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I approve this HS, but the name of lithsounds is too :thinking:
sadmasldmlaksd !:D! Drop me kudos (or not) if this was slightly helpful! stahp mapping so et so i can find more suggestions
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I approve this HS, but the name of lithsounds is too :thinking:
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•Green: Mostly just a simple suggestion, can be ignored but consider it.
•Orange: A concern, might want to revise and check it through.
•Red: Critical point, revise thoroughly and implement changes.
1 | 2 | 3 | 4
•Green: Mostly just a simple suggestion, can be ignored but consider it.
•Orange: A concern, might want to revise and check it through.
•Red: Critical point, revise thoroughly and implement changes.
Da hell am i doing
Priority | • 00:38:183 (38183|2,38264|3) - I really think you should move this all one col to the left, why? I think it'll transition better to 00:38:345 (38345|0,38426|1,38507|2,38507|3) - , which pretty much will be a more decent type of direction change.
Priority | • 00:51:074 (51074|1,51156|2,51237|1,51318|2,51399|0,51480|2,51561|0,51642|2) - Not so sure why did you add trills here at all since i don't see them fit at all with the rhythm or the music itself? I'd say you just finish it as a light JS rather than trilling it.
Priority | • 01:07:047 (67047|0,67129|2) - Even the broken stuff follows certain patterns; i think you should really move 01:07:129 (67129|1) - to [2] and CTRL+H all of this 01:07:210 (67210|1,67210|0,67291|2,67291|3,67372|1,67372|0,67453|2,67534|3,67534|0,67534|1,67696|2,67858|1,68020|0) - to fix it. Trust me, i've tested dis :^).
Priority | • 01:18:723 (78723|3,78804|1,78885|2,78966|1,79047|3) - Edgyness at its finest..
Priority | • 01:27:561 - There is a strong sound of what seems to be a rim hit here, i would highly recommend you map this.
Priority | • 01:30:804 (90804|3,90885|2,90966|1,91047|2,91129|3) - From everything you used in that section, this feels very odd to play, i dont think you should add that type of hand movement there.
Priority | • 01:43:858 (103858|3,103858|1,104507|3,104507|1,105156|3,105156|1,105804|3,105804|1) - I think you might want to vary your jumps here since you use that one quite often and feels a bit repetitive.
Priority | • 02:04:615 - Just saying you could add a small challenging LNs here representing the soft vocals, but thats pretty much up to you.
Priority | • 02:20:183 (140183|2) - Still pretty clueless on why did you add a single here, i think with the LN is enough to represent the small hi hat sound.
Priority | • 02:58:939 (178939|3,179020|1,179102|3) - I think you should make this a one handed trill, mostly say it because it can be a bit hard to hit with this jump 02:59:102 (179102|0,179102|3) - .
Priority | • 03:27:318 (207318|0) - Think you might wanna add a crash here in contrast with 03:27:642 (207642|3) - so the PAN fixes and also i think there should be a crash there.
Priority | • 03:34:453 (214453|1) - Since there is the same vocal repeated here at 03:34:615 - , you could maybe shorten this to a 1/4 LN and add another LN in the same col here 03:34:615 - so in that way both sounds are represented.
Priority | • 03:34:939 (214939|3) - This LN should be 1/2 instead of 1/1 since there is another vocal that starts at 03:35:102 - .
Priority | • 03:39:642 (219642|2) - Same things i mentioned with the 1/4 jacked LN. (read above)
Priority | • 03:44:831 (224831|1) - ^
Priority | • 03:45:318 (225318|3) - Same here as well with the 1/1 LN, cut it to 1/2 and add another LN at 03:45:480 - .
Priority | • 03:50:020 (230020|1) - To summarize, 1/4 jacks.
Priority | • 04:00:561 (240561|3) - Change col pls, already used it for 03:59:912 (239912|3) - and still not even in the stack section.
