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[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod 8-) 8-) (with some curious stuff in it ?)

MyAngelMeinter wrote:

Hi :D
[Not Safe Anyone]

1.. Add clap's
2. Look
[normal sliders]
SPOILER

[bad sliders]
SPOILER

repair all bad sliders
Mhhmhmh i'm not really sure about the slider introduction before because it's not mine but anyway :? :?

3. 00:19:155 (1,2) - try don't stack this (move circle)
and here
01:00:355 (3,4) -
01:11:155 (5,6) -
00:47:555 (1,2) -
Note about 3 : Do something like that there 00:55:555 (3,4)
I've made it on purpose it is because it as important sound at the end of it especially after the slider

It's all :D

[lucky:1337]Good luck![/lucky:1337]
Grindle
109 posts
Joined February 2015
Grindle
Nice! Most of the changes made the map way more enjoyable I think.
Although when I showed the screenshot of this 01:01:555 (1) slider I was just showing that as an example, but it still gives more impact now and is undoubtedly more playable regardless xD.

I really like how you fixed this 00:42:555 (2) as well, now instead of two awkwardly wide angles it aims like two sharp thirty degree angles.

Now I can consistently FC with HD so that's good.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8472182
Enkrypton
217 posts
Joined November 2014
Enkrypton
From mod queue. WHERE HAVE I SEEN THIS BACKGROUND BEFORE???
And holy crap i modded this exact same song on a different set today

I usually mod with boxes but since theres only 1 diff so here goes:
00:27:555 (1,2) - have the slider ends on the same spot like u did multiple times before
put 00:31:155 (1) - on slider end of 00:31:555 (3) - to match 00:30:155 (2,3) -
00:43:955 (2,3) - try to blanket this better on the left part
00:46:755 (1,2) - probably avoid the overlap here
I really like the blankets on ur slider shapes!

I think after modding this set is the better one lol. Good luck with ur map!
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for taking the time to mod me it is really appreciated 8-)

Enkrypton wrote:

From mod queue. WHERE HAVE I SEEN THIS BACKGROUND BEFORE???
I know people told me that but i didn't know when i choose it :D
And holy crap i modded this exact same song on a different set today
yes he wanted to GD my mapset but i refused his difficulty

I usually mod with boxes but since theres only 1 diff so here goes:
00:27:555 (1,2) - have the slider ends on the same spot like u did multiple times before
I don't know i really like how it is design without having it on the slider ends it's not a song representation choices but a design one :roll:
put 00:31:155 (1) - on slider end of 00:31:555 (3) - to match 00:30:155 (2,3) -
mhmhmh i'm not really sure because it does not represent anything on the song and it as a better design as it is for me so may be later if i think it could be important but for now i don't know
00:43:955 (2,3) - try to blanket this better on the left part
donehttps://osu.ppy.sh/forum/posting.php?mode=quote&f=10&p=6102967#
00:46:755 (1,2) - probably avoid the overlap here
As i said to other it is to represent the end of the part before the drop and so the end of the slider with an important sound
I really like the blankets on ur slider shapes!

I think after modding this set is the better one lol. Good luck with ur map!
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[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you your mod was really helpful, but still i think i need to fix others things like maybe decreasing sv on certain part because it can too be easily 100 so i'll see later ;)

Grindle wrote:

Nice! Most of the changes made the map way more enjoyable I think.
Although when I showed the screenshot of this 01:01:555 (1) slider I was just showing that as an example, but it still gives more impact now and is undoubtedly more playable regardless xD.

I really like how you fixed this 00:42:555 (2) as well, now instead of two awkwardly wide angles it aims like two sharp thirty degree angles.

Now I can consistently FC with HD so that's good.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8472182
Egotrip
92 posts
Joined May 2015
Egotrip
Petit mod juste comme ça!



Not Safe Anymore
00:15:355 (2) - qu'as tu essayé de mapper ici? je n'entends aucun son

00:15:955 (3) - vocal s'arrête ici 00:16:255 - et reprends ici 00:16:555 - tu peux soi:
essayer ça : http://prntscr.com/fq59ne
ou ça : http://prntscr.com/fq5ajn
(personnellement je suggère la premiere solution mais cela n'engage que moi)
00:17:555 - a 00:19:955 - essaies ça
http://prntscr.com/fq55ox
car avec ta timeline actuelle, ici 00:18:555 (4) - tu ignores un beat très important (00:18:555 (4) - )
00:20:755 (2) - je pense que tu peux prolonger ce slider ici 00:20:755 (2) -
00:21:555 (1) - pareil ici 00:21:855 -
00:22:355 (3) - pareil ici 00:22:655 -
00:22:355 (3) - NC parce que changement de SV
00:24:355 - http://prntscr.com/fq5flj
00:29:555 (3) - remplace par un slider
00:38:355 (5) - NC ???
01:13:555 (1) - retire le nc et fais comme 01:00:355 (3,4,1,2,3) -

J'espere t'avoir aidé, bonne soirée !
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Merci gros bg pour ton mod :roll:

Jager-kun wrote:

Petit mod juste comme ça!



Not Safe Anymore
00:15:355 (2) - qu'as tu essayé de mapper ici? je n'entends aucun son
J'ai pas essayé de mapper un son mais de faire un rythme parce que parfois trop respecter la musique ça rend la map chiante il faut dynamiser le délire

00:15:955 (3) - vocal s'arrête ici 00:16:255 - et reprends ici 00:16:555 - tu peux soi:
essayer ça : http://prntscr.com/fq59ne
ou ça : http://prntscr.com/fq5ajn
Alors ici de base je voulais allonger ce slider 00:16:355 (4) - jusqu'au tick bleu pour respecter le vocal mais ça donnait un rythme vraiment cassé du coup j'ai laissé un gap et t'es suggestion son pas deg' mais elles enlèves du dynamisme de base
(personnellement je suggère la premiere solution mais cela n'engage que moi)
00:17:555 - a 00:19:955 - essaies ça
http://prntscr.com/fq55ox
car avec ta timeline actuelle, ici 00:18:555 (4) - tu ignores un beat très important (00:18:555 (4) - )
J'ai bien remarqué pour le beat mais je trouve que mapper chaque beat alors que je map le vocal c'est pas forcément nécessaire mais je tiens compte de la remarque je ferai peut-être un changement plus tard
00:20:755 (2) - je pense que tu peux prolonger ce slider ici 00:20:755 (2) -
Bon tu a mal copié collé pour la 2e position du coup je suis pas trop sûr de ce que je peux te dire :p
00:21:555 (1) - pareil ici 00:21:855 -
bah ici la voix s’accélère du coup je le map avec un circle ça ferait bizarre en allongeant le slider
00:22:355 (3) - pareil ici 00:22:655 -
relâché au tick bleu alors qu'il n'y a rien en particulier ça créera un problème de rythme
00:22:355 (3) - NC parce que changement de SV
fait
00:24:355 - http://prntscr.com/fq5flj
alors dans ce cas là j'ai vraiment voulu représenté chaque note de la voix et qu'elles soient cliquable alors que si je met un slider ça masque un peu ça et pour le 2e slider que tu propose ça le mettrait au même rythme que les 2 autres sliders qui suivent alors que c'est pas du tout le même son
00:29:555 (3) - remplace par un slider
C'est vraiment embêtant quand quelqu'un a raison sur un rythme évident et que je dois faire en sorte de garder la map intact en changeant les éléments :(
edit: j'ai trouvé un arrangement il faudrait que tu me dises si ça tient la route mdrrr je peux le justifier par rapport au même design qui suit mais qui a pas le même flow en disant que 00:29:155 (1,2,3) - a un retour pcq c'est les vocals tandis que l'autre c'est le rythme de la musique :roll: :roll:
00:38:355 (5) - NC ???
fait
01:13:555 (1) - retire le nc et fais comme 01:00:355 (3,4,1,2,3) -
contrairement à l'autre les 4 notes qui suivent sont un rire tandis que pour l'autre se sont 3 battement de porte après un beat du coup c'est pas le même rythme avec les 2

J'espere t'avoir aidé, bonne soirée !
Lucasion
12 posts
Joined November 2015
Lucasion
Heya, i might be able to help you out with a Guest Difficulty, and if you want to hitsounding <<< I am not an expert in either, so feel free to decline, but at least i know how to ;)
If you want a guest difficulty, i just need to know what difficulty range you want.
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
So for the GD you can choose between easy, normal or hard and for the hitsounds it's necessarily better than me so if you want to do it i would be very happy :roll:
But be aware that i might refuse your GD or even your hitsounds so be sure if you're going to this :?

Lucasion wrote:

Heya, i might be able to help you out with a Guest Difficulty, and if you want to hitsounding <<< I am not an expert in either, so feel free to decline, but at least i know how to ;)
If you want a guest difficulty, i just need to know what difficulty range you want.
Toumoko
Toumoko
Hello there !
[Not Safe Anymore]
  1. 00:55:755 (4) - really nice if stacked properly at slider end 00:56:755 (2) -
  2. 01:06:555 (2) - make this shape like 01:06:355 (1) - for consistently and flow ^^
  3. 01:07:155 (1) - why spacing at here too big ? you don't make it at 01:07:955 (1,2) -
That's all from me :) , can u change the sample set ? it's too bored for use Normal all of it :)
Good luck with the map set !
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Hello thank you for your mod :roll: :roll:

Toumoko wrote:

Hello there !
[Not Safe Anymore]
  1. 00:55:755 (4) - really nice if stacked properly at slider end 00:56:755 (2) -
    Done (it was meant to be stacked but i didn't notice it wasn't)
  2. 01:06:555 (2) - make this shape like 01:06:355 (1) - for consistently and flow ^^
    it hasn't the same shape because the sv changed :p
  3. 01:07:155 (1) - why spacing at here too big ? you don't make it at 01:07:955 (1,2) -
    kinda done be increasing the distance on the seconde one and decreasing the distance on the first one to get it egalized
That's all from me :) , can u change the sample set ? it's too bored for use Normal all of it :)
If you talk about the hitsounds i'm working with someone to get it done :p
Good luck with the map set !
_Crow
126 posts
Joined October 2014
_Crow
Hi, from my queue

[Easy]
00:41:955 (1) - move this to 420|207 for a nice triangle, adjust all the other things accordingly obv
00:57:155 (4) - it would play better if there were 2 circles instead imo
01:03:555 (3) - ^
01:09:955 (3) - ^

[Not Safe Anymore]
00:26:355 (2) - Nc here
00:39:955 (1) - Would be better if it was a 1/8 slider instead, raise the sv up to 2.00x if you do so
01:09:155 (1) - if you add a white anchor between the two reds, it'll look a bit better, like this
01:14:355 (1) - same idea

Overall tip: you should avoid strictly mapping vocals in an insane diff, there may be some cases like this 00:24:955 (4) -, where you skip an important beat (white tick) just to follow the vocals

Not a bad map overall, good luck!
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod it is really appreciated !

walter85 wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[Easy]
00:41:955 (1) - move this to 420|207 for a nice triangle, adjust all the other things accordingly obv
Done
00:57:155 (4) - it would play better if there were 2 circles instead imo
01:03:555 (3) - ^
01:09:955 (3) - ^
I'm not sure, i don't know how to properly map an easy diff but i kinda look/sound good with the sliders instead of the circle so if other people advice me to switch the sliders to circles i'll do it but for now i prefer with the sliders

[Not Safe Anymore]
00:26:355 (2) - Nc here
done
00:39:955 (1) - Would be better if it was a 1/8 slider instead, raise the sv up to 2.00x if you do so
done
01:09:155 (1) - if you add a white anchor between the two reds, it'll look a bit better, like this
done
01:14:355 (1) - same idea
Not for this one because it would be weird with the 2 circles after

Overall tip: you should avoid strictly mapping vocals in an insane diff, there may be some cases like this 00:24:955 (4) -, where you skip an important beat (white tick) just to follow the vocals

Not a bad map overall, good luck!
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LwL
370 posts
Joined November 2013
LwL
hi from my q

