Gabe wrote:

Hi, modding request by PM!

Hard

1. 00:26:790 (3) - As for this circle, I love how it is right now, stacked with the beginning of the last slider's. However, I feel it can be moved somewhere else to continue the flow of your two previous sliders. What about moving it to x:72 y:192 ? ok
2. 00:46:532 (5) - Your combos are perfectly consistent here, but if we look at your next sliders, they are a copy of this one. I am suggesting you to add a new combo to this slider and delete the new combo to the next slider. It will make it visually better as it will pop these sliders even more. ok
3. 01:22:532 (1) - I got very confused when I saw this circle. Since it's stacked at the end of 01:21:758 (3) - , it's a bit hidden. I suggest you to stack it with the next slider, I feel it's going to be better as you previously stacked objects together. alright
4. 04:02:016 (5) - Since it's the end of the song, I feel like you should add a new combo here c: I actually don't really like a lone Combo :/

Nice job! The flow is incredible

Lunatic

1. 00:26:790 (6) - I feel you should add a new combo here, it's quite appropriate since it emphasize the end of the intro. Uh, I'd love to keep not NC-ing because I want it to have the follow points from previous notes
2. 01:42:661 (11) - Same as mentioned above I NC 01:42:274 - instead
3. 02:01:242 (4) - You should add a new combo as it's not part of the previous three objects. I guess you're right
4. 02:27:371 (1) - I do not like the flow in here, it feels too sharp. You should consider doing a CTRL+G in here as it will improve the flow with the previous slider. However, you will need to move this slider a bit and the next ones also to keep a nice flow. changed
5. 03:36:855 (6) - Just a suggestion here, what about you add a new combo in here? It's going to improve the readability of the stream. sure
6. 04:02:016 (11) - Sane as mentioned on Hard NC 04:01:629 - instead

Really nice and solid mapset! I'm giving you a star. I'm sure you can get it ranked pretty soon Thank you Gabe!

-Nya- wrote:

Heyo~ NM via PM req.

Lunatic:

1. 00:17:306 (3) –Consider spacing this slider out a bit more because of the distinctive beat on the slider’s head. spaced slightly further away
2. 00:17:887 (1) –The shape and placement of this slider doesn’t create the best flow because of the straight horizontal flow and it can be uncomfortable to play. Plus it doesn’t look good aesthetically because of the awkward blanket. Try something like this instead: To be honest, I don't really like the way it flows toward the next stream. And the flow as it is is very straightforward as well, so I don't really think that it will cause a big problem (or any problem at all) playability-wise because it still creates a circular flow. Last thing, If you noticed (I'm sure you're) I actually make some "weird" blanket - non-blanket slider aethetic on purpose. I'm willing to sacrifice some aethetic reason as long that playability gets a lot of benefit from it. Actually, I personally think that those imperfect blanket goes really well with this old-style kind of song
   
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3. 00:21:371 (2) –To emphasize the beat on this circle more, consider nerfing the jump here: 00:21:177 (1) – since the beat on this circle isn’t that important and 00:21:371 (2,3) – has to stand out more imo. imo they're equally important, and I really like how it plays here
   
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   Something like above.
4. 00:23:500 (6) –Since the beat here is so strong a NC would fit nicely imo. So perhaps add NC here and remove it here: 00:23:887 (1) – I want to keep the follow-points, so I'm not NC-ing it
5. 00:26:790 (6) –Consider adding NC? Would fit in nicely. same
6. 00:41:113 (2) –Consider doing something like this instead: No, because I want to keep this straight pattern 00:41:113 (2,3,4,5) -
   
