 00:18:979 (1) - has low spacing for an important vocal+ instrumental sound and then you have the larger spacing for 00:19:259 (2) - which barely has an instrumental sound. It flows nicely but it doesn't fit the music imo

00:21:505 (4) - The sound of the piano is way different than the others but it's just mapped as another not in the pattern that doesn't stand out in any way, you made piano sounds stand out at 00:22:347 (1) - /00:24:031 (1) - /00:27:400 (1) - with larger spacing so why not here

01:21:839 (3,4,5) - These have very slightly different spacing

The only thing thats weird is this diff spike in the kiai 01:02:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -, Diff spike seems way too large. It's like "Ok, I'm mapping this song with like 2.5x ds max" and then suddenly you place 6 consecutive almost 3.5x ds jumps. But thats probably just me as 01:09:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - feels fine to me (probably beacause of a better builup in spacing and the shape continues as expected)
Also I don't know how geometrically correct you want this hexagon shape to be but it's pretty off http://i.imgur.com/6LLIvs8.png
Gl with the map :)
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sorry for taking so long to reply i try do as soon as possible.
posted
short mod, modding only last diff since others were p good

ezekyanna

00:03:869 (1) - Why so big spacing? It doesn't have that much of an emphasizing in the song.
00:07:225 (1) - ^
00:11:980 (3) - ^
00:25:716 (1) - Why NC and why the change of flow? Ctrl+G
00:27:400 (1) - Very big spacing, why
00:32:452 (1) - Why NC?
01:02:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This song is overall very calm and slow so the big jumps aren't really reflecting any of the song, no sudden change in intensity or something, it's not even pp xd

nothing else to say about this map really, it's p good and the final diff still doesn't feel right cause of the song's intensity and stuff but you can change that if you want. I just thought it would reflect the song better if you used less spacing.
That was it, sorry for short mod
posted

Nevo wrote:

bad m4m sorry :(
hard
00:28:242 (1) - maybe make this one the same distance away from the note its overlapping like the others its fine overlap
instead of what it currently is
01:12:117 (4) - the flow from 01:11:839 (3) - back to 4 and then down to 01:12:673 (5) - just doesn't feel all the good imo fixed

01:24:339 (1) - perhaps blanket this to 01:23:784 (2) - or make it symmetrical to 01:24:062 (3) - its fine

tbh all the diffs seem completely fine

Mitkoff wrote:

Hello,..
hmm actually i want to map this song by myself but find this set Orz... and it's pretty good...
i hope You willn't mind if i leave some thoughts about it? :o
i will be a bit picky, since i like song, don't be mad about it pls

[Easy]
  1. 00:47:610 (1,1) - If it's not supose to be similar shape sliders, so mb make a bit more calm visual flow like https://puu.sh/w4QLI.jpg the slider 1 almost faded when the other one apeared i dont see a problem
  2. 01:14:339 (1,2) - could be more even blanket ... fixed
  3. 01:17:673 (1,2) - why these have different shape and 01:19:339 (2,1) - same? imo make 01:17:673 (1,1) - same visually better cause of geometric mirror... Also less curved wave looks better when placed on horizontal line. Hmm maybe 01:17:673 (1,2) - swap shapes or make all 3 of them equal? each one take different direction they should be fine tho
  4. 01:21:006 (1,2,3,1) - it could be more symetry structured pattern by 01:21:006 (1,2) - 01:24:339 (1) - placed 2 this lines with same curve arounnd 01:22:672 (2,3) - 01:24:339 - triangle. Something like https://puu.sh/w4RDD.jpg . I thought about it because now your last slider looks like wanna go out from this map Xp, centralize it before spinner looks more neat imo okay fixed


