NM from my queue
Might be a bad mod as I normally prefer to mod higher diffs but as I have to learn how to mod everything I am giving this a shot
General
For some reason B3 (background 3?) is .png so you might want to make it into .jpg to reduce filesize https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/ciUj96x.png, B3 is also 1920x1200 instead of 1920x1080
I have no clue how you got the audio's filesize to 170kbps but you probably already know this
Hard
00:08:903 (4,5,6) - I like that 00:09:463 (5) - has a larger jump to it for the louder piano sound but then 00:09:743 (6) - is just spaced like you would with other normal notes although it also has that same volume piano
00:14:778 (2,3) - just my opinion but this just looks weird as you had this 00:13:938 (1,2) - flow very well into eachother but then suddenly you just make a 90 degree angle to get to the next object and then again to follow the slider
00:20:663 (1) - could use some more spacing, very important downbeat with loud vocal and piano
00:21:505 (4,5) - ^^
00:29:926 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - idk about this pattern, if it was your intention to use a wide angle to emphsise 00:30:768 (1) - then that may be a good idea but it just doesn't stand out enough beacause you are repeating the shape at 00:29:926 (5,6,7) - which doesn't have any important sounds (atleast not ones that are more way more important than the otehrs)
Maybe something like 00:37:505 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - where 00:38:347 (1) - really stands out would be better
01:16:006 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - I really like this pattern
ezekyanna's Mercenary
00:10:022 (4,1) - the way these overlap now is just not so nice, maybe try and fit it better inside of the slider?
00:16:456 (2,3,4,1) - this feels so out of place as it's the only spot where the 1/2 gaps are stacked like this, I would just keep going with those jumps like at 00:14:498 (2,3,4,5) - but maybe a bit smaller as they are quieter
00:18:137 (2,1,2) - I know it fits nicely as a blanket but 00:18:979 (1) - has low spacing for an important vocal+ instrumental sound and then you have the larger spacing for 00:19:259 (2) - which barely has an instrumental sound. It flows nicely but it doesn't fit the music imo
00:21:505 (4) - The sound of the piano is way different than the others but it's just mapped as another not in the pattern that doesn't stand out in any way, you made piano sounds stand out at 00:22:347 (1) - /00:24:031 (1) - /00:27:400 (1) - with larger spacing so why not here
01:21:839 (3,4,5) - These have very slightly different spacing
The only thing thats weird is this diff spike in the kiai 01:02:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -, Diff spike seems way too large. It's like "Ok, I'm mapping this song with like 2.5x ds max" and then suddenly you place 6 consecutive almost 3.5x ds jumps. But thats probably just me as 01:09:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - feels fine to me (probably beacause of a better builup in spacing and the shape continues as expected)
Also I don't know how geometrically correct you want this hexagon shape to be but it's pretty off https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/6LLIvs8.png
Gl with the map
Might be a bad mod as I normally prefer to mod higher diffs but as I have to learn how to mod everything I am giving this a shot
For some reason B3 (background 3?) is .png so you might want to make it into .jpg to reduce filesize https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/ciUj96x.png, B3 is also 1920x1200 instead of 1920x1080
I have no clue how you got the audio's filesize to 170kbps but you probably already know this
00:08:903 (4,5,6) - I like that 00:09:463 (5) - has a larger jump to it for the louder piano sound but then 00:09:743 (6) - is just spaced like you would with other normal notes although it also has that same volume piano
00:14:778 (2,3) - just my opinion but this just looks weird as you had this 00:13:938 (1,2) - flow very well into eachother but then suddenly you just make a 90 degree angle to get to the next object and then again to follow the slider
00:20:663 (1) - could use some more spacing, very important downbeat with loud vocal and piano
00:21:505 (4,5) - ^^
00:29:926 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - idk about this pattern, if it was your intention to use a wide angle to emphsise 00:30:768 (1) - then that may be a good idea but it just doesn't stand out enough beacause you are repeating the shape at 00:29:926 (5,6,7) - which doesn't have any important sounds (atleast not ones that are more way more important than the otehrs)
Maybe something like 00:37:505 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - where 00:38:347 (1) - really stands out would be better
01:16:006 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - I really like this pattern
00:10:022 (4,1) - the way these overlap now is just not so nice, maybe try and fit it better inside of the slider?
00:16:456 (2,3,4,1) - this feels so out of place as it's the only spot where the 1/2 gaps are stacked like this, I would just keep going with those jumps like at 00:14:498 (2,3,4,5) - but maybe a bit smaller as they are quieter
00:18:137 (2,1,2) - I know it fits nicely as a blanket but 00:18:979 (1) - has low spacing for an important vocal+ instrumental sound and then you have the larger spacing for 00:19:259 (2) - which barely has an instrumental sound. It flows nicely but it doesn't fit the music imo
00:21:505 (4) - The sound of the piano is way different than the others but it's just mapped as another not in the pattern that doesn't stand out in any way, you made piano sounds stand out at 00:22:347 (1) - /00:24:031 (1) - /00:27:400 (1) - with larger spacing so why not here
01:21:839 (3,4,5) - These have very slightly different spacing
The only thing thats weird is this diff spike in the kiai 01:02:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -, Diff spike seems way too large. It's like "Ok, I'm mapping this song with like 2.5x ds max" and then suddenly you place 6 consecutive almost 3.5x ds jumps. But thats probably just me as 01:09:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - feels fine to me (probably beacause of a better builup in spacing and the shape continues as expected)
Also I don't know how geometrically correct you want this hexagon shape to be but it's pretty off https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/6LLIvs8.png
Gl with the map