Priority | • 04:36:074 (276074|3,276237|3) - Move this to [3] so it doesn't interfere with 04:36:723 (276723|3,276885|3) - , or you could do it with this one too.
Priority | • 04:40:291 - You pretty much follow from that section on frequent direction change which is from left to right, might as well wana do it right to left to vary it a bit more.
Priority | • 05:01:047 (301047|0,301047|3) - WHERE IS MAH CRASH.
Priority | • 00:51:074 (51074|1,51156|2,51237|1,51318|2,51399|0,51480|2,51561|0,51642|2) - Not so sure why did you add trills here at all since i don't see them fit at all with the rhythm or the music itself? I'd say you just finish it as a light JS rather than trilling it.
Priority | • 01:07:047 (67047|0,67129|2) - Even the broken stuff follows certain patterns; i think you should really move 01:07:129 (67129|1) - to [2] and CTRL+H all of this 01:07:210 (67210|1,67210|0,67291|2,67291|3,67372|1,67372|0,67453|2,67534|3,67534|0,67534|1,67696|2,67858|1,68020|0) - to fix it. Trust me, i've tested dis :^).
Priority | • 01:18:723 (78723|3,78804|1,78885|2,78966|1,79047|3) - Edgyness at its finest..
Priority | • 01:27:561 - There is a strong sound of what seems to be a rim hit here, i would highly recommend you map this.
Priority | • 01:30:804 (90804|3,90885|2,90966|1,91047|2,91129|3) - From everything you used in that section, this feels very odd to play, i dont think you should add that type of hand movement there.
Priority | • 01:43:858 (103858|3,103858|1,104507|3,104507|1,105156|3,105156|1,105804|3,105804|1) - I think you might want to vary your jumps here since you use that one quite often and feels a bit repetitive.
Priority | • 02:04:615 - Just saying you could add a small challenging LNs here representing the soft vocals, but thats pretty much up to you.
Priority | • 02:20:183 (140183|2) - Still pretty clueless on why did you add a single here, i think with the LN is enough to represent the small hi hat sound.
Priority | • 02:58:939 (178939|3,179020|1,179102|3) - I think you should make this a one handed trill, mostly say it because it can be a bit hard to hit with this jump 02:59:102 (179102|0,179102|3) - .
Priority | • 03:27:318 (207318|0) - Think you might wanna add a crash here in contrast with 03:27:642 (207642|3) - so the PAN fixes and also i think there should be a crash there.
Priority | • 03:34:453 (214453|1) - Since there is the same vocal repeated here at 03:34:615 - , you could maybe shorten this to a 1/4 LN and add another LN in the same col here 03:34:615 - so in that way both sounds are represented.
Priority | • 03:34:939 (214939|3) - This LN should be 1/2 instead of 1/1 since there is another vocal that starts at 03:35:102 - .
Priority | • 03:39:642 (219642|2) - Same things i mentioned with the 1/4 jacked LN. (read above)
Priority | • 03:44:831 (224831|1) - ^
Priority | • 03:45:318 (225318|3) - Same here as well with the 1/1 LN, cut it to 1/2 and add another LN at 03:45:480 - .
Priority | • 03:50:020 (230020|1) - To summarize, 1/4 jacks.
Priority | • 04:00:561 (240561|3) - Change col pls, already used it for 03:59:912 (239912|3) - and still not even in the stack section.
Priority | • 04:36:074 (276074|3,276237|3) - Move this to [3] so it doesn't interfere with 04:36:723 (276723|3,276885|3) - , or you could do it with this one too.
Priority | • 04:40:291 - You pretty much follow from that section on frequent direction change which is from left to right, might as well wana do it right to left to vary it a bit more.
Priority | • 05:01:047 (301047|0,301047|3) - WHERE IS MAH CRASH.
sadmasldmlaksd !:D! Drop me kudos (or not) if this was slightly helpful! stahp mapping so et so i can find more suggestions
luk for rank