delet dis map
[General]wrong keymode, +1 maybe?
[Disconcerting, like my math test on monday]
00:09:156 (9156|1,9318|1,9480|1,9642|2,10453|1) - Tbh, might just control H this so there's not so much strain on the left hand with the 2 1 2 stacks.
00:20:345 (20345|1,20385|0) - I think it'd be easier to hit the burst if you control J this so that the entire burst consists of two 1234 rolls and then control J 00:20:507 (20507|1,20547|0) - to make the final half 1243 splitrolls. Easier to group the notes this way and hit them without the constant changes in direction,
especially at faster BPMs such as this.
00:26:831 - to 00:27:966 - I know the mirrored pattern here is most likely not intentional, but I'd try to vary the directions a bit to avoid having the same general hand movements but reversed. So maybe like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9047095
00:40:696 - 00:41:345 - There's a note here so the 1/4 burst is continuous for the entire measure. I'd add the notes in there then to represent a small minibuild up leading into the next phrase.
00:51:074 - 00:51:723 - 00:51:885 - ^ Could do something with trills like this to differentiate it from the broken streams before it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9047117
01:23:912 (83912|1,84237|1) - I'd consider moving this to col 1 instead cause col 2 already has quite a bit of weight in this measure just from 01:23:264 (83264|1,83588|1) - in the kick - snare (jump - hand) before it
01:27:318 - P sure this is in 1/6 because unlike 01:26:993 - where the pitch of the buzzes are all the same, you can hear four distinct and descending pitches.
I think it's ok hear to make an exception for consistency though because it's a very tiny detail of the music that's hard to spot, but you might also consider changing the snap to help lead into the 1/3 at 01:27:642 - . At this difficulty level though, both snaps are easily read and hit by the player.
01:38:345 (98345|1) - I think it'd be nice to make this a 1/1 LN for the vocal to act as a bridge into the next section at 01:38:669 - as it forces the player to coordinate both hands to release and hit accurately rather than having the player anticipate the amount of time between one beat for when to hit the next note.
01:42:885 (102885|2,102885|1,103210|2,103210|1,103534|1,103534|2) - Not the biggest fan of repeating jumps like this, especially of the 23 variety cause it puts all the strain on the middle finger imo. Instead, I'd try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9047153
01:48:399 (108399|3,108723|0) - I'd try to differentiate these longer held buzzes by making them 1/6 long LNs as that's how long they last compared to 01:48:507 (108507|2,108615|1,108831|3,108939|2) - which are instantaneous
02:09:696 (129696|3,129750|2,129804|3) - pls gaben stahp https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9047169 . Think the screenshot I made is easier cause the minitrill is two handed rather than one handed, so it's like alternating two 1/3 jacks across col 2 and 3 :thinking:
02:30:074 - Sounds like a very quiet shift in pitch here, but it's really not that noticeable so I can understand why you most likely intentionally left it out.
03:48:561 (228561|0,228723|1,228885|1,229047|0) - Think it'd be easier to hit these if you flipped columns so that there aren't two 1/2 LNs in col 1, one right after the other. So something like this would be easier cause there's less strain in col 1 than what you have now (didnt flip the last note cause it'd have create two ministacks on the left hand I didnt notice before) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9047188
05:01:047 - still waiting for this finish :^))))))))
[Disconcerting, like my math test on monday]
00:09:156 (9156|1,9318|1,9480|1,9642|2,10453|1) - Tbh, might just control H this so there's not so much strain on the left hand with the 2 1 2 stacks.
00:20:345 (20345|1,20385|0) - I think it'd be easier to hit the burst if you control J this so that the entire burst consists of two 1234 rolls and then control J 00:20:507 (20507|1,20547|0) - to make the final half 1243 splitrolls. Easier to group the notes this way and hit them without the constant changes in direction,
especially at faster BPMs such as this.
00:26:831 - to 00:27:966 - I know the mirrored pattern here is most likely not intentional, but I'd try to vary the directions a bit to avoid having the same general hand movements but reversed. So maybe like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9047095
00:40:696 - 00:41:345 - There's a note here so the 1/4 burst is continuous for the entire measure. I'd add the notes in there then to represent a small minibuild up leading into the next phrase.
00:51:074 - 00:51:723 - 00:51:885 - ^ Could do something with trills like this to differentiate it from the broken streams before it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9047117
01:23:912 (83912|1,84237|1) - I'd consider moving this to col 1 instead cause col 2 already has quite a bit of weight in this measure just from 01:23:264 (83264|1,83588|1) - in the kick - snare (jump - hand) before it
01:27:318 - P sure this is in 1/6 because unlike 01:26:993 - where the pitch of the buzzes are all the same, you can hear four distinct and descending pitches.
I think it's ok hear to make an exception for consistency though because it's a very tiny detail of the music that's hard to spot, but you might also consider changing the snap to help lead into the 1/3 at 01:27:642 - . At this difficulty level though, both snaps are easily read and hit by the player.
01:38:345 (98345|1) - I think it'd be nice to make this a 1/1 LN for the vocal to act as a bridge into the next section at 01:38:669 - as it forces the player to coordinate both hands to release and hit accurately rather than having the player anticipate the amount of time between one beat for when to hit the next note.
01:42:885 (102885|2,102885|1,103210|2,103210|1,103534|1,103534|2) - Not the biggest fan of repeating jumps like this, especially of the 23 variety cause it puts all the strain on the middle finger imo. Instead, I'd try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9047153
01:48:399 (108399|3,108723|0) - I'd try to differentiate these longer held buzzes by making them 1/6 long LNs as that's how long they last compared to 01:48:507 (108507|2,108615|1,108831|3,108939|2) - which are instantaneous
02:09:696 (129696|3,129750|2,129804|3) - pls gaben stahp https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9047169 . Think the screenshot I made is easier cause the minitrill is two handed rather than one handed, so it's like alternating two 1/3 jacks across col 2 and 3 :thinking:
02:30:074 - Sounds like a very quiet shift in pitch here, but it's really not that noticeable so I can understand why you most likely intentionally left it out.
03:48:561 (228561|0,228723|1,228885|1,229047|0) - Think it'd be easier to hit these if you flipped columns so that there aren't two 1/2 LNs in col 1, one right after the other. So something like this would be easier cause there's less strain in col 1 than what you have now (didnt flip the last note cause it'd have create two ministacks on the left hand I didnt notice before) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9047188
05:01:047 - still waiting for this finish :^))))))))
oh yeah, if I said something that contradicts your layering, it's cause I deleted all the bookmarks :^)