That's overally an excellent map
00:53:525 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - don't place slow circles like this - maybe do this like similiar pattern's are done in rrtyui's Exit This Earth Atomosphere or handsome's Something Just Like This
00:57:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - stream is too round for this spacing, try to make a semicircle
01:04:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - same here, semicircle would be more playable
01:06:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - same
02:41:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - keep it same-spaced
02:44:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same
02:52:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - decrease spacing
02:58:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same
03:27:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - keep it same-spaced
03:50:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - same as the first advice
Decrease roundness of some later's streams.
04:41:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - here's no reason for spacing change