L0rdCthulhu wrote:

Hai Seri heres ur mod ples gimme $10,000 irl later plox

PS. ples be gentle and apologiesie if mod is bad i first time ples no hurt me ;_;

General

1. BPM and Offset : ( ✓ )
2. Aimod : ( ✓ )
3. Kiai : ( ✓ )
4. Metadata : ( ✓ )
5. Hitsound : ( ✓ ) Heard some piano here and there. I could just be hearing things. But this map certainly can have piano notes. And maybe it does. I keep doubting myself.
6. Video : ( ✓ )

Columns! Get your columns here! 1/2/3/4

Easy Beginner

1. 00:52:752 (52752|0,52752|1) and 00:55:495 (55495|3,55495|2); I find it a little (just a tiny bit) bland that these patterns are on alternate in this chorus. I understand that symmetry and all, but maybe have some of then move to 2/3? i'm keeping it until someone asks me to change
2. Besides that, everything else was perfect IMO. It was pretty nice to play, and the patterns generally were complementing the song well.

Standard

1. 01:47:781 (107781|0), have a note at /3/ and 01:47:952 (107952|3), have a note at /2/. This part here seems to be imitating the guitar, and I found that it could probably follow the patterns in 01:01:152 (61152|3,61152|1,61324|2,61324|0) too. did the first part, second part rejected
2. From 01:48:295 (108295|3,108981|2,108981|0) all the way to 01:59:781 (119781|1) - It seems as though you love the right side. Through the whole of this chorus, the only /1/2/ chord I found was 01:54:467 (114467|0,114467|1). Is this intentional? i put doubles because of consistency, having a triple note in this diff would be weird
3. Another than that, it was nice! I loved the chords in this one.

Hyper

1. 00:14:352 (14352|0,14352|1) to 00:22:410 (22410|3) - The number of chords appearing at /1/2/ is a bit too much. Mixing them up to create a little variety should be OK. hm changed a little
2. 00:25:067 (25067|3,25152|2) - Interesting pattern for this part of the song. I like it.
3. 00:44:524 (44524|3,44524|2) to 00:48:467 (48467|2,48467|3) - The chords appear at /3/4/ three times in a row. I find it really uncomfortable. Well to a certain extent. changed a little
4. This was a fun map to play.

Another

1. 00:36:038 (36038|2,36124|1) - Notes like these (separated by 2 columns) aren't found in this part of the song. I saw a couple a few seconds back; consider having some from 00:35:610 to 00:38:695?
2. 00:52:067 (52067|3,52152|2,52238|3) - Is it me or is it these notes are extremely annoying? I hate mickey mouse. (Mickey mouse voice) "hey y'all, lemme just give you some 200s to go with that 100" This is the mouse I like more: 01:45:981 (105981|0,106067|2,106152|0) nop, i want to keep the anchor on the left and right in the song sorry :C. and for the first part, i think most players can hit those so nop
3. It seems like this diff has underwent massive "refurbishment", so to speak. The triple notes are aligning accordingly, and the pace (right word? Probably not) of the map is pretty well done. Good job on this one

Overall

1. The song is nice, kinda built for these kinds of games (it's from BMS? I think. Yeah.)
2. The notes were well drawn out, with them going with the song really well.
3. This is for rank I heard? Good luck with rank, and have some stars while you're at it. 加油!

Hestia- wrote:

hihi Seiryuu~

[Beginner]
00:15:895 - Add 1 nope, i'm not layering the full piano here for certain reasons soooo, ye
00:16:067 - Add 2
00:16:238 (16238|0) - Move to 3 ok
00:17:952 - Add 3
00:21:381 - Add 1
00:21:552 - Add 3
00:22:067 - Add 3
00:22:410 - Add 2
00:22:752 - Add 4 i'm sorry for all of these, but i'm gonna reject it because it's not what i'm layering :c
00:22:924 (22924|3) - Remove supposed to be for the beats in the background, but newbies can't handle it well so it because like that
00:23:095 - Add 1 ^
00:23:267 (23267|0) - Remove ☆ -There isn't even a drum here, drums are on 00:23:181 and 00:23:352. If you want to map the drums instead of my changes use these notes. ^
00:23:438 - Add 23 ^
00:23:610 (23610|2,23610|1) - Remove
00:48:295 (48295|2) - Change to normal note for vocal

sorry for rejecting most of this

[Standard]
00:22:067 - Add 2
00:22:238 - Add 1
00:22:410 - Add 2
00:22:752 - Add 1
00:22:924 (22924|1) - Remove
00:23:095 - Add 4
00:23:267 (23267|3) - Remove ☆ - There isn't even a drum here, drums are on 00:23:181 and 00:23:352. If you want to map the drums instead of my changes use these notes. same reasoning as before, sorry :c
00:23:438 - Add 23
00:34:581 (34581|3) - Make this LN that ends 00:34:752 okay
00:35:267 - Add 3 the doubles in this map are used for the background sound, so nope
00:40:752 - Add 1
00:23:952 - 00:48:467 - This section feels kind of like it should be a little harder. this difficulty is for people who are still getting used to the keys, sorry :c
00:45:210 (45210|3) - Change to LN ok
00:45:552 (45552|2) - Change to LN ok
01:01:667 (61667|3) - Change to LN nope
01:02:010 (62010|1) - Change to LN nope
01:21:895 - Add 3
01:22:238 (82238|3) - Remove
01:22:410 - Add 3
01:22:581 - Add 4
01:23:267 - Add 4
01:23:781 - Add 1
01:23:952 - Add 3
01:27:381 - Add 1
01:28:067 - Add 1
01:28:752 - Add 1
01:29:438 - Add 3 all accept