Not Safe Anymore
  1. Am I imagining things or are 00:14:155 (2) - , 00:15:355 (2) - mapped on nothing? I don't really see a reason for that, just leave a gap in the rhythm.
  2. 00:20:155 you're mapping the vocals pretty much everywhere in the intro, you shouldn't just skip them here. Could just make 00:19:955 (3) - into a slider since it's on a held note anyway
  3. 00:21:555 (1,2) - Spacing seems excessive, this is the slow part in an insane after all. It also suggests 00:21:855 (2) - to be more important than 00:21:955 (3) - when that's definitely not the case. I don't think there's much happening on 00:21:755 (vocal seems to end on the blue tick afterwards where the next one also starts), so you could extend the slider, otherwise this will probably end up a bit weird no matter how you arrange it unless you get rid of the slider entirely.
  4. 00:20:355 (1,2) - Personally don't agree with making both of these sliders, same for 00:23:555 (1,2) - , it suggests both sliderends to be equally unimportant when the first has a vocal and the second has pretty much nothing (vocal extends past it, so it doesn't end there either. Still think it's fine to map the second vocal that way but using a slider for both doesn't feel right). 2 Circles + a slider would fit better imo, especially since at 00:24:555 (2,3) - you mapped a much quieter vocal as a circle.
  5. 00:29:955 (1,2,3) - The shape of these suggests them to be similar notes imo, even though the sound on 2 is very different. The spacing doesn't have to be different but I think some sort of variation in flow rather than just a straight line would fit better
  6. 00:30:355 (3,1) - needs higher spacing, it's disproportionate to the notes after it considering the song.
  7. 00:31:155 (1,2,3) - Making this a triangle doesn't really fit, it places equal importance on (2) and (3) when you've been emphasizing the clapping sound on (3) in the entire section up to this point (on top of which it has a piano note here). I also think this pattern in general (including the 2 notes before the triangle) could use more pronounced spacing differences for the same reason, but it's fine if there's at least some.
  8. 00:31:955 (4) - Disagree with making this a slider as you've always mapped the clapping sound clickable before.
  9. 00:33:155 (3) - Rotate it and stack it on the end of 00:31:955 (4) - ? Would make for nicer flow.
  10. 00:46:755 (1,2,1) - Why the sv change? These 3 sound almost the exact same to me.
  11. 00:49:155 (3,4) - Spacing could be higher considering it's the same sound as on the previous notes, this just seems very low for no reason. Occurs again at 01:01:955 (3,4) - .
  12. 00:52:555 (1,2) - This one makes sense since the sound is different, but having both this and 00:49:155 (3,4) like that really doesn't.
  13. 01:01:555 (1,2) - Flows pretty poorly, and because of that puts a lot of emphasis on (2) that wasn't there in previous patterns.
  14. 01:04:355 (5,1) - Spacing should probably be lower, the important sound here is the one happening during (1), not the one on its head.

    Most of my gripes with this lie in the spacing emphasis/rhythm choice used in the slow part, kiais seem good aside from that thing at 00:49:155 (3,4) and 01:01:955 (3,4) - .

Good Luck! :)

EDIT: Oh right, forgot to say this, regarding hitsounds - normal-hitclaps work pretty well for the clapping sounds if you don't want to use customs - just putting those on all the claps would be a good start. Otherwise, if you don't want to use customs, definitely make the entire intro soft hitsounds, up to you whether you want to use additions to emphasize things or not. Most importantly be consistent. If I had to hitsound this (which I have no experience with, all I've done is metal hitsounding with custom drum samplesets) I'd probably look through similar songs that have custom hitsounding, shamelessly steal the samples from there, and work with them. Mostly something for the drums in the intro, and a custom clap for the clapping sounds in the song. Maybe also additional ones as I find them/see fit.
coke bottle
271 posts
Joined May 2017
coke bottle
From my q

Easy
00:58:355 (1) - offscreen
thats all that i found lmao

Not safe anymore
00:45:955 (3) - offscreen
01:00:955 (1) - slightly offscreen
your map has so less flaws ermahgawd

also offscreen stuff are unrankable, just fyi
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Hello thank you for your mod it is really nice of you :)
Also it helped me to change a lot of small thing beside.

LwL wrote:

hi from my q

Not Safe Anymore
  1. Am I imagining things or are 00:14:155 (2) - , 00:15:355 (2) - mapped on nothing? I don't really see a reason for that, just leave a gap in the rhythm.
    Actually it is to create a rythme you don't have to follow exactly the music as it is (it's what i think)
  2. 00:20:155 you're mapping the vocals pretty much everywhere in the intro, you shouldn't just skip them here. Could just make 00:19:955 (3) - into a slider since it's on a held note anyway
    done but i'm not sure as it is not here 00:23:155 (3) -
  3. 00:21:555 (1,2) - Spacing seems excessive, this is the slow part in an insane after all. It also suggests 00:21:855 (2) - to be more important than 00:21:955 (3) - when that's definitely not the case. I don't think there's much happening on 00:21:755 (vocal seems to end on the blue tick afterwards where the next one also starts), so you could extend the slider, otherwise this will probably end up a bit weird no matter how you arrange it unless you get rid of the slider entirely.
    For now i'm leaving it as it is but i might change it if it is an unrankable issue
  4. 00:20:355 (1,2) - Personally don't agree with making both of these sliders, same for 00:23:555 (1,2) - , it suggests both sliderends to be equally unimportant when the first has a vocal and the second has pretty much nothing (vocal extends past it, so it doesn't end there either. Still think it's fine to map the second vocal that way but using a slider for both doesn't feel right). 2 Circles + a slider would fit better imo, especially since at 00:24:555 (2,3) - you mapped a much quieter vocal as a circle.
    done but i will re-organized the circle as i am not satisfied with the design
  5. 00:29:955 (1,2,3) - The shape of these suggests them to be similar notes imo, even though the sound on 2 is very different. The spacing doesn't have to be different but I think some sort of variation in flow rather than just a straight line would fit better
    done but i'm so unsure about the mapping i will probably re-organized it
  6. 00:30:355 (3,1) - needs higher spacing, it's disproportionate to the notes after it considering the song.
    done
  7. 00:31:155 (1,2,3) - Making this a triangle doesn't really fit, it places equal importance on (2) and (3) when you've been emphasizing the clapping sound on (3) in the entire section up to this point (on top of which it has a piano note here). I also think this pattern in general (including the 2 notes before the triangle) could use more pronounced spacing differences for the same reason, but it's fine if there's at least some.
    increased a little bit the distance between 2 and 3 to emphazise
  8. 00:31:955 (4) - Disagree with making this a slider as you've always mapped the clapping sound clickable before.
    done
  9. 00:33:155 (3) - Rotate it and stack it on the end of 00:31:955 (4) - ? Would make for nicer flow.
    done for a nicer flow but didn't do as you want me to do
  10. 00:46:755 (1,2,1) - Why the sv change? These 3 sound almost the exact same to me.
    actually they're not, 1 and 3 are the same but 2 speeded up a beat
  11. 00:49:155 (3,4) - Spacing could be higher considering it's the same sound as on the previous notes, this just seems very low for no reason. Occurs again at 01:01:955 (3,4) - .
    for now i'm good with the spacing
  12. 00:52:555 (1,2) - This one makes sense since the sound is different, but having both this and 00:49:155 (3,4) like that really doesn't.
    It does makes sense because i had to emphazise the sound and i couldn't do a slider as there is a longer sound just after
  13. 01:01:555 (1,2) - Flows pretty poorly, and because of that puts a lot of emphasis on (2) that wasn't there in previous patterns.
    i put emphazise on this note because it is the only sound after that little drop with the door
  14. 01:04:355 (5,1) - Spacing should probably be lower, the important sound here is the one happening during (1), not the one on its head.
    I think it doesn't require a change

    Most of my gripes with this lie in the spacing emphasis/rhythm choice used in the slow part, kiais seem good aside from that thing at 00:49:155 (3,4) and 01:01:955 (3,4) - .

Good Luck! :)

EDIT: Oh right, forgot to say this, regarding hitsounds - normal-hitclaps work pretty well for the clapping sounds if you don't want to use customs - just putting those on all the claps would be a good start. Otherwise, if you don't want to use customs, definitely make the entire intro soft hitsounds, up to you whether you want to use additions to emphasize things or not. Most importantly be consistent. If I had to hitsound this (which I have no experience with, all I've done is metal hitsounding with custom drum samplesets) I'd probably look through similar songs that have custom hitsounding, shamelessly steal the samples from there, and work with them. Mostly something for the drums in the intro, and a custom clap for the clapping sounds in the song. Maybe also additional ones as I find them/see fit.
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
hello sorry for this one I can't give you a kudosu because they are not really "offscreen" as you may understand what defines an object offscreen... I can show you a bunch of ranked beatmap even monstrata's where there is this type of cercle really close to the limit, it is considered as offscreen when you can't reach it while playing like a slider that litteraly gets offscreen and you can't see it.

Reynolduh wrote:

From my q

Easy
00:58:355 (1) - offscreen
thats all that i found lmao

Not safe anymore
00:45:955 (3) - offscreen
01:00:955 (1) - slightly offscreen
your map has so less flaws ermahgawd

also offscreen stuff are unrankable, just fyi
LwL
370 posts
Joined November 2013
LwL

[ IWeenox ] wrote:

Hello thank you for your mod it is really nice of you :)
Also it helped me to change a lot of small thing beside.

LwL wrote:

hi from my q

Not Safe Anymore
  1. Am I imagining things or are 00:14:155 (2) - , 00:15:355 (2) - mapped on nothing? I don't really see a reason for that, just leave a gap in the rhythm.
    Actually it is to create a rythme you don't have to follow exactly the music as it is (it's what i think) It's not technically unrankable and it does sort of fit, but you might have a hard time getting it past a bn, assuming that's where you want to go with this.
  2. 00:52:555 (1,2) - This one makes sense since the sound is different, but having both this and 00:49:155 (3,4) like that really doesn't.
    It does makes sense because i had to emphazise the sound and i couldn't do a slider as there is a longer sound just after
     It just feels inconsistent with the music to me to map both of these the same way, you could also just change up the flow a bit or something
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]

LwL wrote:

hi from my q

Not Safe Anymore
  1. Am I imagining things or are 00:14:155 (2) - , 00:15:355 (2) - mapped on nothing? I don't really see a reason for that, just leave a gap in the rhythm.
    Actually it is to create a rythme you don't have to follow exactly the music as it is (it's what i think) It's not technically unrankable and it does sort of fit, but you might have a hard time getting it past a bn, assuming that's where you want to go with this.
    If it is to annoying when i'll try to pass it through the BN i will delete it as it is only 2 circle
  2. 00:52:555 (1,2) - This one makes sense since the sound is different, but having both this and 00:49:155 (3,4) like that really doesn't.
    It does makes sense because i had to emphazise the sound and i couldn't do a slider as there is a longer sound just after
     It just feels inconsistent with the music to me to map both of these the same way, you could also just change up the flow a bit or something
    For me it's not really important because it is not a slider shape that represents only his sound so they can have the same shape
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Pok0555
131 posts
Joined January 2017
Pok0555
Hey, from my NM q
First of all, according to the Ranking Criteria, you can't rank this, unless you make normal and hard diifs, since your map isn't a marathon, you can't just have a few diffs, I suggest you ask someone to do a GD for you if you want to get this ranked https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria look in the mapset section
But I'll help you anyway
Overall, your map is very good, so looking for mistakes were quite hard, took me an hour to mod this -_-

Not safe anymore
Your stack leniency is quite low, consider making it higher, it's hard to see stacked circles
00:16:255 - you missed a vocal beat here
00:16:355 (4) - You shouldn't end a slider with a stronger beat than the one it started with
00:18:755 - Missed a beat here, consider breaking the slider down to smaller circles or sliders
00:19:355 - same ^
00:23:155 (3) - I think you should make this a slider, from there to 00:23:355
00:23:755 (2) - This circle should be here 00:23:705
That's really all I could cover, your map has been modded a lot, there's barely any recognizable mistakes what so ever
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]

Pok0555 wrote:

Hey, from my NM q
First of all, according to the Ranking Criteria, you can't rank this, unless you make normal and hard diifs, since your map isn't a marathon, you can't just have a few diffs, I suggest you ask someone to do a GD for you if you want to get this ranked https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria look in the mapset section
Actually it can be rank with the current diff, and i'm also waiting for some people to give me their GD

Mapsets must have at least two difficulties of the same game mode, one of which must be an Easy/Normal level.
And i have 1 insane and 1 normal wich is rankable
But I'll help you anyway
Overall, your map is very good, so looking for mistakes were quite hard, took me an hour to mod this -_-

Not safe anymore
Your stack leniency is quite low, consider making it higher, it's hard to see stacked circles
00:16:255 - you missed a vocal beat here
Firstly i wanted to map it at the beginning but then i didn't because it woud be to much triple and things at the beginning while they will be not other later
00:16:355 (4) - You shouldn't end a slider with a stronger beat than the one it started with
I didn't end the slider on a strong beat ?
00:18:755 - Missed a beat here, consider breaking the slider down to smaller circles or sliders
people told me this but i was to tired to make the change, i finally made it
00:19:355 - same ^
done
00:23:155 (3) - I think you should make this a slider, from there to 00:23:355
I wanted to make a stop with this circle
00:23:755 (2) - This circle should be here 00:23:705
I didn't map anything 1/3 in the entire diff i can't make 1 circle 1/3 for nothing (especially there is nothing to map in here)
That's really all I could cover, your map has been modded a lot, there's barely any recognizable mistakes what so ever
faygo
284 posts
Joined November 2014
faygo
FG's Hard
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Creator:[ IWeenox ]
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my first GD, hope u like it tho
Last edited by faygo , edited 2 times in total.
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Ok no problem tell me when you are done :)

Faygor wrote:

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sorry for waiting, my gd is like 75% complete but then laptop decided to crash :/
hopefully I can get it fixed tmr so that I can complete and upload the gd by tmr also (here)

gg
[Nemesis]
[Nemesis]
You've asked me to do a mod on your beatmap twice already, I must refuse it however, since I don't really find any issues with the map itself. (besides it's not my type of maps nor music at all sorry)
The only thing I can really say is that the offset should be 750, sounds a bit nicer imo.

Gl from me
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Hello :) i've changed the offset to 750 i found it sounds nicer too

[Nemesis] wrote:

You've asked me to do a mod on your beatmap twice already, I must refuse it however, since I don't really find any issues with the map itself. (besides it's not my type of maps nor music at all sorry)
The only thing I can really say is that the offset should be 750, sounds a bit nicer imo.

Gl from me
Mooha
43 posts
Joined May 2013
Mooha
ayo wuss poppin jimbo? :P

[Easy/Not Safe Anymore]
I have nothing to say ;)

[General]
The hitsounds in Koala's hard diff aren't the same as the other two. They should be the same as the "Easy" diff and the "Not Safe Anymore" diff because they have very correct hitsounds with customs ones which follow the different rythmics and so should koala's.

[Koala's Hard]
You should change the shape of the second slider 00:42:350 (1,2) - and make it curved around the head of the first one maybe ?
00:53:950 (4) - This slider is really close to 00:53:550 (2) - and makes it weird to follow due to the curved mouvement.
01:05:950 (1) - This slider is really weird, you should shape it differently because it's not aesthetic at all.
01:09:150 (1) - It shouldn't overlap. 01:07:950 (1) - It's not aesthetic either.
01:12:250 (3,1) - Don't make a double here even if there is a strong sound here 01:12:250 (3) - you didn't map anything on a blue tick and you shouldn't do it here too, it makes it really weird to play especially on a hard difficulty.
01:12:350 (1) - This slider as the one before is not aesthetic, I suggest you to change its shape.
01:15:550 (1) - it's quite a good slider but you should curve the first part a bit more before the loop to make it look like the curved one after it.


I wish you good luck m8
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for taking the time to mod my mapset it is really appreciated

Mooha wrote:

ayo wuss poppin jimbo? :P

[Easy/Not Safe Anymore]
I have nothing to say ;)

[General]
The hitsounds in Koala's hard diff aren't the same as the other two. They should be the same as the "Easy" diff and the "Not Safe Anymore" diff because they have very correct hitsounds with customs ones which follow the different rythmics and so should koala's.

[Koala's Hard]
You should change the shape of the second slider 00:42:350 (1,2) - and make it curved around the head of the first one maybe ?
00:53:950 (4) - This slider is really close to 00:53:550 (2) - and makes it weird to follow due to the curved mouvement.
01:05:950 (1) - This slider is really weird, you should shape it differently because it's not aesthetic at all.
01:09:150 (1) - It shouldn't overlap. 01:07:950 (1) - It's not aesthetic either.
01:12:250 (3,1) - Don't make a double here even if there is a strong sound here 01:12:250 (3) - you didn't map anything on a blue tick and you shouldn't do it here too, it makes it really weird to play especially on a hard difficulty.
01:12:350 (1) - This slider as the one before is not aesthetic, I suggest you to change its shape.
01:15:550 (1) - it's quite a good slider but you should curve the first part a bit more before the loop to make it look like the curved one after it.


I wish you good luck m8
Fursum
523 posts
Joined August 2014
Fursum
Hello from my queue, sorry for the short mod :p

[Easy]

00:37:550 (4) - Avoid overlaps on lower difficulties if possible.

00:48:750 (1) - The shape is a bit too complex for an easy.

For the non melodic sounds, you sometimes use sliders and sometimes circles like 01:13:550 - this and 01:00:750 -

[Hard]

01:13:750 - You mapped the knocking but not the laughter.

Overall usage of spacing on extended sliders look random. For example this 00:56:350 - high pitched section has all stacks but this 00:53:150 - doesn't have any overlap.

01:12:250 (3) - This 3/4 stack is hardly readable, needs atleast a NC and possibly separation from 01:11:950 (2) -
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Hello thank you for your mod :)

Fursum wrote:

Hello from my queue, sorry for the short mod :p

[Easy]

00:37:550 (4) - Avoid overlaps on lower difficulties if possible.
In this configuration it can be as it is very readable

00:48:750 (1) - The shape is a bit too complex for an easy.
Done

For the non melodic sounds, you sometimes use sliders and sometimes circles like 01:13:550 - this and 01:00:750 -
They are different because 01:00:750 (1) - has 3 knocking doors sounds instead of 01:13:550 (3,4) - which has 4 laughing sounds
Sylas
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Sylas

Mooha wrote:

ayo wuss poppin jimbo? :P

[General]
The hitsounds in Koala's hard diff aren't the same as the other two. They should be the same as the "Easy" diff and the "Not Safe Anymore" diff because they have very correct hitsounds with customs ones which follow the different rythmics and so should koala's. hitsounds are pretty much the same in the chorus and the first half is different since he's following vocals too but i'm ignoring them completely. also mine use custom ones too lmao (also its kinda bad if hitsounds r the same in all diffs since difficulties might follow different parts of the song, especially when theres a different mapper involved

[Koala's Hard]
You should change the shape of the second slider 00:42:350 (1,2) - and make it curved around the head of the first one maybe ? don't see why i'd do that since this plays out well and follows the same triangle created with the previous pattern which looks cool lol
00:53:950 (4) - This slider is really close to 00:53:550 (2) - and makes it weird to follow due to the curved mouvement. ? it's not even that close and I don't really see why the curved movement is an issue since the pattern forms a very acute angle (which is good flow)
01:05:950 (1) - This slider is really weird, you should shape it differently because it's not aesthetic at all. the whole point of that slider is not to be aesthetic (compared to everything else in the song) since the song is distorted here it makes sense to use a distorted slider shape to accurately represent this difference in the song.
01:09:150 (1) - It shouldn't overlap. 01:07:950 (1) - It's not aesthetic either. thats very subjective. i don't see how the overlap isn't aesthetic and theres a gap of over a beat between the two sliders meaning it really doesn't affect readability. shouldn't be any problem
01:12:250 (3,1) - Don't make a double here even if there is a strong sound here 01:12:250 (3) - you didn't map anything on a blue tick and you shouldn't do it here too, it makes it really weird to play especially on a hard difficulty. hard difficulties allow for quite some difficult patterns. here i do like how the double represents the song (and tbh its quite easy to single tap it with the low bpm) but I'm willing to change it if a BN or very experienced mapper says so, but for now no change
01:12:350 (1) - This slider as the one before is not aesthetic, I suggest you to change its shape. same as before
01:15:550 (1) - it's quite a good slider but you should curve the first part a bit more before the loop to make it look like the curved one after it. ok


I wish you good luck m8

Fursum wrote:

[Hard]

01:13:750 - You mapped the knocking but not the laughter. knocking is drums, laughter is vocals (didn't follow vocals anywhere else on the map so it makes sense I wouldn't follow them here)

Overall usage of spacing on extended sliders look random. For example this 00:56:350 - high pitched section has all stacks but this 00:53:150 - doesn't have any overlap. fml i was hoping i wouldn't have to explain this since its quite hard to explain. theyre not random, i can explain why i stacked/didn't stack every slider in the chorus. ok so starting from 00:43:550 (4,5) - these are stacked as the sounds here are somewhat continuous, while 00:43:950 (5,1) - are spaced out since it kind of sounds like theres a bigger gap between the sounds these sliders represent. Basically I'm grouping up the more continuous sounds by stacking and separating the groups through spacing and this concept can be applied to all similar patterns representing the same sounds in the chorus (i won't explain each one). for 00:53:150 (1,2,3,4) you can't really compare it to the rest of the patterns you mentioned since the sounds are different so therefore theyre mapped differently. Normally for these sounds i'd use 1/2 sliders (like 00:51:950 (1,2) ) but since the sounds here are comparably more intense i used circles to accurately represent that increase in pitch (00:53:550 (2,3) ). Also normally these 01:02:750 (1,2,3,4,5) - should all be stacked underneath each other according to my logic but since they are the most intense sounds in the chorus I chose to space them out to emphasize that increase in pitch again. hopefully thats clear enough

01:12:250 (3) - This 3/4 stack is hardly readable, needs atleast a NC and possibly separation from 01:11:950 (2) -same as other mod,also a NC on 01:12:250 (3) would make it worse since I used NCs on white ticks everywhere in the song so having a NC on a blue tick here would confuse players and make them think the note was on a white tick. The way I have NCs right helps a lot with readability. also moving it away is an option but i'd rather not as it conflicts with the concept where i have the notes following this kinda drum beat (01:11:950 (2) ) stacked underneath it
basically nothing changed,
thanks a lot for the mods anywayz :)
took a while to explain everything lol

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Saltssaumure
205 posts
Joined April 2017
Saltssaumure
Hi from Salt's mod queue! Sorry for the late reply, I got kinda burnt out but I'm back now ;)


The slider speed and shape variation is really neat. I left a kudos because this deserves to be ranked, good luck!

[Easy]
Small grid level is messing up the distance snap and blanketing, instead use tiny grid size or no grid instead. Also, because a lot of the blankets you're doing are exactly the same, you can just do one and copy-paste the others to make them look more uniform (and also it's faster).
No combo colours?
00:25:550 (3) - Move this circle up a bit.

[Koala's Hard]
00:43:550 (4,5,1,2,3,1) - In places where the slider end is on a blue tick, the hitsound is a bit offputtingingly loud.
01:04:350 (5,1) - The head of 5 is a little bit too close to the body of 1.
01:11:150 (1) - This slider should be 0.75x speed.

[Not Safe Anymore]
00:35:950 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Jump distance could increase for each combo, because the music "ramps up" here.
00:40:350 (1,2,3,1) - Same thing about slider ends on blue ticks as above.


Btw, I'd be able to do a Normal diff gd, to smooth off the difficulty spread.
Sylas
Elite Mapper
1,023 posts
Joined January 2014
Sylas

Saltssaumure wrote:

[Koala's Hard]
00:43:550 (4,5,1,2,3,1) - In places where the slider end is on a blue tick, the hitsound is a bit offputtingingly loud. yeah i guess ure right, i'll remove some of the whistles
01:04:350 (5,1) - The head of 5 is a little bit too close to the body of 1. yeah true
01:11:150 (1) - This slider should be 0.75x speed. nah 1.1x is fine bc i only used .75x where the song is distorted, but here its not really distorted, just a lower pitch so i used a slightly lower multiplier than normal
thanks a lot ^^
updated
osu file format v14

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Creator:[ IWeenox ]
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[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for the mod it is really appreciated !

Saltssaumure wrote:

Hi from Salt's mod queue! Sorry for the late reply, I got kinda burnt out but I'm back now ;)


The slider speed and shape variation is really neat. I left a kudos because this deserves to be ranked, good luck!
Thank you very much it is really kind :)

[Easy]
Small grid level is messing up the distance snap and blanketing, instead use tiny grid size or no grid instead. Also, because a lot of the blankets you're doing are exactly the same, you can just do one and copy-paste the others to make them look more uniform (and also it's faster).
No combo colours?
done some CC
00:25:550 (3) - Move this circle up a bit.
done

[Not Safe Anymore]
00:35:950 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Jump distance could increase for each combo, because the music "ramps up" here.
I want it to be linear firstly because it's only a hard diff and also because if think it's more aesthetic :roll:
00:40:350 (1,2,3,1) - Same thing about slider ends on blue ticks as above.
you advice me to lower the hitsound's % at the blue tick ?


Btw, I'd be able to do a Normal diff gd, to smooth off the difficulty spread.
Thank you :) but i have already someone working on a normal diff
Owens
167 posts
Joined March 2015
Owens
Owens' Master
osu file format v14

[General]
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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Caught Fire (feat. Ashley Lawless)
TitleUnicode:Caught Fire (feat. Ashley Lawless)
Artist:Mercy X
ArtistUnicode:Mercy X
Creator:[ IWeenox ]
Version:Owens' Master
Source:
Tags:Dance EDM Trap Nation
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- titan
238 posts
Joined July 2016
- titan
hi, nm thing from queue.

hard

SPOILER
why are these combo colors different from the easy and the top diff?
00:13:550 (1,2) - blanket is like a pixel off lol
00:27:150 (3,4) - i wouldn't recommend placing these sliders like this bc earlier you used a very similar arrangement to represent very different sounds / you did it for 1/4 gaps
00:51:550 (5,1) - this is super uncomfortable to play. either make it flow better or like make the spacing less extreme or something
imakuri's normal

SPOILER
default combo colors ?
00:38:350 (2,3) - when playing this (2) leaves behind the glow stuff (idk what it's called lol) and it barely overlaps with (3). move (3) down a bit.
01:04:750 (1) - why is there a white anchor above the red anchor? looks better either without it or with it moved.
01:15:950 (1) - feel like this would be better starting on the red tick
easy

SPOILER
not really modding this diff but i played through it and noticed something
01:01:550 (1,2,3) - make it so the slider bodies aren't so close together (it looks bad while playing)
nice map and nice song. was gonna ask to make an easy diff but you already have one ;w;. good luck
Sylas
Elite Mapper
1,023 posts
Joined January 2014
Sylas
you should probably ask or at least tell if you're gonna remove my GD from the set especially when u use my diff as a template and use the exact same rhythm as me, even the same patterns at times. rude. also the notes on empty sounds in the intro of your insane are still unrankable just saying. gl
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod :)

- titan wrote:

hi, nm thing from queue.

hard

SPOILER
why are these combo colors different from the easy and the top diff?
done the combo colors
00:13:550 (1,2) - blanket is like a pixel off lol
done
00:27:150 (3,4) - i wouldn't recommend placing these sliders like this bc earlier you used a very similar arrangement to represent very different sounds / you did it for 1/4 gaps
CC helps to understand that 00:25:550 (1,2) - and 00:27:150 (3,4) - aren't the same
00:51:550 (5,1) - this is super uncomfortable to play. either make it flow better or like make the spacing less extreme or something
done something about the pattern
imakuri's normal

SPOILER
default combo colors ?
done CC colors and leave the rest of the mod to imakuri
00:38:350 (2,3) - when playing this (2) leaves behind the glow stuff (idk what it's called lol) and it barely overlaps with (3). move (3) down a bit.
01:04:750 (1) - why is there a white anchor above the red anchor? looks better either without it or with it moved.
01:15:950 (1) - feel like this would be better starting on the red tick
easy

SPOILER
not really modding this diff but i played through it and noticed something
01:01:550 (1,2,3) - make it so the slider bodies aren't so close together (it looks bad while playing)
It doesn't bother me much when i'm playing so if other people complain about it i'll change the pattern
nice map and nice song. was gonna ask to make an easy diff but you already have one ;w;. good luck
Unrestricted
36 posts
Joined January 2017
Unrestricted
Hai, from my modding queue!

Imakuri's Normal:
Rhythms and Timing
00:17:950 (2) - There are 2 occasions where there is a note mapped like this, where there is no sound it is actually following. You are not following the vocal line so this circle shouldn't really be here.
00:29:350 (6) - The same can be said here, but this time it works and I have seen maps ranked like this, so it really is up to you. You'll probably keep this one.
00:55:150 (1,2) - You have mapped this sound here, but not mapped the exact same sound 1 bar earlier at 00:51:950 (1) . You also don't map this sound again some time later, after mapping it in the bar before that.
New Combos
00:56:350 (1) - To follow the pattern you have already set, this should not be a NC, but 00:58:350 (4) should be instead.
00:59:550 (1) - Remove NC.
01:01:550 (5) - Place NC.
01:02:750 (1) - Remove NC.
Placement, Spacing and Aesthetic
00:37:550 (1) - This repeating slider doesn't look too good at the angle its placed, but this is subjective.
00:40:350 (1,2,3,4) - Do you want your aesthetic to be perpendicular like this here? You don't have this style anywhere else in the map and it doesn't really fit in. You could do something similar to this instead : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8770712 .

Overall it is a nice map, the flow works well and the rhythm choices work well, they just need to be more consistent.

Hard:
Rhythms and Timing
All of the long 3/2 sliders in the beggining, their ends do not land on any sound in the song. You are creating/mapping a rhythm that doesn't exist in this song. This can work, but you should ask yourself if it works here as it is subjective.
00:21:150 (4) - This slider... The hitcircle is not mapped to a sound, as you are not mapping the vocal line, the tick is not mapped to a sound, and the end isn't mapped to a sound. This is less subjective as I believe this isn't rankable as it simply isn't mapped to the song.
00:40:950 - There is a very important sound here that is mid way through a slider. These sliders don't really follow the song here, and you have mapped this same sound differently later on.
Placement, Spacing and Aesthetic
00:30:350 (4,5) - This overlap does not look very pleasing, the other overlaps do work though. With this one what I would do is rotate each slider by around ~5degrees so they'd look like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8770866 . This is common in modern mapping.
00:36:150 (2,3) - CTRL+G. This will turn the pattern into an actual star rather than being hard to read as it currently is.
01:00:750 (4,1,2,3) - These 4 notes are all equally spaced in the timeline, yet 3 of them are stacked, this makes it very hard to read. It looks like a triple yet it is not 1/4, it is 1/2. The two ways you can fix this is by having (4,1,2,3) involved in the stack, or by spacing (4,1,2,3) so it is not stacked, you could map these in a triangle pattern, but i'll leave that up to you.
01:13:550 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is hard to read, but is more acceptable than the prior mentioned case.

Overall the rhythm in the map is thought out very well and works well to create the "wubby" feel without being too difficult. The spacing is all fine and easy to play for someone who would actually play Hard's. The NC's are also good. Good luck with getting ranked!
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod :)

Unrestricted wrote:

Hai, from my modding queue!

Imakuri's Normal:
Rhythms and Timing
00:17:950 (2) - There are 2 occasions where there is a note mapped like this, where there is no sound it is actually following. You are not following the vocal line so this circle shouldn't really be here.
00:29:350 (6) - The same can be said here, but this time it works and I have seen maps ranked like this, so it really is up to you. You'll probably keep this one.
00:55:150 (1,2) - You have mapped this sound here, but not mapped the exact same sound 1 bar earlier at 00:51:950 (1) . You also don't map this sound again some time later, after mapping it in the bar before that.
New Combos
00:56:350 (1) - To follow the pattern you have already set, this should not be a NC, but 00:58:350 (4) should be instead.
00:59:550 (1) - Remove NC.
01:01:550 (5) - Place NC.
01:02:750 (1) - Remove NC.
Placement, Spacing and Aesthetic
00:37:550 (1) - This repeating slider doesn't look too good at the angle its placed, but this is subjective.
00:40:350 (1,2,3,4) - Do you want your aesthetic to be perpendicular like this here? You don't have this style anywhere else in the map and it doesn't really fit in. You could do something similar to this instead : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8770712 .

Overall it is a nice map, the flow works well and the rhythm choices work well, they just need to be more consistent.

Hard:
Rhythms and Timing
All of the long 3/2 sliders in the beggining, their ends do not land on any sound in the song. You are creating/mapping a rhythm that doesn't exist in this song. This can work, but you should ask yourself if it works here as it is subjective.
00:21:150 (4) - This slider... The hitcircle is not mapped to a sound, as you are not mapping the vocal line, the tick is not mapped to a sound, and the end isn't mapped to a sound. This is less subjective as I believe this isn't rankable as it simply isn't mapped to the song.
actually the slider is mapped to a piano sound and the circle to a little kick so it works well :p

00:40:950 - There is a very important sound here that is mid way through a slider. These sliders don't really follow the song here, and you have mapped this same sound differently later on.
done
Placement, Spacing and Aesthetic
00:30:350 (4,5) - This overlap does not look very pleasing, the other overlaps do work though. With this one what I would do is rotate each slider by around ~5degrees so they'd look like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8770866 . This is common in modern mapping.
done
00:36:150 (2,3) - CTRL+G. This will turn the pattern into an actual star rather than being hard to read as it currently is.
i like it how it is because there is a spacing that emphazise the white tick (and i don't really like stars sooo)
01:00:750 (4,1,2,3) - These 4 notes are all equally spaced in the timeline, yet 3 of them are stacked, this makes it very hard to read. It looks like a triple yet it is not 1/4, it is 1/2. The two ways you can fix this is by having (4,1,2,3) involved in the stack, or by spacing (4,1,2,3) so it is not stacked, you could map these in a triangle pattern, but i'll leave that up to you.
done
01:13:550 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is hard to read, but is more acceptable than the prior mentioned case.
done

Overall the rhythm in the map is thought out very well and works well to create the "wubby" feel without being too difficult. The spacing is all fine and easy to play for someone who would actually play Hard's. The NC's are also good. Good luck with getting ranked!
Manu028
149 posts
Joined March 2015
Manu028
Modding by request from my queue!

[Imakuri's Normal]

  1. 00:14:750 (2) - move his head in the trajectory of the curve of this 00:13:550 (1) - for a better look
  2. 00:48:750 (1,2,3) - why did you ignore the main sound here? you followed it for all of the kiai
  3. 00:51:950 (1,2,3) - same^
[Hard]

  1. 00:22:750 (2,1) - spacing should be the same of 00:22:350 (1,2) -
  2. 01:05:950 (1) - not recommended in an hard diff, beacuse it's 1/8
[Not Safe Anymore]

  1. 00:55:950 (1,2) - overlap :c

Couldn't find much, this is just ready for ranking imo, just try to fix this.

keep up the good work ^^
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod :roll:

Manu028 wrote:

Modding by request from my queue!

[Imakuri's Normal]

  1. 00:14:750 (2) - move his head in the trajectory of the curve of this 00:13:550 (1) - for a better look
  2. 00:48:750 (1,2,3) - why did you ignore the main sound here? you followed it for all of the kiai
  3. 00:51:950 (1,2,3) - same^
[Hard]

  1. 00:22:750 (2,1) - spacing should be the same of 00:22:350 (1,2) -
    no need as it is not the same sound
  2. 01:05:950 (1) - not recommended in an hard diff, beacuse it's 1/8
    done
[Not Safe Anymore]

  1. 00:55:950 (1,2) - overlap :c
    done ahaha

Couldn't find much, this is just ready for ranking imo, just try to fix [url=https://i.gyazo.com/e4434886b4a7297248c4b290859a82cc.png]this
I can't really fix it (and it is not an unrankable thing anyway) [/url].

keep up the good work ^^
Senery
698 posts
Joined March 2016
Senery
hi! from my queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:46:750 (2) - maybe rotate this a bit and move it down so it aligns with the slider better
  2. 00:55:150 (2) - ctrl+j this so it can blanket 00:56:350 (3) -
  3. 01:00:750 (1) - this NC is not really necessary
  4. 01:04:350 (4) - blanket is off
  5. 01:04:750 (1) - this starts a bit too early, the other diffs have this aswell
[Imakuri's Normal]
  1. 00:24:350 (2) - this can be better aligned
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:950 (3) - blanket the head of (3) better with 00:16:750 (1) - 's body (like you did with 00:17:550 (2) - )
  2. 00:37:950 (2) - make this a straight slider aswell
I see nothing wrong on the last diff, hope it help :)
Imakuri
Global Moderator
792 posts
Joined March 2015
Imakuri
all fixed ty

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[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Hello thank you for your mod :)

Senery wrote:

hi! from my queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:46:750 (2) - maybe rotate this a bit and move it down so it aligns with the slider better
    done
  2. 00:55:150 (2) - ctrl+j this so it can blanket 00:56:350 (3) -
    done
  3. 01:00:750 (1) - this NC is not really necessary
  4. 01:04:350 (4) - blanket is off
    done
  5. 01:04:750 (1) - this starts a bit too early, the other diffs have this aswell
    can't really change it as it would be weird to play
[Imakuri's Normal]
  1. 00:24:350 (2) - this can be better aligned
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:950 (3) - blanket the head of (3) better with 00:16:750 (1) - 's body (like you did with 00:17:550 (2) - )
    done
  2. 00:37:950 (2) - make this a straight slider aswell
    done
I see nothing wrong on the last diff, hope it help :)
Sharkie
343 posts
Joined May 2014
Sharkie
[Easy]
Looks good.
  1. Only 1 thing I don't like, and I'm sure people have said this but 00:47:550 (3,4,1) - I would definitely not use this spacing here. It's really confusing for Easy.
[Normal]
  1. 01:11:150 (1) - The slider end is a red point, I'd delete that.
  2. Looks good as well.
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:950 (1,2) - This jump is way too big, emphasis is cool, but for a Hard, it's way too big.
  2. 00:53:150 (1,2) - This spacing here as well, its really awkward. I know this bpm is kinda low but its still kinda ~weird~.
  3. 01:05:950 (1,2) - Incorrect snapings. The first slider should be snapped to 1/6, the second slider should be snapped to 1/3. 16th note triplets then 8th note triplets.
  4. 01:09:150 (1,2) - You're killing me here
[Not Safe Anymore]
  1. 01:06:416 (1,2) - Like I said about the hard diff; this should be snapped to 1/3.
  2. 01:12:250 - I'd map this!
  3. Pretty good!
Affirmation
2,551 posts
Joined March 2015
Affirmation
Q

[Nor safe]
00:21:550 (1,2,3) - Looks hard to read.
00:21:550 (1,3) - stack
00:35:150 (5) - ctrl g for flow
00:42:750 (3,1) - avoid overlap for emphsis,
01:01:550 (1) - make same slider with 01:01:750 (2,3) - ?
01:04:750 (1,2) - too big DS comparing with others.

GL
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
thank you for your mod :)

Sharkie wrote:

[Easy]
Looks good.
  1. Only 1 thing I don't like, and I'm sure people have said this but 00:47:550 (3,4,1) - I would definitely not use this spacing here. It's really confusing for Easy.
    done
[Normal]
  1. 01:11:150 (1) - The slider end is a red point, I'd delete that.
  2. Looks good as well.
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:950 (1,2) - This jump is way too big, emphasis is cool, but for a Hard, it's way too big.
    done
  2. 00:53:150 (1,2) - This spacing here as well, its really awkward. I know this bpm is kinda low but its still kinda ~weird~.
    done
  3. 01:05:950 (1,2) - Incorrect snapings. The first slider should be snapped to 1/6, the second slider should be snapped to 1/3. 16th note triplets then 8th note triplets.
    done
  4. 01:09:150 (1,2) - You're killing me here
    done
[Not Safe Anymore]
  1. 01:06:416 (1,2) - Like I said about the hard diff; this should be snapped to 1/3.
    done
  2. 01:12:250 - I'd map this!
  3. Pretty good!
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
thank you for your mod :)

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Nor safe]
00:21:550 (1,2,3) - Looks hard to read.
like it like that
00:21:550 (1,3) - stack
^^
00:35:150 (5) - ctrl g for flow
done
00:42:750 (3,1) - avoid overlap for emphsis,
wanted to make it like that to emphazise a "stop" from the wub wub sounds
01:01:550 (1) - make same slider with 01:01:750 (2,3) - ?
done
01:04:750 (1,2) - too big DS comparing with others.
i emphazised the end of the kiai

GL
Owens
167 posts
Joined March 2015
Owens
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Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
(◕ᴗ◕✿) Rakuen Diva Trap Modding Queue [osu!standard]

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Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

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  • Make sure you tag GD creators' name too

Easy

  1. 00:46:750 (2) - Try moving this a little bit up? It's touching the edge
  2. 00:47:950 (4) - Maybe put this on the left side, matches the flow with 00:48:750 (1) - better
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  3. 01:09:950 (3) - Spacing error, make it as close as to 1.0x DS
  4. 01:12:350 (2) - Not so perfect blanket compared to the others you did, refer to the slider ball circle at the end of 01:11:150 (1) -

Imakuri's Normal

  1. 00:34:350 (1) - Remove NC?
  2. 00:51:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm i dont get sometimes you have 8 downbeats in 1 combo sometimes 4 like this > 01:02:750 (1,2,3,4) - , and even longer which is like 12 01:04:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , please do double check this c:

Hard

  1. 00:22:350 (1) - Make this stick to 00:22:750 (2) - for easy reading? cant recognise the spacing from few seconds ago like 00:21:150 (4,5) -
  2. 00:26:350 (1) - If you notice this one's a very big jump for Hard, makes spike in the difficulty
  3. 01:05:950 (1,2,3,4) - 01:12:350 (1,2,3) - Avoid these too if you can, because there are similar patterns @ Insanes

Good luck!
~(=^･ω･^)/｡･:*:･ﾟ★，｡･:*:･ﾟ☆
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
4,642 posts
Joined May 2013
Monstrata

TheKoala wrote:

you should probably ask or at least tell if you're gonna remove my GD from the set especially when u use my diff as a template and use the exact same rhythm as me, even the same patterns at times. rude. also the notes on empty sounds in the intro of your insane are still unrankable just saying. gl
what happened here o.o
Electoz
Beatmap Nominator
1,899 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
[Easy]

  1. 00:19:150 (3,4) - Mapping these in this way devalues 00:22:350 (3,4) - 00:25:550 (3,4) - cuz rhythms from the latter two is more prominent, I would either remove 00:19:550 (4) or just make 00:17:950 (2) a repeat slider but up to you I guess
  2. 00:36:750 (3,4) - Don't do overlap that leads to a slidertail in Easy lol, actually 2 circles instead of 00:36:750 (3) would compliment the intensity better since it's hyping up.
  3. 00:26:350 (1) - 00:32:750 (1) - Also would be nice if you can keep the consistency of your comboing considering the rhythms on both parts are the same. (aka the first part you did every measure and you didn't on the latter)
  4. 00:46:750 (2) - 00:58:350 (1) - Offscreeeeeen
  5. 00:48:750 (1) - Actually I wouldn't recommend doing slidershapes that are overlapping themselves in Easy but whatever
  6. 00:59:550 (2,3,4) - The flow here is super awkward because you're forcing aesthetics 00:59:550 (2,4) which is understandable but not worth doing, I would go for something like https://puu.sh/x8Lg9/50f49e81f0.jpg which you can still keep the aesthetics while maintaining a more comfortable flow, you will have to move some stuff around tho if you apply on what I did.
[Imakuri's Normal]

  1. 00:13:550 (1,2) - Probably an only overlap with 1/1 rhythm which is unnecessarily stand out cuz you didn't do this kind of aesthetics anywhere else zz
  2. 00:34:350 (1) - NC is not really needed? Since you NC'd every 2 measures previously anyways.
  3. 00:40:350 (1) - Hello your flow went anti-clockwise for the entire kiai which I found it very repetitive, but it's easier just saying than fixing it so yea you should fix it if you're bothered enough
  4. 01:01:550 (5) - 01:07:950 (3) - Could NC here I think? According to the way you NC'd the rhythms with downbeats.
  5. 00:58:350 (4) - ^ For consistency with 00:55:150 (1) .
  6. Like I'm kinda lost on how you combo'd things in kiai cuz it's not entirely consistent based on the rhythms so I'm not sure what you're going for, if you fixed my combo suggestions above then you should take a look at 00:51:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:56:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6) too cuz now they're unnecessarily longer than other combo sets in kiai lol
[Hard]

  1. 00:22:350 (1,2,1) - 00:25:550 (1,2,1) - Same rhythms but too much spacing difference zz
  2. 00:31:150 (6) - This is supposed to be patterned with 00:31:550 (1,2,3) . 3-object-pattern like 00:31:550 (1,2,3) doesn't really represent the music properly when the rhythm is going consistently with 4/4 metronome.
  3. 00:32:750 (1,2,3,4) - 00:34:350 (1,2,3,4) - I can't seem to find any conceptual ideas behind these sliders, 00:26:350 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - looks way much better:
    1. 00:32:750 (1,2,3,4) - The shape usage is already inconsistent, 00:33:550 (3) - is an only straight slider within the combo for some reason I don't know, and suddenly an overlap 00:32:750 (1,2) which you didn't do anywhere else.
    2. 00:34:750 (2) - Same shape thing. Like, the way you used shapes on 00:26:350 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) was noticeably more conceptual so I don't know what you're trying to do here.
  4. 01:06:350 (2) - Should have an NC or something to indicate different snaps from 01:05:950 (1) .
  5. 01:07:950 (1) - The slider shape looks like a burai slider lol, try to redo the shape a bit so that the tail doesn't actually overlap over the sliderbody.
  6. 01:12:750 (2) - Sounds like 1/2 rather than 1/3.
[Owens's Another]

  1. 00:26:750 (2) - Any reason for not making this a 1/2 slider like 00:27:550 (2,2,2) ?
  2. 00:42:750 (3,4,5) - Don't do a wide angle when you're doing something that requires a fast movement or it will be very uncomfortable to play lol, something like https://puu.sh/x8MY8/3e286206a8.jpg would play much better
  3. 00:41:150 (4) - General thumb rule: Don't do different things and put them in the same pattern or it'll be misleading, 00:41:150 (4) - looks the same as 00:40:750 (2,3) but the rhythm+SV is different so the whole thing plays really gross
  4. 00:49:550 (5) - As mentioned earlier about the patterning, you need to have an indicator or something that intuitively tells the player that "hey, this object is different than the others" which there are many ways to do it like NC, slider shape, or degrouping it from the pattern, etc.
Sorry to say this but I kinda lost the will to mod last diff cuz I saw what this guy said while I was modding halfway lol so that's gonna be it
good luck tho
Akitoshi
2,687 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

Monstrata wrote:

TheKoala wrote:

you should probably ask or at least tell if you're gonna remove my GD from the set especially when u use my diff as a template and use the exact same rhythm as me, even the same patterns at times. rude. also the notes on empty sounds in the intro of your insane are still unrankable just saying. gl
what happened here o.o
OwO
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]

Monstrata wrote:

what happened here o.o
Ok so i think it needs a little explanation here...
As you can see i'm not a well-known mapper so at the beginning of the mapset i tried to ask random people to make a GD for me if they were willing to and one day i asked Koala. When he gave me the finished GD i didn't really liked the way he mapped but i needed diff into my mapset and he was the only one to accept a hard GD. Then i started to think about the fact that i wanted a mapset that i'm proud of since it was my first serious one so i decided to map the hard diff myself.
So yeah i might admit that at some point i wasn't sure about the rythme so i checked into the koala's diff but it is a simple rythme that repeat itselfs the entire songs so it is not complicated to have quite the same between two same diff. Also when he says "even the same patterns at times" it is totally untrue as i used distance snap for the entire diff except at some jump part so the pattern are designed to fill with the distance snap, i didn't copied some of his pattern i can swear.
JiruPiru
183 posts
Joined April 2014
JiruPiru
Hi there! I'm going to assume the difficulty "Not Safe Anymore" if your Light Insane diff lol.

Here's the mod
It feels like this song should have either soft hitsounds or custom hitsounds, I don't know if hitsounding is in progress though so don't bully me
01:13:950 (3) - nc maybe?

I'm sorry I couldn't find any problems, it's a great map and I wish you luck in getting it ranked :)
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod :)

Rakuen wrote:

(◕ᴗ◕✿) Rakuen Diva Trap Modding Queue [osu!standard]

Legend
Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

Tags

  • Make sure you tag GD creators' name too
    Done

Easy

  1. 00:46:750 (2) - Try moving this a little bit up? It's touching the edge
    done
  2. 00:47:950 (4) - Maybe put this on the left side, matches the flow with 00:48:750 (1) - better
    Image
    for now i'm good with the way i mapped here i'll may be change it later
  3. 01:09:950 (3) - Spacing error, make it as close as to 1.0x DS
    the spacing is already good no ?
  4. 01:12:350 (2) - Not so perfect blanket compared to the others you did, refer to the slider ball circle at the end of 01:11:150 (1) -
    done

Imakuri's Normal

  1. 00:34:350 (1) - Remove NC?
  2. 00:51:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm i dont get sometimes you have 8 downbeats in 1 combo sometimes 4 like this > 01:02:750 (1,2,3,4) - , and even longer which is like 12 01:04:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , please do double check this c:

Hard

  1. 00:22:350 (1) - Make this stick to 00:22:750 (2) - for easy reading? cant recognise the spacing from few seconds ago like 00:21:150 (4,5) -
    done but not sure about the pattern
  2. 00:26:350 (1) - If you notice this one's a very big jump for Hard, makes spike in the difficulty
    done
  3. 01:05:950 (1,2,3,4) - 01:12:350 (1,2,3) - Avoid these too if you can, because there are similar patterns @ Insanes
    i prefer keeping them like that

Good luck!
~(=^･ω･^)/｡･:*:･ﾟ★，｡･:*:･ﾟ☆
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your complete mod it is really appreciated :)

Electoz wrote:

[Easy]

  1. 00:19:150 (3,4) - Mapping these in this way devalues 00:22:350 (3,4) - 00:25:550 (3,4) - cuz rhythms from the latter two is more prominent, I would either remove 00:19:550 (4) or just make 00:17:950 (2) a repeat slider but up to you I guess
    Done i removed the circle
  2. 00:36:750 (3,4) - Don't do overlap that leads to a slidertail in Easy lol, actually 2 circles instead of 00:36:750 (3) would compliment the intensity better since it's hyping up.
    done
  3. 00:26:350 (1) - 00:32:750 (1) - Also would be nice if you can keep the consistency of your comboing considering the rhythms on both parts are the same. (aka the first part you did every measure and you didn't on the latter)
    Done
  4. 00:46:750 (2) - 00:58:350 (1) - Offscreeeeeen
    done
  5. 00:48:750 (1) - Actually I wouldn't recommend doing slidershapes that are overlapping themselves in Easy but whatever
    i think it is pretty readable but i might change it later
  6. 00:59:550 (2,3,4) - The flow here is super awkward because you're forcing aesthetics 00:59:550 (2,4) which is understandable but not worth doing, I would go for something like https://puu.sh/x8Lg9/50f49e81f0.jpg which you can still keep the aesthetics while maintaining a more comfortable flow, you will have to move some stuff around tho if you apply on what I did.
    done
[Imakuri's Normal]

  1. 00:13:550 (1,2) - Probably an only overlap with 1/1 rhythm which is unnecessarily stand out cuz you didn't do this kind of aesthetics anywhere else zz
  2. 00:34:350 (1) - NC is not really needed? Since you NC'd every 2 measures previously anyways.
  3. 00:40:350 (1) - Hello your flow went anti-clockwise for the entire kiai which I found it very repetitive, but it's easier just saying than fixing it so yea you should fix it if you're bothered enough
  4. 01:01:550 (5) - 01:07:950 (3) - Could NC here I think? According to the way you NC'd the rhythms with downbeats.
  5. 00:58:350 (4) - ^ For consistency with 00:55:150 (1) .
  6. Like I'm kinda lost on how you combo'd things in kiai cuz it's not entirely consistent based on the rhythms so I'm not sure what you're going for, if you fixed my combo suggestions above then you should take a look at 00:51:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:56:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6) too cuz now they're unnecessarily longer than other combo sets in kiai lol
[Hard]

  1. 00:22:350 (1,2,1) - 00:25:550 (1,2,1) - Same rhythms but too much spacing difference zz
    done
  2. 00:31:150 (6) - This is supposed to be patterned with 00:31:550 (1,2,3) . 3-object-pattern like 00:31:550 (1,2,3) doesn't really represent the music properly when the rhythm is going consistently with 4/4 metronome.
  3. 00:32:750 (1,2,3,4) - 00:34:350 (1,2,3,4) - I can't seem to find any conceptual ideas behind these sliders, 00:26:350 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - looks way much better:
    1. 00:32:750 (1,2,3,4) - The shape usage is already inconsistent, 00:33:550 (3) - is an only straight slider within the combo for some reason I don't know, and suddenly an overlap 00:32:750 (1,2) which you didn't do anywhere else.
    2. 00:34:750 (2) - Same shape thing. Like, the way you used shapes on 00:26:350 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) was noticeably more conceptual so I don't know what you're trying to do here.
    all done
  4. 01:06:350 (2) - Should have an NC or something to indicate different snaps from 01:05:950 (1) .
    done
  5. 01:07:950 (1) - The slider shape looks like a burai slider lol, try to redo the shape a bit so that the tail doesn't actually overlap over the sliderbody.
    done
  6. 01:12:750 (2) - Sounds like 1/2 rather than 1/3.
    for me it sounds like a 1/3 so i'll leave it like there for now
[Owens's Another]

  1. 00:26:750 (2) - Any reason for not making this a 1/2 slider like 00:27:550 (2,2,2) ?
  2. 00:42:750 (3,4,5) - Don't do a wide angle when you're doing something that requires a fast movement or it will be very uncomfortable to play lol, something like https://puu.sh/x8MY8/3e286206a8.jpg would play much better
  3. 00:41:150 (4) - General thumb rule: Don't do different things and put them in the same pattern or it'll be misleading, 00:41:150 (4) - looks the same as 00:40:750 (2,3) but the rhythm+SV is different so the whole thing plays really gross
  4. 00:49:550 (5) - As mentioned earlier about the patterning, you need to have an indicator or something that intuitively tells the player that "hey, this object is different than the others" which there are many ways to do it like NC, slider shape, or degrouping it from the pattern, etc.
Sorry to say this but I kinda lost the will to mod last diff cuz I saw what this guy said while I was modding halfway lol so that's gonna be it
good luck tho
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod :p

DilPil111 wrote:

Hi there! I'm going to assume the difficulty "Not Safe Anymore" if your Light Insane diff lol.
I'm sorry because Owens asked me to change the diff name but the light diff is actually the Another one D:

Here's the mod
It feels like this song should have either soft hitsounds or custom hitsounds, I don't know if hitsounding is in progress though so don't bully me
actually there is customs hitsounds :(
01:13:950 (3) - nc maybe?
Nop because i mapped the girl's laughing so don't need to NC

I'm sorry I couldn't find any problems, it's a great map and I wish you luck in getting it ranked :)
You'll maybe understand that i can't give a kudosu for this mod but anyway thank you :)
Crypthesis
195 posts
Joined September 2016
Crypthesis
so many mods

tbh you should find a bn

global
if you're not using these hitsounds delete them.
Unused hitsounds:
drum-hitclap.wav
drum-hitnormal.wav
drum-hitwhistle.wav
normal-hitclap.wav
normal-hitfinish.wav
normal-hitfinish4.wav
normal-hitwhistle.wav
normal-hitwhistle3.wav

normal
you should make the stacking thing at always since it's a normal.

00:19:750 (5,1) - stack?

00:29:350 (6) - I'd take this out since it's kinda dense

00:32:550 (5) - ^ and so on. maybe not at kiai

00:59:950 (1,2) - blanket
another
another is typically used as a name for "another" insane.

00:26:350 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - this part feels undermapped compared to the rest

00:53:150 (1) - there's no clue that this is different from the rest. even though it's a tech map, you should still leave some clues
not safe anymore
00:29:950 (1,2,3) - I don't really like this since it doesn't change flow on a strong beat. you can leave it like this if you want
00:56:350 (1,2,3,4,5) - put together for more emphasis

TEACH ME HOW TO MAKE NICE SLIDERS PLS
Mir
osu! Alumni
2,152 posts
Joined July 2016
Mir
whats with the koala dude can he like confirm that's he's okay with whatever you took "inspiration" from cuz atm it's kinda in the air rn

[Easy]
- 00:26:350 - From here you start NCing every downbeat but that makes new combos appear really often, would recommend NCing every 2 downbeats.
- 00:48:750 - The way you made this slider makes the slider tick invisible lol, you shouldn't use these types of shapes in Easy diffs anyways, so maybe do something else for this slider.
- 00:54:750 (1,2) - Swap NC?
- 00:56:350 (2,3) - DS?
- 01:12:350 (2) - Making this a 1/1 slider would represent the wub better than the reverse that lands on essentially nothing of importance.
[Imakuri's Normal]
- 00:25:950 (4,1) - Stack leniency must be set so that 1/1 objects stack.
- 00:36:150 - Skipping this? The vocal is on here too.
- 00:48:950 - Also skipped why tho. Could use a 1/2 slider? 00:55:150 (1,2,3) - Like you did here.
- 01:00:750 (3,4) - Sad that you skipped the unique drum thing here. :/
[Hard]
- 01:09:150 (1) - Kinda questionable slider, would recommend something like this.

[Not Safe Anymore]
uhh topdiff shenanigans, don't really like the high density used in the beginning + filler rhythm and the sliders look very exotic for a calm part where they could be used instead in the kiai to make it stand out more

- 00:42:950 (1) - Weird this isn't a slider like the other 3?
- 01:11:150 (5) - NC?

Good luck!
MoonKat_old
18 posts
Joined June 2017
MoonKat_old
Hi, I'm here.

Imakuri's Normal
01:13:700 - Maybe put another hit circle here?
00:54:750 (6) - This hit circle is off-time. I suggest changing it.
00:53:310 - I think you should put a hit circle here.
01:00:750 (3,4) - Personally think it would be fine if 3 was longer and 4 was removed, but it's okay either way.
Sorry if I wasn't that helpful, I tried my best.

Again, I'm not an expert, so I might be completely wrong.
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[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod :)

Crypthesis wrote:

so many mods

tbh you should find a bn
i'm currently searching for some

global
if you're not using these hitsounds delete them.
Unused hitsounds:
drum-hitclap.wav
drum-hitnormal.wav
drum-hitwhistle.wav
normal-hitclap.wav
normal-hitfinish.wav
normal-hitfinish4.wav
normal-hitwhistle.wav
normal-hitwhistle3.wav

normal
you should make the stacking thing at always since it's a normal.

00:19:750 (5,1) - stack?

00:29:350 (6) - I'd take this out since it's kinda dense

00:32:550 (5) - ^ and so on. maybe not at kiai

00:59:950 (1,2) - blanket
another
another is typically used as a name for "another" insane.

00:26:350 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - this part feels undermapped compared to the rest

00:53:150 (1) - there's no clue that this is different from the rest. even though it's a tech map, you should still leave some clues
not safe anymore
00:29:950 (1,2,3) - I don't really like this since it doesn't change flow on a strong beat. you can leave it like this if you want
I will maybe change it later but for now i'm good with it
00:56:350 (1,2,3,4,5) - put together for more emphasis
I don't know what you mean by "put them together D:"

TEACH ME HOW TO MAKE NICE SLIDERS PLS
Ahaha :p
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]

Mir wrote:

whats with the koala dude can he like confirm that's he's okay with whatever you took "inspiration" from cuz atm it's kinda in the air rn

[Easy]
- 00:26:350 - From here you start NCing every downbeat but that makes new combos appear really often, would recommend NCing every 2 downbeats.
done
- 00:48:750 - The way you made this slider makes the slider tick invisible lol, you shouldn't use these types of shapes in Easy diffs anyways, so maybe do something else for this slider.
too many people told me that so i'm gonna go with a basic curved slider :(
- 00:54:750 (1,2) - Swap NC?
done
- 00:56:350 (2,3) - DS?
done
- 01:12:350 (2) - Making this a 1/1 slider would represent the wub better than the reverse that lands on essentially nothing of importance.
i did a reverse here 01:05:950 (2) - and i prefer leave it as a reverse for this sound
[Imakuri's Normal]
- 00:25:950 (4,1) - Stack leniency must be set so that 1/1 objects stack.
- 00:36:150 - Skipping this? The vocal is on here too.
- 00:48:950 - Also skipped why tho. Could use a 1/2 slider? 00:55:150 (1,2,3) - Like you did here.
- 01:00:750 (3,4) - Sad that you skipped the unique drum thing here. :/
[Hard]
- 01:09:150 (1) - Kinda questionable slider, would recommend something like this.
done

[Not Safe Anymore]
uhh topdiff shenanigans, don't really like the high density used in the beginning + filler rhythm and the sliders look very exotic for a calm part where they could be used instead in the kiai to make it stand out more

- 00:42:950 (1) - Weird this isn't a slider like the other 3?
no because of this sounds 00:43:150 (2) - that should be mapped with a slider so if i make a slider with it 00:42:950 (1) - it will land on the white tick
- 01:11:150 (5) - NC?
i think it doesn't need an NC here

Good luck!
Arphimigon
1,681 posts
Joined December 2014
Arphimigon
Lab Aesthetics Mod!
Results given in [x, y] formats

[Easy]
Nothing Detected!
[Hard]
Object at 00:30:350 - should be placed at: [407, 211] currently at: [408, 216] to blanket slider body at time 00:31:150 -
Object at 00:46:750 - should be placed at: [320, 244] currently at: [320, 248] to blanket slider body at time 00:47:150 -
Object at 00:52:750 - should be placed at: [247, 85] currently at: [252, 85] to blanket slider body at time 00:52:350 -
Object at 00:55:150 - should be placed at: [354, 269] currently at: [352, 272] to blanket slider body at time 00:55:550 -
Object at 01:00:750 - should be placed at: [426, 262] currently at: [429, 262] to blanket slider body at time 00:59:950 -
Object at 01:09:150 - should be placed at: [372, 182] currently at: [375, 181] to blanket slider body at time 01:09:950 -

[Imakuri's Normal]
Nothing Detected!
[Not Safe Anymore]
Object at 00:19:550 - should be placed at: [358, 144] currently at: [358, 141] to blanket slider body at time 00:19:950 -
Object at 00:22:350 - should be placed at: [341, 208] currently at: [344, 208] to blanket slider body at time 00:21:950 -
Object at 00:29:150 - should be placed at: [437, 118] currently at: [432, 122] to blanket slider body at time 00:29:550 -
Object at 00:41:950 - should be placed at: [140, 156] currently at: [137, 155] to blanket slider body at time 00:42:350 -
Object at 00:43:950 - should be placed at: [285, 230] currently at: [287, 224] to blanket slider body at time 00:44:350 -
Object at 00:50:750 - should be placed at: [419, 280] currently at: [421, 278] to blanket slider body at time 00:51:150 -
Object at 00:56:750 - should be placed at: [429, 174] currently at: [432, 171] to blanket slider body at time 00:57:150 -
Object at 01:02:150 - should be placed at: [143, 49] currently at: [144, 48] to move in line with slider at time 01:01:950 -

[Owens's Another]
Object at 00:17:550 - should be placed at: [207, 95] currently at: [208, 96] to move in line with slider at time 00:17:750 -
Object at 00:27:950 - should be placed at: [332, 195] currently at: [335, 194] to blanket slider body at time 00:27:550 -
Object at 00:28:750 - should be placed at: [286, 134] currently at: [286, 137] to blanket slider body at time 00:28:350 -
Object at 00:42:950 - should be placed at: [295, 321] currently at: [297, 316] to blanket slider body at time 00:42:750 -
Object at 01:10:750 - should be placed at: [414, 189] currently at: [414, 184] to blanket slider body at time 01:10:350 -

Results for STACKED OBJECTS may be wrong, ya can ignore those
I hope I didn't malfunction!
Chisa-
522 posts
Joined December 2015
Chisa-
normal : 00:37:550 (1,2,3) - It would be necessary to follow the flow Sometimes it has sliders that are a bit too far 00:28:350 (4,5) - The 5 is a bit far from the 4 for the flow 01:13:950 (3,4,1,2) - Not very well placed The 2 is a little too far

another : 01:09:150 (1,2,3) - You have to modify it is slider To give something more professional ^^
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
thank you it is really helpful as i like when everything is where it should be :D

Arphimigon wrote:

Lab Aesthetics Mod!
Results given in [x, y] formats

[Easy]
Nothing Detected!
[Hard]
Object at 00:30:350 - should be placed at: [407, 211] currently at: [408, 216] to blanket slider body at time 00:31:150 -
Object at 00:46:750 - should be placed at: [320, 244] currently at: [320, 248] to blanket slider body at time 00:47:150 -
Object at 00:52:750 - should be placed at: [247, 85] currently at: [252, 85] to blanket slider body at time 00:52:350 -
Object at 00:55:150 - should be placed at: [354, 269] currently at: [352, 272] to blanket slider body at time 00:55:550 -
Object at 01:00:750 - should be placed at: [426, 262] currently at: [429, 262] to blanket slider body at time 00:59:950 -
Object at 01:09:150 - should be placed at: [372, 182] currently at: [375, 181] to blanket slider body at time 01:09:950 -

all done

[Imakuri's Normal]
Nothing Detected!
[Not Safe Anymore]
Object at 00:19:550 - should be placed at: [358, 144] currently at: [358, 141] to blanket slider body at time 00:19:950 -
Object at 00:22:350 - should be placed at: [341, 208] currently at: [344, 208] to blanket slider body at time 00:21:950 -
Object at 00:29:150 - should be placed at: [437, 118] currently at: [432, 122] to blanket slider body at time 00:29:550 -
Object at 00:41:950 - should be placed at: [140, 156] currently at: [137, 155] to blanket slider body at time 00:42:350 -
Object at 00:43:950 - should be placed at: [285, 230] currently at: [287, 224] to blanket slider body at time 00:44:350 -
Object at 00:50:750 - should be placed at: [419, 280] currently at: [421, 278] to blanket slider body at time 00:51:150 -
Object at 00:56:750 - should be placed at: [429, 174] currently at: [432, 171] to blanket slider body at time 00:57:150 -
Object at 01:02:150 - should be placed at: [143, 49] currently at: [144, 48] to move in line with slider at time 01:01:950 -

all done

[Owens's Another]
Object at 00:17:550 - should be placed at: [207, 95] currently at: [208, 96] to move in line with slider at time 00:17:750 -
Object at 00:27:950 - should be placed at: [332, 195] currently at: [335, 194] to blanket slider body at time 00:27:550 -
Object at 00:28:750 - should be placed at: [286, 134] currently at: [286, 137] to blanket slider body at time 00:28:350 -
Object at 00:42:950 - should be placed at: [295, 321] currently at: [297, 316] to blanket slider body at time 00:42:750 -
Object at 01:10:750 - should be placed at: [414, 189] currently at: [414, 184] to blanket slider body at time 01:10:350 -

Results for STACKED OBJECTS may be wrong, ya can ignore those
I hope I didn't malfunction!
Owens
167 posts
Joined March 2015
Owens
i didn't find things that enough to makes me want to change.
i changed some patterns in myself
thank you for modding all.

Crypthesis wrote:

so many mods

[another]another is typically used as a name for "another" insane. oh really ? let's call it insane then


TEACH ME HOW TO MAKE NICE SLIDERS PLS im bad
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josh1024
232 posts
Joined October 2014
josh1024
From the queue:

Couldn't come up with rly helpful stuff so yeah make as well do all diffs.

Easy
  1. 00:23:150 (1,2) blanket is a bit off
  2. 00:42:350 (2) nc here?
Normal
  1. 00:13:550 (1,2) slider overlap is only used once, which I think is not worth kepping.
  2. 00:39:150 (3) nc here?
  3. 00:39:150 (3) to 01:12:350 (2) only rotates ccw. It's up to you tho
Hard
Looks good.

Insane
  1. 00:39:950 (2) volume?
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
2,571 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
Easy
*it may look better if you keep the same ds in the whole diff
for example, 00:14:750 (2,3) - around 1.0x, but 00:13:550 (1,2) - is around 1.2x, and 00:19:150 (3,1) - 0.9x, redesign them into the similar ds like 1.0x, please check the whole diff.
*00:41:950 (1,2) - swap nc?

Imakuri's Normal
*as a normal diff, you change the nc too often, try to set every 2 long white line with one NC

Hard
*00:37:550 (1,2,1) - this 1/4 spacing is not recommended to be used in a hard diff.

Owen's light insane
*light insane → "L"ight "I"nsane?
*00:21:550 (1,2) - this 1/4 is quite sudden and confusing because it's the same ds with 1/2
*00:25:950 (4) - nc for speed change
*00:47:150 (2,3) - 00:53:550 (2) - 01:06:750 (3) - 01:13:150 (4) - ^, these NCs are which i think is necessary.

NSA
*00:21:550 (1,3) - seems not stacked well
*00:42:750 (3,1) - need a jump imo, try stack 00:42:950 (1) - on the head of 00:43:150 (2) - ? or remove nc 00:42:950 (1) - as the following
*00:53:150 (1) - extend to a 3/4 slider?
*01:11:150 (5) - nc
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod !

josh1024 wrote:

From the queue:

Couldn't come up with rly helpful stuff so yeah make as well do all diffs.

Easy
  1. 00:23:150 (1,2) blanket is a bit off
    done
  2. 00:42:350 (2) nc here?
    I've done NC every 2 important white tick
Normal
  1. 00:13:550 (1,2) slider overlap is only used once, which I think is not worth kepping.
  2. 00:39:150 (3) nc here?
  3. 00:39:150 (3) to 01:12:350 (2) only rotates ccw. It's up to you tho
Hard
Looks good.

Insane
  1. 00:39:950 (2) volume?
    there is 2 insane so i don't know which one you're talking about
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod it is really appreciated !

Koiyuki wrote:

Easy
*it may look better if you keep the same ds in the whole diff
for example, 00:14:750 (2,3) - around 1.0x, but 00:13:550 (1,2) - is around 1.2x, and 00:19:150 (3,1) - 0.9x, redesign them into the similar ds like 1.0x, please check the whole diff.
done i think i might fixed them all
*00:41:950 (1,2) - swap nc?
done

Imakuri's Normal
*as a normal diff, you change the nc too often, try to set every 2 long white line with one NC

Hard
*00:37:550 (1,2,1) - this 1/4 spacing is not recommended to be used in a hard diff.
done

Owen's light insane
*light insane → "L"ight "I"nsane?
*00:21:550 (1,2) - this 1/4 is quite sudden and confusing because it's the same ds with 1/2
*00:25:950 (4) - nc for speed change
*00:47:150 (2,3) - 00:53:550 (2) - 01:06:750 (3) - 01:13:150 (4) - ^, these NCs are which i think is necessary.

NSA
*00:21:550 (1,3) - seems not stacked well
done
*00:42:750 (3,1) - need a jump imo, try stack 00:42:950 (1) - on the head of 00:43:150 (2) - ? or remove nc 00:42:950 (1) - as the following
done (and done for the following ones and changed some pattern for better flow)
*00:53:150 (1) - extend to a 3/4 slider?
i like it as it is
*01:11:150 (5) - nc
done
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Imakuri let me do the changes through the mods he received so it is updated
Owens
167 posts
Joined March 2015
Owens

Koiyuki wrote:

Owen's light insane
*light insane → "L"ight "I"nsane?
*00:21:550 (1,2) - this 1/4 is quite sudden and confusing because it's the same ds with 1/2
*00:25:950 (4) - nc for speed change
*00:47:150 (2,3) - 00:53:550 (2) - 01:06:750 (3) - 01:13:150 (4) - ^, these NCs are which i think is necessary.
all fixed thx
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arrivalNA
39 posts
Joined December 2016
arrivalNA
Hey saw your NM request; sorry I took a while to get back to you

「Normal」

  1. 00:14:750 (2) - I personally feel like it should blanket the last slider like so

  2. Try not to always distance snap every note as you can still emphasise on strong notes
All I can say for the normal difficulty

「"Another"」

  1. The slider velocity should feel the same as the speed of the jumps so either increase the intensity of jumps or slow down the slider velocity
  2. 00:55:750 (4) - This circle could be on the end of 00:55:950 (1) for flow purposes but that's just me
  3. For straight sliders like 01:05:950 (1) & 01:06:350 (1) try to put them on 5° angles like so
That's all I can give you
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]

Our Arrival wrote:

Hey saw your NM request; sorry I took a while to get back to you

「Normal」

  1. 00:14:750 (2) - I personally feel like it should blanket the last slider like so

  2. Try not to always distance snap every note as you can still emphasise on strong notes
All I can say for the normal difficulty

「"Another"」

  1. The slider velocity should feel the same as the speed of the jumps so either increase the intensity of jumps or slow down the slider velocity
  2. 00:55:750 (4) - This circle could be on the end of 00:55:950 (1) for flow purposes but that's just me
    it follows a pattern where this circle is always on the head of the same slider
  3. For straight sliders like 01:05:950 (1) & 01:06:350 (1) try to put them on 5° angles like so
    i prefer when it is like this because it is a very different part from all of the rest
That's all I can give you
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
2,571 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
considered as a new mapper's map, it still can be improved but not bad
good luck with your first mapset
bubbled
Strategas
1,384 posts
Joined July 2013
Strategas
m4m

hitsounds
from 00:13:550 - to 00:26:350 - would suggest switching to soft sampleset as default normal hitnormal is way too loud for an intro, it would be best if you only left it for the kiai but changing intro only would be enough
the way you use the same clap on both bass drums kicks (00:15:550 - etc) and drum snares (00:15:950 - etc) isn't very good, I'd suggest you use a seperate hitsound for them - applies to whole map btw

unused hitsounds:
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drum-hitnormal.wav
drum-hitwhistle.wav
normal-hitclap.wav
normal-hitfinish.wav
normal-hitfinish4.wav
normal-hitwhistle.wav
normal-hitwhistle3.wav
normal-hitwhistle5.wav

Not Safe Anymore
01:00:950 (1,2,3) - spacing is way overdone for such quiet hits
01:01:350 (3,1) - this spacing is way too extreme
01:04:750 (1,2) - spacing, having such huge jump from such slow slider is too much, something like 01:07:950 (1,2) - would be good enough

light insane
why light insane, it's mapped like insane/extra so name it as such

normal
01:01:950 (2,3) - ran out of space? just move 3 more right or left

easy
00:22:750 (4) - can delete this note to make intro less dense

if you fix hitsounding and get a rebub then I can qualify
Imakuri
Global Moderator
792 posts
Joined March 2015
Imakuri

Strategas wrote:

m4m

normal
01:01:950 (2,3) - ran out of space? just move 3 more right or left

if you fix hitsounding and get a rebub then I can qualify
Updated,thanks strategas!

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[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]

Strategas wrote:

m4m

hitsounds
from 00:13:550 - to 00:26:350 - would suggest switching to soft sampleset as default normal hitnormal is way too loud for an intro, it would be best if you only left it for the kiai but changing intro only would be enough
done
the way you use the same clap on both bass drums kicks (00:15:550 - etc) and drum snares (00:15:950 - etc) isn't very good, I'd suggest you use a seperate hitsound for them - applies to whole map btw
done

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drum-hitnormal.wav
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deleted

Not Safe Anymore
01:00:950 (1,2,3) - spacing is way overdone for such quiet hits
done
01:01:350 (3,1) - this spacing is way too extreme
done
01:04:750 (1,2) - spacing, having such huge jump from such slow slider is too much, something like 01:07:950 (1,2) - would be good enough
done

light insane
why light insane, it's mapped like insane/extra so name it as such
done (named insane)

normal
01:01:950 (2,3) - ran out of space? just move 3 more right or left
done by imakuri

easy
00:22:750 (4) - can delete this note to make intro less dense
done

if you fix hitsounding and get a rebub then I can qualify
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
Found unused .wav files:
- snare_best.wav
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]

Koiyuki wrote:

Found unused .wav files:
- snare_best.wav
Oh yes you're right it was for my hitsounds test :p
So it's done
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
2,571 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
rrr
Strategas
1,384 posts
Joined July 2013
Strategas
hitsounds
when I mean the whole map, I meant it, you fixed it in the intro but the kiai and the ending is still mapped with same hitsound for snares and kicks

Not Safe Anymore
00:27:550 (1) - whistle on the whole slider, seems like a hitsounding error

normal
01:02:350 (3) - doesn't seem updated to me, I meant something like http://i.imgur.com/Ux3d97r.png where 01:01:350 (7,1,2,3) - have even spacing
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]

Strategas wrote:

hitsounds
when I mean the whole map, I meant it, you fixed it in the intro but the kiai and the ending is still mapped with same hitsound for snares and kicks
for the beginning i understood about the kick and snare but why would you want different kicks and snares between the kiai and the ending while they're the same in the music ?

Not Safe Anymore
00:27:550 (1) - whistle on the whole slider, seems like a hitsounding error
yes it was so it's fixed

normal
01:02:350 (3) - doesn't seem updated to me, I meant something like http://i.imgur.com/Ux3d97r.png where 01:01:350 (7,1,2,3) - have even spacing
done
Strategas
1,384 posts
Joined July 2013
Strategas
00:40:350 - 00:42:350 - 00:43:550 - 00:44:350 - etc... bass drums
00:41:550 - 00:43:150 - 00:44:750 - etc... snares
they sound different lol
[ IWeenox ]
306 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]

Strategas wrote:

00:40:350 - 00:42:350 - 00:43:550 - 00:44:350 - etc... bass drums
00:41:550 - 00:43:150 - 00:44:750 - etc... snares
they sound different lol

oh i think i've missunderstood, you want me to get different snare and bass to differentiate it from the bass drums and snares that i used in the kiai ?
or you want me to get different bass and snares only for the ending now ?
because when i read your post i understand that you think that my kick and snare are the same while they aren't in the kiai and the ending
Strategas
1,384 posts
Joined July 2013
Strategas
k, all good now, just gotta wait for 24 hrs rule
Strategas
1,384 posts
Joined July 2013
Strategas
grats
bibilicu
3,578 posts
Joined October 2013
bibilicu
sorry for breaking the party but i feel like the top diff can be improved

[not safe anymore]
*00:27:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - adding some jumps wouldn't hurt as this part is really intense plays a bit odd as antijump :/
*00:32:750 (2) - this one plays really uncomfortable imo try to find something suitable and confortable as it plays really odd i know that you wanted to emphasize the vocals' build-up but a curved one would work too
*00:34:150 (1,2) - maybe space them more as the new stanza from 00:34:350 (2) - is pretty intense plus swap the NCs as the new stanza is not on 00:34:150 (1) - tbh
*00:46:150 (1,2) - // 00:52:550 (1,2) - // 00:58:950 (1,2) - etc. these could've been spaced a bit more as it is supposed to be a wub part no? it wouldn't hurt to space them a bit more not really excesively
*00:53:150 (1) - this could end either on 1/2 or 1/4 (00:53:450 - not 00:53:250 - ) having this like a kickslider may look a bit odd as the song is ongoing until 00:53:450 -
*01:01:550 (1,2,3) - maybe space them a bit like you did at 00:42:350 (1,2,3,4,1) - let's say?
*01:03:950 (4,5) - tbh this plays really odd and forced i know it's a wub part but plays too forced imo and this could be improved by choosing another slidershape
*01:12:350 (1) - i think you need some confirmation about this slider as i feel like is wrongly snapped imo

moreover the mp3 got cut suddenly as it is not a good idea you should've faded the ending of the mp3 in order to have it "cut"
congratz on your first qualify and sorry for breaking the party don't think at me like a partypooper ;_;
[ IWeenox ]
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ByBy wrote:

sorry for breaking the party but i feel like the top diff can be improved

[not safe anymore]
*00:27:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - adding some jumps wouldn't hurt as this part is really intense plays a bit odd as antijump :/
I kinda disagree as it is the predrop like a a calmer part but it get intense there 00:35:950 (1) - where i put jumps.
*00:32:750 (2) - this one plays really uncomfortable imo try to find something suitable and confortable as it plays really odd i know that you wanted to emphasize the vocals' build-up but a curved one would work too
I never felt inconfortable while playing this part (some of my playtesters told me the same), it is a bit up as i wanted to emphasize her voice going a little higher as the drop was closer
*00:34:150 (1,2) - maybe space them more as the new stanza from 00:34:350 (2) - is pretty intense plus swap the NCs as the new stanza is not on 00:34:150 (1) - tbh
It could have escape the attention but i tried (as we should not forget this is my first serious mapset) to put some concepts, in this part i mapped the female voices and here 00:34:150 (1,2) - she said "not safe anymore" so i wanted the circle before a little closer than usual like he's protecting but anyway even if it is not a good one or a dumb one it could be move a little bit but it's very unecessary, plus about the NC i started one at a red tick here just before 00:32:550 (1) - and i think it's better to let the NC here 00:34:150 (1) - to emphasize the "not safe anymore"
*00:46:150 (1,2) - // 00:52:550 (1,2) - // 00:58:950 (1,2) - etc. these could've been spaced a bit more as it is supposed to be a wub part no? it wouldn't hurt to space them a bit more not really excesively
In this case they are not spaced for a reason, firstly because it is a clap that follow very closely the wub sound and secondly because i made this pattern have a jump in those part like there 00:42:950 (4) - but as you can see and listen they aren't the same sound so imo the should be differentiated
*00:53:150 (1) - this could end either on 1/2 or 1/4 (00:53:450 - not 00:53:250 - ) having this like a kickslider may look a bit odd as the song is ongoing until In this one i really wanted a break and not to follow exactly the music as it would have been boring to play because there is the same "break" from here 00:52:750 (2,1) - to here 00:53:150 (1,1) - and even if for me it sounds way better i think it's nicer to have a 1/4 because longer slider are used for those long wub sounds especially in the kiai and this part is like "intense" contrary to the long wubs sounds like there 00:56:350 (1,2,3,4,5) -
*01:01:550 (1,2,3) - maybe space them a bit like you did at 00:42:350 (1,2,3,4,1) - let's say?
those jumps are the only ones that break the circular flow for those patterns and are the last one too, i wanted not to make like everyone else "big jump for the end" but more like to slow down the rythme is it is the end of the kiai and as i said they are the only one to break the one way circular flow so they had to be a little closer too imo
*01:03:950 (4,5) - tbh this plays really odd and forced i know it's a wub part but plays too forced imo and this could be improved by choosing another slidershape
but it IS forced as the music is, it get really high on these 2 last note and in my opinion it's better to shape this part like really forced and with slider angle pretty incomfortable, if it were getting lower i would have prefer to do really curved slider shape
*01:12:350 (1) - i think you need some confirmation about this slider as i feel like is wrongly snapped imo
i received mod about this one and it was told that it was a 1/3 sound, it sounds like one and it sounds better than 1/4 for sure but yeah i can't say that i'm 100% sure

moreover the mp3 got cut suddenly as it is not a good idea you should've faded the ending of the mp3 in order to have it "cut"
Mhmhm... is this really important as the player finish the play here 01:17:550 (1) - and the song automaticaly restart with a fade affect ? For my it could have been better faded i agree but it's not noticable unless you go to the editor listening until the end
congratz on your first qualify and sorry for breaking the party don't think at me like a partypooper ;_;
No problem i answer all of your points to explain myself, but please don't forget it's my first one there is surely little mistakes be a little indulgent D:
bibilicu
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bibilicu
yeah it's necessary to fade the mp3's ending some ppl may find it weird that the music is still ongoing and then it ends suddenly like it got cut all by sudden
[ IWeenox ]
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ByBy wrote:

yeah it's necessary to fade the mp3's ending some ppl may find it weird that the music is still ongoing and then it ends suddenly like it got cut all by sudden
As long as any BN tell me that it is an unrankable issue it's not that important in my opinion

And also thank you for your feedback it helps me to get other perspectives and explain what i'm doing ! :)
Pentori
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Pentori
top diff
00:53:150 (1) - is snapping intentional here? just seems like the most random kick slider when you normally had them for shorter sounds 00:53:550 (1,2) - while using longer sliders for held sounds 00:53:950 (1)
[ IWeenox ]
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Pentori wrote:

top diff
00:53:150 (1) - is snapping intentional here? just seems like the most random kick slider when you normally had them for shorter sounds 00:53:550 (1,2) - while using longer sliders for held sounds 00:53:950 (1)

Yes it is intentional i've talk about it in my previous post :)
faygo
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faygo
congrats for first qualified anyway~
[ IWeenox ]
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Faygor wrote:

congrats for first qualified anyway~

Thank you ! :)
Justysuwu
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Justysuwu
Congratulates for qualified
Nice map :D
Origuon
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Origuon
Gratz mec !
[ IWeenox ]
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Origuon wrote:

Gratz mec !

merci gros bg
Crypthesis
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gratz :D
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