Applied everything and add colorhaxing.
Thanks a lot for your modError- wrote:
from my queue
[Easy]
00:22:876 (1,2) - hmm, fix blanket? also 00:22:876 (1,2,3) - these seems doesn't look like a perfect triangle. Adjusted
00:47:543 (2,3,4) - somehow this feels rather weird in aesthetic, idk how to explain it, but something like this probaly better Changed
00:49:543 (1,2) - Hmm, the circular flow is different from the other part, be consistent please? OK
00:54:210 (4,1) - this blanket can be done better imo I not that nicpicky, but I move it a little bit
01:10:210 (3) - imo, change this to a parallel of 01:08:876 (2) - will be better Sorry, I like how it is, (copying the 01:10:210 (3) - and reversed it)
[Normal]
00:14:876 (1,2) - circular flow is a bit off Move it a bit
00:24:876 (5) - move it left for circular flow with 00:24:210 (4) - Sure
00:26:543 (3,4,5) - idk if a straight is good for this situation, as 00:26:543 (3) - is trying to curve and 00:27:043 (4,5) - is forcing to do straight, well, its up to you anyway I'll probably leave it as it is now
00:43:876 (1,2) - is seems to be the same with 00:41:876 (2) - , but why they aren't the same? Consistent with 00:54:543 (1,2) - And I don't want the downbeat to be on sliderend
I have no idea about Hard and Insane since its in a low BPM, sorry.
anyway good luck~
Thanks for the mod!LimePixel wrote:
[LMT's Hard]
-00:04:210 (1,2) - Please make sliders lead into circles perfectly in this case. Looks much better. This happens a lot throughout the map, I won't point out each instance since there are too many. (Example where this is done right is 01:24:210 (1,2) ) stylistic choice, also just lead straight into is boring tbh
-00:12:210 (1) - Second slider anchor is slightly to the left, giving it an angle (Same with 00:13:210 (3) ) fixed
-01:17:376 (3) - Same very loud clap for no reason. red tick rhythm which is quite odd compared to the rest
osu file format v14
[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57543
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0
[Editor]
Bookmarks: 56043,77376
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7
[Metadata]
Title:Freesia
TitleUnicode:Freesia
Artist:(K)NoW_NAME
ArtistUnicode:(K)NoW_NAME
Creator:LeKhanhHoa
Version:LMT's Hard
Source:サクラクエスト
Tags:Sakura Quest know name anime ed ending lmt
BeatmapID:1320857
BeatmapSetID:626728
[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"thumb-1920-803901.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
[TimingPoints]
4210,666.666666666667,4,2,1,30,1,0
4210,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
14876,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
36210,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
56043,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
57543,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,70,0,1
77376,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
78876,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
81210,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,0
81543,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
83876,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,0
84210,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
86543,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,0
86876,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
[Colours]
Combo1 : 238,238,238
Combo2 : 250,20,44
Combo3 : 22,50,241
Combo4 : 79,225,30
Combo5 : 231,236,34
Combo6 : 255,128,192
Combo7 : 255,0,128
[HitObjects]
156,152,4210,6,0,L|149:101,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,228,4710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,152,5210,2,0,L|363:101,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,228,5710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,6210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,93,6876,6,0,L|256:61,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,183,7376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,291,7876,2,0,L|255:322,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,201,8376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,191,8876,1,12,0:0:0:0:
113,193,9543,6,0,L|81:193,2,31.8750012159348
200,198,10043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,193,10543,2,0,L|430:193,2,31.8750012159348
312,198,11043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,326,11543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,334,12210,6,0,L|254:365,2,31.8750012159348
254,250,12710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,49,13210,2,0,L|255:16,2,31.8750012159348
254,133,13710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,222,13876,38,0,L|229:204,3,15.9375006079674,2|2|2|2,2:1|2:1|2:1|2:1,0:0:0:0:
253,229,14210,2,0,P|223:221|182:223,1,63.7500024318696,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,304,14876,6,0,L|31:252,1,42.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,314,15210,2,0,L|118:366,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,234,15543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
110,222,15876,6,0,L|103:172,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,139,16210,2,0,L|34:89,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,33,16543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
19,230,16876,2,0,L|5:330,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,285,17543,6,0,P|233:278|258:284,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,355,17876,2,0,P|119:362|94:356,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,367,18210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,365,18543,6,0,L|305:358,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,301,18876,2,0,L|412:304,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,353,19210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,252,19543,2,0,L|166:245,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,118,20210,54,0,L|70:61,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,192,20543,2,0,L|24:249,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,192,20876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,201,21210,6,0,P|160:191|191:196,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,285,21543,2,0,P|89:295|58:290,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,260,21876,2,0,L|312:253,1,85,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,254,22876,6,0,L|292:328,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,196,23210,2,0,L|380:122,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,169,23543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,163,23876,6,0,P|256:157|220:168,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,200,24210,2,0,P|144:206|108:195,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,161,24543,2,0,P|71:205|57:257,2,85,0|12|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,290,25543,54,0,P|137:317|146:354,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,254,25876,2,0,P|221:227|212:190,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,145,26210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
155,131,26543,6,0,L|147:76,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,21,26876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,99,27043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,39,27210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,206,27543,2,0,L|346:305,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,292,28210,6,0,L|113:283,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,347,28543,2,0,L|270:338,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,263,28876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
237,250,29210,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,167,29376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,217,29543,2,0,L|322:286,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,337,29876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,136,30210,2,0,L|329:17,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,34,30876,54,0,P|100:39|78:36,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,101,31210,2,0,P|218:96|240:99,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,122,31543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,134,31876,6,0,L|93:192,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,254,32210,2,0,L|72:312,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,374,32543,2,0,P|111:370|168:386,1,85,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,382,33543,6,0,L|167:324,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,262,33877,2,0,L|188:204,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,144,34210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,133,34543,6,0,P|167:127|138:111,1,42.5
269,85,34876,2,0,P|298:79|327:63,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,171,35210,38,0,L|306:191,3,21.25,2|2|2|2,0:1|0:1|0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
270,164,35543,2,0,P|278:219|271:257,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,307,36210,6,0,L|102:242,1,50.9999984436036,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,178,36543,2,0,L|86:113,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,47,36876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
231,96,37210,6,0,L|261:76,3,25.4999992218018,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,104,37543,2,0,P|289:113|337:104,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,227,38210,2,0,L|293:300,1,50.9999984436036,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,276,38543,2,0,L|216:336,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,325,38876,6,0,P|72:339|7:325,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,251,39376,2,0,P|53:237|118:251,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,266,39876,6,0,L|211:235,3,25.4999992218018
186,276,40210,2,0,P|245:287|293:274,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,153,40876,2,0,L|390:80,1,50.9999984436036,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,104,41209,2,0,L|313:44,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,71,41543,54,0,P|165:61|106:72,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,113,42043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,166,42210,2,0,P|162:176|221:165,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,118,42710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,191,42876,2,0,P|323:241|336:294,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,355,43543,2,0,L|94:341,1,101.999996887207,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,354,44043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
53,273,44210,6,0,P|60:227|48:157,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,97,44710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,170,44876,2,0,P|173:216|185:286,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,336,45376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,267,45543,2,0,P|334:258|409:263,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,42,46210,69,12,0:0:0:0:
486,110,46543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,184,46876,6,0,L|215:180,1,50.9999984436036,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,172,47210,2,0,L|92:167,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,162,47543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
101,305,47876,6,0,L|114:326,3,25.4999992218018,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,291,48210,2,0,P|139:273|204:286,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,291,48876,2,0,L|425:275,1,50.9999984436036,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,192,49210,2,0,L|368:208,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,127,49543,6,0,P|195:141|128:124,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,43,50043,2,0,P|182:29|249:46,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,76,50543,6,0,L|350:47,3,25.4999992218018,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,92,50876,2,0,P|359:106|426:89,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,243,51543,2,0,L|280:299,1,50.9999984436036,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,197,51876,2,0,L|196:253,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,125,52210,54,0,P|115:70|125:19,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,54,52710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,142,52876,2,0,P|295:197|285:248,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,62,53376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,45,53543,2,0,P|386:39|445:51,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,180,54210,2,0,L|86:174,1,101.999996887207,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,169,54710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
46,88,54876,6,0,P|97:75|163:93,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,176,55376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,278,55543,2,0,P|100:291|34:273,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,172,56043,1,2,0:1:0:0:
272,271,56210,2,0,L|287:377,1,101.999996887207,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
372,134,56876,69,12,0:0:0:0:
451,150,57043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
490,81,57210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,23,57376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
365,55,57543,70,0,P|322:55|261:40,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,105,58043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,186,58210,2,0,P|196:186|135:201,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,269,58710,2,0,L|21:255,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,334,59043,2,0,L|91:365,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,344,59376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,332,59543,2,0,P|357:332|418:317,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,265,60043,6,0,P|465:206|469:144,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,131,60543,2,0,L|379:81,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,177,60876,2,0,P|277:161|213:159,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,181,61376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,182,61543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
26,119,61710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,187,61876,86,0,L|53:262,1,50.9999984436036