[Hyper]
00:04:581 - Add 3 ok
00:07:238 - Add 2 nope, layering piano only
00:07:324 - Add 3 ^
00:17:952 - Add 4 ^
00:18:295 - Add 4 ^
00:50:095 - Add 2 layering vocal only, so no
00:50:181 - Add 3 ^
00:50:438 - Add 3 ^
00:50:524 - Add 2 ^
00:50:610 - Add 1 ^
00:50:695 (50695|2) - Move to 4 ^
00:50:781 - Add 3 ^
00:50:867 - Add 2 ^
00:51:124 - Add 2 ^
00:51:210 - Add 3 ^
This map has opposite problem of last one, of 00:50:010 to 01:59:952 being too easy compared to the start. Some things you can do to make it harder:
01:08:181 (68181|3) - Move to 01:08:267 it's actually meant to be easy, the last difficulty patterns are relatively easy to hit, so making a jump from this to that is okay imo, i'll change it if someone else points it out
01:10:324 - Add note
01:10:495 - Add note
01:15:295 - Add note
01:18:210 - Add note
01:18:467 (78467|2) - Change to normal note; Add trills: 01:18:552 - Add 2; 01:18:638 - Add 3; 01:18:724 - Add 2
01:20:010 - Add note
01:20:181 - Add 1
01:21:467 - Add 4
01:22:152 - Add note
01:23:181 - Add 2
01:23:695 - Add 2
01:23:952 (83952|1) - Change to normal notes
01:24:724 - Add note
01:25:410 - Add note
01:26:095 - Add note
01:26:781 - Add note
01:27:467 - Add note
01:27:810 - Add note
01:28:152 - Add note
01:31:238 - Add note
01:32:952 - Add note
01:33:981 - Add note
01:34:324 - Add note
01:34:667 - Add note
01:35:010 - Add note
01:35:095 - Add note
01:41:181 - Add note
01:42:552 - Add note
01:43:838 (103838|0) - Move to 01:43:924
01:44:267 - Add 1
01:48:124 - Add 3
01:48:895 - Add 3
01:49:752 - Add 4
01:51:124 - Add 1
01:51:810 - Add 1
01:52:067 (112067|0) - Move to 01:52:152
01:52:495 - Add 1
01:53:867 - Add note
01:54:038 - Add note
01:55:238 - Add note
01:56:267 - Add note
01:56:610 - Add note
01:56:952 - Add note ☆
01:57:124 - Add note ☆
01:59:867 (119867|2) - Remove


[Another]
Seems good

Good luck [-Seiryuu-] !! c:

[GraveChaos] wrote:

[General]
☑ Background
☑ Timing
☑ Song Setup
☑ Metadata
☑ Misc. . .
|1|2|3|4|
[Beginner]
00:23:267 (23267|0) - What does this note signifies? Seems like a ghost note for me. I don't hear a particular instrument that signifies this SN. Pls check this one, as for my opinion this part only needs re-pattern maybe? i layered it to the drums instead ^^

00:40:410 (40410|2) - Remove, not necessary for Beginner level. The SN with 'W' is enough to represent the Cymbal end. okay

00:44:524 (44524|2) - Add 'W' just like the same as your previous 2 noted such as 00:43:152 (43152|1,43152|0) - and for their consistency. ok

01:01:324 (61324|2) - Add 'C' it's the same as this 01:00:638 (60638|2) - ok

01:22:581 (82581|0) - Move to |4| for pattern consistency and better/relax-able hand coordination. And as it's for consistency it follows the rhythm/beat well. ok

01:47:952 (107952|3) - Add 'C' ok

01:57:210 (117210|1,117724|0) - and 01:58:410 (118410|1) - Add 'W' ok

[Standard]
00:13:495 (13495|1) - Move to |3| for pattern consistency, notice your pattern next to this. ok

00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency, notice your pattern next to this. ok

00:34:924 (34924|3) - Move to |1| instead for pattern consistency and better pattern and hand balance. You will notice this pattern from 00:29:438 to the next 2nd noted remember the alignment of 2 noted and get back to this one that i said to move. Notice until the 2nd noted of this too. ok

01:01:324 (61324|0) - Add 'C' ok

01:09:038 (69038|2,69210|3) - Ctrl + G as this becomes like this 01:07:838 (67838|3,67838|1) - it's better to make the one that i specified to be ctrl'd + G to make a consistent pattern. ok

01:07:838 (67838|3,67838|1) - Remove not necessary then 01:13:324 (73324|0) - Add 'W' added w but won't remove

[Hyper]
00:04:410 (4410|2) - Move to |2| it is not necessary to be stacked with 00:04:581 (4581|2) - because they don't have the same rhythm/sound/beat/pitch. . . . it's better to be in |2| since it will make a good hand coordinated pattern.

