don't grave it :/
I will upload a STD set in one week, we can link to each other
I will upload a STD set in one week, we can link to each other
Thanks for the mod and stars, anything i didn't reply was used ^^Eternalie wrote:
GOLDEN MOD
Hi there nyan~ Sei-chan mod from ✿Nekoworks
hope it will help :3Ma mi mu me mod , rainbow gold mooooooood desu~Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[Another]
00:02:009 (2009|3,2009|1,2009|0) - Better make it 3 notes , ( you did use 2 for piano and there's one for cymbal sound )
00:09:810 (9810|3) - add one note in 4 ( or two) but making them jack is important it's the same sound tham here 00:09:895 (9895|3,9895|1) - (nope)
00:38:695 (38695|2) - should be 2 notes according to your previous patterns~
00:49:895 (49895|1) - move to 00:49:838 (49838|1) - This note hitsound isn't the good pitch for the piano you should find the good one . (try raika hitsound library there's alot of piano hitsound ) (this was directly from the bms ver keysounds so i think they're fine)
00:49:952 (49952|2) - move to 00:49:924 (49924|2) - thoose notes are 1/4
01:07:410 (67410|1) - (optional) add one more note 01:07:495 (67495|3,67495|2) - same sound with this (nope)
01:07:667 (67667|1,67667|2) - (optional) add one more note (its actually a 3beat by 3beat but i made it a stream so that it's more fun :/)
01:54:038 (114038|3) - add to 4 ^(optional) ^
01:54:295 (114295|2) - add to 3 ^(optional) ^
[Hyper]
00:05:781 (5781|2,6295|0) - Ctrl+J , (pitch relevancy , firs note is lower in pitch tham the second one)
00:06:810 (6810|2) - move to 2
00:49:895 (49895|1,49952|2) - same as Another this should be 1/4
01:48:295 (108295|3) - add a note for cymbal sound
01:48:638 (108638|0) - ^ same add one more note
(all accept^^)
[Standard]
00:40:238 (40238|1) - (optional) you could add one more note to 2 to make a pattern , and it keep well the flow imo (nope)
00:49:895 (49895|0,49952|1) - Same as Another and Hyper , this should be 1/4
01:10:924 (70924|0) - (optional) add note here on 1 would be suggested
01:11:438 (71438|1) - add note ( there's a drum sound here , and it should follow pretty well the flow of the map imo)
01:11:610 (71610|2) - add here too (drum sound)
01:47:610 (107610|3) - I think this LN should start here : 01:48:295 (108295|0) - ( there is no real sound to press before , and it's not vocal either I think )
[Beginner]
00:17:010 (17010|2) - hmm (optional) up to you to remove this note I think it's really tricky for a newcomer to play that kind of stair
^ suggestion would be also to move 00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2) - from 1 collumn to the left so the left hand play 2 notes and right hand only 1 ( feels like a mini jump )
( note that is my feel about it , it's already nice so up to you to keep it ) (i think i'm gonna keep it because i had no problems with those patterns when i started ;w;)
00:49:895 (49895|0,49952|1,50010|2) - like Another hyper and standard , it should be 1/4 imo
01:22:067 (82067|0) - add one note
01:22:238 (82238|3) - remove
^ this is to follow your actual patterns~
01:35:952 (95952|0) - remove (imo this isn't needed , esp since it's easier diff :3 )
01:59:952 (119952|3) - (optional) add on more note for cymbal effect prefrerably not LN .
nyah~ , I've enjoyed seeing this map again :3 it's so nice >w<b
Good Luck , and Have a nice day GWD Sei-chan ^^/
/me shoots two star , yeap Rainbow stars /me runs~
I'm not gonna grave it anytime soon lel, thanks for the stars though c:Shad0w1and wrote:
don't grave it :/
I will upload a STD set in one week, we can link to each other
sure, i don't mind ^^Shad0w1and wrote:
Hi Just uploaded mine, can I ask for a link to my set?
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/300210
rip misclick someone get bn qat here to deny kudos asdfadShad0w1and wrote:
don't grave it :/
I will upload a STD set in one week, we can link to each other
Thx for the mod hams, good luck on your future mods c:JamesHappy15 wrote:
yo sofa~ m4mcolumn |1|2|3|4|
[Beginner]
00:05:781 (5781|0) - move to 2 since it the same sound on this part 00:03:038 (3038|1) -
00:10:752 (10752|1,11267|0) - move to 3 and 2
00:14:352 (14352|1) - remove (not too loud beat) (nope, used to emphasis the start of the piano and stuffs)
00:15:724 (15724|3) - ^ (^)
00:19:838 (19838|0) - ^ (^)
00:21:210 (21210|3) - ^ (^)
00:40:410 (40410|2) - ^ (too hard for the newbies) (i'll remove it if it's really a problem for them^^)
01:00:810 (60810|0) - end this LN to 01:01:324
[Standard]
00:05:267 (5267|1,5781|0) - move to 3 and 2
00:48:810 - try this one
(nope, pattern now seems fine imo :c)
01:01:838 - add(?) (nope, but good try tho)
01:09:038 (69038|3,69210|2) - ctrl+j
01:18:638 - add(?) (nope sorry hams :C)
01:55:495 - try this :3
(thx im stealing this)
noice diff though
[Hyper]
00:10:238 - this one sofa~
(nou hams, stairs are easier to hit imo ;w;)
00:22:924 - just my suggestion :3I dieded here
01:17:438 - add(?) (nope, no drum drum beat here)
01:20:181 - ^ (^)
01:22:924 (82924|1,82924|0,82924|2,83610|2,83610|3,83610|1) - woah sudden 3-notes. Can you make it 2-notes :3 (ok ok you win)
01:31:152 - add(?) (same reason as before sorry jamesu)
01:32:524 - ^ (^)
01:33:895 - ^ (^)
01:40:410 - ^ (ok i'll accept this thx ham)
[Another]
00:10:238 - just my thing
(sorry hams ;w;)
00:45:295 (45295|2,45381|1,45638|3) - why not try add another notes? (meh, i think i hear some stuff in the background for the 2 note stuff idk, might just be me)
if you added it 00:45:210 (45210|3) - move this to 2
00:50:095 - add(?)
00:50:181 - ^
00:52:067 (52067|3,53438|0) - not double? like here 00:51:724 (51724|3,51724|1) - ? (ok you win again)
00:55:238 (55238|0,55324|1) - move to 2 and 3 (following the pattern) (this was on purpose LOL ;w;)
01:10:495 (70495|2) - add (ok i didnt see this again)
01:12:895 - you know what to do :3 (nop)
01:17:267 - ^ (^)
01:24:381 (84381|0) - am i only one who didn't heard this part (i think so lol, its following the guitar thingy)
01:24:552 (84552|0) - ^ (^ since i didn't want to do it in 1/6 snap, it ends up like this hue)
rest seems fine imo
such poor mod
GL
Thanks for the mod :3Muu-chan wrote:
GOLDEN MOD
from ✿Nekoworks
we'll do some super re-check as requested :3 since we had mod it before.
