- 01:30:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:32:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are quite different when it's supposed to work the same way with small spacing increase for 01:32:752 (3,4,5,6) - since you did it for the 1st one.
- 02:00:078 (1,7,1,7) - Add a whistle on them pls. This section is too empty and would fit so well these piano sounds.
- 02:09:722 - The whistle sound here makes this slider sounds like delayed because guitar sound starts a little before the start of slider. I would recommand maybe to use smth more simple who would fit more like basic hit normal + end with soft sampleset like you did for 02:12:222 (5) - .
- 02:11:472 - I wonder if you shouldn't add a circle here or at 02:11:847 - because having a double could be hard and weird after just a triplet, and since there's a quite noticable sound here, it could be used to do double triplet circles. Same for 02:15:472 - .
- 02:17:196 (1,2) - spacing shouldn't increase here, the guitar sound indicate more like a constant one or a decrasing spacing. Instead you used a jump who don't fit because the climax was on 02:17:196 - . And it became worst with 02:19:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - who have even more jumps when the song use the same concept.
- 02:24:580 (1,2,3) - Same here, just adjust spacing to be equal (also you see you did like it should be before here).
- 02:26:772 (3,7) - Stack ?
- 02:41:888 (4) - I think it sounds cool to add a soft whistle on the head of this slider (and all other of this section ofc). Tell me if you like it, it emphasis nicely drums imo.
- 02:52:272 (1) - Shouldn't end at 02:52:798 - for match instrument and end of guitar slide ?
- 03:18:553 (2,4) - Could this overlap could be avoided ? The rest of the pattern was clean (03:18:437 (1,2,3) - ) also aesthetic is quite bad on this pattern imo, you sacrificed a lot just for these blankets and jumps.
- 04:05:181 (4,5,6) - Why ? It's not supposed to be like 04:03:437 (5,6) - ? The song is not in any way stronger at that point.
- 04:37:430 (4) - Whistle to not let this section without hitsound ? Also works on piano here. Same for 00:06:877 (4) - / 00:14:916 (2) - / 00:17:212 (5,6) - .
- 04:45:384 - Whistle
- 04:47:657 (5,6,1) - ^
- Just a point about NCs, I like what you did with 04:31:749 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - , but you should do it on other places (start and rest of the outro). So NC 00:02:858 (3,6,3,4) - and 04:37:998 (6,3,4) - pls.
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