00:07:324 Add note to |3| for snare?

00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency

00:48:981 (48981|1) - You forgot the 'W' here.
all accept
[Another]
00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency ok

01:18:810 (78810|3) - Add 'W' ok

01:34:238 (94238|1) - Add 'C' ah nope

[Black Another]
00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency ok


Nice map! I like the song! Lol Good luck! >w<)b

Izect Ztenz wrote:

Hi
Listen, if i didn't mod your maps it means I have a busyness IRL.Some modder have a busy RL until they couldn't check their Modding Queue. Okay
Now, if you want to accept or reject this. Is up to you now.

|0|1|2|3|

[Beginner]01:58:067 - Add note @ |0|
01:58:238 - Add note @ |1|

nope sorry

[Standard]00:04:581 - Add note @ |1| ok
00:06:810 (6810|1) - Move to |2| ok
00:06:981 - Add note @ |1| nope, layering piano only here
00:22:067 - Add note @ |0| nope, layering drums only here
00:22:238 - Add note ^
00:22:410 - ^ ^
00:45:210 - Add note @ |0| ok

[Hyper]00:04:581 - Add note @ |3| ok
00:06:981 - Add note ok
00:11:610 (11610|1) - Cymbal sound, Move to |0| nop
00:33:552 (33552|1) - Cymbal sound again, Move to |0| nop
01:14:352 (74352|1) - Clap sound, Move to |3| ok
01:14:695 (74695|0,74695|1) - Move to |1| |2| nop
01:59:952 - Add two Note -> |1| |2| nop

Next time, Do not enforce me to mod you map via PM again
Understand?



Good Luck

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

hi hii From Kuhaku Mania Mod House
Sorry For Late Reply >< Getting Busy With RL :"
Okay lets start It

Beginner

everything was okay

Another

00:02:009 (2009|3,2009|1,2009|0) - hmmm i just thinking you should start is from here 00:01:924 (if i right)
The Rest Of Them Are (i'm layering this to the bell thing, and it starts at 00:02:009 -, so sorry :C

i'm soo sorry for the bad mod
i'm still learning How To mod and Mapping
Good luck yooo :3

[-Seiryuu-] wrote:

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

hi hii From Kuhaku Mania Mod House
Sorry For Late Reply >< Getting Busy With RL :"
Okay lets start It

Beginner

everything was okay

Another

00:02:009 (2009|3,2009|1,2009|0) - hmmm i just thinking you should start is from here 00:01:924 (if i right)
The Rest Of Them Are (i'm layering this to the bell thing, and it starts at 00:02:009 -, so sorry :C

i'm soo sorry for the bad mod
i'm still learning How To mod and Mapping
Good luck yooo :3

even though this mod wasn't helpful, it was a good try though ^^

Abraxos wrote:

haha fuck you no such thing as graveyard in my books

SPOILER

please no grave i put 10 stars 1graved star=1cri

1|2|3|4

Govind's another

1. 00:07:152 (7152|1,7152|0) - There's the piano 00:05:267 (5267|2,5781|1,6295|3,6810|0) - and the bass thingy 00:04:581 (4581|0,4581|1,6981|2,6981|3) - so three notes here?
2. 00:07:324 (7324|1,7324|3) - Notes here perhaps? The shifting synth beats (ie 00:07:495 (7495|3,7495|0,7581|1,7581|2,7667|0,7667|3,7838|3,7838|2,7924|1,7924|0,8010|2,8010|3) - ) is present here too
3. 00:15:381 (15381|2,15724|2) - why same column lol changed
4. 00:29:781 (29781|3,29781|2,29867|1,29867|0,29952|3,29952|2,30124|0,30124|1,30210|2,30210|3,30295|0,30295|1,30467|3,30467|1,30552|2,30552|0,30638|1,30638|3) - fuck these patterns i cant play them ;-;
5. 00:40:067 (40067|2,40238|3) - crtl-g
6. 01:10:924 (70924|1) - this note is stronger than 01:10:752 (70752|1) - in terms of loudness i guess so maybe have 2 notes for the second one or change column?
7. 01:11:610 (71610|2,71610|0,71610|3) - vocals? i dunno why this is 3 notes. maybe have this so the bass beat thingy is emphasized more? the suggestion i put is crude af but whatevs u get what i mean changed to something else
8. 01:11:952 (71952|2,71952|3) - ghooooooooosssssssssssstttttt fun fact in your body theres a spoopy skeleton git spooked
9. 01:17:610 (77610|0,77610|2,77695|3,77695|1,77781|0,77781|2,77952|2,77952|3,78124|3,78124|1,78210|0,78210|2,78295|1,78295|3,78467|0,78467|2,78552|1,78552|3,78638|2,78638|0,78724|1) - i would map out the piano notes here but after that you would have the obligation to hitsound it so up to you
10. 01:14:524 (74524|3) - missing note
11. 01:17:267 (77267|1) - oh wait are u purposely missing them
12. 01:20:010 (80010|2) - probably lol
13. 01:28:581 (88581|3) - move to 4 guitar rift goes down in pitch so shouldn't follow the repeating patterns in 01:28:067 ok(88067|1,88152|2,88238|1,88324|2,88410|1) -
14. 01:33:895 (93895|1,93895|2,93895|0) - up to next ln - change to this? theres the back and forth piece of shit sound going on in the music(00:46:238 (46238|0,46238|2,46324|3,46324|1,46410|0,46410|2,46581|1,46581|3,46667|0,46667|2,46752|3,46752|1,46924|0,46924|1,47010|2,47010|3,47095|1,47095|0) - )
15. 01:40:067 (100067|0,100238|1) - it would take a babies ear to hear the piano in the music here. also move 01:40:067 (100067|0) - to 4 and 01:40:238 (100238|1) - to 3 cuz the piano goes down in pitch ok
    

