Heya~ M4M here. Here is my map for M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/475538
Overall, this is a very decent mapset.
Good Luck~
General:
- The ending of the last spinner is inconsistent. In the Easy and Normal the spinner ends here: 01:42:187 – but in the hard and insane the spinner ends here: 01:42:000 – I think the spinner has to end here: 01:42:000 – so just adjust it in the Easy and Normal.
- You can add a soft-sliderslide soundfile in your song’s folder since the sliderslide sounds in the Easy is quite audible.
Insane:
- 00:14:250 (1) –I think I would have increased this distance a bit to emphasize the different beat.
- 00:15:000 (1) –Because of the strong finish sound I think it would be better to make the jump a bit bigger for more emphasis. I also want to add that the blanket with 00:14:718 (2) – can be improved as well.
- 00:29:250 (3) –Move this circle upwards to X:288 Y:132 to improve the shape of the pattern.
- 00:35:812 (6,7,1) –Perhaps place these objects like this instead to form a pattern with 00:35:250 (3,4,5) –
- 00:37:218 –I can hear a beat in the background so you can place a note here for a triple.
- 00:56:062 (4) –Just move this circle a teensy bit to the left to X:192 Y:208. Right now it’s closer to 00:55:500 (1) –
- 01:01:312 –I think it’s important to map this beat out since this is the hardest diff and the sound is quite strong.
- 01:13:312 (5) –Imo the flow would be better if you place this circle here instead:
- 01:20:812 (6) –Nazi, but move this circle a tiny bit upwards for a better blanket with 01:20:250 (5) –
- 01:22:875 (2) –I think the flow would be better if you Ctrl+G this slider.
- 01:27:375 (2) –Since the beat on the head of this slider is so strong I think it would be a good idea to Ctrl+G this slider so there’s a jump for emphasis.
- 01:28:312 –Rather map this out. I don’t think you had other gaps like this in the previous parts of the diff so rather stay consistent.
- 01:34:312 -^
- 01:32:062 (4,5) –Blanket >.<
- 01:36:000 (1,3) – and 01:36:375 (2,4) – Make these distances consistent for neatness reasons.
Kuron’s Hard:
- 00:03:750 (3,4) –This pattern would look neater by making a blanket here imo. Something like this:
I think it would also be better to place the head of 00:04:125 (4) – on top of 00:03:562 (2) – for better flow. - 00:06:750 (3,5) –This blanket can be improved. Just move the tail of (5) upwards a bit.
- 00:50:250 (4,5,6,7) –Imo a stream is a bit unnecessary for a Hard since there won’t be any gap issues between Hard and Insane if you leave it out. A fast repeat slider like 00:50:625 (8) – would do the trick.
- 01:02:625 (6,7,8,9) -^
- 01:04:500 (6) –Since the sound is long and not abrupt like a vocal I think it would be a good idea to change the circle into a slider to catch that long sound.
- 01:05:812 (10) –You can remove this note since there is not much of a beat in the background. Also, a short gap between this note: 01:05:625 (9) – and this one 01:06:000 (1) – will be great. You also placed a gap here: 01:08:812 – so be consistent.
- 01:23:625 (8,9,10,11) –I know I already mentioned streams before but this one is especially unecessary since you can’t really hear the beats in the background that would suggest a stream here. In Insane it’s fine, but in Hard it’s a bit too much imo.
Normal:
Looks good~
Looks good~
Easy:
- 00:48:000 (1,2) –Doublecheck the distance between these two objects. (2) is a bit too close to (1)
- 01:25:500 (3) –Nazi, but move this slider a bit to the right. Somewhere here: X:216 Y:216 for a better blanket with 01:24:750 (2) –
Overall, this is a very decent mapset.
Good Luck~