at your req: actually at my req xd
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4min
- 00:23:403 - poor blue tick is sad you ignored it, at least make 00:23:306 (5) - a 1/4 slider ;;
- 00:39:758 (3,4,5) - every rhythm following this has a lot of vocal emphasis, but this doesnt at all, maybe change these into a 1/1 slider followed by a circle
- 01:10:919 (4,1) - this is the only time in this area where you use a simple oval motion instead of having the player change direction to hit the next slider, and it sticks out a lot, think you should rework this part so it plays more like 01:04:726 (4,1) -
- 01:16:145 (6) - this circle seems weird since it's interrupting the 01:15:564 (5) - hold, i feel like either a 1/1 gap between 01:15:564 (5,1) - is better, or mapping the 01:16:242 (7) - beat as well (since it exists and you mapped quiet triplet beats already)
- i think 01:17:887 (1) - should be stacked under 01:17:209 (2) - 's tail instead of 01:18:080 (2) - , so that the cursor starts moving again when the kiai starts, it'll be more impactful that way (same for all similar kiai starts)
- a lot of your rhythming during the 01:55:048 (1) - section is literally mapped to nothing and seems like awkward filler imo, but i guess most of it's okay. i do have big issue with 02:00:467 (1) - , it seems super random and should just be a 1/2 rhythm imo
- lol did you really map 03:07:048 (1) - but didn't map the strong 1/8 drum rhythms early, you're silly
- cool use of breaks at 03:12:467 - :>
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