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   Would be better flow.
7. 00:42:274 (1,2,3) –Make the spacing here consistent. I would actually increase the spacing on 00:43:435 (3) – since there’s a strong beat.sure
8. 00:44:984 (6,7) –I would actually add a bit more spacing here to accommodate that build-up in the vocals. I personally think that those triangle 00:44:597 (3,4,5,6,7) - already provide biuld up that it needed by the way the pattern are arranged
9. 00:45:371 (1,2) –The spacing here feels inconsistent with 00:42:274 (1,2) – and the vocals still have a bit of similarity so I feel this have to be consistent. My suggestion would be to add a bit more spacing here: 00:42:274 (1,2) – Those are a bit different than the other. They're somwhat different because the later slider has strong cymbal sound on it, and thats why it carries on to the next slider aswell. If that makes any sense lol
10. 00:46:532 (3) –Adding a bit more spacing here also can’t hurt since it would be a good idea to emphasize that beat on the head more. It’s also a bit weird for me that the spacing here: 00:46:919 (1) – is bigger than the spacing here: 00:46:532 (3) – but (3) has a stronger beat so it should actually be the other way around imo. I can say the same thing here: 00:41:113 (2,3) – I would say that the spacing alone doesn't really justify how the map really plays. In this case, 00:46:532 (3,1,2) - pattern have back and forth jump which is known to be the most natural jump momentum while 00:46:919 (1,2,3) - having the jump between them in different direction which has less natural movement considering that the previous pattern has back and forth jump. I'm not good at explaining this kind of stuff but I hope that I can get my points across. Plus, that will messed the stucture that I built from 00:44:597 - to 00:50:790 - lol, So I'm not changing it
11. 00:47:306 (3) –Why so little spacing for a strong beat? It’s also inconsistent with 00:48:080 (6) – which has much larger spacing for the same beat. same explanation as above, its all about cursor's movement & the momentum that each circle give to one another
12. 00:51:467 –I can hear a beat here in the background so you can actually add a note here to form a stream. I want to put jump on the downbeat to emphasize the electric sound
13. 00:51:564 (1,2) –Please make a blanket here. It will look much neater. Idk why but I like it as it is rather than blanketing lol
14. 00:53:500 (3) –The jump should be here and not here: 00:53:306 (2) – since the strong beat is on (3) So perhaps something like this: Umm, I'll consider it. but I'm not really sure because I don't really like of how it plays
    
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15. 00:54:274 (3) –More spacing here would be appreciated as well. same
16. 00:55:822 (3) -^
17. 00:56:597 (2) -^, etc. Not gonna point them all out.
18. 00:57:080 –I listened to this at 25% and couldn’t hear a beat in the background. Remove this note please. i want to emphasize the in-between vocal
19. 01:03:177 (3) –If you want you can map out those fast sounds before the stream. It’s a bit weird not to map them out since they can be heard so clearly. It’s snapped to 1/8, so something like this: I just want to emphasize the heavy beat on that particular section. Sorry
    
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20. 01:05:113 –There’s a very important beat here so why didn’t you map it out? Highly consider placing a note here. Actually, I;m following those 3/4 vocal. Putting a circle there would killed the emphasis imo
21. 01:06:661 -^, etc. Not gonna point them all out.
22. Go over your NC’s in the first kiai please. Some of them are inconsistent and others don’t make sense. I’ll point out some: 01:18:855 (1) –Remove NC here and add NC here: 01:19:242 (2) – Then remove NC here: 01:20:403 (1) – and add NC here: 01:20:790 (3) – Remove NC here: 01:21:371 (1) – etc. If you’re struggling with this, feel free to poke me in-game. Actually I NC'd based on the start of each vocal section but yeah, I will try to adjust what I can
23. 01:28:726 (1,2) –Rather make these sliders’ shapes similar. It looks weird if they aren’t. I actually think, that its kinda cool lol

I’m gonna stop here for now before my mod gets too long. The idea is there, but there are still stuff that requires a rework. Your spacings/jumps are inconsistent: At some places you add jumps and at others you don’t add jumps but the beat is exactly the same as the one for which you added a jump. The aesthetics can also be improved. There are a lot of places where there are near-blankets, example: 02:16:726 (1,2) – but they really don’t look good. Making them proper blankets would look much better.

Personally I don’t like some of the straight sliders and their placements. Examples are: 00:17:887 (1) - 00:40:145 (5) - 00:41:113 (2) - 00:44:016 (2) - 00:46:532 (3) - 01:13:629 (2) – etc. The main reason is the awkward flow that they create. The NC’s are inconsistent, especially in the kiai times. Please go over them and ensure they are consistent and placed at the places where they are supported. I pointed out a few in my mod.