89,315,62210,2,0,P|136:301|199:307,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,139,62876,6,0,P|246:139|308:107,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,198,63376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,283,63543,2,0,P|358:291|404:315,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,257,64043,2,0,L|488:318,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,163,64376,2,0,L|512:192,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,89,64710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,55,64876,2,0,P|273:67|237:59,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,24,65376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,82,65543,86,0,P|76:87|34:80,1,50.9999984436036
120,167,65876,2,0,L|60:220,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,234,66210,2,0,P|230:227|278:236,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,285,66710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,303,66876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
474,259,67043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,313,67210,6,0,L|411:371,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,379,67543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,162,67876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,200,68043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,178,68210,86,0,P|157:180|91:217,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,150,68710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,105,68876,2,0,P|134:47|130:-2,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,149,69376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
110,202,69543,2,0,P|130:259|126:309,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,325,70210,5,2,0:0:0:0:
326,253,70376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,176,70543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,127,70710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,167,70876,86,0,P|261:169|215:150,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,205,71376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,272,71543,2,0,P|273:280|315:307,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,203,72043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,288,72210,2,0,P|65:311|15:309,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,195,72876,6,0,L|141:122,1,50.9999984436036,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,123,73210,2,0,L|242:60,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,114,73543,86,0,P|396:128|451:114,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,215,74210,2,0,P|184:201|129:215,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,252,74710,2,0,L|23:239,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,332,75043,2,0,L|70:348,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,358,75376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,331,75543,2,0,P|344:322|403:332,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,139,76210,6,0,P|343:68|359:0,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,217,76876,2,0,P|211:288|227:356,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,365,77376,2,0,L|121:303,1,50.9999984436036,10|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
121,307,77876,85,0,0:0:0:0:
61,185,78210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,77,78543,2,0,L|208:63,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,45,78876,38,0,L|273:2,2,31.8750012159348
255,121,79376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,341,79876,6,0,L|269:382,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,263,80376,2,0,B|298:245|334:262|334:262|368:276|413:258,1,159.375006079674,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,179,81543,6,0,L|470:186,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,164,82043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,179,82543,6,0,L|42:186,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,164,83043,2,0,B|181:203|181:203|151:270|176:338,1,159.375006079674,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,339,84210,54,0,L|273:382,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,263,84710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,43,85210,6,0,L|269:2,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,121,85710,2,0,B|295:130|332:100|332:100|379:121|427:114,1,159.375006079674,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,201,86877,6,0,L|474:208,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,236,87377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,201,87876,6,0,L|38:208,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,236,88376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Thanks for the mod!LimePixel wrote:
NM from my queue. Sorry for being late :c
[Normal]
-00:45:876 (5,1) - Blanket? OK
-01:17:376 (5) - What's with the super loud clap? I think it's fitting there
[Insane]
-00:51:043 (7,8,9) - No reason to have differences in spacing between each other since the strong sound ends at the end of 00:50:543 (6). So there's no point in emphasizing #7 There's a big clap at 00:51:210 (8) - thou, hence the spacing
-00:59:543 (9) - NC, and remove the NC from 01:00:043 (1) ? Nah, consistent vocal NC
Honestly, don't give me a kudosu for this, please. I couldn't really find anything else wrong, bcs of lacking time to play it more than twice. I think you deserved it. Even if I don't fix anything, you still give me suggestion, which is valuable. But I do fix some spot, so I will just give you one
Good luck
Thanks for your mod!Aeril wrote:
cool song[Insane][Easy]
- 00:05:709 (4,5) - move the slider on 5 up so it breaks the flow as it is a different sound and it would match the way you mapped the rest of these in the beginning. OK
- 00:18:543 (1,2,3,4) - you need to focus an instrument, here you focus vocals but 00:21:210 (1,2,3,4) - here you focus the guitars and percussion. I do think 00:21:210 (1,2,3,4) - both sliderhead lands on vocals thou
- 00:21:043 (4) - theres no note here Removed
- 00:23:710 (4) - theres no note here Removed
- 00:35:210 - up until here you need to look back on rhythm because you switch focus too much and it isnt intuitive to play. Hmmm, I think it stills follow the vocals nicely thou
- 01:12:210 (5) - space this out from 01:11:543 (3) - this one so it matches the rest of the spacing around objects that you do I don't know how to explain it here, but it's to be consistent with the similar part before it
- 01:18:876 (1,2,3,4) - the angle you have here is too wide and doesnt match the rest of these I meant it as an indication for the end of the song
- 00:17:543 (1) - remove nc here, i suggest lowering frequency of ncs during calm parts in easy as it would match the feel of the music. also goes for 00:22:876 (1) - 00:28:210 (1) - 00:33:543 (1) - . Guess I will cut it down
- 00:35:543 (1) - dont add ncs like this, it will possibly confuse new players and having ncs like this well screw with the hp drain. also remove 00:46:210 (1) - this one. I mean, this is like the transition part, and I want to keep it this way for pretty-looking and some consistency with other diff
- 00:56:210 (1) - one remove nc, two i think it would be better to have this be a slider then hit circle to increase build up to the kiai. The NC part is explained similarly like above, and I kinda don't understand what you mean about the slider part thou
- 01:17:210 (3) - is the whistle on the end of this a mistake? consistency, I believe
Hai domo arigatouHikan wrote:
hù sợIns00:07:876 (1,2,3,4) - làm cho đều lại rồi
00:15:376 (2,3,1) - gap khác nhau, để (3) half stack với 00:14:876 (1) - thôi uhm
00:16:210 (2,3,4) - tam giác đều sẽ đẹp hơn cố gắng
00:20:876 (3) - để qua 480 45 thì sẽ rõ cái gap hơn uhm
00:22:876 (1,2) - blanket T thấy đẹp nhất rồi
00:26:043 (2,3,1) - như trên, gap khác nhau, player dễ nhầm, 00:28:710 (2,3,1) - sửa
00:35:543 (5,6) - để 1/2 slider thôi? như vậy overmap tick xanh quá Có sao đâu? T thik để vocal trên sliderhead ở chỗ này
00:37:543 (5,6) - cho nó hướng vô trong, distance như vậy từ 6 tới 7 hơi xa https://puu.sh/wsP7Y/abe1e2e4bd.png uhm
00:38:876 (1,2,4) - tam giác thì sao Tạm
00:44:043 (4) - 0 90 để hợp với hướng của slider Rồi
00:45:543 (1) - cá nhân ctrl g cai này thì flow 00:44:876 (4,5,6,1) - cái này ngon hơn Uhm
00:58:043 (2) - stack 00:56:543 (4) - cho có structure Uhm
01:00:876 (5) - ở đây hơi ngượng ...
01:02:876 (1,2,3) - như vậy thì không biết đang emphasis cái nào, để 2 gần lại chút rồi
01:18:210 (2) - ctrl g? cho hợp flow với 01:17:544 (5,1) - Thích để flow đi lên ở chỗ này
01:20:543 (5,5,5) - mấy cái này nghe nó dừng ở tick xanh cơ, check lại xem thế nào 01:21:043 - 01:23:710 - 01:26:376 - . Với lại cũng overmap cái 5, thử rhythm này xem thế nào https://puu.sh/wsPqR/73a1e966a6.png Chỗ này là muốn overmap vậy. Đoạn sau thì Hòa lại nghĩ để ở 01:21:210 - hợp hơn, do nhạc ở đoạn đó tự nhiên dịu xuốngNAr 4.5 thôi Rồi
00:16:376 (4,5) - stack hẳn luôn thì dễ nhìn hơn Dạ thôi, để distance snap thôi. Hòa kị stack trong Normal lắm
00:19:210 - overmap, 1 cái slider dài thôi Rồi
00:33:876 - vocal Dạ, nhưng 00:34:043 - có tiếng to hơn, nên để ở đây sẽ nghe đc hơn. Also, consistency
00:57:543 (1,2,3,4) - https://puu.sh/wsPPg/3c0c84065f.png I prefer the current pattern vì nhiều lí do. 1. 00:57:876 - there's a sound here. 2. Đoạn này để vocal vầy thấy đc hơn
01:00:210 (1) - để qua tick xanh để follow vocal rõ hơn, Normal nên cũng cần follow chút chút chứ đừng undermap nhiều quá Đâu undermap nhiều lắm đâu và ko muốn kip downbeat và cái sound nằm trên nó
01:08:210 (1) - 3/4 thì sao, 01:10:876 (1) - RồiEz00:54:876 (1,1) - 1 shape thôi để hợp với pattern hơn Rồi
tksssHikan wrote:
hùLMT00:13:876 (1) - đuôi reverse nó hướng ra ngoài luồn vào trong
00:26:876 (2,3,4) - reverse slider? như vậy có hơi dense mặc dù không mạnh lắm thế thì lại thưa quá
00:24:210 (2,3) - shit overlap lol f
osu file format v14
[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57543
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0
[Editor]
Bookmarks: 56043,77376
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7
[Metadata]
Title:Freesia
TitleUnicode:Freesia
Artist:(K)NoW_NAME
ArtistUnicode:(K)NoW_NAME
Creator:LeKhanhHoa
Version:LMT's Hard
Source:サクラクエスト
Tags:Sakura Quest know name anime ed ending lmt
BeatmapID:1320857
BeatmapSetID:626728
[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"thumb-1920-803901.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
[TimingPoints]
4210,666.666666666667,4,2,1,30,1,0
4210,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
14876,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
36210,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
56043,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
57543,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,70,0,1
77376,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
78876,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
81210,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,0
81543,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
83876,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,0
84210,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
86543,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,0
86876,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
[Colours]
Combo1 : 238,238,238
Combo2 : 250,20,44
Combo3 : 22,50,241
Combo4 : 79,225,30
Combo5 : 231,236,34
Combo6 : 255,128,192
Combo7 : 255,0,128
[HitObjects]
156,152,4210,6,0,L|149:101,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,228,4710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,152,5210,2,0,L|363:101,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,228,5710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,6210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,93,6876,6,0,L|256:61,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,183,7376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,291,7876,2,0,L|255:322,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,201,8376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,191,8876,1,12,0:0:0:0:
113,193,9543,6,0,L|81:193,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,198,10043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,193,10543,2,0,L|430:193,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,198,11043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,326,11543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,334,12210,6,0,L|253:365,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,250,12710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,49,13210,2,0,L|254:17,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,133,13710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,235,13876,38,0,L|233:245,3,15.9375006079674,2|2|2|2,2:1|2:1|2:1|2:1,0:0:0:0:
253,229,14210,2,0,P|223:221|182:223,1,63.7500024318696,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,304,14876,6,0,L|31:252,1,42.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,314,15210,2,0,L|118:366,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,234,15543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
110,222,15876,6,0,L|103:172,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,139,16210,2,0,L|34:89,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,33,16543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
19,230,16876,2,0,L|5:330,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,285,17543,6,0,P|233:278|258:284,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,355,17876,2,0,P|119:362|94:356,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,367,18210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,365,18543,6,0,L|305:358,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,301,18876,2,0,L|412:304,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,353,19210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,252,19543,2,0,L|166:245,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,118,20210,54,0,L|70:61,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,192,20543,2,0,L|24:249,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,192,20876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,201,21210,6,0,P|160:191|191:196,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,285,21543,2,0,P|89:295|58:290,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,260,21876,2,0,L|312:253,1,85,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,254,22876,6,0,L|292:328,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,196,23210,2,0,L|380:122,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,169,23543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,163,23876,6,0,P|256:157|220:168,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,200,24210,2,0,P|144:206|108:195,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,162,24543,2,0,P|56:206|42:258,2,85,0|12|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,290,25543,54,0,P|137:317|146:354,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,254,25876,2,0,P|221:227|212:190,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,145,26210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