teh streams are too hard pls nerf thx


no kds, gd luck for rank finding a bn to pray to

[-Seiryuu-] wrote:

Thanks for the mod, but this map is going to grave anyway.
I've lost hope in any of the BNs in the past 8 months, and probably more to come.
This map is dead.

Abraxos wrote:

wow i used to use color for my mods lmao

govinds another heh

General

1. BPM and Offset : ( ✓ )
2. Aimod : ( × ) lol the tags please dont hit me
3. Kiai : ( ✓ )
4. Metadata : ( ✓ )
5. Hitsound : ( ✓ )
6. Video : ( ✓ )

Beginner

00:10:752 (10752|2,11267|1,11781|2) - you could do this for PR things

suggestion

[I'd rather not tbh]
00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2) - could shift to 1 because 1's pretty blank [Shifted the pervious pattern]
00:17:010 (17010|2,17610|3) - could put in same column because PR [Would prefer the stair thing]
00:48:295 (48295|2) - idk mang doesnt seem legit to have LN here to follow the vocals, feel like a note is enough to convey the impact of it. aft all i didnt really find any of these LNs anywher ele except for things like 00:51:038 (51038|2) - [Changed to single note]
01:15:895 - note plis [Ok]
01:24:124 - maybe? note [Ok]
01:50:352 (110352|1) - to 1, pretty bare there again [Ok]
yup thats it weeeee

Normal

00:04:581 (4581|1) - throughout section from start till 00:12:981 (12981|2,12981|3) - youve followed the piano except for this part
00:15:381 - piano here
00:17:095 (17095|3,17610|0) - idk these seem like theyre following the piano to me so [Ye i fucked up on those parts fuc me]

suggestion

[Ok I'll take this]
00:20:867 - dk why is this ignored
00:22:238 - beginner has a note here welp, guessing youre transiting into the drummy section so id recommend removing the note over in beginner [00:35:952 (35952|2,36295|1,36638|2,36981|1) - meh. move 00:36:981 (36981|1) - to 1 perhaps [Those parts were fucked up too zzz]
00:40:410 (40410|3,40752|3) - you never really did stack them like this [What are you on]
00:56:524 (56524|1,56695|3,56867|1,57038|3,57210|1,57381|3,57552|1,57724|3,57895|1,58067|3,58238|1) - is this intentional w e w [O boy fuck me]
01:07:495 (67495|1,67667|0,67838|1,68010|0,68181|1) - never really had this in this chorus too [It's 1/2 snap mango, should be fine unless you're shit]
01:14:524 - 01:17:267 - 01:20:010 - are these gaps intentional [Yes they are]
01:18:810 (78810|0,78981|1,79152|0,79324|1) - feels like you can do something other than this here [Changed]
01:27:038 (87038|2,87381|0,87381|1,87724|3,88067|2,88067|1,88410|2,88410|0,88752|1,88752|3) - maybe you could just continue the stream on from 01:26:010 (86010|1,86181|3,86352|1,86524|3,86695|2,86867|1) - and not have the LNs here that are pretty jarring as its kinda steps down its intensity even though the guitar solos ongoing [Just gonna add a few more 1/2's then]
01:26:010 (86010|1,86181|3,86352|1,86524|3,86695|2,86867|1) - move any of these somewhere else idk [Ye okae]
01:32:867 (92867|2,92867|1,93210|0) - arent these supposed to stack
01:34:238 (94238|3,94238|1,94581|0) - yeah stack just like 01:31:495 (91495|3,91838|3) [Fucked up here too lmao]
01:45:895 (105895|1,106067|0,106238|1,106410|0,106581|1) - same thing as above [Not sure what's so bad about a 1/2 trill but okay????]
01:52:752 (112752|2,112924|3,113095|2,113267|3,113438|2) - maybe you could keep these as [1][4] things? for hand balance [Meh i think they're fine]

not the best but yeah you get the point

01:58:581 (118581|2) - the snarey thingy isnt too obvious until 01:58:752 - so you might wanna consider removing this [Ye okay why not]

will just point out ghosties i guess, wont go too much into ahhh pls delete mode nom

Hard

00:15:381 -00:20:867 - dk why youre ignoring this tbh [Fuck]
00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2,17095|3,17610|3,18124|0) - PR things again [Not gonna change this]

choo choo

00:25:152 (25152|2,25324|2) - maybe dont stack these [Changed]
00:32:438 (32438|0,32781|2) - might be ghosties, theres that slight ssssssssssssss sound that can cover for it if you want that
00:33:810 (33810|1,33981|1,34152|1,34324|1) - welp [Changing part of it, keeping the end and reverse stairs]

space time?

