Deppyforce wrote:

ad
00:13:512 - this part doesnt feel mcuh different from preevyet part tho its weaker u could do smh about density to emphasize it more the other diffs don't
00:45:574 (2,3) - cool flow can u move 3 head a bit down intent to make a circle with 00:48:012 (1) -. that's what kitty would say
00:58:887 (2) - can u somehow change flow on this so it doesnt feel same as 00:57:762 (3,4,1) - to emphasizes dat its not a part of ze instrument thing its also an intsrumenmt, isnt it?
01:15:574 (2) - ds i agree
01:34:887 (3,4,5,6) - try this reetm http://puu.sh/wVk1J/269f24f60a.jpg i agree
02:19:512 (1) - nazi head touching previous tail so it losk bad it my style!!1!1!!

• Liberation

• Another

• Kitty

00:44:637 (3) - seems to be a sudden whistle here, remove plz?
01:04:324 (3,6) - there's a small overlap here.
01:05:262 (5,6) - I dont really sure about the flow here, seems diferent with others, try to create a straight line like https://puu.sh/wWDer/4af0d30d90.png might work.
01:28:887 (2,3) - fix up blanket(?)
01:36:012 (1,1) - overlap, its visible in the playfield
go check out the diff again, there's a small problem with spacing, probaly becouse you're using DS and using small Grid Size.

Error- wrote:

yay unloved
re:mod
nazi as always

• Liberation

00:07:137 (4,3) - possible blanket.
00:21:012 (1) - move to x:300 y:340 for better curve. https://puu.sh/wWC2f/f36b675608.png
00:24:762 (3) - why 1/2? use 1/4 to match the song. follow violin, not piano
00:52:512 (1,3) - not a perfect blanket (I know its only 1 pixel)
00:56:262 (6,7) - why don't you copy paste the objects from 00:55:887 (5) - ? it seems better imo, https://puu.sh/wWCcI/018d68bfbf.png i did it,
didn't t?
01:32:262 (3,1) - move out the tail and object of 01:32:262 (3) - to create better flow. this is already good flow
01:35:449 (2,1) - blanket? no
01:39:574 (4) - I know you can do the shape better. i prefer it
02:21:012 (3,1) - dunno about this but circular flow seems to be off. you try rotate 02:19:512 (1,2) - to 90 degree then you will know what i doing here

• Another

00:13:512 (1,2) - Fix up blanket already great blanket. try using 1/16
00:20:918 - feels weird when there's a clearly drum sound but no clickable object.
00:35:637 (4,1) - plz fix blanket already blanket
00:38:637 (3,1) - ^ ^
00:47:074 (2,3) - high chance of choke, try to move 00:47:262 (3) - to 00:46:137 (4) - 's head choke then why? i intend to emphasize the rhythm here since it's more dense than the previous part.
00:51:762 (3,1) - I dunno if you want to create a blanket here but if you want to, plz fix.
01:27:574 (6,1) - move out 01:27:574 (6) - 's tail a bit left for flow i intend to make (6)'s slider-tail to directly go to (1) to make and easier movement
02:02:074 (2,1) - another one :3 same reason
02:03:762 (1,1) - I liek to mention blanket

• Kitty

00:44:637 (3) - seems to be a sudden whistle here, remove plz?
01:04:324 (3,6) - there's a small overlap here.
01:05:262 (5,6) - I dont really sure about the flow here, seems diferent with others, try to create a straight line like https://puu.sh/wWDer/4af0d30d90.png might work. nah too bad
01:28:887 (2,3) - fix up blanket(?)
01:36:012 (1,1) - overlap, its visible in the playfield but 01:36:012 (1) has been completely faded out when 01:37:512 (1) comes. So i think it should be fine
go check out the diff again, there's a small problem with spacing, probaly becouse you're using DS and using small Grid Size. inconsistent ds is not unrankable

no kds coz I just remod this :d

plz rank this time plz find t2 for me this time

- Frontier - wrote:

still wanna giv to u
reply later

Error- wrote:

00:56:262 (6,7) - why don't you copy paste the objects from 00:55:887 (5) - ? it seems better imo, https://puu.sh/wWCcI/018d68bfbf.png i did it,
didn't t?

no you didnt :/ you only copy 00:56:262 (6,7) - but what I meant is 00:55:887 (5,6,7) - .

no kds coz I just remod this :d

plz rank this time plz find t2 for me this time

Unsnapped blanket isn't unrankable. It's just for aesthetics but not unrankable if don't.
Thsnka!

