Hey! Quick NM from me. Excuse any language mistakes I make because my English isn't that fluent.
Good Luck with your Map!
Bunkachou
00:54:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - they lack emphasis campared to 00:49:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - etc.
Mapping them the same although they are clearly different from each other (and with much stronger sounds) doesn't visualize the song pretty good.
03:50:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 03:55:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same case
01:14:437 (2) - I don't know about this one but the strong snare sound is on 1/3
04:15:426 (1,2) - ^
01:37:658 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - I know you want to emphasize the snare sound, but just ignoring the 1/6 beats isn't quite fitting
01:53:642 (1,1,1,1,2) - what the? The sounds are clearly on 1/3, please snap the objects to their sounds
In the next section of the song (between the second and third Kia time) you used these space increasing streams but they aren't quite reasonable to me. They give the impression that the end of the stream has much stronger sounds than the beginning, but mostly this isn't the case at all. So the emphasis isn't quite fitting. Also sometimes some circles of those streams are over mapped.
03:16:496 (3) - over mapped
03:21:951 (2) - ^
03:29:405 (4) - what do you think about NC this one so it gets more readable that it has a 2 tick gap and not just only 1 tick. It's hard to read because they have the same screen spacing, also spacing the 4 a more would help
03:49:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - I don't know how to feel about this one, but it's oddly over mapped, the week sounds which could be mapped as a stream are on 1/3 and they are really week
Mapping them the same although they are clearly different from each other (and with much stronger sounds) doesn't visualize the song pretty good.
03:50:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 03:55:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same case
01:14:437 (2) - I don't know about this one but the strong snare sound is on 1/3
04:15:426 (1,2) - ^
01:37:658 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - I know you want to emphasize the snare sound, but just ignoring the 1/6 beats isn't quite fitting
01:53:642 (1,1,1,1,2) - what the? The sounds are clearly on 1/3, please snap the objects to their sounds
In the next section of the song (between the second and third Kia time) you used these space increasing streams but they aren't quite reasonable to me. They give the impression that the end of the stream has much stronger sounds than the beginning, but mostly this isn't the case at all. So the emphasis isn't quite fitting. Also sometimes some circles of those streams are over mapped.
03:16:496 (3) - over mapped
03:21:951 (2) - ^
03:29:405 (4) - what do you think about NC this one so it gets more readable that it has a 2 tick gap and not just only 1 tick. It's hard to read because they have the same screen spacing, also spacing the 4 a more would help
03:49:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - I don't know how to feel about this one, but it's oddly over mapped, the week sounds which could be mapped as a stream are on 1/3 and they are really week
Good Luck with your Map!