[ General ]
- Background Size : ✓
- Unsnapped objects : 02:07:232 (6) -
- Metadata Issues : ✓
- Timeline Issues : ✓
- Hitsounds Issues : Hitsounds seem a little loud between 00:06:297 - and 00:19:085 -
- Combo Colors : ✓
- Other : You stop the kiais when there is a small break in the vocals but the song is still intense in those moments. I don't see the need to turn them off for just 1 second when the song is still going strong
[ Transcience ]
This is entirely subjective, but I do think this is a better background for the song. This is entirely up to you if you want to change it or not.
- 00:59:316 (1,5) - Have these sliders have the same angle and same goes to here 00:17:487 (6,7) -
- 00:24:281 (2,3) - Here you should switch the circle and the slider's spot in the timeline. This is what you did here 00:27:478 (2,3) - and I think it works much better. I do think you should have it consistenly mapped here
- 00:50:390 (4,5,3,4) - You could have these overlap
- 00:52:389 (4) - I'm not a fan of the look of sliders like these that go 45 degree-> 0 degrees to me it just looks clunky. I'll only point it out here since this is pretty subjective but I would change them to have a different shape.
- 01:36:616 (1,2) - blanket (I know pointing out blankets has become a meme but this is like really off) same here 01:39:813 (1,2) -
- 02:07:121 (4,5,6,1,2) - Organizing this part like this would make this play much better
- 02:16:580 (3,4) - Make these sliders the same
- 02:44:820 (2) - You could have this slider be this one 02:44:554 (1) - copy pasted where you used ctrl-g and ctrl-h
- 02:52:547 (1,1) - Earlier you used complete overlaps for 1/1 gaps so you should do it here also. It would also look less like a 1/2 gap this way
- 02:58:408 (6) - A simple 1/2 would be better here
- 03:05:201 (4) - Not really sure why you skip over the drum on 03:05:335 - . You should have a circle on 03:05:201 - and then a 3/4 slider on 03:05:335 - that way you don't skip over any pretty important beats
- 03:16:258 (1,2,3,4,5) -
- Organizing it like this would make it feel less stuck together than the current pattern
- 03:41:834 (1,2,1,2) - Line these up
- 03:43:433 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be 3/4 or you should just have 1/1 spaced circles
- 04:01:150 (2,3) - Spacing between these two should be bigger
- 04:46:843 (1) - The gasp is on 04:46:910 - but that wouldn't very fun for acc so would should probably just remove the circle here
This is entirely subjective, but I do think this is a better background for the song. This is entirely up to you if you want to change it or not.