155,131,26543,6,0,L|147:76,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,21,26876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,99,27043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,39,27210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,206,27543,2,0,L|346:305,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,292,28210,6,0,L|113:283,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,347,28543,2,0,L|270:338,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,263,28876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
237,250,29210,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,167,29376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,217,29543,2,0,L|322:286,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,337,29876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,136,30210,2,0,L|329:17,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,34,30876,54,0,P|100:39|78:36,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,101,31210,2,0,P|218:96|240:99,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,122,31543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,134,31876,6,0,L|93:192,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,254,32210,2,0,L|72:312,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,374,32543,2,0,P|111:370|168:386,1,85,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,382,33543,6,0,L|167:324,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,262,33877,2,0,L|188:204,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,144,34210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,133,34543,6,0,P|167:127|138:111,1,42.5
269,85,34876,2,0,P|298:79|327:63,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,178,35210,38,0,L|261:200,3,21.25,2|2|2|2,0:1|0:1|0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
281,171,35543,2,0,P|289:226|282:264,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,307,36210,6,0,L|102:242,1,50.9999984436036,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,178,36543,2,0,L|86:113,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,47,36876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
231,96,37210,6,0,L|261:76,3,25.4999992218018,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,104,37543,2,0,P|289:113|337:104,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,227,38210,2,0,L|293:300,1,50.9999984436036,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,276,38543,2,0,L|216:336,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,325,38876,6,0,P|72:339|7:325,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,251,39376,2,0,P|53:237|118:251,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,266,39876,6,0,L|211:235,3,25.4999992218018
186,276,40210,2,0,P|245:287|293:274,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,153,40876,2,0,L|390:80,1,50.9999984436036,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,104,41209,2,0,L|313:44,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,71,41543,54,0,P|165:61|106:72,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,113,42043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,166,42210,2,0,P|162:176|221:165,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,118,42710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,191,42876,2,0,P|323:241|336:294,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,355,43543,2,0,L|94:341,1,101.999996887207,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,354,44043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
53,273,44210,6,0,P|60:227|48:157,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,97,44710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,170,44876,2,0,P|173:216|185:286,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,336,45376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,267,45543,2,0,P|334:258|409:263,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,42,46210,69,12,0:0:0:0:
486,110,46543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,184,46876,6,0,L|215:180,1,50.9999984436036,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,172,47210,2,0,L|92:167,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,162,47543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
101,305,47876,6,0,L|114:326,3,25.4999992218018,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,291,48210,2,0,P|139:273|204:286,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,291,48876,2,0,L|425:275,1,50.9999984436036,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,192,49210,2,0,L|368:208,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,127,49543,6,0,P|195:141|128:124,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,43,50043,2,0,P|182:29|249:46,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,76,50543,6,0,L|350:47,3,25.4999992218018,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,92,50876,2,0,P|359:106|426:89,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,243,51543,2,0,L|280:299,1,50.9999984436036,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,197,51876,2,0,L|196:253,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,125,52210,54,0,P|115:70|125:19,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,54,52710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,142,52876,2,0,P|295:197|285:248,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,62,53376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,45,53543,2,0,P|386:39|445:51,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,180,54210,2,0,L|86:174,1,101.999996887207,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,169,54710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
46,88,54876,6,0,P|97:75|163:93,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,176,55376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,278,55543,2,0,P|100:291|34:273,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,172,56043,1,2,0:1:0:0:
272,271,56210,2,0,L|287:377,1,101.999996887207,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
372,134,56876,69,12,0:0:0:0:
451,150,57043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
490,81,57210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,23,57376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
365,55,57543,70,0,P|322:55|261:40,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,105,58043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,186,58210,2,0,P|196:186|135:201,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,269,58710,2,0,L|21:255,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,334,59043,2,0,L|91:365,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,344,59376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,332,59543,2,0,P|357:332|418:317,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,265,60043,6,0,P|465:206|469:144,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,131,60543,2,0,L|379:81,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,177,60876,2,0,P|277:161|213:159,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,181,61376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,182,61543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
26,119,61710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,187,61876,86,0,L|53:262,1,50.9999984436036
89,315,62210,2,0,P|136:301|199:307,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,139,62876,6,0,P|246:139|308:107,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,198,63376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,283,63543,2,0,P|358:291|404:315,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,257,64043,2,0,L|488:318,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,163,64376,2,0,L|512:192,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,89,64710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,55,64876,2,0,P|273:67|237:59,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,24,65376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,82,65543,86,0,P|76:87|34:80,1,50.9999984436036
120,167,65876,2,0,L|60:220,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,234,66210,2,0,P|230:227|278:236,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,285,66710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,303,66876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
474,259,67043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,313,67210,6,0,L|411:371,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,379,67543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,162,67876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,200,68043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,178,68210,86,0,P|157:180|91:217,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,150,68710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,105,68876,2,0,P|134:47|130:-2,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,149,69376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
110,202,69543,2,0,P|130:259|126:309,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,325,70210,5,2,0:0:0:0:
326,253,70376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,176,70543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,127,70710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,167,70876,86,0,P|261:169|215:150,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,205,71376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,272,71543,2,0,P|273:280|315:307,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,203,72043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,288,72210,2,0,P|65:311|15:309,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,195,72876,6,0,L|141:122,1,50.9999984436036,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,123,73210,2,0,L|242:60,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,114,73543,86,0,P|396:128|451:114,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,215,74210,2,0,P|184:201|129:215,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,252,74710,2,0,L|23:239,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,332,75043,2,0,L|70:348,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,358,75376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,331,75543,2,0,P|344:322|403:332,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,139,76210,6,0,P|343:68|359:0,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,217,76876,2,0,P|211:288|227:356,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,365,77376,2,0,L|121:303,1,50.9999984436036,10|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
121,307,77876,85,0,0:0:0:0:
61,185,78210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,77,78543,2,0,L|208:63,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,45,78876,38,0,L|273:2,2,31.8750012159348
255,121,79376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,341,79876,6,0,L|269:382,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,263,80376,2,0,B|298:245|334:262|334:262|368:276|413:258,1,159.375006079674,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,179,81543,6,0,L|470:186,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,164,82043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,179,82543,6,0,L|42:186,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,164,83043,2,0,B|181:203|181:203|151:270|176:338,1,159.375006079674,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,339,84210,54,0,L|273:382,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,263,84710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,43,85210,6,0,L|269:2,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,121,85710,2,0,B|295:130|332:100|332:100|379:121|427:114,1,159.375006079674,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,201,86877,6,0,L|474:208,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,236,87377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,201,87876,6,0,L|38:208,2,31.8750012159348,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,236,88376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Thanks for your mod!borborygmos wrote:
general
double the bpm, to fix sv you do only half of base and it fixes. double bpm makes more sense even if song is calmer I took the timing from another bubbled map, so I think it fits. Besides, metronome will sound more fitting at 90 BPM
insane
00:04:210 - really like this intro thanks
00:28:376 - there isn't a vocal hold here so you shouldn't skip this one oh yeah thanks
00:16:210 (2,3) - how come this is a jump, you should try to focus on one instrument and not try to emphasize all of them ok nerf
00:33:876 - normally you have the vocal sounds clickable so this should be to 1/4 sliders there's no vocals here and I prefer consistency
00:35:210 - this color hax emphasis hardly works because there is barely anything different in the song and you mapped it barely differently so no point It's different because it's a small stream and the white sound I use is to emphasize changes to pattern
00:52:543 (2) - this should be two circles for the reason of clickability on vocal sounds, legit 00:53:210 (4,5) - shown here 00:52:710 - There's no vocal here so I prefer 1/4 slider
00:40:876 (1,2) - and 00:46:210 (1,2) - are the same strength but only one is color haxed ??? I do think 00:46:210 - is the similar pattern to 00:35:543 - so the colorhaxing is like that
good ending too, Thanks!
just make sure you make the vocals clickable for clarity cuz rn its a little inconsistent IDK. It seems fine to me
normal
00:48:543 (3,4) - this blanket forces awkward movement that you don't really do before I mean, 00:47:543 (2,3,4) - This part use the same copy - paste pattern from 00:36:876 (2,3,4) - so there's that
easy
thanks for the mod!!borborygmos wrote:
lmt hard
01:14:710 (3,4,5) - I think this should follow the vocals more closely since kiai before this follows vocals pretty closely and this one is d I would follow it if the vocal rhythm itself were denser tbh. It's way too sparse and kinda uninteresting to follow closely. Fair point otherwise tho
Yes, thanks a lot for the better mp3. If you could mod this, it would be great. But if you can't or don't want to, then that's fine as wellgottagof4ast wrote:
Not 100% sure if I'm going to mod this but the mp3 sounded so bad,
Here is a better one wih 192 kbps, you will have to adjust the offset though
http://puu.sh/wzNyN/e87cc1a84c.mp3
Thanks for your mod!Blan_C wrote:
Hello, NM from my queueInsane Map is really good. I tried hard and couldnt find more. Good luck!