Hard:

1. 00:15:371 (4) –Don’t curve sliders like these too much. They tend to look ugly.Ok
2. 00:44:984 (2) –Ctrl+G this slider. Better flow since it is circular. I don't really like how it flows to the next slider, So I keep it
3. 00:52:145 (2) –Move this down a bit since it’s almost touching 00:51:177 (4) – So for aesthetics reasons. sure
4. 01:22:726 (2,3) –Improve this blanket. I don't really like curving a 1/1 slider too much
5. 01:38:403 (2) –Placing this circle somewhere here: X:452 Y:352 would support better flow. I want to keep those "W" flow
6. 01:42:661 (5) –You can add a small jump here to emphasize that strong finish beat. sure
7. 03:23:306 (3,4,5) –Make sure the spacing is consistent here. (5) is slightly touching (4) yea
8. 04:02:016 (5) –You can also add a bit of a jump here. ok

I guess aesthetics can still be improved in this diff. Like blankets.

Mostly the Lunatic diff requires work. If you have any questions regarding my mod, feel free to poke me in-game.
Thank you for your mods! It may seems that I rejected most of your suggestion on Lunatic diff, but that's solely because of my subjective preferences when it comes to mapping. Your concern are all valid, sure. But the way I handle those are a bit different than yours, I think there're none of us that is wrong or correct. It's just different

Good Luck~ Thank you!

Gabe wrote:

Hi, modding request by PM!

Stella's Normal

1. 01:05:693 - At this point, you added a new combo. I understand that you wanted to emphasize a certain point of the song, however, it's not consistent with your previous combos. I have two suggestions for you, either you delete the new combo for consistency, or you add a new combo to 01:08:597 (3) - . If you add a new combo there, you'll get the same effect as you tried to do with 01:05:693 - . But if you want my honesty, I feel you should simply delete the new combo @01:05:693 - .
   Okay fixed as your mentioned~
2. 01:11:887 (1) - Same as mentioned above. Fixed~
3. 02:01:242 (1) - I really enjoy this slider art! However, it can be reworked just a bit. If you look at the last part of the slider, it looks longer than the first part (before the curve). If you can try to make it more symmetric, it would be awesome! Okay made a little change~:3
4. 02:21:564 (1) - Same as mentioned at 01:05:693 - ; Do the same with 02:27:758 (1) - also. Both fixed~
5. 02:32:209 (1) - As I really enjoy your sliders and their flow, but this slider has a weird curve on my end. I am sure you can do something better in here!
   Okay curved the slider end a little bit, hope it better now ;w;
6. 03:04:726 (1) - At this point, your hitsounds are inconsistent. I am suggesting you to do the following to keep your hitsounds consistent:
   03:04:726 (1) - Delete the clap at the slider's end;
   03:05:887 (2) - Add a clap to this circle;
   03:06:274 (3) - Delete the clap at the beginning of the slider and the end.
   All fixed~Really nice mod~Thanks for your help

I enjoyed looking at your difficulty! The flow and the blankets from your sliders are perfect. Keep the good work! Thx~<3

-Nya- wrote:

Heyo~ NM via PM req.

Stella’s Normal:

1. Uncheck widescreen support. Fixed~
2. 02:45:371 (4) –This circle is slightly grazing the bottom edge of the screen. To be safe lift it upwards a bit. Okay fixed~
3. 01:31:048 (2) –Move this slider downwards a bit to about: X:88 Y:236 for better flow. hmm well i think current flow is also fine so sry no fix ;w;
4. 02:12:080 (3) –Not really a nice placement since the body of the slider is almost completely hidden by 02:11:113 (2) – which can disrupt visualization for beginners. Try something like this instead:
   
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   hmm yea maybe ur right, tho i think it's fine ...just keep it for more suggestions
5. 02:11:113 (2,4) –Please avoid this overlap. It’ll look neater. So just move (4) downwards a bit.
   here as well...i don't think that overlap would cause confusions.So just keep it
6. 02:13:242 (5) –Consider changing this note into a short slider like 02:12:855 (4) – to catch this vocal: 02:13:435 –
   nah just want to make a little break here to avoid the long train. Also that break could emphasize 02:13:629 (1) - better.
7. 02:35:693 (4) –Just move this slider a bit more to the left so the body of the slider is visible.
8. 02:41:887 (4) -^
   Both these two as well, just keep it for more suggestions.

Mostly the Lunatic diff requires work. If you have any questions regarding my mod, feel free to poke me in-game.