00:43:152 (43152|0,43324|1) - since youve been stacking them before the chord (see: 00:37:495 (37495|1,37667|1,37667|3,37752|0,38695|1,38781|2,38867|1,38867|0) - ) and then chose to invert that fact over the the front of the chord (see: 00:41:781 (41781|2,41781|3,41867|1,41952|3) - ) id rather you stack them
00:44:352 (44352|0,44524|0,44524|3,44610|1,44695|3) - welp choose one side or the other i guess [You really don't have to write so many lines about the same problem, it's much better to save space]
00:45:210 - double?
00:46:067 (46067|2) - to 4, 00:45:724 (45724|2,45895|2,46067|2) - maybe not a great idea to carry them stacks over
00:51:552 (51552|2,51724|1,51724|3,52238|2,52410|1,52410|3) - consistency pls with 00:52:924 (52924|2,53095|1,53095|2,53610|2,53781|2,53781|1) -
00:55:667 (55667|2,55838|3,56010|2,56181|3,56352|2,56524|3,56695|2,56867|3,57038|2,57210|3,57381|2,57552|3,57724|2,57895|3,58067|2,58238|3,58410|2,58581|3,58752|2,58924|3,59095|2,59267|3,59438|2) - -insert spy meme here-
yeah tbh fam better to use those stacking things to allow for more breathing space so to speak, since youve used the LNs and now only have 3 columns to spare [Gonna redo this, stop making so many lines already jesus, i keep clicking on them to find the exact same thing that's wrong]

<later insert>

i think you should have the stacky chorus at the end, and have the middle section be 01:40:752 (100752|1,100924|2,101095|3,101095|0,101267|2,101438|0,101610|2,101781|3,101781|0,101952|2,102124|3) - these things. reason being intensity and whatnot, so yeah.

00:55:324 (55324|0,55495|3) - crtl-h thanks
00:59:438 (59438|2,59610|2) - pretty sure this hasnt came out before here

just a something suggestion

id say the stacks right beside the notes are --fine-- since song is 175 but it doesnt really make this diff a little un-DTable tbh (i just suck at jacks heh)

[It's fine for me, and a few other testplayers around the skill level needed to play this map (96%<)]
01:01:495 (61495|2,61667|2) - maybe you could have the stacks follow the twangy sound in the music

suggestion

[Keeping it lmao]
01:03:552 (63552|3,63724|3) - could be just me whining like a baby but yeah i dont really appreciate these [Yeah you just suck, I'll change them anyway]
01:03:895 (63895|1,64067|2,64238|1,64410|2,64581|1,64752|2,64924|1) - same thing with the staks
yeah whole chorus same thing, nothing else
01:18:124 (78124|0,78295|1) - why arent these doubles, 01:17:438 (77438|0,77438|2,77610|0,77610|3,77781|2,77781|1,77952|3,77952|0) - have piano notes and are doubles [Listen to the beat in the background man, and don't give me that baby ear shit again, i can hear them while playing]
01:14:524 - 01:20:010 - 01:17:267 - idk the reason behind the choice of ignoring this tbh [It gives this sense of pausing, instead of constant chord streaming which sucks]
01:22:752 (82752|0,82752|2) - idk if this is doubled intentionally, i get that 01:22:238 (82238|0,82238|3,83610|2,83610|3) - might be doubles because of vocals but that double doesnt have a vocal line and any drum thing for that matter [SaMe ThInG aS aBoVe]
01:32:867 (92867|1,93038|0,93210|1,93381|0,93552|1,93724|0,93895|1,94067|0,94238|1,94410|3,94581|2,94752|3,94924|2) - not really balanced are they

suggestion

also could you make 01:32:352 (92352|3,92524|2,92695|3,92867|2) - lead into this thrilly thing better

01:38:181 (98181|1,98352|2) - most likely ghosties
01:47:781 (107781|3,107781|2,107952|1,107952|0,108295|3,108295|0,108467|1,108638|0,108638|2) - make consistent with 01:01:152 (61152|0,61152|2,61324|1,61324|3,61495|2,61667|2,61667|0,61838|1,62010|0,62010|2) - and the suggestions i made above (if you accepted them of course haha kms) [No]
01:59:181 - 01:59:524 - some drum thing here [I'm not layering the drum at all lol]

Another

00:11:867 (11867|2,12210|1) - 00:12:552 (12552|3) - same thing from hyper, couldddd be ghost notes
00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2,17095|3,17610|3,18124|0) - PR hehe
00:33:210 (33210|3,33381|3,33552|3,33724|3,33895|3,34067|3,34238|3,34410|3,34581|3,34752|3,34924|3) - mate what [Fuck.]