- Overally i think hitsounds on 00:15:496 (1) - 00:18:163 (1) - etc are a bit too loud, try decrasing volume of the hs mp3 file a bit. Probably 40% would be fine, right?
- 00:15:496 (1,2) - you can improve this blanket tried
- 00:23:496 (1,2) - ^ I mean, this is just copypaste rotate slider, so it's hard to judge where would it makes a good blanket, but I'll try
- 01:09:496 (3,4) - ^ OK
- 00:45:830 (5) - Try moving this to 412:42 to make it more flowy (anti clockwise movement from 00:44:663 (4) - ) Yes I see what you mean.
But the angle you suggest was diffent from the usual, so I tone it down a bit- 01:00:663 (1,2) - Please ctrl g this. That way you will support guitars and 'nnnn' vocal sound sure
Thanks for your mod!PolkaMocha wrote:
[General:][Easy:]
- I got offset 4,826. Your timing sounds late.. :thinking: 4ms. I will get it check
[Normal:]
- 00:44:826 (1,2,3) - THis would be super cool if it was less dense because of the quieter vocals. Ex: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8511245 Yes, I notice that the vocals are quieter, but I prefer some consistency. And the pattern here is not that hard, thou.
- 01:10:826 (3) - Circles do better here because it gives more emphasis in terms of 01:11:492 (1) - being a vocal section.But isn't 01:10:830 (3) - is also a vocal section?
[Afteword:]
- 00:36:830 (1) - Why not x:40 y:132? That overlapping slider tail is pretty unattractive and while my suggestion doesn't go with your distance snap, it's not off to the point where it disturbs the legibility of the map. Fair enough.
- 00:52:163 (5,1) - This looks heavily unpolished; this overlap here. How about this? It doesn't touch the hp bar and helps give it a cleaner look. OK
- 00:56:830 (1,2) - Circles would do amazing here to give those drums a boost of emphasis and allow for a difficult build up. I get you tried to emphasize with a new slider shape, but personally, I don't think that'll be as noticeable to players as circles. I tried
- 01:17:996 (5) - I would take off this clap, it's super loud and isn't going to anything. Really distracting.I think this is for consistency since on Insane, there's a triplet here and it sounds alot better
- Your hitsound choice for the kiai is extremely underwhelming and I think using drum-hitnormal as a snare didn't do too well. Try something louder and more noticeable from the soft hit normal. I'm not the one who hitsounds so I can't answer this
thanks for the mod!!PolkaMocha wrote:
[Hard:]
- 00:12:830 (1,3) - These should be straight vertically, it just looks nicer aesthetically and matches it's prior similar patterns better. prior similar patterns are intentionally slightly off too. It looks too mechanical (and hence unfitting with the rest of the map) being perfectly vertical.
- 01:17:996 (3) - Again, that clap is super offputting. At least quiet it down... not in charge of the hitsounds but that is to denote an irregular rhythm and that's a good way to do it
Thanks for your mod!gottagof4ast wrote:
And I'm back for the nmdoneGeneral
Your bg is .png, change it to .jpg for a smaller filesizeInsane
00:39:830 (3) - this note does not have the extra drum sound like 00:39:496 (1) - does and should therefor not have more spacing ok changed
00:38:830 (1) - don't really see the logic in your nc's on this part, it causes for some really short combo's like the one I jsut pointed out I try to combo following the vocals and make it as relevant as possible, so this is the best result imo
00:42:830 (4,5,6) - this is like almost exactly the same sound so I would try to make sure that you have a sharp angle at 00:43:163 (5) - so they also feel similar to 00:42:163 (1,2,3) - I mean, the angle here doesn't really matter as the ds between the 2 circles are relatively small, so there's that
00:47:496 (1) - sound is really loud so why lower spacing here consistency with the first part. also, sometimes I use this to signify changes
00:50:163 (1,2,3,4) - your other 1234 jumps had a clear structure into grouping them into groups of 2 which is not really visible here ok changed
01:05:996 (1,2,3,4,5) - these jumps flow a bit unpredictable with them changing flow direction alot I mean, this is sharp angle. also, this pattern is pretty much similar to the star in the previous pattern, the only that forces it not to be a star is that I can't create one without disgusting overlap,
so ...
01:08:163 (1,2,3,4) - These sounds are pretty loud and you emphasize the repeating nature of it well by stacking but why are they so close when 01:07:163 (1,2,3,4) - is like alot further apart increased
01:08:830 (1) - some more spacing on this to emphasize this wouldn't hurt either since the previous one got ds increase, so this one should be as well
01:10:163 (5) - angling under a -30 degree corner would make you pattern keep the circular flow better Want to keep 01:09:496 (3,5,6) -
as neat as it is
01:19:163 (3,4) - emphasize the vocal here more by placing a 1/4 slider instead, this way you also get al larger contrast between this part and 01:19:496 (1,2,3,4) - which only exists out of circles There are 2 drum sounds at 01:19:163 (3,4) - so I want to keep it as 2 circles to emphasize it,
also, I do believe the color part give enough contrast to the 2 part
This map would be alot better if it was consistent when and for what the ds changes,
ex 00:48:830 (5,6,7,8) - you give 7 alot more spacing and that is good but you also gave 5 more spacing which is in no way loud enough to warrant even more spacing to ok this part is terrible, changed
ex2 00:52:830 (1,2,3) - : 3 has an added sound on the sliderhead but it's mapped in the same pattern as if it was the exact same.
You actually gave the bonus sound more spacing at 00:54:830 (3) - so that makes it having less spacing here even weirder vocal consistecy I believe
Overall, it's still pretty good though
Also, my name is spelled incorrectly in the description lol oh snap, sorry hehe
Gl with the map
09:27 LeKhanhHoa: Yami ơi
09:27 LeKhanhHoa: Rảnh ko em?
09:27 Yamicchi: rảnh
09:27 LeKhanhHoa: Rồi
09:27 LeKhanhHoa: Check hộ t coi t phá map tới đâu
rồi
09:27 Yamicchi: :))
09:27 Yamicchi: ok
09:28 Yamicchi: insane hử
09:28 LeKhanhHoa: uhm
09:28 Yamicchi: để redl cái
09:28 LeKhanhHoa: ok
09:28 Yamicchi: nhìn cái default bg ngứa mắt quá
09:29 Yamicchi: 00:09:496 (6) - tao nhớ có 1 cái
hitsound khá hợp chỗ này
09:29 Yamicchi: mà lâu quá quên mất nó nằm trong
set nào rồi
09:29 LeKhanhHoa: Thế sao t nhớ :P
09:31 Yamicchi: 00:15:496 (1) - đấy hitsound ngon
lành lên liền
09:32 LeKhanhHoa: Hai hai
09:32 LeKhanhHoa: Arigatou
09:32 Yamicchi: 00:26:163 (1) - xa ra tí em
09:32 Yamicchi: spacing confuse quá
09:32 LeKhanhHoa: Ghi hết đi
09:32 LeKhanhHoa: Lát t reply
09:32 LeKhanhHoa: H t đi mua đồ cái
09:32 Yamicchi:
gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyy
yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
09:33 Yamicchi: 00:43:830 (2) - stack hoặc là overlap
nghệ thuật
09:33 Yamicchi: nửa vời kiểu này...
09:33 Yamicchi: 00:46:163 (1) - dời nó qua phải hẳn
luôn, overlap vầy xấu
09:34 Yamicchi: 00:46:830 (1) - bỏ NC cũng đc
09:35 Yamicchi: 01:10:163 (5) -
09:35 Yamicchi: cầm 01:10:496 (6) - xoay 240*, đặt ở
X336 Y144
09:35 Yamicchi: better flow
09:36 Yamicchi: 01:19:496 (1) - cái này hoặc là phải
bẻ flow hoặc là tăng spacing, hoặc cả 2
09:36 Yamicchi: 01:19:330 (4,1,2) - linear quá
09:36 Yamicchi: tiếp, tới NC
09:37 Yamicchi: 00:09:163 (5,6) - t hiểu tại sao m làm
vầy, cơ mà tại cái pattern này lặp có 3 lần thôi nên
thành ra cái này nó lẻ
09:37 Yamicchi: cho thành 1/2 reverse luôn là đc
09:37 Yamicchi: 00:18:163 (1) - spacing cũng hơi nhỏ
09:38 Yamicchi: à mà thôi
09:38 Yamicchi: cũng kh tới nổi tệ
09:38 LeKhanhHoa: Deny all thanks
09:38 LeKhanhHoa: Chờ t tí
09:39 Yamicchi: 00:32:163 (3) - ở đây hồi nãy m chọn
là 1 circle
09:39 Yamicchi: giờ sao thành 1 slider rồi
09:39 Yamicchi: 00:21:496 (3) -
09:40 Yamicchi: 00:35:496 (1) - bỏ CN
09:40 Yamicchi: NC
09:40 Yamicchi: 00:38:163 (5,1) - swap NC
09:41 LeKhanhHoa: 00:43:830 (2,3) - Cái này t thấy
bth
09:41 LeKhanhHoa: No pls
09:41 Yamicchi: 00:40:163 (1,2) - swap NC
09:41 Yamicchi: 00:41:496 (1) - bỏ NC
09:41 Yamicchi: m thấy bth nhưng spacing m đang
dùng để overlap nó khác
09:41 Yamicchi: thành ra nhìn nó giôgns 1 cái issue
hơn là m cố ý
09:42 Yamicchi: chứ ai chả biết m cố ý
09:42 Yamicchi: 00:48:830 (5,1) - swap nc
09:42 Yamicchi: 00:51:163 (6,1) - swap nc
09:43 Yamicchi: 00:56:163 (1) - vẫn đang follow vocal
mắc cc gì m nc :v
09:43 Yamicchi: bỏ
09:43 Yamicchi: 00:59:496 (5) - nc
09:43 Yamicchi: 01:00:663 (1,2) - swap
09:43 Yamicchi: 01:01:830 (1,2) - swap
09:43 Yamicchi: 01:04:496 (1,3) - swap
09:44 Yamicchi: 01:05:996 (1,2) - swap
09:44 Yamicchi: 01:07:163 (1,3) -
09:44 Yamicchi: 01:08:163 (1) - bỏ
09:45 Yamicchi: 01:13:830 (1) - bỏ
09:46 Yamicchi: 01:15:830 (1) - bỏ
09:46 Yamicchi: 01:17:496 (1) - bỏ
09:46 Yamicchi: 01:18:164 (8) - NC
09:46 Yamicchi: 01:18:496 (1) - bỏ
09:46 Yamicchi: xong
09:48 LeKhanhHoa: Đệt mẹ
09:48 LeKhanhHoa: Dài vc
09:48 Yamicchi: mỗi dòng có nhiêu đâu loz :v
09:52 LeKhanhHoa: 01:10:163 (5,6) - ?
