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Thanks kawawa <3Kawawa wrote:
Helowalo SeiSei[General]
※ Metadata
Artist :: 五条下位 & 仲村芽衣子
Romanised Artist :: Gojou Kai & Nakamura Meiko
SYNC.ART'S is not Romanised Name. You can put this in Tags.
Tags :: Remove this in tags "五条下位" "仲村芽衣子" It does not need to overlap with Artist.
Difficulties Name :: Standard → Normal.
mostly It kept the BMS difficulites name. Except "Standard"
※ Hitsounds / Background Image
Some Hitsouds are delayed. Change with this http://puu.sh/s9tvR/164a95216d.zip
Background Image 1366 x 768 here. Change with this http://puu.sh/s9tLj/36a19e10d6.jpg
Lack of Hitsound Quality.
I could see many mistake for hitsounds.(Surely, I felt as mistake than intention)
Some difficulties are missed about some hitsounds. Also lack of consistency with each other.
I think you can improved about it. Please check them once again.
When you do that. If you want to fix something(like Pattern), You can. All Up to you.[Beginner]When Fixed them, Tell me
00:23:181 (23181|0,23352|3) - This rhythm is kinda weird to Beginner. You can make better it.
00:23:095 - 00:23:438 - Follow the This rhythm. There is a vocal Sample with synth. It can feel easily than before. [I actually don't understand but even after reading the mod in Standard difficulty, I'll just chart it the same way as Standard]
00:34:238 - Remove a note here. Instead of that, Add here 00:34:924 - What do you think about? [Hmm, I'm fine with it i guess.]
01:00:467 (60467|0) - It's weird to me. even If there is a intention, I don't think this is necessary for the structure.
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/s9qSV/282e3ee501.jpg [Followed your idea of how it should be.]
[Standard]
00:10:238 - 00:12:981 - This part too empty than Hyper. You can add some notes in this part.
Because note density really same with Beginner. [Charted it to drum crashes now.]
00:23:095 (23095|0,23352|3) - Same reason with Beginner. It kinda weird. You can make better it. Consider once again.[^}
01:11:781 (71781|3) - This vocal sample is ended here 01:12:981 - And It can feel surely.
What do you think about? I think It does not need to extend. All difficulties did like that.[Oops, didn't see that one, good catch!]
[Hyper]
00:39:895 (39895|3,39895|2,40067|3,40067|2) -
When I compared with "Standard", It needs to be re-arranged. Please consider thoes two.
Add note on Hyper or Nerf the Standard, You can anything. [Nerfed Standard.]
01:09:981 - Add a note for bass drum. This is a option. Your decision anyway
01:23:181 - Same with above. [Added both.]
[Another]
00:12:810 - 00:12:981 - Add a note. will be emphasized. You can compare with "Hyper"
or liek this http://puu.sh/s9siS/49cff1f649.jpg [Hmmm, added note.]
00:25:324 - 00:26:695 - 00:28:067 - 00:29:438 - 00:30:810 -
Here does not need to use as 3chords. Remove a note.
For example :: You can compare with crash line. like 00:23:952 - 00:32:181 -
or Can compare with them 00:36:295 - 00:37:667 - They are added any instrument. And I can feel about it.[Alright, removed.]
00:39:895 - ~ 00:40:410 - Feedback :: http://puu.sh/s9suO/f4a438e7ca.jpg [I want to keep it as it is, feels more relevant to music imo.]
01:10:752 (70752|1) - Remove this one. It will be helped for pattern sturucture.
And 01:10:924 - 01:11:438 - Add a note here. It will be make highlight than before. [Alright.]
01:22:238 - Remove a note. When I saw the around of pattern, It was not emphasized at all.
If you wanted to highlight as vocal sample, you can keep then [Ye it's vocal thing lmao.]
01:34:410 - ~ 01:35:267 - You can add some notes in this part. This is a suggestion. [Not adding any notes, sorry :c.]
02:00:038 - ~ 02:02:867 - Remove them.p esonally, I think it is not good.
If consider the structure, Ending is better to here 01:59:952 - Since highlight of the song, It will be end up with a better feeling.
If you applied this, should not use the LN on Beginner, Standard, Hyper.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/s9t3v/31541e18e7.jpg [Removed LN on all difficulties at the end.]