idk i tried to change it a little

welp the chorus has a likely ghostie on the 2 blue tick of each 1/1 zzzzzzzzz
i dont really know whether or not you can find a BN willing to go with this, maybe there are a handful but yeah you know how hard it is to get any BN to check your map
personally, i think the ghosties are really fine, good even, esp. in complementing the chorus

some suggestions i guess

you could have the triple notes kinda leading towards a certain direction to at least differentiate the chorus from the other sections

could also have claps be triples and make this section a 1/2, but thats retarded

or you could just make everything as dense as possible and have the claps and the 00:52:752 (52752|0,52752|2,52752|3) - whatever this is into triples

i know these suggestions might be retar but yeah idk what other patterns other than a stream now tbh

sorry if it kinda destroys the stream thing, but yeah ranking criteria :V

ok i wont really mention anything more about the chorus from now on, maybe you could think about it or smth
01:11:781 (71781|3,71781|0,72981|1,72981|2,73067|0,73067|3,73152|1,73152|2,73238|3,73238|0,73324|2,73324|1) - idk why but i like this a lot
01:13:495 (73495|2) - maybe move this to 4 [Ok]
01:15:724 (75724|2,75895|3,75895|2,76067|2,76067|3,76238|3) - nom [Feels okay to play, doesn't affect playability at this level]

suggestion

01:17:610 (77610|3,77610|2,77695|1,77695|0,77781|2,77781|3,78124|0,78124|1,78210|3,78210|2,78295|0,78295|1,78467|3,78467|0,78552|2,78552|1,78638|3,78638|0) - sounds seem too light to warrant jumpthrills, maybe you could keep the claps as jumps but others seem kinda meh in a sense [Keeping it because jumptrills accentuate the rhythm better]
01:14:524 - 01:17:267 - 01:20:010 - same as before, dk why you jumped over this [God damn if it has a spacing for every single difficulty, then it's fucking intended asdfadsfasdf. No one makes that kind of mistake 4 times u apple]
01:23:095 (83095|2,83095|3,83181|0,83181|1,83267|2,83267|3) - same as before, doesnt seem too impactful to be a jumpthrill tbh
01:28:152 (88152|2,88324|2,88495|2,88667|2) - gae tbh [This one is a special case, it's intended]
01:34:152 (94152|3) - to 01:33:981 -
01:34:324 - 01:34:667 - note here [Meh i'd rather keep my own notes, feels so much better to play]
01:34:838 (94838|0) - move to 01:35:010 -

asdf

01:38:181 (98181|1,98352|2) - seems like ghosties, same as hyper [Doubt so.]
01:40:238 (100238|1) - to 3/4, 01:40:238 (100238|1,100410|1,100581|1,100752|1,100924|1) - nom [Don't want to make a RH trill]
01:47:781 (107781|1,107781|3,107952|0,107952|2,108124|1,108295|2,108295|1,108295|0) - make consistent with 01:01:152 (61152|3,61152|2,61324|1,61324|0,61495|2,61495|3,61581|1,61667|3,61667|0,61667|2,61838|1,61838|2) -
02:00:638 (120638|1,120724|2,120810|1) - make these like alternate hands, i.e. [1][4][1] then [3][2][3] smth like that, right now it thrills kinda are weird because 02:00:295 (120295|0,120467|0,120638|1,120810|1) - nom [Aa fuck okay then]

dk if this is kdsable, maybe it is


good luck with rank, if you need a recheck just call me again idm too much

Han Solo wrote:

Status: Active

Did someone say revive?
Only checked for patterns
Using lane 1-2-3-4

Standard

Mod

1. 00:04:581 (4581|1) - Notes like these are inconsistent, the entire notes are focused on the piano, whilst that note is a kick. I suggest removing notes like these. [i personally thing it's fine to layer the kick in lol, no change sorry]
2. 00:21:552 (21552|0) - Move to 2? (Is a bit easier to play) [ok]
3. 00:22:238 (22238|1,22410|0) - Should be 1-2, makes more sense pitch-wise [changed]
4. 00:22:924 (22924|1) - ? Should be on 00:22:752 (22752|1) [ok]
5. 00:23:181 (23181|0,23352|3) - ? Should be on 00:23:095 (23095|0,23438|3), and 3 might be better than 4. [ok]
6. 00:39:895 (39895|1) - Change to http://puu.sh/pCZNp/8e62ab2a0d.jpg, or something similiar [ yeah okay that looks nice]
7. 01:11:781 (71781|3) - Should stop 01:12:981 (72981|2) there, since the "eeee" sounds stops there.[hmm okay]
8. 01:21:381 (81381|3) - You're charting the percussion, but suddently you stop and start charting vocals? I suggest you add the percussion as well, in combination with the vocals, because 01:24:295 (84295|1) here you do that as well. [removed the vocal notes]
9. 01:27:038 (87038|2) - I think these are guitar? 01:29:781 (89781|3), then why stop guitar there? [i actually have no idea how to chart this part so yE]

Hyper

Mod

1. 00:39:895 (39895|2) - Wouldn't something like http://puu.sh/pD07Z/b159e51336.jpg that be more fun? Double holds is also an option. [alright then, i'll use the one in the picture]
2. 00:49:838 (49838|1,49924|2,50010|3,50010|0) - [4][3][21] would be better [i'll just crtl F the jumptrill behind to make it easier]
3. 01:11:781 (71781|1) - Yay, Kamui patterns. Ditch the holds and make it little bit more fun to play. Or use a single hold on 1 and have some spins, or something. [i really like the pattern personally, so no change mang]
4. 01:29:781 (89781|2) - Maybe start charting guitar here? Makes the chart a little bit more interesting, just like in Standard? [i think i'll just leave it be, don't really like to use LNs in higher difficulties. I'll change it if someone else points it out]
5. 01:55:838 (115838|3) - Sounds "aaaaa" stops at 01:56:867 (116867|0) [shortened the LN]

Another

Mod

Thanatos ?