09:53 Yamicchi: lộn
09:53 Yamicchi: X448 Y60
09:53 Yamicchi: :))
09:54 LeKhanhHoa: overlap wtf?
09:54 Yamicchi: wtf
09:55 LeKhanhHoa: X448 Y60 overlap
09:55 Yamicchi: http://puu.sh/wEk6o/cb834c728c.jpg
09:55 LeKhanhHoa: đm cái số 5
09:55 LeKhanhHoa: bảo t xoay cái số 6
09:55 Yamicchi: cầm cái số 5 copy paste xoay 240 :v
09:55 Yamicchi: typo
10:02 LeKhanhHoa: đm loạn nc rồi
10:07 LeKhanhHoa: Đệt, sao t thấy m giống NC
instrument vậy?
10:08 Yamicchi: đệt tin tao đi
10:08 Yamicchi: m NC rất là loạn luôn đấy
10:08 LeKhanhHoa: vocal?
10:08 Yamicchi: nope
10:08 Yamicchi: vocal kiểu đó cũngk h phải nữa
11:01 LeKhanhHoa: Recheck pls BN
11:01 Yamicchi: fixed everything?
11:01 LeKhanhHoa: Hình như vậy
11:02 LeKhanhHoa: T sửa pattern trong kial
11:02 Yamicchi: sec
11:05 Yamicchi: ok ổn hơn rồi
11:05 Yamicchi: tao ăn kudos map này chưa
11:05 LeKhanhHoa: rồi
11:05 LeKhanhHoa: you greed
11:05 Yamicchi: lul
Sinnoh wrote:
why's the entire chorus pink? because reasons
General
Soft-hitfinish2 is way too quiet, increase it's volume or just use the default
01:17:996 (6) - check hitsound on all diffs lol
00:04:830 (1,2,3,4) - These need hitsounds added, either on the first or fourth circle. There's no feedback so they're hard to acc
01:19:496 (1) - ^ there are no hitsounds for the entire section
remove anime from the tags, it's automatically applied in genre so it's redundant fair enough
imaginary bubble popped for no hitsounds at the end :/I don't hitsound so...
Insane
00:19:163 (1,2) - This jump is way larger than anything else in this section, and has nothing to emphasise on it too ok changes
00:37:830 (4,1) - has almost the same amount of emphasis as 00:38:330 (2,3) - , I'd suggest to make this pattern a bit smaller uhhh,
the 2 patterns has a pretty large difference in distance snap, and you had more time to jump to it compare to 2 circles, and it looks nicer in there imo
00:41:496 (1,2,1) - Is kind of inconsistent with 00:52:163 (1,2,1) - because of slider angle emphasis. It'd be easier if I just let my mentor explain that in this vid. The second one has much stronger emphasis compared to the first changed the second pattern
00:36:496 (6,1) - & 00:47:163 (2,1) - I just find it odd there's no spacing emphasis on starts of new sections, but there is at 00:52:496 (2,1) - Because I preceive those 2 sections as more of a transistion section, and that explains the distance
00:42:496 (2,3,4) - compared to 00:43:163 (5,6,1) - , the first has a really sharp angle but the second uses a really wide one. This makes it somewhat hard to follow flow. Can't really find anywhere else where you used angle emphasis like this. changed
Easy & Normal
00:36:163 (1) - 00:46:830 (1) - 00:56:830 (1) - Remove NC, really doesn't feel like it's needed remove all but the last one as I prefer that one to be kept as indicator of kial
ThanksSinnoh wrote:
General
Soft-hitfinish2 is way too quiet, increase it's volume or just use the default yes
01:17:996 (6) - check hitsound on all diffs lol everytime im suk at hs
00:04:830 (1,2,3,4) - These need hitsounds added, either on the first or fourth circle. There's no feedback so they're hard to acc idk can you give me an example, maybe clap on (1)?
01:19:496 (1) - ^ there are no hitsounds for the entire section clap on (1)? lol
U want sum ngáo?Hikan wrote:
đống hitsound nếu có gì apply được thì Hòa cứ thử đi, khi nào gặp cái nào khó xử thì hẳn đưa. Tại vì rep vậy loãng theard quá cái mod mà thằng không phải mapper vào rep nó ngáo ngáo
2017-07-09 13:45 LeKhanhHoa: Hi. Yami told me to pm you. Thanks for taking a look
2017-07-09 13:45 MaridiuS: hi
2017-07-09 13:45 MaridiuS: so generally i think that the map is not bad
2017-07-09 13:45 MaridiuS: just few concepts were not executed fully correctly
2017-07-09 13:46 LeKhanhHoa: Yes
2017-07-09 13:46 MaridiuS: so lets go
2017-07-09 13:46 MaridiuS: firstly this is subjective
2017-07-09 13:47 MaridiuS: but since 00:05:830 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing is used for the guitar sounding part
2017-07-09 13:47 MaridiuS: 00:06:496 (5) - this doesn't carry the same weight, and I'd suggest stacking it on (4)
2017-07-09 13:47 LeKhanhHoa: Idk
2017-07-09 13:47 LeKhanhHoa: Stacking it seems ugly to me
2017-07-09 13:48 MaridiuS: stacking shouldn't look ugly lul
2017-07-09 13:48 MaridiuS: ur not doing anything weird its really common
2017-07-09 13:48 MaridiuS: 00:10:163 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - oh also you should use same curve for both instances of these single taps
2017-07-09 13:48 MaridiuS: so copy paste and rotation is your friend here.
2017-07-09 13:49 LeKhanhHoa: Oh okay
2017-07-09 13:50 MaridiuS: 00:15:496 (1,3) - this overlap really doesn't look good
2017-07-09 13:50 MaridiuS: since your map is not based on overlaps, it shouldn't contain this weird of a one.
2017-07-09 13:50 MaridiuS: placing it here https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/M1JJnAf.jpg would be better
2017-07-09 13:50 LeKhanhHoa: Actually, it is repeated one more times thou
2017-07-09 13:51 MaridiuS: it doesn't fit the map
2017-07-09 13:51 MaridiuS: brb 2-3 mins
2017-07-09 13:51 LeKhanhHoa: sure
2017-07-09 13:57 MaridiuS: oki im back
2017-07-09 13:57 MaridiuS: so usually when you do this kind of overlaps, you base your map around them
2017-07-09 13:57 LeKhanhHoa: Okay
2017-07-09 13:57 MaridiuS: you just use the overlap on a seemingly random pattern
2017-07-09 13:57 MaridiuS: which could be done better with my suggestion.
2017-07-09 13:58 MaridiuS: but ofc if you apply my suggestion, you'll need to rearrange other patterns related to it
2017-07-09 13:58 LeKhanhHoa: Yes I know.
2017-07-09 13:59 MaridiuS: next, you'll want to differentiate the spacing
2017-07-09 13:59 MaridiuS: you use similar spacing on 1/1 beats as you use for 1/2 beats
2017-07-09 13:59 MaridiuS: it could get confusing
2017-07-09 14:00 MaridiuS: 00:17:496 (5,1) - for example look how close this is.