* Firstly take my stars as reward :3
* Secondly please wait, in progress checking. It might take time
* Thirdly, sorry for my bad English ><"
* Lastly, all of them just suggestion
|1|2|3|4|GENERAL* I suggest to move The BMS Of Fighter 2011 -Intersection of conflict- on tags to source. Since it has BMS on source and tags. But well, i don't know it for sure ^^
* Uncheck the "Widescreen Support" since it doesn't have any SB :3
* Uncheck the "Use special style (N+1 style) for mania. But i also not sure for this ><"BEGINNERyay i think that's what i could do sei san ><" sorry for a little mod and very long delay T^T* 00:23:952 ~ 00:32:181 - i don't know what are those LN for, i heard no guitar, fast drum beat or long sound that fit to the LN >< so i suggest to change them into notes and make it more simple for Easy difficulty. (listen closely to the background lol)
* 00:33:552 (33552|1) - i suggest to stop this LN here 00:34:581 - so sei san could double this part 00:34:924 - because, it has same sound (chord) with 00:36:295 Example. (ehhh it expired, but keeping it as it is anyway c:)
* 00:39:895 - i suggest this one sei san. Because i heard that 00:39:895 - still has chord sound and long piano sound start on 00:40:067 - ^^ (nope, leaving it as it is)
* 00:49:895 (49895|0,49952|1,50010|2) - this is important. I just playback it on 25% and it isn't 1/6 but 1/4. So i suggest to snap it on 1/4 00:49:838 - :3 desu (asdfasdfasdf y u do dis to my pretty 1/6s)
* 00:50:352 (50352|0) - i suggest to move on 4
* 01:00:810 (60810|0) - if this LN for vocal, i think it should stop at 01:01:324 - (doesn't it stop there already? :0)
* 01:11:781 (71781|0) - i suggest to stop this LN on 01:12:981 - (for vocal) and add LN again from 01:12:981 ~ 01:13:324 - for fast 1/4 drum beat.
* 01:22:238 (82238|3) - i suggest to move this note on 01:22:067 - (following pattern) :3 (ehm nope. no pattern here actually lol)
* 01:23:610 (83610|3) - same here^ on 01:23:438 -
* 01:23:781 - if sei san apply that, sei san could add note here^^(nope)
* 01:47:781 - maybe add a note here to make it same with 01:47:267 (107267|0,107438|3) - (good catch)
* 01:54:467 (114467|0,115838|3) - i heard both vocal / piano sound it stops at 01:55:152 - and 01:56:867 - ^^ (to explain, the LNs aren't following vocal, for most of the map actually. They follow the sound made by the triples in Another diff c:)
GOOD LUCK
Thanks for the mod c:Rivals_7 wrote:
Hi~
from my queue 5 days ago. Sorry for delay. I have no internet connection and busy with my real life. :3
Anyways, cause many user have mod this map already, I can't detect any more thing to Mod.Click Me :3Another
01:31:152 - and - 01:33:895 - Add note. the drum and bell (?) tune is like this one - 01:29:781 (89781|1,89781|2,89781|0) - and - 01:32:524 (92524|3,92524|2,92524|0) - right? (good catch)
01:38:010 (98010|0,99381|2) - Consider to delete? no need three notes for a light tune. Isn't it? (its for the keysound)
Standard
Suggestion :3 (feel free to ignore)
01:00:467 (60467|3) - Move to 3 (ok)
If you accept that^ - 01:00:638 - add on 4 (changed)
01:11:438 (71438|0,71438|1,71610|3,71610|2,71781|0,71781|1) - I think this pattern is pretty hard in standard diff. the pattern on the hyper one is not too hard
(changed)
I'm not really into timing. But I suggest you to remove this time (the highlighted one) to remove the AiMod Issues. (All diff)
(nope, leaving it as it is)
The other diff seems perfect to me
GL~ on getting this ranked. Have a nice day [-Seiryuu-]
00:04:581 - make it 320,192,4581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
hmm nope sorry :c-Guest wrote:
Another00:04:581 - make it 320,192,4581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
19:55 Shoegazer: 3-note chords are a little overdone I think
19:55 [-Seiryuu-]: o
19:56 [-Seiryuu-]: 00:54:124 (54124|1,54124|3,54124|2) - you mean the ones like this?
19:56 Shoegazer: the one to the soft piano
19:56 Shoegazer: let me find them
19:56 Shoegazer: 00:36:295 - sounds like this
19:56 Shoegazer: I don't think it's loud enough to warrant a hand
19:57 Shoegazer: or triple
19:57 [-Seiryuu-]: hm
19:57 [-Seiryuu-]: so change to double?
19:57 Shoegazer: maybe you can accentuate it
19:57 Shoegazer: by uh
19:57 [-Seiryuu-]: drowning it
19:57 Shoegazer: hm you actually can't accentuate it
19:57 [-Seiryuu-]: :c
19:58 [-Seiryuu-]: i wanted to use triples for the sound in the background
19:58 Shoegazer: I was thinking of maybe making the 3rd note of the triplet the same as one of the notes as the double
19:58 [-Seiryuu-]: but nvm
19:58 Shoegazer: as an accentuation of the piano more than anything else
19:58 [-Seiryuu-]: o
19:58 [-Seiryuu-]: hm
19:58 Shoegazer: not quite doable since some of your patterns already do that
19:59 Shoegazer: you can also use miniholds but miniholds suck
19:59 [-Seiryuu-]: rip ideas
19:59 Shoegazer: 00:45:467 (45467|2,45467|3,45552|0,45552|1,45638|3,45724|1,45724|0,45810|2,45810|3,45895|3,45895|0,45895|1) - all of these except for the last note are doubles I think?
20:00 Shoegazer: same with 00:45:210 (45210|0,45210|3,45295|2,45381|1) -
20:00 Shoegazer: \nvm
20:00 Shoegazer: I can tell the layering scheme
20:01 [-Seiryuu-]: indecisive shoemaker
20:01 [-Seiryuu-]: XD
20:01 Shoegazer: 01:23:952 (83952|1,83952|0,84038|2,84038|3,84124|1,84124|3) - lol that's rude
20:01 [-Seiryuu-]: sorry :ccc
20:01 Shoegazer: it's fine
20:01 [-Seiryuu-]: so what about that part :O
20:02 Shoegazer: minijack caught me offguard
20:02 [-Seiryuu-]: o
20:02 Shoegazer: 01:28:410 (88410|0) - LN actually goes up to 01:28:410 (88410|0) -
20:02 Shoegazer: wat
20:02 Shoegazer: 01:28:410 (88410|0) -
20:02 Shoegazer: goddammit
20:02 Shoegazer: 01:28:752 -
20:03 [-Seiryuu-]: that LN is for the first sound only D:
20:03 Shoegazer: the guitar right?
20:03 Shoegazer: oh
20:03 Shoegazer: the bell?