[Normal]
  1. 00:03:869 (1,2,3) - i feel like visual spacing could be a bit cleaner, like 00:04:708 (3) - spaced from 2 a bit more then from 1 idk what u mean exactly but fixed little spacing
  2. 00:13:099 (5,1) - imo just ctrl-j for 00:13:099 (5) - is enough since it's make clear follow way https://puu.sh/w4Tvj.jpg like -10 rotated (5) sure
  3. 00:31:610 (2,3,4) - i belive You can make more clear visual spacing as You did before. (4 degree rotate for 00:33:295 (4) - https://puu.sh/w4U2E.jpg) they look fine there nothing much i cant with ds snap xd
    Also 00:32:452 (3) - blanket a bit off as You can see on SS
  4. 00:51:779 (3) - might be make more sharp shape on this slider? For example: https://puu.sh/w4V77.jpg Right now it looks like You have lack of place and because of it You made 00:51:498 (2,3,4) - uneven visual flow, also You somewhy used sharp (with red anchors i mean) sliders only once at the beggining i dont see the problem here xd
  5. 00:24:873 (3,4) - and once at the end 01:19:339 (5) - , i think You may give them one more chance to show themself in place where it fits well . It's only my opinion orz (adress to 00:53:463 (6) - too) i still dont get the issue its just way of mapping a style there isnt really a problem with the sliders or the flow
  6. 00:59:339 (4,5,6) - Why did You ctrl-g rhythm here? 00:57:673 (1,2,3) - this part make emphasis in vocal plan in same way like next part, i think will be more intuitive to repeat rhythm to still folow vocal as You did in other diffs. i think both way can expressed same its just little variation wont hurt i guess
  7. 01:13:506 (6) - i think less curved slider like 01:16:006 (4) - looks nicer here. https://puu.sh/w4WE5.jpg (also same side curved sliders make more neat pattern and more clear flow imo) i intentionaly want that different flow direction between 6 and 1 because new section new combo new pattern


[Advanced]
  1. 00:10:862 - i guess there is no beat... orz, or its too calm to make it clicable... but i can clearly hear 00:11:701 - beat wich is much stronger but still unclicable. i think https://puu.sh/w4XRU.jpg rhythm might work much better tbh there is clear piano i am following
  2. 00:29:645 - i think it should be clicable since there is no vocals and beat here really strong, i can suggesst smthing like https://puu.sh/w4ZhE.jpg for emphasis stretched sounds 00:29:084 - 00:29:645 - . imo it works pretty well the suggesting u gave me will make the drum sound on upbeat not clickable and idont want that also that piano sound is expressed nicely with slider hold and taill since this an advanced i see no wrong i like how its mapped
  3. 00:29:926 (4,5,6,1) - i think spacing between these 4 objects can be cleaner(like equal visual spacing from 1 or 00:29:926 (4,5) - 00:30:487 (6,1) - parallel lines) they look fine
  4. 00:45:645 (3,4,5,1) - i belive these blankets could be a bit cleaner (https://puu.sh/w4YlW.jpg instead of https://puu.sh/w4Ynp.jpg) fixed


[Hard]

  • tbh i have no idea how your flow and patterns should works here...
  1. 00:04:708 (4,5,6) - 00:05:827 (6,7,8) - might create equel angle fixed
  2. 00:07:505 (2,2,4) - changing angle ( not 00:08:064 (1,2,3) - not 00:07:785 (3,1,3) - not 00:07:225 (1,2,3) - not even 00:06:386 (9,1,2) - ) just randomly new one it's just randomly change direction... why? because the music :)
  3. 00:38:347 (1,2,3,4) - also your choosing angles is pretty questionable for me. 00:37:505 (1,2,3) - maybe 00:38:347 (1,2,3) - make them equal cause now they are not. Also 00:36:663 (7,1,2,3,1) - might be more symmetric
  4. 00:29:084 (4) - this flow changing also looks pretty sharp since don't even use 00:26:558 (6,1,2) - angle for being at least a bit consistency... yeah in this way You can emphasize strong sounds by create sharp flow, but it should be consistent i guess and be used for sounds like 00:30:768 (1) - also...
    It looks like You are using strong geometric flow without strong geometric sence... it's prety wierd orz

    And about mechanics:
    i give most simple example: For sliders like 00:50:937 (1) - i should follow from start slider to middle, hold a bit (for pass it) and back to head. Same for 00:55:147 (4) - , but then i see 01:01:006 (1) - and actually the most simple way to follow it just don't come back to head (because next circle placed oposite cursor move and also ds somewhy increases which force me to do something different) and hold in middle more and after it continue move to next note..., so it's just different mechanics to pass this section, it feels pretty wierd since it's not high star technical map... :roll:

    So, this map need more thought maybe, because your idea looks unclear, at least for me... :?idk how i reply these type of mods ill just sum up things i chose different directions to emphasise different music and sounds thats all i can say and for this 01:01:006 (1) - i want express the tensity of the vocals with music so i took that path



