Nozhomi
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Mukyu~
Thank you!- 01:30:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:32:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are quite different when it's supposed to work the same way with small spacing increase for 01:32:752 (3,4,5,6) - since you did it for the 1st one. i don't want to change the pattern itself, so i just did ctrl+g for 01:32:636 (2,3) - , i think it should work
- 02:00:078 (1,7,1,7) - Add a whistle on them pls. This section is too empty and would fit so well these piano sounds. done
- 02:09:722 - The whistle sound here makes this slider sounds like delayed because guitar sound starts a little before the start of slider. I would recommand maybe to use smth more simple who would fit more like basic hit normal + end with soft sampleset like you did for 02:12:222 (5) - . moved whistle to sliderbody
- 02:11:472 - I wonder if you shouldn't add a circle here or at 02:11:847 - because having a double could be hard and weird after just a triplet, and since there's a quite noticable sound here, it could be used to do double triplet circles. Same for 02:15:472 - . i love doubles! i think they emphasize the sound here better than a triple and sound more interesting, so i prefer to keep them here
- 02:17:196 (1,2) - spacing shouldn't increase here, the guitar sound indicate more like a constant one or a decrasing spacing. Instead you used a jump who don't fit because the climax was on 02:17:196 - . And it became worst with 02:19:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - who have even more jumps when the song use the same concept. 02:17:426 (2,5) - did ctrl+g. for 02:19:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't think the jumps are that significant there, especially considering how will you move your cursor after the slider, so i will keep this pattern, it has become quite similar in terms of consistency to 02:17:196 (1,2,3,4,5) -
- 02:24:580 (1,2,3) - Same here, just adjust spacing to be equal (also you see you did like it should be before here). i doubt it will change anything gameplay-wise but w/e
- 02:26:772 (3,7) - Stack ? okay
- 02:41:888 (4) - I think it sounds cool to add a soft whistle on the head of this slider (and all other of this section ofc). Tell me if you like it, it emphasis nicely drums imo. honestly it feels out of place for me, so i'll better leave those sliders without soft whistles
- 02:52:272 (1) - Shouldn't end at 02:52:798 - for match instrument and end of guitar slide ? it's not really end of slide, it's more like echo of fading sound, and it feels totally delayed for me if i end the slider there, blue ticks feels much better here, the slider ends on the end of actual slide and doesn't follow the fading out sound
- 03:18:553 (2,4) - Could this overlap could be avoided ? The rest of the pattern was clean (03:18:437 (1,2,3) - ) also aesthetic is quite bad on this pattern imo, you sacrificed a lot just for these blankets and jumps. sure
- 04:05:181 (4,5,6) - Why ? It's not supposed to be like 04:03:437 (5,6) - ? The song is not in any way stronger at that point. decreased spacing
- 04:37:430 (4) - Whistle to not let this section without hitsound ? Also works on piano here. Same for 00:06:877 (4) - / 00:14:916 (2) - / 00:17:212 (5,6) - . i honestly prefer using as little as possible hitsounds here, it sounds calmer without much of them
- 04:45:384 - Whistle same reason as above
- 04:47:657 (5,6,1) - ^ and here
- Just a point about NCs, I like what you did with 04:31:749 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - , but you should do it on other places (start and rest of the outro). So NC 00:02:858 (3,6,3,4) - and 04:37:998 (6,3,4) - pls. true
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Mukyu~
Also I scaled 04:28:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - to 0.997x to achieve 7.77 star rating.