20:04 [-Seiryuu-]: bell
20:04 [-Seiryuu-]: the last LN is for guitar
20:04 [-Seiryuu-]: strange layering hehe
20:04 Shoegazer: yeah I was confused for a bit, kinda inconsistent
20:04 [-Seiryuu-]: ok then i'll extend it for guitar
20:04 Shoegazer: planning to go for rank with this?
20:04 [-Seiryuu-]: probably
20:05 [-Seiryuu-]: it's already star'd so i'm gonna work on it
20:05 Shoegazer: 01:41:095 - you can probably change this section since the patterns are exactly the same as another section
20:05 Shoegazer: somethig like uh
20:05 Shoegazer: 32[13]32[14] or something idk
20:05 Shoegazer: an anchor on 3 and then an anchor on 2
20:06 [-Seiryuu-]: what's a anchor
20:06 [-Seiryuu-]: ;w;
20:06 Shoegazer: stepmania term
20:06 Shoegazer: sec
20:06 [-Seiryuu-]: mind taking a screenshot c:
20:06 Shoegazer: yeah in a bit
20:07 [-Seiryuu-]: take your time~
20:07 Shoegazer: [http://puu.sh/i741N/f2ee6d585f.png the anchor is on 1 here]
20:07 [-Seiryuu-]: oh
20:07 Shoegazer: also that looks like shit ignore the map
20:07 [-Seiryuu-]: lmao
20:08 Shoegazer: HP8.5 seems a bit harsh?
20:08 [-Seiryuu-]: well it's fine for now i guess
20:08 [-Seiryuu-]: i mean
20:08 [-Seiryuu-]: hp8.5 on this map in kind of easy
20:09 Shoegazer: true
20:09 Shoegazer: other than that there isn't too much wrong with the layering, maybe you can do some touches based on ptich relevancy
20:10 Shoegazer: you already did on some
20:10 [-Seiryuu-]: o
20:10 Shoegazer: 00:05:267 - move to 3
20:10 Shoegazer: actually
20:10 [-Seiryuu-]: done
20:11 Shoegazer: 00:05:781 - 2
20:11 [-Seiryuu-]: o
20:11 [-Seiryuu-]: done
20:11 Shoegazer: 00:06:810 - 3 maybe? you might have to change some patterns though
20:11 [-Seiryuu-]: hmm
20:12 [-Seiryuu-]: i'll move it to 1
20:12 Shoegazer: 00:07:495 - 3 could be a part of the triple for PR, again you have to change some patterns
20:12 Shoegazer: you're not layering the piano at that section though but you could always have some musical relevancy or something I guess
20:12 Shoegazer: ~musical relevancy~
20:13 [-Seiryuu-]: the triples are for either bells or cymbal in the chart
20:13 Shoegazer: I know
20:13 [-Seiryuu-]: so i'm not sure about changing them
20:14 Shoegazer: I'm not telling you to add an extra note to the triple, I'm just telling you to change the triple to something like say [134] or [123] or w/e
20:14 Shoegazer: but if you're not doing that that's fine
20:14 [-Seiryuu-]: oo
20:14 [-Seiryuu-]: i'm keeping it sorry shoe ;w;
20:14 Shoegazer: np
20:15 Shoegazer: 00:34:410 (34410|3,34410|0,34495|1,34581|0,34581|3,34667|2,34752|3,34752|0) - maybe you can vary up the doubles here
20:15 Shoegazer: since they're differently pitched
20:16 [-Seiryuu-]: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3194668 does this work? :3]
20:16 Shoegazer: that triple
20:16 Shoegazer: yeah that works
20:17 [-Seiryuu-]: oop
20:17 [-Seiryuu-]: 00:34:581 - do you hear a 1/4 beat here
20:17 [-Seiryuu-]: or is it just me
20:18 Shoegazer: lol i can hear the beats from 00:34:581 (34581|0,34581|3,34667|2,34752|0,34752|3,34838|2,34924|3,34924|0,34924|1) -
20:18 Shoegazer: so yeah 1/4 beat
20:18 [-Seiryuu-]: hm
20:18 Shoegazer: your choice
20:18 [-Seiryuu-]: nvm
20:18 [-Seiryuu-]: leaving it
20:19 Shoegazer: 00:55:495 - maybe have one of the notes in the triple a 4
20:19 Shoegazer: but you'd have to rearrange some of the other triples as well to accentuate the higher pitched sound
20:19 Shoegazer: so eh
20:20 [-Seiryuu-]: hm
20:20 [-Seiryuu-]: but actually
20:21 [-Seiryuu-]: they're arranged in [123] or [432] for patterning
20:21 [-Seiryuu-]: pretty much
20:21 Shoegazer: you could maybe change which ones have [123] or [432] then
20:21 Shoegazer: depending on pitch
20:21 Shoegazer: same applies to the second chorus
20:21 [-Seiryuu-]: hmm okay
20:22 [-Seiryuu-]: thanks shoemaker
20:23 Shoegazer: np
20:23 [-Seiryuu-]: you want some kudos for this
20:23 Shoegazer: yeah I'll post the irc
20:23 [-Seiryuu-]: okies
Thanks for the mod and starL0rdCthulhu wrote:
Hai Seri heres ur mod ples gimme $10,000 irl later plox
PS. ples be gentle and apologiesie if mod is bad i first time ples no hurt me ;_;General
- BPM and Offset : ( ✓ )
- Aimod : ( ✓ )
- Kiai : ( ✓ )
- Metadata : ( ✓ )
- Hitsound : ( ✓ ) Heard some piano here and there. I could just be hearing things. But this map certainly can have piano notes. And maybe it does. I keep doubting myself.
- Video : ( ✓ )
Columns! Get your columns here! 1/2/3/4
EasyBeginner
- 00:52:752 (52752|0,52752|1) and 00:55:495 (55495|3,55495|2); I find it a little (just a tiny bit) bland that these patterns are on alternate in this chorus. I understand that symmetry and all, but maybe have some of then move to 2/3? i'm keeping it until someone asks me to change
- Besides that, everything else was perfect IMO. It was pretty nice to play, and the patterns generally were complementing the song well.
Standard
- 01:47:781 (107781|0), have a note at /3/ and 01:47:952 (107952|3), have a note at /2/. This part here seems to be imitating the guitar, and I found that it could probably follow the patterns in 01:01:152 (61152|3,61152|1,61324|2,61324|0) too. did the first part, second part rejected
- From 01:48:295 (108295|3,108981|2,108981|0) all the way to 01:59:781 (119781|1) - It seems as though you love the right side. Through the whole of this chorus, the only /1/2/ chord I found was 01:54:467 (114467|0,114467|1). Is this intentional? i put doubles because of consistency, having a triple note in this diff would be weird
- Another than that, it was nice! I loved the chords in this one.
Hyper
- 00:14:352 (14352|0,14352|1) to 00:22:410 (22410|3) - The number of chords appearing at /1/2/ is a bit too much. Mixing them up to create a little variety should be OK. hm changed a little
- 00:25:067 (25067|3,25152|2) - Interesting pattern for this part of the song. I like it.
