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As I expect i can't point out much, nicely done.
Solid lamb meat is solid, great job. call me back if you're done
[General]
Welp, If i somehow suggest Ctrl+G , please move manually instead, since i know it can screwed HS..
- 00:24:063 (24063|1,24107|0) - This flow is kinda inconsistent imo, since if you see 00:24:152 (24152|3,24196|2,24240|1,24284|0,24328|3,24372|2) - , they're 1 direction flow , while 00:23:887 (23887|0,23931|1,23975|2,24019|3,24063|1,24107|0) - it's reverse flow. I suggest to Ctrl+G this for flow consistency.
- 00:38:710 - I felt this stream structure is almost the same as the one at 00:35:887 - albeit the latter one have additional clap there. So my suggestion is to make something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8258564 , i think the stack can emphasize and build clearer structure towards additional clap.
- 01:20:710 - I expect this to be double LN because of how the emphasis went strong here, i think it's more important than make 01:21:063 - becoming big chord.
- 01:50:710 - The feeling og vocal here already quite different with the one at 01:49:299 - , so still using the same trill pattern that focusing on column 3 felt awkward imo,
- 01:53:622 (113622|2) - I prefer if you make complete trill by moving this at col 4, you probably want to follow structure at 01:54:240 - but since they are separated by 1/4 jack, i think you can make them a bit different. moreover, the "cha cha" sound at 01:53:622 - 01:53:799 - already fit more than enough for trill.
- 01:54:240 (114240|0,114328|3) - I think make this at col 2 and col 1 will bring the structure more apparent here, since you can basically mirror 01:54:593 (114593|3,114681|1,114769|3) - which seems better imo.
- 01:56:357 (116357|3,116357|0) - Try making the double at 2-3? because you make the double at 01:54:946 (114946|3,114946|2,115299|2,115299|3,115652|2,115652|3) - being in the same column three times, so i thought you should make this double three times being in the same column too with 01:56:710 (116710|1,116710|2,117063|2,117063|1) -
- 02:17:004 - Felt like you need to add note here, it felt a bit empty here, and i do think you can fit the consistency with 02:16:652 - too.
- 02:37:299 - the 3,00x SV is rough to hit here since it gives illusion of hitting which causing 200 to appear for most part imo, and this is kinda spiking and the hardest SV in the diff imo, you can lower 3,00x to 2,00x and normalize thing? (i'm kinda bad calculate SV which requires 1/16 thing, sorry..)
- 02:38:534 - The SV kinda rough having 1,9x and 0,1x , try consider 1,5x and 0,5x?
- 02:39:769 - This SV can be lowered to standard 1,25x and 0,75x here, since it occured in unstable note snap, i think you can do that, it still reflect the music too.
- 02:45:593 (165593|1,165769|2) - Felt like you can switch column to differentiate it a bit since the triple actually have different emphasis each other.
- 02:49:652 - This jack kinda rough imo, I think you can use neater one to give more comfortable transition? like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8258922
- 03:24:769 - The same as 01:20:710 - , Make it 4-1 2-3 LN for it to fit the current pattern.
- 03:44:534 (224534|2,224710|1,224710|0) - You should Ctrl+G to fit The ascending pitch here (welp, the hitsound also get wrong because Ctrl+G, so don't forget fix it)
I'm not sure what i have to mod in handstream part, so i will leave it to this.
- 00:38:710 - This is pretty much the same suggestion i gave in x icon diff, I do think this will bring more variety and emphasis towards the music instrument too. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8258982
- 00:46:563 (46563|2,46607|3) - You should Ctrl+G here, the burst sound where it suddenly getting even more intense already occured at 00:46:475 -
- 01:00:416 (60416|3,60593|1) - Do think you should switch column for pitch.
- 01:08:357 (68357|2,68534|0) - I do think this should be at col 2 and col 3 due to pitch too.
- 01:50:710 - The same with highest diff again. Simply by moving 01:50:710 (110710|1,111063|1,111416|1,111769|1) - at col 1 to differentiate already good here.
[*[01:53:887 - I do think instead of ordinary pattern you can use trill instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259068 - 02:29:799 (149799|0,149887|2) - Should switch column too for a bit pitch things
- 03:09:593 (189593|3) - Better change into LN cause i think the synth still quite apparent here.
- 03:49:475 (229475|1,229563|2,229652|0,229652|3,229740|1,229828|2,230181|1,230269|2,230357|0,230357|3,230446|1,230534|2) - I will say this is much better if you Ctrl+H here, mirroring the first two of stair pattern to form better structure instead of repeating same imo.
- 03:54:240 - Since this is a start of new double note chord, i find it awkward if you continued the 2-3 trill here, will be better if you try different trill form like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259140
- 04:16:122 - I do think you should make this triple.
- 00:45:769 - I expect this to be a bit more aggresive since the burst sound is rough sound here, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259166
- 01:00:063 - Maybe you can try to follow a bit more pitch so it can be a bit differentiated with previous stair pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259184
- 01:12:063 (72063|3,72240|0) - Ctrl+H for the same reason.
- 01:50:710 - Same again as previous diff, But i will suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259190 instead.
- 02:36:593 (156593|1) - Really minor, but i expect this to be in col 3 wkkw
- 03:53:181 (233181|1) - This should be at col.3 to follow consistency with 02:00:240 (120240|0,120240|3,120416|0,120416|3) -
- 05:03:416 - I felt this pattern kinda lack the exposure of right direction to stream. try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259259
- 00:35:357 (35357|3,35446|0,35534|1) - Try make this 2-4-1? Felt that it will makes the stream more firm in pattern planning.
- 00:46:563 (46563|1,46652|2,46740|3) - Felt like you can make it more rough for this strong burst sound by make it 3-2-4 (visual is more spreaded, so the accenting is stronger here.)
- 02:03:504 - A bit same like before, i do think you can try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259325
- 03:04:475 (184475|3,184828|0) - Recommend Ctrl+H here.
- 00:14:357 - Don't think you should repeat same pattern here considering you use differentiation at 00:16:122 - , i will switch column of 00:14:357 (14357|3,14710|1) - instead.
- 01:26:004 (86004|3,86357|1) - Switch column for pitch
- 01:27:769 (87769|3,89004|0,89181|3) - make this col 2-4-1 for Pitch again.
- 02:13:299 - Too linear imo, doesn't get the instrument feeling here, maybe you can try move 02:13:475 (133475|2) - ?
- 04:44:004 - A bit underwhelming imo, try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259464
- 00:20:710 (20710|2,21063|1) - Since there's rising instrument atmosphere, why not making it at col 2-3- instead forming stair to the right direction? felt more intuitively correct imo.
- 01:49:299 - I do think you should further expand your trill here for the vocal. something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259489 should work.
- 02:35:887 - The one hand trill kinda appear suddenly imo, i think you can sort of move 02:35:887 (155887|1) - to col 3.
- 02:47:181 - Still think left column are too empty imo, i think you can balance it out with http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259510
Solid lamb meat is solid, great job. call me back if you're done