Thanks for the check FCFresh Chicken wrote:
Hey long time no see! And long time no see post mod lol
Sorry but I have to pop this first because I've found a unrankable issue and low quality of hitsounds. Don't worry I will re-bubble this after your fixing. Then you are able to take qualify icon by Kawawa. You smoothly can go qualify XD
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I think hitsound is on too lacking. You can add some W on kick sections. I'm highly recommend it. I will see how you have done after this mod. Please check once again your HS.
Also you can do with this one for consistency, File -> Open Difficulty -> For Reference -> Choose other difficulties that you want to refer.
but, Another is soso, how about just make same in all difficulty? [Copied all hitsounds from Another]
Looks like 000012345 hitsound is never used. Please delete this. Or if it's using, please tell me where you've used it. [Deleted it]
[Beginner]
00:16:924 - You can't use 1/4 pattern with 175 BPM in Easy difficulty. I'm sure it will be 100% get disqualify. Better to 00:17:010 (17010|2) - remove this note, could notice your intention but it's a one of disqualify issue. [Zenny said it was okay so yE]
00:49:838 - Also same reason, please fix this one [^]
00:50:010 - I think it will be better to be double, for emphasis the kick and finish of first part. [Added]
01:01:324 (61324|2,61667|2) - Just thinking it will be more better balance, Ctrl + H will be better [Ctrl + H'd the jumps]
01:19:838 (79838|1) - Move to 3, 01:18:810 (78810|0,79838|1) - they are on one hand, if you didn't intend about this pattern, better to use 2 hands. [Moved to 3]
01:35:267 (95267|3) - It must finished on 01:35:781 - here. Also as I said, 01:35:781 (95781|2,95867|1) - you can't use it.[Extended the LN, but kept the 1/4s due to same reasoning]
[Normal]
01:10:581 - Add one more note for consistency with 01:11:095 - 01:11:781 - these sections.[Removed one note instead so that it's easier than Hyper]
[Hyper]
00:23:095 - In here, Another difficulty doesn't have a note, I think you used it for a piano sound but I suggest to remove it. for consistency also this section is based on snares. [Removed]
Another is fine. Call me after updating!
I believe it's alright if it's a low bpm song.. It would be awkward to really ignore all 1/4 on song that have like 70 bpm or something like that..Blocko wrote:
Confirming the issue here. 1/4th snaps should not be used in Easy difficulties at all cases.
Please address the issue along with the other suggestions accordingly!
Really not sure where you're getting your players from but most of my beginner friends can hit it.Feerum wrote:
Hello Seiryuu!
Grats for qualify this beatmap but before this get's moved into the Ranked section i would like to discuss about some pattern.
It's something what Fresh Chicken did mention in his bubble pop post.
I would like to talk about the Beginner difficulty.[Beginner]
The difficult is overall pretty solid. Nice beginner pattern but then i saw following:
00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2,17095|3) -
00:49:838 (49838|0,49924|1,50010|2,50010|3) -
01:35:781 (95781|2,95867|1,95952|0) -
These 3 1/4 Pattern.
I can't agree with them. Beginner/Easy difficulty's are for player which are not familiar with osu!mania or general VSRG games. They should stick with really beginner friendly pattern like 1/1 or rare 1/2 pattern with several breaks. I asked several friends which never/rarely touched osu!mania and 4 of 5 missed exactly these 1/4 pattern.
I know they may fit to the music but it doesn't fit to the difficulty overall.
The remaining Beatmap looks totally fine for me, it's just these 1/4 pattern.
Fresh Chicken's suggestion to remove the middle note of the 1/4 pattern is actually a good way to fix it
Okay and one more thing while i am here. I think your BG Quality is a bit.. poor. After 30 sec in google i found one which looks way more clear and in 1920x1080 (The new rankable size), you can find it here
And here you can see the difference: Left yours/ right the new one
Okay that's all from my side! Let me know what you think about it!
Yeah, you have a good point on that. I was mostly thinking of how 1/4th notes on easy diffs shouldn't be used on higher BPM songs, but I didn't consider the lower ones.Maxus wrote:
I believe it's alright if it's a low bpm song.. It would be awkward to really ignore all 1/4 on song that have like 70 bpm or something like that..
thisjuankristal wrote:
There are a lot of charts that have harder easy diffs than this (and by a lot actually, still getting qualified just because they dont have 3 notes 1/4s).
Still have to wait for the 24 hours rule!Draftnell wrote:
wew 1/4 pattern problem reason, comee on seiryuu i luv this map ><
SOMEONE GO ICON SECTION QUALIFY PLEASE !