Good Luck~

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10nya wrote:

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UndeadCapulet wrote:

at your req: actually at my req xd

4min

1. 00:23:403 - poor blue tick is sad you ignored it, at least make 00:23:306 (5) - a 1/4 slider ;; Sure, changed into 1/4 slider
2. 00:39:758 (3,4,5) - every rhythm following this has a lot of vocal emphasis, but this doesnt at all, maybe change these into a 1/1 slider followed by a circle ok
3. 01:10:919 (4,1) - this is the only time in this area where you use a simple oval motion instead of having the player change direction to hit the next slider, and it sticks out a lot, think you should rework this part so it plays more like 01:04:726 (4,1) - Actually, it's not the only time, the part before second kiai basically have the same flow as this one. I can even say that every part like this flows similarly so there're no need to change it
4. 01:16:145 (6) - this circle seems weird since it's interrupting the 01:15:564 (5) - hold, i feel like either a 1/1 gap between 01:15:564 (5,1) - is better, or mapping the 01:16:242 (7) - beat as well (since it exists and you mapped quiet triplet beats already) I personally think that that's alright as it is. but I would love to hear more opinion about this and decide later
5. i think 01:17:887 (1) - should be stacked under 01:17:209 (2) - 's tail instead of 01:18:080 (2) - , so that the cursor starts moving again when the kiai starts, it'll be more impactful that way (same for all similar kiai starts) i definetly thought about that, but for some reason that I can't remember I decided not to do that (I think because I couldn't get the jump as I like form behind the slider). I used it a lot in my newer map tho lol
6. a lot of your rhythming during the 01:55:048 (1) - section is literally mapped to nothing and seems like awkward filler imo, but i guess most of it's okay. i do have big issue with 02:00:467 (1) - , it seems super random and should just be a 1/2 rhythm imo I put 1/4 there to somewhat emphasize the rhythm in the background and the vocal. And since it's the beginning (?) of a new verse, putting a diferent kind of pattern would make the part stand out more
7. lol did you really map 03:07:048 (1) - but didn't map the strong 1/8 drum rhythms early, you're silly This one has strong guitar sound on the background and the music is really intense. While the other, really doesn't have any other instrument (except the 1/8 itself) to support the dense rhythm
8. cool use of breaks at 03:12:467 - :> :3

nice usage of 3/4 sliders, refreshing to see them actually show off rhythms instead of paint over them yeaa

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1. Colours 3 and 4 are quite similar. Arrange them in a different way, so that they wouldn't appear one right after another? This would make it look a bit more interesting, which is important for such a long song.

1. Try lower AR like 4 or 4,5. Making it slightly friendlier towards beginners sounds like a good idea to me.
2. 00:23:887 (3) - how about using a 1/1 slider here, this would help to avoid the 3/2 gap, which might be quite tricky for beginners.
3. 00:43:822 (3,4) - the transition from long slider to 1/1 circles feels quite unnatural and too sudden to me. Perhaps, replacing these two with a slider would fit slightly better with the patterning you use.
   Note: 00:56:209 (3,4) - same here, I think it's just because you map such a strong beat as 00:56:016 - with a slidertail, that the following beats have circles on though they feel quite weak and it confuses me a bit. A slider would solve this problem.
4. 01:24:080 (1,2) - the vocals peak at both points of the slider, hence, using circles would make more sense. This way, each beat would be emphasized equally well with a clickable object.
5. 03:01:822 (1,2) - stack here feels quite out of your style since you don't normally use them. Perhaps, it would be a good idea to either get rid of this one or start introducing more awe progress through the difficulty.
   
   Neat. Not much to mention here.

1. 01:09:758 (4) - minor - keeping it straight would be a better idea for the consistency with the previous ones and for better appearance of the slider.
2. 01:16:338 (1,2) - minor - are mods on blanket sliders still a thing? I feel uneasy getting kudosus when I suggest something like this.
3. 01:20:403 (4,5) - you had - 01:17:887 (1,2,3,4) - stacked, perhaps, it's a good idea to stack these two as well as to give some emphasis to the beats here.
4. 01:42:564 - whopps, that beat here is left out. try to add an extra repeat to (4) and move 5 closer or just insert a circle? It is not the best soluton either way, but it is definitely required as the music clearly has a beat there.
   Note: 04:01:629 (4,5) - same?
5. 01:56:209 (3,4) - I am sorry, but I really fail to understand what these two are intended to represent. Perhaps, it would be a better option to take them out since Hard still requires quite an obviios or at least easy to trace rhythm.
6. I have a feeling I have already seen 02:24:468 (1,2,3,4) - this part. If you do not feel like mapping it again and prefer to stick to copy pasting, perhaps, it should not have been mapped on the first place? I understand that the song is long but making players repeat the same patterns over and over does not add any entertaining value to it. I would opt for variety instead of copy pasting.
7. 03:09:371 (1) - there are two individual beats and they should be represented with two circles. This way it would work in a better way, letting players feel both beats.
   