2017-07-09 14:00 MaridiuS: You'll also want to make 00:18:163 (1) - special, as it is a down beat, and seemingly strong
2017-07-09 14:00 MaridiuS: so giving it larger spacing should work much better
2017-07-09 14:00 MaridiuS: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/HGRl6Oi.jpg this spacing might be ideal or something
2017-07-09 14:01 LeKhanhHoa: I'll see what I can do
2017-07-09 14:01 MaridiuS: it could work as a gimmick, but however, the map isn't really rhythmically consistent
2017-07-09 14:01 MaridiuS: 00:22:496 (3,4,5) - because this doesnt have a 1/1 gap, you'll have to focus a bit more to realize what's 1/2,
2017-07-09 14:02 MaridiuS: 00:26:163 (1,2,3) - here's the pattern that doesn't really fit
2017-07-09 14:02 MaridiuS: having no overlap is never a mistake
2017-07-09 14:02 MaridiuS: 00:28:830 (1,2,3) - same for this, its a bit random since you on that bit mostly not overlap it with a slider that happened previously on the timeline
2017-07-09 14:03 MaridiuS: 00:32:163 (3) - like this one isn't behind (1)
2017-07-09 14:03 LeKhanhHoa: Fair enough
2017-07-09 14:03 LeKhanhHoa: I'll fix them all
2017-07-09 14:03 MaridiuS: wait osu direct is pissing me off
2017-07-09 14:03 MaridiuS: reconnecting
2017-07-09 14:04 MaridiuS: 00:31:496 (1,2,3) -
2017-07-09 14:04 MaridiuS: when having such placement you should focus on making a triangle
2017-07-09 14:04 MaridiuS: having (3) equally visual distanced from both (2) and (1)
2017-07-09 14:04 MaridiuS: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/NX0GIFb.jpg
2017-07-09 14:06 MaridiuS: 00:34:163 (1,2,3) - similar could be applied here
2017-07-09 14:06 MaridiuS: i prefer having one side filled, rather than having emptiness
2017-07-09 14:06 MaridiuS: will explain
2017-07-09 14:06 LeKhanhHoa: OK
2017-07-09 14:06 MaridiuS: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/4VeRCzc.jpg
2017-07-09 14:06 MaridiuS: something like this for example
2017-07-09 14:07 MaridiuS: you will connect more patterns visually
2017-07-09 14:07 MaridiuS: giving no empty spaces
2017-07-09 14:07 MaridiuS: 00:36:496 (6) - you can make this extend to the yellow tick before the slider
2017-07-09 14:08 MaridiuS: with this spacing it is expected for (1) to be after 1/8
2017-07-09 14:08 MaridiuS: 00:36:830 (1,2,3,4) - you can also connect patterns here in a similar way i mentioned
2017-07-09 14:08 MaridiuS: by placing (3) close to the big slider
2017-07-09 14:09 MaridiuS: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/w8VOZO5.jpg
2017-07-09 14:09 MaridiuS: 00:38:163 (1,2,3,4) - here another example where you could fill more holes, do it like this pattern 00:48:830 (1,2,3,4) -
2017-07-09 14:11 MaridiuS: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/xqJ9AIf.jpg 00:42:163 (1,2,4) - see how i've put (2) to have same visual distance from both sliders
2017-07-09 14:11 MaridiuS: that's a e s t h e t i c
2017-07-09 14:12 LeKhanhHoa: will try
2017-07-09 14:12 MaridiuS: the rest of connecting patterns i'll leave to you
2017-07-09 14:12 MaridiuS: will now ginve some other gameplay feedback
2017-07-09 14:12 MaridiuS: 00:42:163 (1,2,3,4) - you formed here a nice circular flow
2017-07-09 14:12 MaridiuS: 00:43:163 (5,6) - but broke it unfairly here
2017-07-09 14:12 MaridiuS: without a reason, it should all be a part of the same part, therefore same kind of flow that you formed with previous two
2017-07-09 14:13 MaridiuS: 00:45:496 (4,5,6) - here it was done well
2017-07-09 14:13 LeKhanhHoa: i like to preceive it as this thou
2017-07-09 14:15 LeKhanhHoa: I mean, it is like this
2017-07-09 14:16 LeKhanhHoa: 1 2 3 is one group
2017-07-09 14:16 LeKhanhHoa: 4 5 6 is one group
2017-07-09 14:16 LeKhanhHoa: and both is like that
2017-07-09 14:16 MaridiuS: but a pattern alter
2017-07-09 14:16 MaridiuS: 00:45:496 (4,5,6) -
2017-07-09 14:16 MaridiuS: they're done in same flow style
2017-07-09 14:16 MaridiuS: on the pattern i pointed out it is not
2017-07-09 14:17 MaridiuS: okay now the kiai is a bit lacking in visual consistency
2017-07-09 14:18 MaridiuS: since the map up to this point
2017-07-09 14:18 MaridiuS: kept a level of consistent visual distance
2017-07-09 14:18 MaridiuS: so should the kiai
2017-07-09 14:18 MaridiuS: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/Sx8tJCJ.jpg lets take this pattern for example
2017-07-09 14:18 MaridiuS: 01:01:996 (1,2,3) -
2017-07-09 14:19 MaridiuS: thanks to the approach circle, we can tell that (3) is further away from (2) than (1) is
2017-07-09 14:19 MaridiuS: there are two options, to make them the same distance
2017-07-09 14:19 MaridiuS: and the most preferably is to make (3) also be the same distance from (2) and (1)
2017-07-09 14:20 MaridiuS: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/kha7NFO.jpg this, but its your choice this is generally the most accepted style
2017-07-09 14:21 LeKhanhHoa: Problably will make it bigger thou
2017-07-09 14:21 MaridiuS: 01:06:830 (5,1,3) - https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/dspK3xr.jpg another example
2017-07-09 14:21 MaridiuS: 01:12:163 (3,4) - same should kinda be applied to blanket distance
2017-07-09 14:21 MaridiuS: 01:12:163 (3,5) -
2017-07-09 14:21 MaridiuS: if both blankets have same distance it should loook better
2017-07-09 14:22 MaridiuS: 01:04:996 (3) - this should be 2 circles, since it has vocals on both the start and the end of the slider
2017-07-09 14:23 MaridiuS: 01:10:163 (5) - good idea is to make this slider 1/1, because you're following exclusively vocals kinda
2017-07-09 14:23 LeKhanhHoa: Oh, I can't hear vocals on the sliderend thou
2017-07-09 14:23 MaridiuS: doing a slider on a beat that doesnt have vocals
2017-07-09 14:23 MaridiuS: kinda contradicts your section
2017-07-09 14:24 MaridiuS: oh well thats weird i thought it had vocals there
2017-07-09 14:25 LeKhanhHoa: As for 01:10:163 (5,6) -
2017-07-09 14:26 LeKhanhHoa: Like, there are small instruments sounds at sliderend (5)
2017-07-09 14:26 LeKhanhHoa: So I'd like to leave it thou
2017-07-09 14:26 MaridiuS: yeah i know
2017-07-09 14:26 MaridiuS: 00:58:996 - but there are a bit more insta nces
2017-07-09 14:27 MaridiuS: where you also kidna skip the beat
2017-07-09 14:27 LeKhanhHoa: The vocal there sounds more like a hold to me
2017-07-09 14:29 MaridiuS: but generally nothing much to say about flow. In a diff with little spacing it isn't really felt if its a bit uncomfortable
2017-07-09 14:29 MaridiuS: but mostly needs a bit more work and aesthetics
2017-07-09 14:29 MaridiuS: on aesthetics* and on the start spacing emphasis
2017-07-09 14:30 LeKhanhHoa: Will try my best
2017-07-09 14:30 MaridiuS: rhythm seems fine
Thanks for your mod!Venix wrote:
from queue
[Easy][Normal]
- 00:10:163 (1,2) - I think it plays a bit harsh because 00:11:163 (2) - this slider doesn't continue transition made by previous one. What about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8547555 It would play more comfortable. okay
good diff
- 00:56:496 (4) - I think you should move this circle into the slider's inside side just for better aesthetics, like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8547579 sure
- 01:28:496 (2) - Similar issue to this one from easy diff. sure
Not bad map, needs more polishing. Good luck~
Thanks to both of you for your mod!MaridiuS wrote:
insane check2017-07-09 13:45 LeKhanhHoa: Hi. Yami told me to pm you. Thanks for taking a look
2017-07-09 13:45 MaridiuS: hi
2017-07-09 13:45 MaridiuS: so generally i think that the map is not bad
2017-07-09 13:45 MaridiuS: just few concepts were not executed fully correctly
2017-07-09 13:46 LeKhanhHoa: Yes
2017-07-09 13:46 MaridiuS: so lets go
2017-07-09 13:46 MaridiuS: firstly this is subjective
2017-07-09 13:47 MaridiuS: but since 00:05:830 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing is used for the guitar sounding part
2017-07-09 13:47 MaridiuS: 00:06:496 (5) - this doesn't carry the same weight, and I'd suggest stacking it on (4)
2017-07-09 13:47 LeKhanhHoa: Idk
2017-07-09 13:47 LeKhanhHoa: Stacking it seems ugly to me
2017-07-09 13:48 MaridiuS: stacking shouldn't look ugly lul
2017-07-09 13:48 MaridiuS: ur not doing anything weird its really common
2017-07-09 13:48 MaridiuS: 00:10:163 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - oh also you should use same curve for both instances of these single taps
2017-07-09 13:48 MaridiuS: so copy paste and rotation is your friend here.
2017-07-09 13:49 LeKhanhHoa: Oh okay
2017-07-09 13:50 MaridiuS: 00:15:496 (1,3) - this overlap really doesn't look good
2017-07-09 13:50 MaridiuS: since your map is not based on overlaps, it shouldn't contain this weird of a one.
2017-07-09 13:50 MaridiuS: placing it here https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/M1JJnAf.jpg would be better
2017-07-09 13:50 LeKhanhHoa: Actually, it is repeated one more times thou
2017-07-09 13:51 MaridiuS: it doesn't fit the map
2017-07-09 13:51 MaridiuS: brb 2-3 mins
2017-07-09 13:51 LeKhanhHoa: sure
2017-07-09 13:57 MaridiuS: oki im back
2017-07-09 13:57 MaridiuS: so usually when you do this kind of overlaps, you base your map around them
2017-07-09 13:57 LeKhanhHoa: Okay
2017-07-09 13:57 MaridiuS: you just use the overlap on a seemingly random pattern
2017-07-09 13:57 MaridiuS: which could be done better with my suggestion.
2017-07-09 13:58 MaridiuS: but ofc if you apply my suggestion, you'll need to rearrange other patterns related to it
2017-07-09 13:58 LeKhanhHoa: Yes I know.
2017-07-09 13:59 MaridiuS: next, you'll want to differentiate the spacing
2017-07-09 13:59 MaridiuS: you use similar spacing on 1/1 beats as you use for 1/2 beats
2017-07-09 13:59 MaridiuS: it could get confusing
2017-07-09 14:00 MaridiuS: 00:17:496 (5,1) - for example look how close this is.
