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[General]
- Colours 3 and 4 are quite similar. Arrange them in a different way, so that they wouldn't appear one right after another? This would make it look a bit more interesting, which is important for such a long song. I would like to keep it because --> p/4308436
[Hard][Lunatic]
- 01:09:758 (4) - minor - keeping it straight would be a better idea for the consistency with the previous ones and for better appearance of the slider. for some reason I like it cure a little bit more
- 01:16:338 (1,2) - minor - are mods on blanket sliders still a thing? I feel uneasy getting kudosus when I suggest something like this. lol
- 01:20:403 (4,5) - you had - 01:17:887 (1,2,3,4) - stacked, perhaps, it's a good idea to stack these two as well as to give some emphasis to the beats here. The property of the vocal is different. 01:20:403 (4,5) - has a "swinging" kinda vocal on it, while 01:17:887 (1,2,3,4) - have the strong sound on every white tick. That's why I mapped it differently
- 01:42:564 - whopps, that beat here is left out. try to add an extra repeat to (4) and move 5 closer or just insert a circle? It is not the best soluton either way, but it is definitely required as the music clearly has a beat there. Uh no. I'd rater undermapped blue tick to put a jumps towards the next pattern
Note: 04:01:629 (4,5) - same?- 01:56:209 (3,4) - I am sorry, but I really fail to understand what these two are intended to represent. Perhaps, it would be a better option to take them out since Hard still requires quite an obviios or at least easy to trace rhythm. I'll figure what I'll do to this later. no change for now (most certainly I will change it)
- I have a feeling I have already seen 02:24:468 (1,2,3,4) - this part. If you do not feel like mapping it again and prefer to stick to copy pasting, perhaps, it should not have been mapped on the first place? I understand that the song is long but making players repeat the same patterns over and over does not add any entertaining value to it. I would opt for variety instead of copy pasting. lol I curve the slider a little bit to make it less obvious that I copy pasting
- 03:09:371 (1) - there are two individual beats and they should be represented with two circles. This way it would work in a better way, letting players feel both beats. ok
The copypastde thing made me feel quite disappointed. Apart from that it was quite alright.That's an okayish set, not much to point out, though copypasted patterns and lack of jum emphasis were quite noticeable.
- 00:40:338 (5,6) - it is (5) that actually needs a jump, as (5) has the clap sound and feels stronger. (6) can only echo the jump as to keep flow natural as it is relatively weak. Why not try something like this? Spiced things up a little bit here, hopefully that will be enough emphasis since I don't want to compeletly change the pattern
- 00:47:113 (2,3) - and here we have a jump on clap missing. Same happens with stuff like 00:53:306 (2,3) - whick kind of gives a feeling of inconsistency. It happens a few more times with things like 00:54:080 (2,3,4) - and I understand that you intend to show and stress the vocals. Yet, you could try to combine vocals and drum based jumps. So, the stuff based on vocals would utilize bigger spacing values and clap-based jumps would use lower DS. This way the whole patterning would feel a bit more ineresting and song would be represented in an interesting way. Actually, -Nya- also mentioned this in her mods several weeks ago. Then I decided to give it a shot and try to change the pattern based on the drums
- 01:15:564 (5) - I have no idea why you decided to curve it like this, but I love it. me too
- 02:02:403 (3,1) - same thing that happened with Hard, I really do not see any musical reason for these objects to be here. Since I'm not sure what would I do to change it, I'll leave it blank for now
It is the jumpy stuff that makes me feel uneasy, apart from that it is a solid difficulty. I like what you have here though I feel like it could be better.
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Best of luck!
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