   The copypastde thing made me feel quite disappointed. Apart from that it was quite alright.

1. 00:40:338 (5,6) - it is (5) that actually needs a jump, as (5) has the clap sound and feels stronger. (6) can only echo the jump as to keep flow natural as it is relatively weak. Why not try something like this?
2. 00:47:113 (2,3) - and here we have a jump on clap missing. Same happens with stuff like 00:53:306 (2,3) - whick kind of gives a feeling of inconsistency. It happens a few more times with things like 00:54:080 (2,3,4) - and I understand that you intend to show and stress the vocals. Yet, you could try to combine vocals and drum based jumps. So, the stuff based on vocals would utilize bigger spacing values and clap-based jumps would use lower DS. This way the whole patterning would feel a bit more ineresting and song would be represented in an interesting way.
3. 01:15:564 (5) - I have no idea why you decided to curve it like this, but I love it.
4. 02:02:403 (3,1) - same thing that happened with Hard, I really do not see any musical reason for these objects to be here.
   
   It is the jumpy stuff that makes me feel uneasy, apart from that it is a solid difficulty. I like what you have here though I feel like it could be better.

Bakari wrote:

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[General]

1. Colours 3 and 4 are quite similar. Arrange them in a different way, so that they wouldn't appear one right after another? This would make it look a bit more interesting, which is important for such a long song. I would like to keep it because --> p/4308436

[Hard]

1. 01:09:758 (4) - minor - keeping it straight would be a better idea for the consistency with the previous ones and for better appearance of the slider. for some reason I like it cure a little bit more
2. 01:16:338 (1,2) - minor - are mods on blanket sliders still a thing? I feel uneasy getting kudosus when I suggest something like this. lol
3. 01:20:403 (4,5) - you had - 01:17:887 (1,2,3,4) - stacked, perhaps, it's a good idea to stack these two as well as to give some emphasis to the beats here. The property of the vocal is different. 01:20:403 (4,5) - has a "swinging" kinda vocal on it, while 01:17:887 (1,2,3,4) - have the strong sound on every white tick. That's why I mapped it differently
4. 01:42:564 - whopps, that beat here is left out. try to add an extra repeat to (4) and move 5 closer or just insert a circle? It is not the best soluton either way, but it is definitely required as the music clearly has a beat there. Uh no. I'd rater undermapped blue tick to put a jumps towards the next pattern
   Note: 04:01:629 (4,5) - same?
5. 01:56:209 (3,4) - I am sorry, but I really fail to understand what these two are intended to represent. Perhaps, it would be a better option to take them out since Hard still requires quite an obviios or at least easy to trace rhythm. I'll figure what I'll do to this later. no change for now (most certainly I will change it)
6. I have a feeling I have already seen 02:24:468 (1,2,3,4) - this part. If you do not feel like mapping it again and prefer to stick to copy pasting, perhaps, it should not have been mapped on the first place? I understand that the song is long but making players repeat the same patterns over and over does not add any entertaining value to it. I would opt for variety instead of copy pasting. lol I curve the slider a little bit to make it less obvious that I copy pasting
7. 03:09:371 (1) - there are two individual beats and they should be represented with two circles. This way it would work in a better way, letting players feel both beats. ok
   
   The copypastde thing made me feel quite disappointed. Apart from that it was quite alright.