- 00:44:524 (44524|3,44524|2) to 00:48:467 (48467|2,48467|3) - The chords appear at /3/4/ three times in a row. I find it really uncomfortable. Well to a certain extent. changed a little
- This was a fun map to play.
Another
- 00:36:038 (36038|2,36124|1) - Notes like these (separated by 2 columns) aren't found in this part of the song. I saw a couple a few seconds back; consider having some from 00:35:610 to 00:38:695?
- 00:52:067 (52067|3,52152|2,52238|3) - Is it me or is it these notes are extremely annoying? I hate mickey mouse. (Mickey mouse voice) "hey y'all, lemme just give you some 200s to go with that 100" This is the mouse I like more: 01:45:981 (105981|0,106067|2,106152|0) nop, i want to keep the anchor on the left and right in the song sorry :C. and for the first part, i think most players can hit those so nop
- It seems like this diff has underwent massive "refurbishment", so to speak. The triple notes are aligning accordingly, and the pace (right word? Probably not) of the map is pretty well done. Good job on this one
Overall
- The song is nice, kinda built for these kinds of games (it's from BMS? I think. Yeah.)
- The notes were well drawn out, with them going with the song really well.
- This is for rank I heard? Good luck with rank, and have some stars while you're at it. 加油!
so yeah i'm sorry about most of this mod, because it conflicts with my mappingHestia- wrote:
hihi Seiryuu~
[Beginner]
00:15:895 - Add 1 nope, i'm not layering the full piano here for certain reasons soooo, ye
00:16:067 - Add 2
00:16:238 (16238|0) - Move to 3 ok
00:17:952 - Add 3
00:21:381 - Add 1
00:21:552 - Add 3
00:22:067 - Add 3
00:22:410 - Add 2
00:22:752 - Add 4 i'm sorry for all of these, but i'm gonna reject it because it's not what i'm layering :c
00:22:924 (22924|3) - Remove supposed to be for the beats in the background, but newbies can't handle it well so it because like that
00:23:095 - Add 1 ^
00:23:267 (23267|0) - Remove ☆ -There isn't even a drum here, drums are on 00:23:181 and 00:23:352. If you want to map the drums instead of my changes use these notes. ^
00:23:438 - Add 23 ^
00:23:610 (23610|2,23610|1) - Remove
00:48:295 (48295|2) - Change to normal note for vocal
sorry for rejecting most of this
[Standard]
00:22:067 - Add 2
00:22:238 - Add 1
00:22:410 - Add 2
00:22:752 - Add 1
00:22:924 (22924|1) - Remove
00:23:095 - Add 4
00:23:267 (23267|3) - Remove ☆ - There isn't even a drum here, drums are on 00:23:181 and 00:23:352. If you want to map the drums instead of my changes use these notes. same reasoning as before, sorry :c
00:23:438 - Add 23
00:34:581 (34581|3) - Make this LN that ends 00:34:752 okay
00:35:267 - Add 3 the doubles in this map are used for the background sound, so nope
00:40:752 - Add 1
00:23:952 - 00:48:467 - This section feels kind of like it should be a little harder. this difficulty is for people who are still getting used to the keys, sorry :c
00:45:210 (45210|3) - Change to LN ok
00:45:552 (45552|2) - Change to LN ok
01:01:667 (61667|3) - Change to LN nope
01:02:010 (62010|1) - Change to LN nope
01:21:895 - Add 3
01:22:238 (82238|3) - Remove
01:22:410 - Add 3
01:22:581 - Add 4
01:23:267 - Add 4
01:23:781 - Add 1
01:23:952 - Add 3
01:27:381 - Add 1
01:28:067 - Add 1
01:28:752 - Add 1
01:29:438 - Add 3 all accept
[Hyper]
00:04:581 - Add 3 ok
00:07:238 - Add 2 nope, layering piano only
00:07:324 - Add 3 ^
00:17:952 - Add 4 ^
00:18:295 - Add 4 ^
00:50:095 - Add 2 layering vocal only, so no
00:50:181 - Add 3 ^
00:50:438 - Add 3 ^
00:50:524 - Add 2 ^
00:50:610 - Add 1 ^
00:50:695 (50695|2) - Move to 4 ^
00:50:781 - Add 3 ^
00:50:867 - Add 2 ^
00:51:124 - Add 2 ^
00:51:210 - Add 3 ^
This map has opposite problem of last one, of 00:50:010 to 01:59:952 being too easy compared to the start. Some things you can do to make it harder:
01:08:181 (68181|3) - Move to 01:08:267 it's actually meant to be easy, the last difficulty patterns are relatively easy to hit, so making a jump from this to that is okay imo, i'll change it if someone else points it out
01:10:324 - Add note
01:10:495 - Add note
01:15:295 - Add note
01:18:210 - Add note
01:18:467 (78467|2) - Change to normal note; Add trills: 01:18:552 - Add 2; 01:18:638 - Add 3; 01:18:724 - Add 2
01:20:010 - Add note
01:20:181 - Add 1
01:21:467 - Add 4
01:22:152 - Add note
01:23:181 - Add 2
01:23:695 - Add 2
01:23:952 (83952|1) - Change to normal notes
01:24:724 - Add note
01:25:410 - Add note
01:26:095 - Add note
01:26:781 - Add note
01:27:467 - Add note
01:27:810 - Add note
01:28:152 - Add note
01:31:238 - Add note
01:32:952 - Add note
01:33:981 - Add note
01:34:324 - Add note
01:34:667 - Add note
01:35:010 - Add note
01:35:095 - Add note
01:41:181 - Add note
01:42:552 - Add note
01:43:838 (103838|0) - Move to 01:43:924
01:44:267 - Add 1
01:48:124 - Add 3
01:48:895 - Add 3
01:49:752 - Add 4
01:51:124 - Add 1
01:51:810 - Add 1
01:52:067 (112067|0) - Move to 01:52:152
01:52:495 - Add 1
01:53:867 - Add note
01:54:038 - Add note
01:55:238 - Add note
01:56:267 - Add note
01:56:610 - Add note
01:56:952 - Add note ☆
01:57:124 - Add note ☆
01:59:867 (119867|2) - Remove
[Another]
Seems good
Good luck [-Seiryuu-] !! c:
Thanks for the mod![GraveChaos] wrote:
[General]
☑ Background
☑ Timing
☑ Song Setup
☑ Metadata
☑ Misc. . .
|1|2|3|4|
[Beginner]
00:23:267 (23267|0) - What does this note signifies? Seems like a ghost note for me. I don't hear a particular instrument that signifies this SN. Pls check this one, as for my opinion this part only needs re-pattern maybe? i layered it to the drums instead ^^
00:40:410 (40410|2) - Remove, not necessary for Beginner level. The SN with 'W' is enough to represent the Cymbal end. okay
00:44:524 (44524|2) - Add 'W' just like the same as your previous 2 noted such as 00:43:152 (43152|1,43152|0) - and for their consistency. ok
01:01:324 (61324|2) - Add 'C' it's the same as this 01:00:638 (60638|2) - ok
01:22:581 (82581|0) - Move to |4| for pattern consistency and better/relax-able hand coordination. And as it's for consistency it follows the rhythm/beat well. ok
01:47:952 (107952|3) - Add 'C' ok
01:57:210 (117210|1,117724|0) - and 01:58:410 (118410|1) - Add 'W' ok
[Standard]
00:13:495 (13495|1) - Move to |3| for pattern consistency, notice your pattern next to this. ok
00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency, notice your pattern next to this. ok
00:34:924 (34924|3) - Move to |1| instead for pattern consistency and better pattern and hand balance. You will notice this pattern from 00:29:438 to the next 2nd noted remember the alignment of 2 noted and get back to this one that i said to move. Notice until the 2nd noted of this too. ok
01:01:324 (61324|0) - Add 'C' ok
01:09:038 (69038|2,69210|3) - Ctrl + G as this becomes like this 01:07:838 (67838|3,67838|1) - it's better to make the one that i specified to be ctrl'd + G to make a consistent pattern. ok
01:07:838 (67838|3,67838|1) - Remove not necessary then 01:13:324 (73324|0) - Add 'W' added w but won't remove
[Hyper]
00:04:410 (4410|2) - Move to |2| it is not necessary to be stacked with 00:04:581 (4581|2) - because they don't have the same rhythm/sound/beat/pitch. . . . it's better to be in |2| since it will make a good hand coordinated pattern.
00:07:324 Add note to |3| for snare?
00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency
00:48:981 (48981|1) - You forgot the 'W' here.
all accept
[Another]
00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency ok
01:18:810 (78810|3) - Add 'W' ok
01:34:238 (94238|1) - Add 'C' ah nope
[Black Another]
00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency ok
Nice map! I like the song! Lol Good luck! >w<)b
Izect Ztenz wrote:
Hi
Listen, if i didn't mod your maps it means I have a busyness IRL.Some modder have a busy RL until they couldn't check their Modding Queue. Okay
Now, if you want to accept or reject this. Is up to you now.
|0|1|2|3|
[Beginner]01:58:067 - Add note @ |0|
01:58:238 - Add note @ |1|
nope sorry
[Standard]00:04:581 - Add note @ |1| ok
00:06:810 (6810|1) - Move to |2| ok
00:06:981 - Add note @ |1| nope, layering piano only here
00:22:067 - Add note @ |0| nope, layering drums only here
00:22:238 - Add note ^
00:22:410 - ^ ^
00:45:210 - Add note @ |0| ok
[Hyper]00:04:581 - Add note @ |3| ok
00:06:981 - Add note ok
00:11:610 (11610|1) - Cymbal sound, Move to |0| nop
00:33:552 (33552|1) - Cymbal sound again, Move to |0| nop
01:14:352 (74352|1) - Clap sound, Move to |3| ok
01:14:695 (74695|0,74695|1) - Move to |1| |2| nop
01:59:952 - Add two Note -> |1| |2| nop
Next time, Do not enforce me to mod you map via PM again
Understand?
Good Luck
even though this mod wasn't helpful, it was a good try though ^^-[Hotaru]- wrote:
hi hii From Kuhaku Mania Mod House
Sorry For Late Reply >< Getting Busy With RL :"
Okay lets start ItBeginnereverything was okayAnother00:02:009 (2009|3,2009|1,2009|0) - hmmm i just thinking you should start is from here 00:01:924 (if i right)
The Rest Of Them Are (i'm layering this to the bell thing, and it starts at 00:02:009 -, so sorry :C
i'm soo sorry for the bad mod
i'm still learning How To mod and Mapping
Good luck yooo :3
thanks i must try hard next time ><[-Seiryuu-] wrote:
even though this mod wasn't helpful, it was a good try though ^^-[Hotaru]- wrote:
hi hii From Kuhaku Mania Mod House
Sorry For Late Reply >< Getting Busy With RL :"
Okay lets start ItBeginnereverything was okayAnother00:02:009 (2009|3,2009|1,2009|0) - hmmm i just thinking you should start is from here 00:01:924 (if i right)
The Rest Of Them Are (i'm layering this to the bell thing, and it starts at 00:02:009 -, so sorry :C
i'm soo sorry for the bad mod
i'm still learning How To mod and Mapping
Good luck yooo :3
Thanks for the mod, but this map is going to grave anyway.Abraxos wrote:
haha fuck you no such thing as graveyard in my booksSPOILERplease no grave i put 10 stars 1graved star=1cri
1|2|3|4Govind's another
- 00:07:152 (7152|1,7152|0) - There's the piano 00:05:267 (5267|2,5781|1,6295|3,6810|0) - and the bass thingy 00:04:581 (4581|0,4581|1,6981|2,6981|3) - so three notes here?
- 00:07:324 (7324|1,7324|3) - Notes here perhaps? The shifting synth beats (ie 00:07:495 (7495|3,7495|0,7581|1,7581|2,7667|0,7667|3,7838|3,7838|2,7924|1,7924|0,8010|2,8010|3) - ) is present here too
- 00:15:381 (15381|2,15724|2) - why same column lol changed
- 00:29:781 (29781|3,29781|2,29867|1,29867|0,29952|3,29952|2,30124|0,30124|1,30210|2,30210|3,30295|0,30295|1,30467|3,30467|1,30552|2,30552|0,30638|1,30638|3) - fuck these patterns i cant play them ;-;
- 00:40:067 (40067|2,40238|3) - crtl-g
- 01:10:924 (70924|1) - this note is stronger than 01:10:752 (70752|1) - in terms of loudness i guess so maybe have 2 notes for the second one or change column?
- 01:11:610 (71610|2,71610|0,71610|3) - vocals? i dunno why this is 3 notes. maybe have this so the bass beat thingy is emphasized more? the suggestion i put is crude af but whatevs u get what i mean changed to something else
- 01:11:952 (71952|2,71952|3) - ghooooooooosssssssssssstttttt fun fact in your body theres a spoopy skeleton git spooked
- 01:17:610 (77610|0,77610|2,77695|3,77695|1,77781|0,77781|2,77952|2,77952|3,78124|3,78124|1,78210|0,78210|2,78295|1,78295|3,78467|0,78467|2,78552|1,78552|3,78638|2,78638|0,78724|1) - i would map out the piano notes here but after that you would have the obligation to hitsound it so up to you
- 01:14:524 (74524|3) - missing note
- 01:17:267 (77267|1) - oh wait are u purposely missing them
- 01:20:010 (80010|2) - probably lol
- 01:28:581 (88581|3) - move to 4 guitar rift goes down in pitch so shouldn't follow the repeating patterns in 01:28:067 ok(88067|1,88152|2,88238|1,88324|2,88410|1) -
- 01:33:895 (93895|1,93895|2,93895|0) - up to next ln - change to this? theres the back and forth piece of shit sound going on in the music(00:46:238 (46238|0,46238|2,46324|3,46324|1,46410|0,46410|2,46581|1,46581|3,46667|0,46667|2,46752|3,46752|1,46924|0,46924|1,47010|2,47010|3,47095|1,47095|0) - )
- 01:40:067 (100067|0,100238|1) - it would take a babies ear to hear the piano in the music here. also move 01:40:067 (100067|0) - to 4 and 01:40:238 (100238|1) - to 3 cuz the piano goes down in pitch ok
teh streams are too hard pls nerf thx
no kds, gd luckfor rankfinding a bn to pray to
Aw please... don't let it end like this...[-Seiryuu-] wrote:
Thanks for the mod, but this map is going to grave anyway.
I've lost hope in any of the BNs in the past 8 months, and probably more to come.
This map is dead.
Thanks for the mod, and I think that the ghost notes are acceptable.Abraxos wrote:
wow i used to use color for my mods lmao
govinds another hehGeneral
- BPM and Offset : ( ✓ )
- Aimod : ( × ) lol the tags please dont hit me
- Kiai : ( ✓ )
- Metadata : ( ✓ )
- Hitsound : ( ✓ )
- Video : ( ✓ )
Beginner
00:10:752 (10752|2,11267|1,11781|2) - you could do this for PR things
[I'd rather not tbh]
00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2) - could shift to 1 because 1's pretty blank [Shifted the pervious pattern]
00:17:010 (17010|2,17610|3) - could put in same column because PR [Would prefer the stair thing]
00:48:295 (48295|2) - idk mang doesnt seem legit to have LN here to follow the vocals, feel like a note is enough to convey the impact of it. aft all i didnt really find any of these LNs anywher ele except for things like 00:51:038 (51038|2) - [Changed to single note]
01:15:895 - note plis [Ok]
01:24:124 - maybe? note [Ok]
01:50:352 (110352|1) - to 1, pretty bare there again [Ok]
yup thats it weeeeeNormal
00:04:581 (4581|1) - throughout section from start till 00:12:981 (12981|2,12981|3) - youve followed the piano except for this part
00:15:381 - piano here
00:17:095 (17095|3,17610|0) - idk these seem like theyre following the piano to me so [Ye i fucked up on those parts fuc me]
[Ok I'll take this]
00:20:867 - dk why is this ignored
00:22:238 - beginner has a note here welp, guessing youre transiting into the drummy section so id recommend removing the note over in beginner [00:35:952 (35952|2,36295|1,36638|2,36981|1) - meh. move 00:36:981 (36981|1) - to 1 perhaps [Those parts were fucked up too zzz]
00:40:410 (40410|3,40752|3) - you never really did stack them like this [What are you on]
00:56:524 (56524|1,56695|3,56867|1,57038|3,57210|1,57381|3,57552|1,57724|3,57895|1,58067|3,58238|1) - is this intentional w e w [O boy fuck me]
01:07:495 (67495|1,67667|0,67838|1,68010|0,68181|1) - never really had this in this chorus too [It's 1/2 snap mango, should be fine unless you're shit]
01:14:524 - 01:17:267 - 01:20:010 - are these gaps intentional [Yes they are]
01:18:810 (78810|0,78981|1,79152|0,79324|1) - feels like you can do something other than this here [Changed]
01:27:038 (87038|2,87381|0,87381|1,87724|3,88067|2,88067|1,88410|2,88410|0,88752|1,88752|3) - maybe you could just continue the stream on from 01:26:010 (86010|1,86181|3,86352|1,86524|3,86695|2,86867|1) - and not have the LNs here that are pretty jarring as its kinda steps down its intensity even though the guitar solos ongoing [Just gonna add a few more 1/2's then]
01:26:010 (86010|1,86181|3,86352|1,86524|3,86695|2,86867|1) - move any of these somewhere else idk [Ye okae]
01:32:867 (92867|2,92867|1,93210|0) - arent these supposed to stack
01:34:238 (94238|3,94238|1,94581|0) - yeah stack just like 01:31:495 (91495|3,91838|3) [Fucked up here too lmao]
01:45:895 (105895|1,106067|0,106238|1,106410|0,106581|1) - same thing as above [Not sure what's so bad about a 1/2 trill but okay????]
01:52:752 (112752|2,112924|3,113095|2,113267|3,113438|2) - maybe you could keep these as [1][4] things? for hand balance [Meh i think they're fine]
01:58:581 (118581|2) - the snarey thingy isnt too obvious until 01:58:752 - so you might wanna consider removing this [Ye okay why not]
will just point out ghosties i guess, wont go too much into ahhh pls delete mode nomHard
00:15:381 -00:20:867 - dk why youre ignoring this tbh [Fuck]
00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2,17095|3,17610|3,18124|0) - PR things again [Not gonna change this]
00:25:152 (25152|2,25324|2) - maybe dont stack these [Changed]
00:32:438 (32438|0,32781|2) - might be ghosties, theres that slight ssssssssssssss sound that can cover for it if you want that
00:33:810 (33810|1,33981|1,34152|1,34324|1) - welp [Changing part of it, keeping the end and reverse stairs]
00:43:152 (43152|0,43324|1) - since youve been stacking them before the chord (see: 00:37:495 (37495|1,37667|1,37667|3,37752|0,38695|1,38781|2,38867|1,38867|0) - ) and then chose to invert that fact over the the front of the chord (see: 00:41:781 (41781|2,41781|3,41867|1,41952|3) - ) id rather you stack them
00:44:352 (44352|0,44524|0,44524|3,44610|1,44695|3) - welp choose one side or the other i guess [You really don't have to write so many lines about the same problem, it's much better to save space]
00:45:210 - double?
00:46:067 (46067|2) - to 4, 00:45:724 (45724|2,45895|2,46067|2) - maybe not a great idea to carry them stacks over
00:51:552 (51552|2,51724|1,51724|3,52238|2,52410|1,52410|3) - consistency pls with 00:52:924 (52924|2,53095|1,53095|2,53610|2,53781|2,53781|1) -
00:55:667 (55667|2,55838|3,56010|2,56181|3,56352|2,56524|3,56695|2,56867|3,57038|2,57210|3,57381|2,57552|3,57724|2,57895|3,58067|2,58238|3,58410|2,58581|3,58752|2,58924|3,59095|2,59267|3,59438|2) - -insert spy meme here-
yeah tbh fam better to use those stacking things to allow for more breathing space so to speak, since youve used the LNs and now only have 3 columns to spare [Gonna redo this, stop making so many lines already jesus, i keep clicking on them to find the exact same thing that's wrong]
<later insert>
i think you should have the stacky chorus at the end, and have the middle section be 01:40:752 (100752|1,100924|2,101095|3,101095|0,101267|2,101438|0,101610|2,101781|3,101781|0,101952|2,102124|3) - these things. reason being intensity and whatnot, so yeah.
00:55:324 (55324|0,55495|3) - crtl-h thanks
00:59:438 (59438|2,59610|2) - pretty sure this hasnt came out before herejust a something suggestion[It's fine for me, and a few other testplayers around the skill level needed to play this map (96%<)]id say the stacks right beside the notes are --fine-- since song is 175 but it doesnt really make this diff a little un-DTable tbh (i just suck at jacks heh)
01:01:495 (61495|2,61667|2) - maybe you could have the stacks follow the twangy sound in the music
[Keeping it lmao]
01:03:552 (63552|3,63724|3) - could be just me whining like a baby but yeah i dont really appreciate these [Yeah you just suck, I'll change them anyway]
01:03:895 (63895|1,64067|2,64238|1,64410|2,64581|1,64752|2,64924|1) - same thing with the staks
yeah whole chorus same thing, nothing else
01:18:124 (78124|0,78295|1) - why arent these doubles, 01:17:438 (77438|0,77438|2,77610|0,77610|3,77781|2,77781|1,77952|3,77952|0) - have piano notes and are doubles [Listen to the beat in the background man, and don't give me that baby ear shit again, i can hear them while playing]
01:14:524 - 01:20:010 - 01:17:267 - idk the reason behind the choice of ignoring this tbh [It gives this sense of pausing, instead of constant chord streaming which sucks]
01:22:752 (82752|0,82752|2) - idk if this is doubled intentionally, i get that 01:22:238 (82238|0,82238|3,83610|2,83610|3) - might be doubles because of vocals but that double doesnt have a vocal line and any drum thing for that matter [SaMe ThInG aS aBoVe]
01:32:867 (92867|1,93038|0,93210|1,93381|0,93552|1,93724|0,93895|1,94067|0,94238|1,94410|3,94581|2,94752|3,94924|2) - not really balanced are theysuggestion01:38:181 (98181|1,98352|2) - most likely ghostiesalso could you make 01:32:352 (92352|3,92524|2,92695|3,92867|2) - lead into this thrilly thing better
01:47:781 (107781|3,107781|2,107952|1,107952|0,108295|3,108295|0,108467|1,108638|0,108638|2) - make consistent with 01:01:152 (61152|0,61152|2,61324|1,61324|3,61495|2,61667|2,61667|0,61838|1,62010|0,62010|2) - and the suggestions i made above (if you accepted them of course haha kms) [No]
01:59:181 - 01:59:524 - some drum thing here [I'm not layering the drum at all lol]Another
00:11:867 (11867|2,12210|1) - 00:12:552 (12552|3) - same thing from hyper, couldddd be ghost notes
00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2,17095|3,17610|3,18124|0) - PR hehe
00:33:210 (33210|3,33381|3,33552|3,33724|3,33895|3,34067|3,34238|3,34410|3,34581|3,34752|3,34924|3) - mate what [Fuck.]
welp the chorus has a likely ghostie on the 2 blue tick of each 1/1 zzzzzzzzz
i dont really know whether or not you can find a BN willing to go with this, maybe there are a handful but yeah you know how hard it is to get any BN to check your map
personally, i think the ghosties are really fine, good even, esp. in complementing the chorussome suggestions i guessok i wont really mention anything more about the chorus from now on, maybe you could think about it or smth
you could have the triple notes kinda leading towards a certain direction to at least differentiate the chorus from the other sections
could also have claps be triples and make this section a 1/2, but thats retarded
or you could just make everything as dense as possible and have the claps and the 00:52:752 (52752|0,52752|2,52752|3) - whatever this is into triples
i know these suggestions might be retar but yeah idk what other patterns other than a stream now tbh
sorry if it kinda destroys the stream thing, but yeah ranking criteria :V
01:11:781 (71781|3,71781|0,72981|1,72981|2,73067|0,73067|3,73152|1,73152|2,73238|3,73238|0,73324|2,73324|1) - idk why but i like this a lot
01:13:495 (73495|2) - maybe move this to 4 [Ok]
01:15:724 (75724|2,75895|3,75895|2,76067|2,76067|3,76238|3) - nom [Feels okay to play, doesn't affect playability at this level]
01:17:610 (77610|3,77610|2,77695|1,77695|0,77781|2,77781|3,78124|0,78124|1,78210|3,78210|2,78295|0,78295|1,78467|3,78467|0,78552|2,78552|1,78638|3,78638|0) - sounds seem too light to warrant jumpthrills, maybe you could keep the claps as jumps but others seem kinda meh in a sense [Keeping it because jumptrills accentuate the rhythm better]
01:14:524 - 01:17:267 - 01:20:010 - same as before, dk why you jumped over this [God damn if it has a spacing for every single difficulty, then it's fucking intended asdfadsfasdf. No one makes that kind of mistake 4 times u apple]
01:23:095 (83095|2,83095|3,83181|0,83181|1,83267|2,83267|3) - same as before, doesnt seem too impactful to be a jumpthrill tbh
01:28:152 (88152|2,88324|2,88495|2,88667|2) - gae tbh [This one is a special case, it's intended]
01:34:152 (94152|3) - to 01:33:981 -
01:34:324 - 01:34:667 - note here [Meh i'd rather keep my own notes, feels so much better to play]
01:34:838 (94838|0) - move to 01:35:010 -
01:38:181 (98181|1,98352|2) - seems like ghosties, same as hyper [Doubt so.]
01:40:238 (100238|1) - to 3/4, 01:40:238 (100238|1,100410|1,100581|1,100752|1,100924|1) - nom [Don't want to make a RH trill]
01:47:781 (107781|1,107781|3,107952|0,107952|2,108124|1,108295|2,108295|1,108295|0) - make consistent with 01:01:152 (61152|3,61152|2,61324|1,61324|0,61495|2,61495|3,61581|1,61667|3,61667|0,61667|2,61838|1,61838|2) -
02:00:638 (120638|1,120724|2,120810|1) - make these like alternate hands, i.e. [1][4][1] then [3][2][3] smth like that, right now it thrills kinda are weird because 02:00:295 (120295|0,120467|0,120638|1,120810|1) - nom [Aa fuck okay then]
dk if this is kdsable, maybe it is
good luck with rank, if you need a recheck just call me again idm too much
Thanks for the mod!Han Solo wrote:
Status: Active Did someone say revive?