2017-07-09 14:00 MaridiuS: You'll also want to make 00:18:163 (1) - special, as it is a down beat, and seemingly strong
2017-07-09 14:00 MaridiuS: so giving it larger spacing should work much better
2017-07-09 14:00 MaridiuS: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/HGRl6Oi.jpg this spacing might be ideal or something
2017-07-09 14:01 LeKhanhHoa: I'll see what I can do
2017-07-09 14:01 MaridiuS: it could work as a gimmick, but however, the map isn't really rhythmically consistent
2017-07-09 14:01 MaridiuS: 00:22:496 (3,4,5) - because this doesnt have a 1/1 gap, you'll have to focus a bit more to realize what's 1/2,
2017-07-09 14:02 MaridiuS: 00:26:163 (1,2,3) - here's the pattern that doesn't really fit
2017-07-09 14:02 MaridiuS: having no overlap is never a mistake
2017-07-09 14:02 MaridiuS: 00:28:830 (1,2,3) - same for this, its a bit random since you on that bit mostly not overlap it with a slider that happened previously on the timeline
2017-07-09 14:03 MaridiuS: 00:32:163 (3) - like this one isn't behind (1)
2017-07-09 14:03 LeKhanhHoa: Fair enough
2017-07-09 14:03 LeKhanhHoa: I'll fix them all
2017-07-09 14:03 MaridiuS: wait osu direct is pissing me off
2017-07-09 14:03 MaridiuS: reconnecting
2017-07-09 14:04 MaridiuS: 00:31:496 (1,2,3) -
2017-07-09 14:04 MaridiuS: when having such placement you should focus on making a triangle
2017-07-09 14:04 MaridiuS: having (3) equally visual distanced from both (2) and (1)
2017-07-09 14:04 MaridiuS: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/NX0GIFb.jpg
2017-07-09 14:06 MaridiuS: 00:34:163 (1,2,3) - similar could be applied here
2017-07-09 14:06 MaridiuS: i prefer having one side filled, rather than having emptiness
2017-07-09 14:06 MaridiuS: will explain
2017-07-09 14:06 LeKhanhHoa: OK
2017-07-09 14:06 MaridiuS: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/4VeRCzc.jpg
2017-07-09 14:06 MaridiuS: something like this for example
2017-07-09 14:07 MaridiuS: you will connect more patterns visually
2017-07-09 14:07 MaridiuS: giving no empty spaces
2017-07-09 14:07 MaridiuS: 00:36:496 (6) - you can make this extend to the yellow tick before the slider
2017-07-09 14:08 MaridiuS: with this spacing it is expected for (1) to be after 1/8
2017-07-09 14:08 MaridiuS: 00:36:830 (1,2,3,4) - you can also connect patterns here in a similar way i mentioned
2017-07-09 14:08 MaridiuS: by placing (3) close to the big slider
2017-07-09 14:09 MaridiuS: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/w8VOZO5.jpg
2017-07-09 14:09 MaridiuS: 00:38:163 (1,2,3,4) - here another example where you could fill more holes, do it like this pattern 00:48:830 (1,2,3,4) -
2017-07-09 14:11 MaridiuS: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/xqJ9AIf.jpg 00:42:163 (1,2,4) - see how i've put (2) to have same visual distance from both sliders
2017-07-09 14:11 MaridiuS: that's a e s t h e t i c
2017-07-09 14:12 LeKhanhHoa: will try
2017-07-09 14:12 MaridiuS: the rest of connecting patterns i'll leave to you
2017-07-09 14:12 MaridiuS: will now ginve some other gameplay feedback
2017-07-09 14:12 MaridiuS: 00:42:163 (1,2,3,4) - you formed here a nice circular flow
2017-07-09 14:12 MaridiuS: 00:43:163 (5,6) - but broke it unfairly here
2017-07-09 14:12 MaridiuS: without a reason, it should all be a part of the same part, therefore same kind of flow that you formed with previous two
2017-07-09 14:13 MaridiuS: 00:45:496 (4,5,6) - here it was done well
2017-07-09 14:13 LeKhanhHoa: i like to preceive it as this thou
2017-07-09 14:15 LeKhanhHoa: I mean, it is like this
2017-07-09 14:16 LeKhanhHoa: 1 2 3 is one group
2017-07-09 14:16 LeKhanhHoa: 4 5 6 is one group
2017-07-09 14:16 LeKhanhHoa: and both is like that
2017-07-09 14:16 MaridiuS: but a pattern alter
2017-07-09 14:16 MaridiuS: 00:45:496 (4,5,6) -
2017-07-09 14:16 MaridiuS: they're done in same flow style
2017-07-09 14:16 MaridiuS: on the pattern i pointed out it is not
2017-07-09 14:17 MaridiuS: okay now the kiai is a bit lacking in visual consistency
2017-07-09 14:18 MaridiuS: since the map up to this point
2017-07-09 14:18 MaridiuS: kept a level of consistent visual distance
2017-07-09 14:18 MaridiuS: so should the kiai
2017-07-09 14:18 MaridiuS: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/Sx8tJCJ.jpg lets take this pattern for example
2017-07-09 14:18 MaridiuS: 01:01:996 (1,2,3) -
2017-07-09 14:19 MaridiuS: thanks to the approach circle, we can tell that (3) is further away from (2) than (1) is
2017-07-09 14:19 MaridiuS: there are two options, to make them the same distance
2017-07-09 14:19 MaridiuS: and the most preferably is to make (3) also be the same distance from (2) and (1)
2017-07-09 14:20 MaridiuS: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/kha7NFO.jpg this, but its your choice this is generally the most accepted style
2017-07-09 14:21 LeKhanhHoa: Problably will make it bigger thou
2017-07-09 14:21 MaridiuS: 01:06:830 (5,1,3) - https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/dspK3xr.jpg another example
2017-07-09 14:21 MaridiuS: 01:12:163 (3,4) - same should kinda be applied to blanket distance
2017-07-09 14:21 MaridiuS: 01:12:163 (3,5) -
2017-07-09 14:21 MaridiuS: if both blankets have same distance it should loook better
2017-07-09 14:22 MaridiuS: 01:04:996 (3) - this should be 2 circles, since it has vocals on both the start and the end of the slider
2017-07-09 14:23 MaridiuS: 01:10:163 (5) - good idea is to make this slider 1/1, because you're following exclusively vocals kinda
2017-07-09 14:23 LeKhanhHoa: Oh, I can't hear vocals on the sliderend thou
2017-07-09 14:23 MaridiuS: doing a slider on a beat that doesnt have vocals
2017-07-09 14:23 MaridiuS: kinda contradicts your section
2017-07-09 14:24 MaridiuS: oh well thats weird i thought it had vocals there
2017-07-09 14:25 LeKhanhHoa: As for 01:10:163 (5,6) -
2017-07-09 14:26 LeKhanhHoa: Like, there are small instruments sounds at sliderend (5)
2017-07-09 14:26 LeKhanhHoa: So I'd like to leave it thou
2017-07-09 14:26 MaridiuS: yeah i know
2017-07-09 14:26 MaridiuS: 00:58:996 - but there are a bit more insta nces
2017-07-09 14:27 MaridiuS: where you also kidna skip the beat
2017-07-09 14:27 LeKhanhHoa: The vocal there sounds more like a hold to me
2017-07-09 14:29 MaridiuS: but generally nothing much to say about flow. In a diff with little spacing it isn't really felt if its a bit uncomfortable
2017-07-09 14:29 MaridiuS: but mostly needs a bit more work and aesthetics
2017-07-09 14:29 MaridiuS: on aesthetics* and on the start spacing emphasis
2017-07-09 14:30 LeKhanhHoa: Will try my best
2017-07-09 14:30 MaridiuS: rhythm seems fine
A little side note:
I'm not nicpicky for the opening part, so it will probably stays like that
00:36:830 (1,2,3,4) - seems fine to me.
00:35:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Will be overmapped if it ends on yellow tick.
00:42:163 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is different grouping to me, and since the ds is small, I think it is fine.
01:10:163 (5,6) - Is explained in the last part
thanks for the mod!Venix wrote:
from queue
[LMT's Hard]Not bad map, needs more polishing. Good luck~
- 00:37:830 (1) - This slider is overmapped. There's no 1/8 sound. hihats
- 00:56:163 (3,4) - Don't you think this jump is a bit too big in contrast to others on this diff? I prefer nerf it like you did on other jumps. slider leniency makes the actual spacing easier than the circle -> slider jump
Thanks for your mod!Neoskylove wrote:
Q
[Insane]
00:15:496 - from this, music has vocal, but you are still following guitar(?) sound, can be boring. Oh, actually I still try to follow the vocals.
Where there're hold vocals, I will use most pattern like this thou. I guess it's more interesting to play rather then just the vocals thou.