[Lunatic]

1. 00:40:338 (5,6) - it is (5) that actually needs a jump, as (5) has the clap sound and feels stronger. (6) can only echo the jump as to keep flow natural as it is relatively weak. Why not try something like this? Spiced things up a little bit here, hopefully that will be enough emphasis since I don't want to compeletly change the pattern
2. 00:47:113 (2,3) - and here we have a jump on clap missing. Same happens with stuff like 00:53:306 (2,3) - whick kind of gives a feeling of inconsistency. It happens a few more times with things like 00:54:080 (2,3,4) - and I understand that you intend to show and stress the vocals. Yet, you could try to combine vocals and drum based jumps. So, the stuff based on vocals would utilize bigger spacing values and clap-based jumps would use lower DS. This way the whole patterning would feel a bit more ineresting and song would be represented in an interesting way. Actually, -Nya- also mentioned this in her mods several weeks ago. Then I decided to give it a shot and try to change the pattern based on the drums
3. 01:15:564 (5) - I have no idea why you decided to curve it like this, but I love it. me too
4. 02:02:403 (3,1) - same thing that happened with Hard, I really do not see any musical reason for these objects to be here. Since I'm not sure what would I do to change it, I'll leave it blank for now
   
   It is the jumpy stuff that makes me feel uneasy, apart from that it is a solid difficulty. I like what you have here though I feel like it could be better.

That's an okayish set, not much to point out, though copypasted patterns and lack of jum emphasis were quite noticeable.

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Best of luck!

smallboat wrote:

[Hard]

00:18:661 (5) - This clap sounds like not so obviously, try to turn up the volume? (Lunatic too) ok
00:19:822 (3) - Maybe can stack it completely? sure

[Lunatic]

02:56:597 (3,6) - Maybe can stack it better make hit it easily. Probably not. I would like to keep the blanket on 02:55:822 (1,3) - and the spacing between 02:54:855 (1,2,3) - . In addition, they're not noticeable in gameplay so it's fine
03:17:113 (1) - Forgot too add whistle? Sounds like this music voice a bit heavy (Hard too) ok
03:29:500 (1) - The same as above

Bakari wrote:

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[Stella's Normal]

1. Try lower AR like 4 or 4,5. Making it slightly friendlier towards beginners sounds like a good idea to me. alright
2. 00:23:887 (3) - how about using a 1/1 slider here, this would help to avoid the 3/2 gap, which might be quite tricky for beginners. yea I think that's better
3. 00:43:822 (3,4) - the transition from long slider to 1/1 circles feels quite unnatural and too sudden to me. Perhaps, replacing these two with a slider would fit slightly better with the patterning you use.
   Note: 00:56:209 (3,4) - same here, I think it's just because you map such a strong beat as 00:56:016 - with a slidertail, that the following beats have circles on though they feel quite weak and it confuses me a bit. A slider would solve this problem. Yeah, I changed both of those to make it more consistent with the other similar pattern like this as well
4. 01:24:080 (1,2) - the vocals peak at both points of the slider, hence, using circles would make more sense. This way, each beat would be emphasized equally well with a clickable object. I think this one is fine, slider also works well here imo because it also complement the vocal by following it troughout the slide body
5. 03:01:822 (1,2) - stack here feels quite out of your style since you don't normally use them. Perhaps, it would be a good idea to either get rid of this one or start introducing more awe progress through the difficulty. I think I can understand why he/she make a stack here. This rhythm 03:01:822 (1,2) - started with lower notes sound, which is the only time you hear troughout the song, so the purpose to put stack here is to make it stand out from the others.
   
   Neat. Not much to mention here.

Pentori wrote:

hey
[General]
why dont u fade out ur mp3. u have like 25 seconds of nothing I'd rather not edit the music unless I really had to

[Hard]
00:15:371 (4) - there's no need to do this here, obvious triple on 00:15:855 - u can use
00:51:177 (4,1) - drum roll starts on red 00:51:371 - this is the same as 02:07:242 (6) I mapped it that way in order to emphasize the next 1/1 slider, and those reverse slider is used to emphasize the claps and the build up melody toward there
01:02:790 (2) - remove clap
01:03:564 (4) - you probably should end this on the blue tick to utilise more 1/4 rhythms for better spread I prefer to put jump towards the next pattern because that will give more impact in real gameplay imo
01:07:242 (1,4) - i would try avoid the stack here, with the way auto stacking works it makes 01:06:274 (4,1) - look terrible
01:09:758 (4) - just put a triplet on 01:09:951 - instead of making up rhythms same as before
01:14:016 (4,5,1) - equal visual distance? looks off rn http://puu.sh/tPr1M/6350971dff.jpg
01:23:693 (4) - strong downbeat on slider end :/
01:30:274 (1) - perhaps u could balance the densities more by making this 2 circles instead. stuff like 01:36:467 (1,2,3,4) - is a lot harder to tap than 01:30:274 (1,2) i changed the rhythm on 01:23:693 - into 2 circle and a slider instead, I think that's a good compromise
01:55:629 (2) - 02:01:822 (2) - not entirely convinced that these work - they repeat on nothing I honestly don't like putting long slider on this diff, so I put a reverse instead
02:25:629 (4) - drum roll starts on red tick same here too
03:02:693 - clap here is really awkward since there are no snares to hitsound too
03:04:338 (2,3,4) - red tick triplet would be better 03:04:532 same here, triplet to emphasize clap & build up + jump to emphasize cymbal
03:05:500 (3) - remove claps, or achieve some sort of consistency with 03:02:403 (3) - as they are the same sounds/pattern
03:06:274 (1,2) - these are kinda overmapped but they sorta work with the guitar. however, giving them claps was an awful idea as there are no drums here. u should just remove all the claps except for I'll make them consistent with Lunatic diff
03:07:048 - 03:07:822 - suddenly you start hitsounding every white tick, while your previous hitsound structure had claps every 2nd beat
03:09:758 - 03:10:532 - dont need the claps

[Lunatic]
00:25:532 (2,3,4,5) - could try nc'ing all these. picking up on the rhythm change is really hard if you haven't played the map before. nc'ing makes people pay more attention alright, I'll put NCs for now
00:44:597 (3,4,5) - cant really agree with these. generally if you want to overmap triplets for emphasis, you have the strongest beat on the bottom, this is just doing the opposite I want to emphasize the vocal actually, not the drum. So in this case, this kind of overmap is fine imo
00:51:177 (5,6,7) - ^ since this is the highest diff, why not use the 1/8 from 00:51:371 - ? I can't really make it work to be honest, besides I don't really like it
01:02:790 (2) - dont need clap
01:28:726 (1,2) - symmetry? no lol
02:01:822 (2) - doesn't necessarily reverse on anything True, but I don't really want to put another long slider here without some kind of variation.
02:01:822 (2,3) - can you fit this so it looks better with the stack? looks off in gameplay http://puu.sh/tPuKl/2d2f82bfab.jpg
02:39:951 (8,2,4) - stacking these makes the stream look really ugly http://puu.sh/tPuPr/2f3e35cb21.jpg
03:02:693 (6) - shouldn't hitsound ghost notes ;w;
03:05:500 (4) - ^
03:06:274 - tone down the amount of claps here, its way to overpowering

best of luck! unfortunately there are some things i don't agree with :cc

Chaoslitz wrote:

[General]

1. Source should be 東方神霊廟　～ Ten Desires. We should specify the accurate name of game instead of the whole series (For example like https://osu.ppy.sh/b/991229, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/436799 etc.), so remove the one in tag and add 東方project Few months ago Kwan told me that using either one as a source is Okay, in fact there're many maps that still using 東方project as a source. fyr= https://puu.sh/uRrAO/9c2e5f3f67.png But okay, I'll change it

[Stella's Normal]

1. 01:55:048 (1,2,1,2,1,1) - In my opinion this section lacks of hitsounds, try adding whistles to those slider heads for a better feedback
2. 03:18:661 (1,2,3,4) - 03:24:855 (1,2,3,4) - 03:31:048 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Added some whistle in Stella's stead. I try to keep it low profile & uniform with Stella's hitsounding

[Hard]

1. 03:12:467 - 03:24:855 - The vocal and drums are really strong which I think it shouldn't be skipped (same as in lunatic) I want to highlight this break section on the song, also I want to keep it uniform with 03:18:661 - which is similar but doesn't have the drum and vocal

[Lunatic]

1. 02:01:822 (2) - I don't understand why you used a reversed slider when there is no sound in 02:02:790, you can follow 01:55:629 (2) instead ok, fixed on hard too
   
2. 03:07:048 (1) - It is unnecessary to overmap 1/8 when there is no clear sound, 1/4 should be enough This section has a distinct high pitched guitar sound that only appears once throughout this song. Also, the sound there is also continuous, there're no definite answer whether it is 1/4, 1/6, 1/8 or so on. 1/4 will makes it sounds too empty to my taste, so thats that. I still think that the overmap is properly used there

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Delis wrote:

why nobody congratulates this =(


oh it is because too old


congratz