1. 00:02:524 (2524|2) - Could be doubles, 00:04:581 (4581|1) and that a triple, to spice up the beginning a bit more. [keeping it as it is, sorry]
   00:07:495 (7495|3) - This part is rather dense, anyways, so it wouldn't be too dense for the beginning.[i think it's fine lol, odesn't really affecrt the difficulty]
2. 00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2,17095|3,17610|3) - Makes no sense pitch-wise. 1-2-4-3 would be better.[okay]
3. 00:38:867 (38867|3) - StepMania holds! Not sure what the QAT's / BN's think of this, but it might be better to remove those, not sure though...[ pretty sure they're acceptable]
4. 00:39:895 (39895|2,40067|2) - Repeat the holds as well, so add 00:40:067 (40067|1,40067|0)[okay]
5. 00:40:067 (40067|2,40238|3,40410|3,40410|2) - Is all 1/4's, so add those as well.[i prefer keeping it this way, hard to layer 1/4s in with the LN]
6. 01:01:667 (61667|2) - The Kiai here should be connected, makes no sense to have a gap there, same there 01:48:295 (108295|3)[kiai is like that for all difficulties, i'll change it if it's a unrankable issue]
7. 01:11:781 (71781|1) - Kamui please, same suggestion as Hyper [same reason as before]
8. 01:11:781 (71781|3,73067|3) - That is also very awkward [it's fine mango, testplayers said it was fine]
9. 01:33:895 (93895|2) - Why not use 1/4's here? [uhh, i think keeping it as 3 beat is fine right now, will change it if it's an issue]
10. 01:36:981 (96981|0,97324|3,97667|1) - Doubles? Since you triple crash anyways [keeping it as singles]

Good luck, hope it gets ranked

Kawawa wrote:

Helowalo SeiSei

[General]
※ Metadata
Artist :: 五条下位 & 仲村芽衣子
Romanised Artist :: Gojou Kai & Nakamura Meiko
SYNC.ART'S is not Romanised Name. You can put this in Tags.

Tags :: Remove this in tags "五条下位" "仲村芽衣子" It does not need to overlap with Artist.

Difficulties Name :: Standard → Normal.
mostly It kept the BMS difficulites name. Except "Standard"

※ Hitsounds / Background Image
Some Hitsouds are delayed. Change with this http://puu.sh/s9tvR/164a95216d.zip
Background Image 1366 x 768 here. Change with this http://puu.sh/s9tLj/36a19e10d6.jpg

Lack of Hitsound Quality.
I could see many mistake for hitsounds.(Surely, I felt as mistake than intention)
Some difficulties are missed about some hitsounds. Also lack of consistency with each other.
I think you can improved about it. Please check them once again.
When you do that. If you want to fix something(like Pattern), You can. All Up to you.

[Beginner]
00:23:181 (23181|0,23352|3) - This rhythm is kinda weird to Beginner. You can make better it.
00:23:095 - 00:23:438 - Follow the This rhythm. There is a vocal Sample with synth. It can feel easily than before. [I actually don't understand but even after reading the mod in Standard difficulty, I'll just chart it the same way as Standard]

00:34:238 - Remove a note here. Instead of that, Add here 00:34:924 - What do you think about? [Hmm, I'm fine with it i guess.]

01:00:467 (60467|0) - It's weird to me. even If there is a intention, I don't think this is necessary for the structure.
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/s9qSV/282e3ee501.jpg [Followed your idea of how it should be.]

[Standard]
00:10:238 - 00:12:981 - This part too empty than Hyper. You can add some notes in this part.
Because note density really same with Beginner. [Charted it to drum crashes now.]

00:23:095 (23095|0,23352|3) - Same reason with Beginner. It kinda weird. You can make better it. Consider once again.[^}

01:11:781 (71781|3) - This vocal sample is ended here 01:12:981 - And It can feel surely.
What do you think about? I think It does not need to extend. All difficulties did like that.[Oops, didn't see that one, good catch!]

[Hyper]
00:39:895 (39895|3,39895|2,40067|3,40067|2) -
When I compared with "Standard", It needs to be re-arranged. Please consider thoes two.
Add note on Hyper or Nerf the Standard, You can anything. [Nerfed Standard.]

01:09:981 - Add a note for bass drum. This is a option. Your decision anyway
01:23:181 - Same with above. [Added both.]

[Another]
00:12:810 - 00:12:981 - Add a note. will be emphasized. You can compare with "Hyper"
or liek this http://puu.sh/s9siS/49cff1f649.jpg [Hmmm, added note.]

00:25:324 - 00:26:695 - 00:28:067 - 00:29:438 - 00:30:810 -
Here does not need to use as 3chords. Remove a note.
For example :: You can compare with crash line. like 00:23:952 - 00:32:181 -
or Can compare with them 00:36:295 - 00:37:667 - They are added any instrument. And I can feel about it.[Alright, removed.]

00:39:895 - ~ 00:40:410 - Feedback :: http://puu.sh/s9suO/f4a438e7ca.jpg [I want to keep it as it is, feels more relevant to music imo.]

01:10:752 (70752|1) - Remove this one. It will be helped for pattern sturucture.
And 01:10:924 - 01:11:438 - Add a note here. It will be make highlight than before. [Alright.]

01:22:238 - Remove a note. When I saw the around of pattern, It was not emphasized at all.
If you wanted to highlight as vocal sample, you can keep then [Ye it's vocal thing lmao.]

01:34:410 - ~ 01:35:267 - You can add some notes in this part. This is a suggestion. [Not adding any notes, sorry :c.]

02:00:038 - ~ 02:02:867 - Remove them.p esonally, I think it is not good.
If consider the structure, Ending is better to here 01:59:952 - Since highlight of the song, It will be end up with a better feeling.
If you applied this, should not use the LN on Beginner, Standard, Hyper.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/s9t3v/31541e18e7.jpg [Removed LN on all difficulties at the end.]

When Fixed them, Tell me

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Hey long time no see! And long time no see post mod lol
Sorry but I have to pop this first because I've found a unrankable issue and low quality of hitsounds. Don't worry I will re-bubble this after your fixing. Then you are able to take qualify icon by Kawawa. You smoothly can go qualify XD

|1|2|3|4|

I think hitsound is on too lacking. You can add some W on kick sections. I'm highly recommend it. I will see how you have done after this mod. Please check once again your HS.
Also you can do with this one for consistency, File -> Open Difficulty -> For Reference -> Choose other difficulties that you want to refer.
but, Another is soso, how about just make same in all difficulty? [Copied all hitsounds from Another]

Looks like 000012345 hitsound is never used. Please delete this. Or if it's using, please tell me where you've used it. [Deleted it]
[Beginner]

00:16:924 - You can't use 1/4 pattern with 175 BPM in Easy difficulty. I'm sure it will be 100% get disqualify. Better to 00:17:010 (17010|2) - remove this note, could notice your intention but it's a one of disqualify issue. [Zenny said it was okay so yE]

00:49:838 - Also same reason, please fix this one [^]

00:50:010 - I think it will be better to be double, for emphasis the kick and finish of first part. [Added]

01:01:324 (61324|2,61667|2) - Just thinking it will be more better balance, Ctrl + H will be better [Ctrl + H'd the jumps]

01:19:838 (79838|1) - Move to 3, 01:18:810 (78810|0,79838|1) - they are on one hand, if you didn't intend about this pattern, better to use 2 hands. [Moved to 3]

01:35:267 (95267|3) - It must finished on 01:35:781 - here. Also as I said, 01:35:781 (95781|2,95867|1) - you can't use it.[Extended the LN, but kept the 1/4s due to same reasoning]

[Normal]

01:10:581 - Add one more note for consistency with 01:11:095 - 01:11:781 - these sections.[Removed one note instead so that it's easier than Hyper]

[Hyper]

00:23:095 - In here, Another difficulty doesn't have a note, I think you used it for a piano sound but I suggest to remove it. for consistency also this section is based on snares. [Removed]

Another is fine. Call me after updating!

• :ok hand:

Blocko wrote:

Confirming the issue here. 1/4th snaps should not be used in Easy difficulties at all cases.

Please address the issue along with the other suggestions accordingly!

Feerum wrote:

Hello Seiryuu!

Grats for qualify this beatmap but before this get's moved into the Ranked section i would like to discuss about some pattern.
It's something what Fresh Chicken did mention in his bubble pop post.

I would like to talk about the Beginner difficulty.

[Beginner]
The difficult is overall pretty solid. Nice beginner pattern but then i saw following:

00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2,17095|3) -
00:49:838 (49838|0,49924|1,50010|2,50010|3) -
01:35:781 (95781|2,95867|1,95952|0) -

These 3 1/4 Pattern.

I can't agree with them. Beginner/Easy difficulty's are for player which are not familiar with osu!mania or general VSRG games. They should stick with really beginner friendly pattern like 1/1 or rare 1/2 pattern with several breaks. I asked several friends which never/rarely touched osu!mania and 4 of 5 missed exactly these 1/4 pattern.

I know they may fit to the music but it doesn't fit to the difficulty overall.
The remaining Beatmap looks totally fine for me, it's just these 1/4 pattern.
Fresh Chicken's suggestion to remove the middle note of the 1/4 pattern is actually a good way to fix it

Okay and one more thing while i am here. I think your BG Quality is a bit.. poor. After 30 sec in google i found one which looks way more clear and in 1920x1080 (The new rankable size), you can find it here
And here you can see the difference: Left yours/ right the new one

Screen

Okay that's all from my side! Let me know what you think about it!

Maxus wrote:

I believe it's alright if it's a low bpm song.. It would be awkward to really ignore all 1/4 on song that have like 70 bpm or something like that..

juankristal wrote:

There are a lot of charts that have harder easy diffs than this (and by a lot actually, still getting qualified just because they dont have 3 notes 1/4s).

Draftnell wrote:

wew 1/4 pattern problem reason, comee on seiryuu i luv this map ><

SOMEONE GO ICON SECTION QUALIFY PLEASE !