01:11:163 - no reason for jump. this part doesn't have any emphasis yes, changed
Good map. GL!
thanks Mir!!Mir wrote:
[LMT's Hard]
- 00:13:830 (3,4,1) - I misread (1) as a 1/1 gap, maybe making all of these the same spacing would make it clearer that it's 1/2? ye was my original intention, not sure when it moved
- 00:14:496 (1) - Also it may be better to leave these as single repeats instead of double because it's kinda hard to acc these if you're singletapping. It kinda forces you to alternate.. minor thing though I guess. 1 more repeat is noticeably too offputing considering how I use this pattern later on so uhh don't think I could change it
- 00:37:830 (1) - I can get them being used for drums and stuff but these sounds are a lot weaker in comparison. In the interest of making the diff not too complicated maybe removing these and replacing them with one circle would work? kinda kills the fun and that's like the only way I could express those 1/4s to tell the player that they do play an important part in the track
- 01:19:496 (1,2,1,2) - NC patterning is different from the beginning 00:04:830 (1,2,3,4) - ? How come? o.o oh good catch lol, fixed except for the last one since it's a little unique
osu file format v14
[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58163
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0
[Editor]
Bookmarks: 56043,77376
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7
[Metadata]
Title:Freesia
TitleUnicode:Freesia
Artist:(K)NoW_NAME
ArtistUnicode:(K)NoW_NAME
Creator:LeKhanhHoa
Version:LMT's Hard
Source:サクラクエスト
Tags:Sakura Quest know name ed ending lmt
BeatmapID:1320857
BeatmapSetID:626728
[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1
[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-85,"(K)NoW_NAME~1.avi"
0,0,"thumb-1920-803901.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
[TimingPoints]
4830,666.666666666667,4,2,1,30,1,0
4830,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
15496,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
36163,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
36830,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
56663,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
58163,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,70,0,1
77996,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
79496,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
81830,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,0
82163,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
84496,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,0
84830,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
87163,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,0
87496,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
[Colours]
Combo1 : 216,216,216
Combo2 : 250,20,44
Combo3 : 22,50,241
Combo4 : 79,225,30
Combo5 : 231,236,34
Combo6 : 255,128,192
Combo7 : 255,0,128
[HitObjects]
156,152,4830,6,0,L|149:101,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,228,5330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,152,5830,2,0,L|363:101,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,228,6330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,6830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,93,7496,6,0,L|256:61,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,183,7996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,291,8496,2,0,L|255:322,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,201,8996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,191,9496,1,12,0:0:0:0:
113,193,10163,6,0,L|81:193,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,198,10663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,193,11163,2,0,L|430:193,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,198,11663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,326,12163,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,334,12830,6,0,L|253:365,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,250,13330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,49,13830,2,0,L|254:17,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,133,14330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,225,14496,38,0,L|228:235,3,15.9375006079674,2|2|2|2,2:1|2:1|2:1|2:1,0:0:0:0:
248,219,14830,2,0,P|218:211|177:213,1,63.7500024318696,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,304,15496,6,0,L|31:252,1,42.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,314,15830,2,0,L|118:366,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,234,16163,1,8,0:0:0:0:
110,222,16496,6,0,L|103:172,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,139,16830,2,0,L|34:89,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,33,17163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
19,230,17496,2,0,L|5:330,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,285,18163,6,0,P|233:278|258:284,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,355,18496,2,0,P|119:362|94:356,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,367,18830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,365,19163,6,0,L|305:358,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,301,19496,2,0,L|412:304,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,353,19830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,252,20163,2,0,L|166:245,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,118,20830,54,0,L|70:61,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,192,21163,2,0,L|24:249,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,192,21496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,201,21830,6,0,P|160:191|191:196,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,285,22163,2,0,P|89:295|58:290,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,260,22496,2,0,L|312:253,1,85,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,254,23496,6,0,L|292:328,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,196,23830,2,0,L|380:122,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,169,24163,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,163,24496,6,0,P|256:157|220:168,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,200,24830,2,0,P|144:206|108:195,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,162,25163,2,0,P|56:206|42:258,2,85,0|12|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,290,26163,54,0,P|137:317|146:354,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,254,26496,2,0,P|221:227|212:190,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,145,26830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
155,131,27163,6,0,L|147:76,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,21,27496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,99,27663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,39,27830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,206,28163,2,0,L|346:305,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,292,28830,6,0,L|113:283,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,347,29163,2,0,L|270:338,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,263,29496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
237,250,29830,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,167,29996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,217,30163,2,0,L|322:286,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,337,30496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,136,30830,2,0,L|329:17,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,34,31496,54,0,P|100:39|78:36,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,101,31830,2,0,P|218:96|240:99,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,122,32163,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,134,32496,6,0,L|93:192,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,254,32830,2,0,L|72:312,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,374,33163,2,0,P|111:370|168:386,1,85,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,382,34163,6,0,L|167:324,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,262,34497,2,0,L|188:204,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,144,34830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,133,35163,6,0,P|167:127|138:111,1,42.5
269,85,35496,2,0,P|298:79|327:63,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,178,35830,38,0,L|261:200,3,21.25,2|2|2|2,0:1|0:1|0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
281,171,36163,2,0,P|289:226|282:264,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,307,36830,6,0,L|102:242,1,50.9999984436036,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,178,37163,2,0,L|86:113,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,47,37496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
231,96,37830,6,0,L|261:76,3,25.4999992218018
224,104,38163,2,0,P|289:113|337:104,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,227,38830,2,0,L|293:300,1,50.9999984436036,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,276,39163,2,0,L|216:336,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,325,39496,6,0,P|72:339|7:325,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,251,39996,2,0,P|53:237|118:251,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,266,40496,6,0,L|211:235,3,25.4999992218018
186,276,40830,2,0,P|245:287|293:274,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,153,41496,2,0,L|390:80,1,50.9999984436036,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,104,41829,2,0,L|313:44,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,71,42163,54,0,P|165:61|106:72,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,113,42663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,166,42830,2,0,P|162:176|221:165,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,118,43330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,191,43496,2,0,P|323:241|336:294,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,355,44163,2,0,L|94:341,1,101.999996887207,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,354,44663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
53,273,44830,6,0,P|60:227|48:157,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,97,45330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,170,45496,2,0,P|173:216|185:286,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,336,45996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,267,46163,2,0,P|334:258|409:263,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,42,46830,69,12,0:0:0:0:
486,110,47163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,184,47496,6,0,L|215:180,1,50.9999984436036,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,172,47830,2,0,L|92:167,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,162,48163,1,8,0:0:0:0:
101,305,48496,6,0,L|114:326,3,25.4999992218018,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,291,48830,2,0,P|139:273|204:286,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,291,49496,2,0,L|425:275,1,50.9999984436036,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,192,49830,2,0,L|368:208,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,127,50163,6,0,P|195:141|128:124,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,43,50663,2,0,P|182:29|249:46,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,76,51163,6,0,L|350:47,3,25.4999992218018,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,92,51496,2,0,P|359:106|426:89,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,243,52163,2,0,L|280:299,1,50.9999984436036,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,197,52496,2,0,L|196:253,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,125,52830,54,0,P|115:70|125:19,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,54,53330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,142,53496,2,0,P|295:197|285:248,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,62,53996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,45,54163,2,0,P|386:39|445:51,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,180,54830,2,0,L|86:174,1,101.999996887207,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,169,55330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
46,88,55496,6,0,P|97:75|163:93,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,176,55996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,278,56163,2,0,P|100:291|34:273,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,172,56663,1,2,0:1:0:0:
272,271,56830,2,0,L|287:377,1,101.999996887207,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
372,134,57496,69,12,0:0:0:0:
451,150,57663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
490,81,57830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,23,57996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
365,55,58163,70,0,P|322:55|261:40,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,105,58663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,186,58830,2,0,P|196:186|135:201,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,269,59330,2,0,L|21:255,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,334,59663,2,0,L|91:365,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,344,59996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,332,60163,2,0,P|357:332|418:317,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,265,60663,6,0,P|465:206|469:144,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,131,61163,2,0,L|379:81,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,177,61496,2,0,P|277:161|213:159,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,181,61996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,182,62163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
26,119,62330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,187,62496,86,0,L|53:262,1,50.9999984436036
89,315,62830,2,0,P|136:301|199:307,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,139,63496,6,0,P|246:139|308:107,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,198,63996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,283,64163,2,0,P|358:291|404:315,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,257,64663,2,0,L|488:318,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,163,64996,2,0,L|512:192,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,89,65330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,55,65496,2,0,P|273:67|237:59,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,24,65996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,82,66163,86,0,P|76:87|34:80,1,50.9999984436036
120,167,66496,2,0,L|60:220,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,234,66830,2,0,P|230:227|278:236,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,285,67330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,303,67496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
474,259,67663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,313,67830,6,0,L|411:371,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,379,68163,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,162,68496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,200,68663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,178,68830,86,0,P|157:180|91:217,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,150,69330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,105,69496,2,0,P|134:47|130:-2,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,149,69996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
110,202,70163,2,0,P|130:259|126:309,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,325,70830,5,2,0:0:0:0:
326,253,70996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,176,71163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,127,71330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,167,71496,86,0,P|261:169|215:150,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,205,71996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,272,72163,2,0,P|273:280|315:307,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,203,72663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,288,72830,2,0,P|65:311|15:309,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,195,73496,6,0,L|141:122,1,50.9999984436036,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,123,73830,2,0,L|242:60,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,114,74163,86,0,P|396:128|451:114,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,215,74830,2,0,P|184:201|129:215,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,252,75330,2,0,L|23:239,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,332,75663,2,0,L|70:348,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,358,75996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,331,76163,2,0,P|344:322|403:332,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,139,76830,6,0,P|343:68|359:0,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,217,77496,2,0,P|211:288|227:356,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,365,77996,2,0,L|121:303,1,50.9999984436036,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
121,307,78496,85,0,0:0:0:0:
61,185,78830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,77,79163,2,0,L|208:63,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,45,79496,38,0,L|273:2,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,121,79996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,341,80496,2,0,L|269:382,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,263,80996,2,0,B|298:245|334:262|334:262|368:276|413:258,1,159.375006079674,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,179,82163,6,0,L|470:186,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,164,82663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,179,83163,2,0,L|42:186,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,164,83663,2,0,B|181:203|181:203|151:270|176:338,1,159.375006079674,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,339,84830,54,0,L|273:382,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,263,85330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,43,85830,2,0,L|269:2,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,121,86330,2,0,B|295:130|332:100|332:100|379:121|427:114,1,159.375006079674,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,201,87497,6,0,L|474:208,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,236,87997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,201,88496,6,0,L|38:208,2,31.8750012159348,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,236,88996,1,0,0:0:0:0: