M4M from your Q
[Genal]
11.27mb maybe too big, try to reduce the size of osz, maybe we can cut the size of BG cause it is 1876x1104
00:06:297 the volume of the red line is different from the green line
[Soraru~]
00:27:611 (3,4) - advice to blanket it cause it give me the sense to blanket
00:24:281 (2) - 00:27:478 (2) - you use 1.5DS, but at 00:33:073 (3,4) - spacing here is different , maybe we can make it looks similiar
00:36:670 (1,2,3) - the ryhthm is same as 00:33:472 (1,2,3,4) - but actually the ds here is quite different , whats more the first one doest cut the flow but the second one does, so i adive to ctrl+G 00:37:202 (2) -
00:47:193 (4,5) - if you want to make pattern like this, i would deeply recommend to enlarge the ds between those to circles, the pattern now looks like two 1/4 circles imo, and maybe we should give a fittalbe reason for explain why you stack some two circles but someplace we dont like
00:56:119 (1,2,3,4) - i would prefer rhythm like this:
01:27:557 - i would advice to make here clickable cause 3 streams is followed, make the heavy beat followed by the tail of slider would be confusing
01:32:353 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:56:119 (1,2,3,4) -
01:36:616 (1,2) -
01:56:064 (2,3) - would be better flow if you exchange those two sliders
02:52:813 (1,2,3,4) - compared with 02:51:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here is more quite than those before but you use the same spacing , which is not as comfortable as it ought to be
04:12:607 (2,3) - same spacing as 04:08:211 (2,3,4) - would be confusing imo, better to reduce the ds
04:14:605 (2,3,4) - i cant find a good reason to explain why they are same ryhthm but with different DS
04:45:245 (1) - beacuse you put the repeat like 04:44:712 (1) - , most players would click this slider like what before it, which would be sudden, so i would advice to break it into 3 1/2 sliders
Nice song,GL~
[Genal]
11.27mb maybe too big, try to reduce the size of osz, maybe we can cut the size of BG cause it is 1876x1104
00:06:297 the volume of the red line is different from the green line
[Soraru~]
00:27:611 (3,4) - advice to blanket it cause it give me the sense to blanket
00:24:281 (2) - 00:27:478 (2) - you use 1.5DS, but at 00:33:073 (3,4) - spacing here is different , maybe we can make it looks similiar
00:36:670 (1,2,3) - the ryhthm is same as 00:33:472 (1,2,3,4) - but actually the ds here is quite different , whats more the first one doest cut the flow but the second one does, so i adive to ctrl+G 00:37:202 (2) -
00:47:193 (4,5) - if you want to make pattern like this, i would deeply recommend to enlarge the ds between those to circles, the pattern now looks like two 1/4 circles imo, and maybe we should give a fittalbe reason for explain why you stack some two circles but someplace we dont like
00:56:119 (1,2,3,4) - i would prefer rhythm like this:
01:27:557 - i would advice to make here clickable cause 3 streams is followed, make the heavy beat followed by the tail of slider would be confusing
01:32:353 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:56:119 (1,2,3,4) -
01:36:616 (1,2) -
01:56:064 (2,3) - would be better flow if you exchange those two sliders
02:52:813 (1,2,3,4) - compared with 02:51:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here is more quite than those before but you use the same spacing , which is not as comfortable as it ought to be
04:12:607 (2,3) - same spacing as 04:08:211 (2,3,4) - would be confusing imo, better to reduce the ds
04:14:605 (2,3,4) - i cant find a good reason to explain why they are same ryhthm but with different DS
04:45:245 (1) - beacuse you put the repeat like 04:44:712 (1) - , most players would click this slider like what before it, which would be sudden, so i would advice to break it into 3 1/2 sliders
Nice song,GL~