"Error- wrote:

no you didnt :/ you only copy 00:56:262 (6,7) - but what I meant is 00:55:887 (5,6,7) - .

Error- wrote:

i dont say unsnapped blanket unrankable :thinking:

Error- wrote:

00:52:512 (1,3) - not a perfect blanket (I know its only 1 pixel)

• 
  KittyAdventure's Advanced

1. 00:53:262 (3,4) - I think this 1/1 slider is good
   The sound in the interval should be expressed with a slider
2. 00:53:262 (3,3) - I think I can stack
3. 01:03:762 (2,5) - overlap
   Certainly the slider has disappeared but I think it is easy to avoid this
4. 01:11:637 (4,1) - The distance is 1.60 because you are changing the speed of the slider
5. 02:00:762 (3,4) - I think I can stack

- Frontier - wrote:

Error- wrote:

i dont say unsnapped blanket unrankable :thinking:

what's this one here? xd

Error- wrote:

00:52:512 (1,3) - not a perfect blanket (I know its only 1 pixel)

• [Hitsounding]
  mostly looking at the top diff unless mentioned otherwise

1. 00:01:512 - You know, your sliderslide.wav doesn't actually apply since the samplesets for these lines are just "S" and not "S:C1". Because there's no custom, it will pick from the default sound files, including the default sliderslide. In order to fix this, add a new custom soft sampleset. Then add a soft-sliderslide4.wav and replace all "S" with "S:C4".We're adding a new one and not using "S:C1" because it would replace your whistles on 00:04:512 - etc with kick-drums, which'd be bad.
   
2. btw add soft-sliderslide2.wav to avoid the long sliderslide thing at 00:35:824 - and others.
   
3. 00:01:512 - Seems like other diffs have a whistle here. You should really use the hitsound copier thing to make sure they're all the same. Will help you fix this top diff and then you can copy downwards to make sure you don't miss anything. For example look at 00:07:512 - in Insane and notice how it's different from the same part in liberation.
   
4. 00:20:637 - 00:22:137 - These sounds are here in the beginning but are apparently gone after this point. Try turning 00:23:637 - and 00:25:137 - into these as well. Basically sampleset -> drum, addition -> auto.
   
5. 00:58:137 - Some sound here for matching feedback would be nice, as the song is pretty strong here, maybe put a clap or whatnot.
   
6. 01:25:793 - Since you decided to skip adding whistles to this, and did a similar thing, probably intentionally at 01:24:855 - 01:26:355 - etc, I think removing the whistles from 01:24:293 - and 01:24:480 - would make things sound more consistent. 01:27:199 - Can stay as is, since it's more unique than the others, makes it stand out more like this too.
   
7. 01:42:012 - Seems to fit better without the whistle tbh, as the impact itself is rather quiet like the previous two.
   
8. 01:58:137 - This hitsound seems a bit out of place, could probably just remove it.
   
9. 02:02:918 - This slider tail should either be silent or faint, not have a harsh and loud hitnormal. Try applying a short soft sampleset here.
   
   [Liberation]
10. 01:19:512 - Sound is different from previous parts so could reflect it with something like this, for instance. Up to you though.
    
11. 02:18:949 - Would just end these sliders on the piano. Skipping it like this might get confusing as the length of the slider is lower, yet it doesn't end on anything in particular unlike the others.
    
    Let me know if some difficulty has it's own hitsounding and can't be copied to from the top diff

Yasaija 714 wrote:

m4m

I can not finely mod the map I was Qualified

• 
  KittyAdventure's Advanced

1. 00:53:262 (3,4) - I think this 1/1 slider is good
   The sound in the interval should be expressed with a slider ok
2. 00:53:262 (3,3) - I think I can stack i prefer this
3. 01:03:762 (2,5) - overlap
   Certainly the slider has disappeared but I think it is easy to avoid this ok
4. 01:11:637 (4,1) - The distance is 1.60 because you are changing the speed of the slider the spacing is as same as the others so i think it should be fine
5. 02:00:762 (3,4) - I think I can stack it's different voice so i think it shouldn't be stacked

Good luck! Thanks!

Naxess wrote:

^ respond to this first

- Frontier - wrote:

smth

Still didn't say it was unrankable tho. The term "unrankable" is literally "cannot under any circumstance be used in a ranked map", and is really just a general and basic requirement for the ranked section that is actually very easy to achieve. Doesn't have much to do with the quality of the map, which is what nominators mostly look at. (although ye blankets missing a pixel is kinda w/e imo lol) im just kidding lol. Because he likes to point out the blanket issues (like in my paradisus-paradoxum). So i told him like that xd

Minor stuff before we go

• [Hitsounding]
  mostly looking at the top diff unless mentioned otherwise

1. 00:01:512 - You know, your sliderslide.wav doesn't actually apply since the samplesets for these lines are just "S" and not "S:C1". Because there's no custom, it will pick from the default sound files, including the default sliderslide. In order to fix this, add a new custom soft sampleset. Then add a soft-sliderslide4.wav and replace all "S" with "S:C4".We're adding a new one and not using "S:C1" because it would replace your whistles on 00:04:512 - etc with kick-drums, which'd be bad. ok
   
2. btw add soft-sliderslide2.wav to avoid the long sliderslide thing at 00:35:824 - and others. ok
   
3. 00:01:512 - Seems like other diffs have a whistle here. You should really use the hitsound copier thing to make sure they're all the same. Will help you fix this top diff and then you can copy downwards to make sure you don't miss anything. For example look at 00:07:512 - in Insane and notice how it's different from the same part in liberation. ok
   
4. 00:20:637 - 00:22:137 - These sounds are here in the beginning but are apparently gone after this point. Try turning 00:23:637 - and 00:25:137 - into these as well. Basically sampleset -> drum, addition -> auto. 00:23:637 -i instead adding whistle here since the other diffs do and 00:25:137 -i instead leave it blank as the other diffs do too.
   
5. 00:58:137 - Some sound here for matching feedback would be nice, as the song is pretty strong here, maybe put a clap or whatnot. instead adding drum-hitwhistle here
   
6. 01:25:793 - Since you decided to skip adding whistles to this, and did a similar thing, probably intentionally at 01:24:855 - 01:26:355 - etc, I think removing the whistles from 01:24:293 - and 01:24:480 - would make things sound more consistent. 01:27:199 - Can stay as is, since it's more unique than the others, makes it stand out more like this too. ok
   
7. 01:42:012 - Seems to fit better without the whistle tbh, as the impact itself is rather quiet like the previous two. ok
   
8. 01:58:137 - This hitsound seems a bit out of place, could probably just remove it. ok
   
9. 02:02:918 - This slider tail should either be silent or faint, not have a harsh and loud hitnormal. Try applying a short soft sampleset here. instead adding 5%-volume green line here
   
   [Liberation]
10. 01:19:512 - Sound is different from previous parts so could reflect it with something like this, for instance. Up to you though. nice idea!
    
11. 02:18:949 - Would just end these sliders on the piano. Skipping it like this might get confusing as the length of the slider is lower, yet it doesn't end on anything in particular unlike the others. ok
    
    Let me know if some difficulty has it's own hitsounding and can't be copied to from the top diff There is BoatKrab's Insane that I can't change the hitsounds. Since he's making his own hitsound and I think I don't have permission to fix it. So I didn't fix it.

Oh also with the pm mod I did on the new advanced, you can actually give kds even though it's a remod, as the difficulty has undergone major remaps since then.

Naxess wrote:

7
Fixed some sliderslides, a normal sampleset silence glitch and an unsnapped slider tail in Another.
metadata

KittyAdventure wrote:

Yessss, btw are you used グリリ in title? As M2U write it in his second album?

http://m2u.studio/ALBUM

Lama Poluna wrote:

I think artist is correct, because it's M2U album, not Guriri.
But title must be Marigold (feat. 구리리) like on offical website and on ranked map.
Offical website > yt video

KittyAdventure wrote:

Lama Poluna wrote:

I think artist is correct, because it's M2U album, not Guriri.
But title must be Marigold (feat. 구리리) like on offical website and on ranked map.
Offical website > yt video

Fixed that please :^)

IamKwaN wrote:

Both japanese and korean are fine, as they are both quoted officially

Unicode Title: Marigold (feat. グリリ) or Marigold (feat. 구리리)
Romanised Title: Marigold (feat. Guriri)
Unicode Artist: M2U
Source: Deemo

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p_zasg8oWnA
http://www.universal-music.co.jp/m2u/pr ... icy-15598/
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvNwYQUnDa0
http://m2u.studio/ALBUM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4RiT4xPgRZo
https://www.facebook.com/rayark.deemo/

good luck!

sylao wrote:

why isnt this map ranked yet i fuckin love it gj man

Sinnoh wrote:

sylao wrote:

why isnt this map ranked yet i fuckin love it gj man

J_8579 wrote:

Too bad this isn't anywhere as difficult like in Deemo.

1. 00:24:387 (2,3,4) - You can do constant DS increase here as song is building up. Consistent spacing is meh especially due to the fact this is top difficulty
2. 00:59:262 (1) - Mute its sliderend ? it sounds kinda loud right now , You mute 00:58:137 (6) - so why not this one too
3. 01:22:512 (1) - You dont need this NC
4. 01:19:699 - The whistle doesn't make sense to me since its loud and shouldn't be here in first place, maybe mistake ? Its also there in other difficulties so remove it from there too! Also 01:31:699 - same
5. 01:35:262 (1,2) - it would be appropriate to have a little bit of sv increase for these because the song is going cRAzy
6. 01:40:137 (5) - Why not two kick sliders like 01:38:637 (5,6) - :c The whole part is jumpy and plays well but this slider kills the momentum

1. 00:20:262 (4,1) - Nazi but yeah you could avoid this overlap, its messy
2. 00:26:637 (3) - Kinda same to what i pointed in top difficulty, Dont kill the movement like this. The song doesnt loose intensity or something so i don't see a reason to why this is a single repeat slider
3. 00:58:512 (1,1) - Mute slider ends thing
4. 01:19:137 (1) - Remove NC

1. 00:35:824 - Isn't there supposed to be a custom sample 2 hitsound? its done that way in Other difficulties so yea, default whistle sounds out of place
2. 01:34:137 (6) - If you compare this to 01:33:387 (2,3,4,5) - You will notice that the first four notes had piano sounds on head only while the last one has sound on tail too so it would be better if its changed to circles instead
3. 02:15:762 (5) - Even tho the vocal at 02:16:512 - is faint, i still suggest you making it clickable because the piano sound is quite emphasized in the song and also the new stanza starts here

1. 00:59:262 (1) - same as Another, Liberation

Surono wrote:

srsbsnbns

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

I couldnt post yesterday cuz internet was meh, i wasnt expecting sinnoh's mod lol
[Boatkrab]

1. 00:35:824 - Isn't there supposed to be a custom sample 2 hitsound? its done that way in Other difficulties so yea, default whistle sounds out of place
2. 01:34:137 (6) - If you compare this to 01:33:387 (2,3,4,5) - You will notice that the first four notes had piano sounds on head only while the last one has sound on tail too so it would be better if its changed to circles instead Even it is, but I do want to leave it like that. Actually, players will click only its head, not them both (head and tail). And it will be more easier than everything in the diff too
3. 02:15:762 (5) - Even tho the vocal at 02:16:512 - is faint, i still suggest you making it clickable because the piano sound is quite emphasized in the song and also the new stanza starts here

Sinnoh wrote:

this is the last year in junior high school, so i have to focus on studying ;w;

Hard
00:57:762 (2) - Missing hitsound there is no any diff having any hs at here except normal.

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

I couldnt post yesterday cuz internet was meh, i wasnt expecting sinnoh's mod lol
[Liberation]

1. 01:19:699 - The whistle doesn't make sense to me since its loud and shouldn't be here in first place, maybe mistake ? Its also there in other difficulties so remove it from there too! Also 01:31:699 - same to enhance the drum sound
2. 01:40:137 (5) - Why not two kick sliders like 01:38:637 (5,6) - :c The whole part is jumpy and plays well but this slider kills the momentum if you hear closely, 01:38:637 (5,6) - has 1/4 piano streams (it's barely audible, you might not hear that), while 01:40:137 (5) - hasn't. So I expressed those sounds to be like that.

Lower diffs are fine.