All for now.
I stop now since here 4 am and i need to wake up at 6. :okill me someone pls
thank u for mod !

gottagof4ast wrote:

NM from my queue
Might be a bad mod as I normally prefer to mod higher diffs but as I have to learn how to mod everything I am giving this a shot
General

For some reason B3 (background 3?) is .png so you might want to make it into .jpg to reduce filesize http://i.imgur.com/ciUj96x.png, B3 is also 1920x1200 instead of 1920x1080

I have no clue how you got the audio's filesize to 170kbps but you probably already know this
Hard

00:08:903 (4,5,6) - I like that 00:09:463 (5) - has a larger jump to it for the louder piano sound but then 00:09:743 (6) - is just spaced like you would with other normal notes although it also has that same volume piano because the emphasise with put on 00:09:463 (5) - if i also space the other
5 will lose its emphasise


00:14:778 (2,3) - just my opinion but this just looks weird as you had this 00:13:938 (1,2) - flow very well into eachother but then suddenly you just make a 90 degree angle to get to the next object and then again to follow the slider i dont see pproblem since the music felt stable when i put the 90 degree and then it back to the other flow if u know what i mean

00:20:663 (1) - could use some more spacing, very important downbeat with loud vocal and piano fixed


00:21:505 (4,5) - ^^ ok

00:29:926 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - idk about this pattern, if it was your intention to use a wide angle to emphsise 00:30:768 (1) - then that may be a good idea but it just doesn't stand out enough beacause you are repeating the shape at 00:29:926 (5,6,7) - which doesn't have any important sounds (atleast not ones that are more way more important than the otehrs)
Maybe something like 00:37:505 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - where 00:38:347 (1) - really stands out would be better but they take differnt direction and flow even tho they look same

01:16:006 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - I really like this pattern thx
ezekyanna's Mercenary

00:10:022 (4,1) - the way these overlap now is just not so nice, maybe try and fit it better inside of the slider?

00:16:456 (2,3,4,1) - this feels so out of place as it's the only spot where the 1/2 gaps are stacked like this, I would just keep going with those jumps like at 00:14:498 (2,3,4,5) - but maybe a bit smaller as they are quieter

00:18:137 (2,1,2) - I know it fits nicely as a blanket but 00:18:979 (1) - has low spacing for an important vocal+ instrumental sound and then you have the larger spacing for 00:19:259 (2) - which barely has an instrumental sound. It flows nicely but it doesn't fit the music imo okay i ctrl g 1 and 2

00:21:505 (4) - The sound of the piano is way different than the others but it's just mapped as another not in the pattern that doesn't stand out in any way, you made piano sounds stand out at 00:22:347 (1) - /00:24:031 (1) - /00:27:400 (1) - with larger spacing so why not here but they are expressed same wy xd

01:21:839 (3,4,5) - These have very slightly different spacing fixed

The only thing thats weird is this diff spike in the kiai 01:02:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -, Diff spike seems way too large. It's like "Ok, I'm mapping this song with like 2.5x ds max" and then suddenly you place 6 consecutive almost 3.5x ds jumps. But thats probably just me as 01:09:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - feels fine to me (probably beacause of a better builup in spacing and the shape continues as expected)
Also I don't know how geometrically correct you want this hexagon shape to be but it's pretty off http://i.imgur.com/6LLIvs8.png
no reply is ezek part


Gl with the map :)

[ L u k a s ] wrote:

short mod, modding only last diff since others were p good

ezekyanna

00:03:869 (1) - Why so big spacing? It doesn't have that much of an emphasizing in the song.
00:07:225 (1) - ^
00:11:980 (3) - ^
00:25:716 (1) - Why NC and why the change of flow? Ctrl+G nc because consistent and change of flow because emphasise piano
00:27:400 (1) - Very big spacing, why
00:32:452 (1) - Why NC?
01:02:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This song is overall very calm and slow so the big jumps aren't really reflecting any of the song, no sudden change in intensity or something, it's not even pp xd

nothing else to say about this map really, it's p good and the final diff still doesn't feel right cause of the song's intensity and stuff but you can change that if you want. I just thought it would reflect the song better if you used less spacing.
That was it, sorry for short mod
no reply for ezek part

thank u for mod everyone :)
posted
Hello There!
As promised long ago!
Easy
You could try to NC every 2 downbeats to not overly clutter your new Combos
  1. 00:05:547 (2) - You could split this into 2 circles to get the better effect on the prominent sounds here which exist in both the sliderhead and sliderend
  2. 00:10:582 (1) - I'd rather you didnt use the reverse here cause it kinda overlaps this strong beat 00:12:260 - . However I understand the need for variety so you could try to place the 1/1 reverse here instead 00:07:225 (1) - and making this 00:09:743 - a circle
  3. 00:13:938 (1,2) - You could make this symmetrical, since you use a lot of symmetry in your placements throughout the map
  4. 00:29:084 - Try making a 1/1 slider start here instead. Having 2 circle in a row when they are kinda different musically breaks the emphasis on 00:30:768 (1) -
  5. 00:34:137 (1) - Should have been a 1/1 reverse, consistency with 00:20:663 (1) - . Also its the more logical choice since 00:36:663 - this is made clickable
  6. 00:54:305 (1) - Vocal isnt really similar with 00:47:610 (1) - as in, it doesnt land on all the white ticks in the reverse. Thus I would rather make this a 1/1 slider instead and starting a new 1/1 slider from here 00:55:989 - to emphasize the vocal once more
  7. 01:17:673 (1,2) - The slider anchors here feel a bit unintuitive aesthetically i would rather make the wave show more it just looks awkward at its current state
Normal
As it stands i feel like there is a spread issue here between this diff and the "Easy". While the easy mostly has 1/1 and no 1/2 the normal is filled with 1/2 rhythms with a lot of clicks making the transition really sudden and the spread suprisingly uneven. Following suggestions should work on fixing some the rhythms here
  1. 00:06:386 (6) - This utilizes 1/2 snap for no reason. This a normal diff so you shouldnt really focus on the background layers. Instead focus on the more dominant sounds by making this a 1/1 slider
  2. 00:07:225 (1,2) - Would work better as 1/2 reverse the circle there is pretty excessive
  3. 00:10:582 (1,2) - 1/1 slider to emphasize the hold better
  4. 00:15:617 (4,5) - Again here, a 1/1 slider would compliment the more prominent sounds here better
  5. 00:22:347 (4,5) - 1/1 slider here to reduce density
  6. 00:24:873 (3) - The red anchors a bit too close to the sliderhead/slideend. Shape definitely could be improved here
  7. 00:27:400 (1) - 1/1 slider for the vocal hold
  8. 00:30:768 (1) - Dominant instrument implies a 1/1 slider here
  9. 00:32:452 (3) - 1/1 slider here, consistency with 00:18:979 (3) -
  10. 00:49:295 (4) - 1/1 slider could work here for the vocals
  11. 00:57:673 (1,2) - 1/1 slider for the vocal hold
  12. 00:59:339 (4) - Similar point as above ( consistency with 01:06:006 (4) - as well )
  13. 01:04:339 (1,2) - Same^
  14. 01:11:006 (1,2) - Yup same ^
  15. 01:17:673 (1,2) - Also 1/1 slider here
  16. 01:24:339 (1) - 1/1 slider for the vocal hold and rhythm differentiation with the other 2 reverses

These should help reduce density to an extent however this definitely needs another look from someone else
Advanced
  1. 00:05:547 (5,6) - It would be more optimal to use a similar rhythm to 00:12:260 (6,7) - for the added consistency and emphasis on the held note
  2. 00:08:064 (4) - the ticks that land on this reverse are drastically stronger than 00:07:225 (1,2,3) - which are made clickable. I would suggest this 00:07:225 (1,2,3) - being the reverse and this 00:08:064 (4) - being the 3 clickable notes. Same applies for 00:08:903 (5,6,7,8) - . Ctrl G this rhythm as well
  3. 00:13:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Similar point with this rhythm, needs some rework
  4. 00:20:663 (1) - 1/1 Slider would work better to better accentuate the vocals
  5. 00:27:400 (1) - Similar point here^
  6. 00:30:768 (1) - Also a 1/1 slider for the string accentuation
  7. 00:40:873 (1,2,3) - 1/1 here also, generally 1/1 sliders would better accentuate sounds that are underwhelmed by the constant 1/2
  8. 00:49:295 (5) - 1/1 here also, you can understand at this point i assume
  9. 01:03:506 (6,1) - Visual distancing is a bit questionable here, the transition should allow for some more intesity. You could try a 3 circle pattern for the extra emphasis on the vocals
  10. 01:07:673 (1) - 1/1 slider, consistency with .. basically every vocal hold
  11. 01:10:173 (6,1) - Similar point with the visual distance issue with 01:03:506 (6,1) -
  12. 01:21:006 (1) - 1/1 slider for consistency
Hard
  1. 00:05:547 (5,6,7,8) - should follow a consistent rhythmic expression as 00:12:260 (5,6) - . Also on the second rhythm, 00:11:421 (4) - this feel like it overwhelms strong beats that could have been made clickable
  2. 00:08:903 (4,5) - Provided you follow a consistent DS Basis, this is inconsistent by a long shot for no reason since there isnt any particular sound that stands out here
  3. 00:13:938 (1,2) - Reeally contrasts the density in clickabily with its counterpart 00:07:225 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - . You also dont utilize the same NC mechanic making seem really inconsistent. Also i suggest dropping this NC mechanic since u dont it consistently so it seems rather offputting
  4. 00:30:768 (1,2,3) - Having 2 sets of circles between 2 sound layers feels a bit weird since there isnt any apparent transition. In my opinion its better to place a 1/1 slider here
  5. 00:41:434 (3,4) - Some unnecessary spacing here
  6. 00:48:172 (3,4) - Visual distancing is a bit low here you could spread out this pattern a tad bit to take up more space on the playfield, its kinda cluttered as it stands
  7. 00:50:937 (1,3) - These 2 would well as a 1/2 slider -> circle rhythm to emphasize the vocals better
  8. 01:01:006 (1,2) - If you were to switch to a non-consistent DS Mechanic on the kiai, this is not the optimal place imo. 01:01:839 (2,3) - This however should allow some more spacing to be had, consistency with the accentuated vocal on 01:03:228 (5,1) -
  9. 01:09:895 (5,1) - Inconsistent spacing with 01:03:228 (5,1) - . Then again you should drop the spacing on 01:03:228 (5,1) - a bit
  10. 01:12:117 (4,5) - You never emphasized this before so its weird to me that you did it now
  11. 01:16:561 (5,1) - After seeing the spacing here i believe this jump 01:03:228 (5,1) - should be nerfed
  12. 01:23:228 (7,1) - Also this jump could be increased
  13. 01:24:062 (3,1) - This spacing doesnt really fit your spacing emphasis. The vocal is dying down and yet this has the most spacing out of all the jumps in this difficulty. Definitely lower
ezekyanna's Mercenary
  1. 00:04:708 (4,1,2,3) - To be honest you could form a consistent rhythm with 00:11:980 (3,1) - . It compliments the song better imo
  2. 00:16:456 (2,3,4) - having 3 clickable objects so close together to represent something that you used higher spacing to accentuate previously seems really underwhelming. I would suggest something more spaced or a rhythm incorporating sliders
  3. 00:20:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these circles dont accentuate rhythm at all does to the 1/2 nature. Nothing in the song here indicates a consistent 1/2 click pattern. Try to use more sliders here for the dominant sounds
  4. 00:24:873 (4) - 1/2 slider -> circle would work nicely here instead to make the vocal on 00:25:435 -
  5. 00:27:119 (4,1) - this jump is a bit too much for the intensity provided
  6. 00:42:277 (6,1) - I Dont understand why this was directly stacked tbh. the beat on the slider is really strong but theres no movement to get to it
  7. 00:48:733 (5,6) - Also proportionally this shouldnt have that much spacing considering there is more of a vocal hold here instead of a 1/2 choppy vocal
  8. 00:59:061 (5,1) - Again having this stacked is really awkward, as its really underwhelming . Same here 01:05:728 (5,1) -
  9. 00:59:895 (2,3) - CTRLGing the rhythm here would emphasize the vocal better. same here 01:13:228 (2,3) -
  10. 01:01:839 (3,4) - In order to disperse the jumps a bit you could make this a 1/2 slider to emphasize the instrument thats kinda prominent on 01:01:841 -
  11. 01:05:173 (3,4) - Similar point here^

Jumps on this feel really big and forced for the song provided. On the kiai, try to differentiate strings of jumps on 1/2 vocals and more slider oriented rhythm on everywhere else to at least emphasize some of the spacing
Best of Luck~!
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