M4M from thy queue
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Easy
Audio preview point for this diff and Insane doesn't match (?)
- 00:13:840 (4,3) - Maybe make these more consistent, or make the first one a long slider and make the second a repeating slider because its the second one and the up in difficulty can be more expected.
- 01:09:715 (2,3) - These could probably be aesthetically better (i.e. blanketed, made into different shapes, etc)
- 01:16:840 (3) - I feel like this should be a single circle plus a 1/1 slider because there is a pretty prominent drum beat on the white tick in the middle
- 01:21:715 (2,3) - Same as the first case mentioned
Normal
- 00:14:215 (7) - This rhythm may be very difficult to follow for Normal diff. Also, that stack with 00:14:965 (1) - this slider is pretty hard to read for newbies
- 00:26:215 (7,8) - This is much better than ^
- 00:38:215 (7) - Same with the rhythm
- 00:51:715 (2) - I think it would be better to end this slider 1/1 and put a single circle on the large white tick. It would fit the emphasis of the music more
- 00:57:715 (2) - ^
- 01:14:215 (5) - Since there's a lot of drumming in the music, I think it would be better to turn this into two single notes
- 01:32:215 (5) - Maybe make this into a 1/2 slider to map to drums more
Kuron's Hard
- 00:03:715 (3,4) - Flow and blanket is kind of weird for Hard
- 00:14:215 (7,8,9) - Might be a little difficult to follow for Hard, but it's probably fine
- 00:47:027 (6,7,8) - Preferred to be more aesthetically pleasing
- 00:54:715 (3,4) - No reason to make the distance snap between these two sliders so big
- 00:57:715 (3,4) - ^. Also if you're going to do this, make it parallel with 00:56:965 (1) - as I think 00:58:090 (4) - is slightly off
- 01:09:340 (2,3) - I really don't like this flow, especially for Hard. Maybe make more circular flow instead of the anti-jump sort of flow
- 01:23:590 (8,9,10,11) - Stream is a bit excessive and overmapped
Insane
- 00:17:965 (1,2) - These can be farther apart or going in opposite flow directions like you made the other ones of the same sound
- 00:47:965 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe make these farther apart so people don't think they're 1/2 timing snapped
- 01:06:340 (2) - Just a suggestion, but if you want to map according to pitch, maybe put this slider above 01:05:965 (1) -
- 01:22:465 (1,2) - Simple blanket
- 01:27:715 (3,3) - Since this is Insane, please map to all the drum beats
Overall this doesn't really feel like it is mapped to full potential. When I first heard the song, I expected a lot more streams that could be mapped to the electronic sounds in the music, but I didn't see any of that, which is fine, but there were also obvious drum beats and sounds that weren't accounted for at all either. I would suggest mapping to all the significant parts of the music, especially the drum beats.
Good luck
Here's my map for M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/514038
Thank you!