Only checked for patterns
Using lane 1-2-3-4Standard Mod
- 00:04:581 (4581|1) - Notes like these are inconsistent, the entire notes are focused on the piano, whilst that note is a kick. I suggest removing notes like these. [i personally thing it's fine to layer the kick in lol, no change sorry]
- 00:21:552 (21552|0) - Move to 2? (Is a bit easier to play) [ok]
- 00:22:238 (22238|1,22410|0) - Should be 1-2, makes more sense pitch-wise [changed]
- 00:22:924 (22924|1) - ? Should be on 00:22:752 (22752|1) [ok]
- 00:23:181 (23181|0,23352|3) - ? Should be on 00:23:095 (23095|0,23438|3), and 3 might be better than 4. [ok]
- 00:39:895 (39895|1) - Change to http://puu.sh/pCZNp/8e62ab2a0d.jpg, or something similiar [ yeah okay that looks nice]
- 01:11:781 (71781|3) - Should stop 01:12:981 (72981|2) there, since the "eeee" sounds stops there.[hmm okay]
- 01:21:381 (81381|3) - You're charting the percussion, but suddently you stop and start charting vocals? I suggest you add the percussion as well, in combination with the vocals, because 01:24:295 (84295|1) here you do that as well. [removed the vocal notes]
- 01:27:038 (87038|2) - I think these are guitar? 01:29:781 (89781|3), then why stop guitar there? [i actually have no idea how to chart this part so yE]
Hyper Mod
- 00:39:895 (39895|2) - Wouldn't something like http://puu.sh/pD07Z/b159e51336.jpg that be more fun? Double holds is also an option. [alright then, i'll use the one in the picture]
- 00:49:838 (49838|1,49924|2,50010|3,50010|0) - [4][3][21] would be better [i'll just crtl F the jumptrill behind to make it easier]
- 01:11:781 (71781|1) - Yay, Kamui patterns. Ditch the holds and make it little bit more fun to play. Or use a single hold on 1 and have some spins, or something. [i really like the pattern personally, so no change mang]
- 01:29:781 (89781|2) - Maybe start charting guitar here? Makes the chart a little bit more interesting, just like in Standard? [i think i'll just leave it be, don't really like to use LNs in higher difficulties. I'll change it if someone else points it out]
- 01:55:838 (115838|3) - Sounds "aaaaa" stops at 01:56:867 (116867|0) [shortened the LN]
Good luck, hope it gets rankedAnother ModThanatos ?
- 00:02:524 (2524|2) - Could be doubles, 00:04:581 (4581|1) and that a triple, to spice up the beginning a bit more. [keeping it as it is, sorry]
00:07:495 (7495|3) - This part is rather dense, anyways, so it wouldn't be too dense for the beginning.[i think it's fine lol, odesn't really affecrt the difficulty]- 00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2,17095|3,17610|3) - Makes no sense pitch-wise. 1-2-4-3 would be better.[okay]
- 00:38:867 (38867|3) - StepMania holds! Not sure what the QAT's / BN's think of this, but it might be better to remove those, not sure though...[ pretty sure they're acceptable]
- 00:39:895 (39895|2,40067|2) - Repeat the holds as well, so add 00:40:067 (40067|1,40067|0)[okay]
- 00:40:067 (40067|2,40238|3,40410|3,40410|2) - Is all 1/4's, so add those as well.[i prefer keeping it this way, hard to layer 1/4s in with the LN]
- 01:01:667 (61667|2) - The Kiai here should be connected, makes no sense to have a gap there, same there 01:48:295 (108295|3)[kiai is like that for all difficulties, i'll change it if it's a unrankable issue]
- 01:11:781 (71781|1) - Kamui please, same suggestion as Hyper [same reason as before]
- 01:11:781 (71781|3,73067|3) - That is also very awkward [it's fine mango, testplayers said it was fine]
- 01:33:895 (93895|2) - Why not use 1/4's here? [uhh, i think keeping it as 3 beat is fine right now, will change it if it's an issue]
- 01:36:981 (96981|0,97324|3,97667|1) - Doubles? Since you triple crash anyways [keeping it as singles]
Thanks kawawa <3Kawawa wrote:
Helowalo SeiSei[General]
※ Metadata
Artist :: 五条下位 & 仲村芽衣子
Romanised Artist :: Gojou Kai & Nakamura Meiko
SYNC.ART'S is not Romanised Name. You can put this in Tags.
Tags :: Remove this in tags "五条下位" "仲村芽衣子" It does not need to overlap with Artist.
Difficulties Name :: Standard → Normal.
mostly It kept the BMS difficulites name. Except "Standard"
※ Hitsounds / Background Image
Some Hitsouds are delayed. Change with this http://puu.sh/s9tvR/164a95216d.zip
Background Image 1366 x 768 here. Change with this http://puu.sh/s9tLj/36a19e10d6.jpg
Lack of Hitsound Quality.
I could see many mistake for hitsounds.(Surely, I felt as mistake than intention)
Some difficulties are missed about some hitsounds. Also lack of consistency with each other.
I think you can improved about it. Please check them once again.
When you do that. If you want to fix something(like Pattern), You can. All Up to you.[Beginner]When Fixed them, Tell me
00:23:181 (23181|0,23352|3) - This rhythm is kinda weird to Beginner. You can make better it.
00:23:095 - 00:23:438 - Follow the This rhythm. There is a vocal Sample with synth. It can feel easily than before. [I actually don't understand but even after reading the mod in Standard difficulty, I'll just chart it the same way as Standard]
00:34:238 - Remove a note here. Instead of that, Add here 00:34:924 - What do you think about? [Hmm, I'm fine with it i guess.]
01:00:467 (60467|0) - It's weird to me. even If there is a intention, I don't think this is necessary for the structure.
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/s9qSV/282e3ee501.jpg [Followed your idea of how it should be.]
[Standard]
00:10:238 - 00:12:981 - This part too empty than Hyper. You can add some notes in this part.
Because note density really same with Beginner. [Charted it to drum crashes now.]
00:23:095 (23095|0,23352|3) - Same reason with Beginner. It kinda weird. You can make better it. Consider once again.[^}
01:11:781 (71781|3) - This vocal sample is ended here 01:12:981 - And It can feel surely.
What do you think about? I think It does not need to extend. All difficulties did like that.[Oops, didn't see that one, good catch!]
[Hyper]
00:39:895 (39895|3,39895|2,40067|3,40067|2) -
When I compared with "Standard", It needs to be re-arranged. Please consider thoes two.
Add note on Hyper or Nerf the Standard, You can anything. [Nerfed Standard.]
01:09:981 - Add a note for bass drum. This is a option. Your decision anyway
01:23:181 - Same with above. [Added both.]
[Another]
00:12:810 - 00:12:981 - Add a note. will be emphasized. You can compare with "Hyper"
or liek this http://puu.sh/s9siS/49cff1f649.jpg [Hmmm, added note.]
00:25:324 - 00:26:695 - 00:28:067 - 00:29:438 - 00:30:810 -
Here does not need to use as 3chords. Remove a note.
For example :: You can compare with crash line. like 00:23:952 - 00:32:181 -
or Can compare with them 00:36:295 - 00:37:667 - They are added any instrument. And I can feel about it.[Alright, removed.]
00:39:895 - ~ 00:40:410 - Feedback :: http://puu.sh/s9suO/f4a438e7ca.jpg [I want to keep it as it is, feels more relevant to music imo.]
01:10:752 (70752|1) - Remove this one. It will be helped for pattern sturucture.
And 01:10:924 - 01:11:438 - Add a note here. It will be make highlight than before. [Alright.]
01:22:238 - Remove a note. When I saw the around of pattern, It was not emphasized at all.
If you wanted to highlight as vocal sample, you can keep then [Ye it's vocal thing lmao.]
01:34:410 - ~ 01:35:267 - You can add some notes in this part. This is a suggestion. [Not adding any notes, sorry :c.]
02:00:038 - ~ 02:02:867 - Remove them.p esonally, I think it is not good.
If consider the structure, Ending is better to here 01:59:952 - Since highlight of the song, It will be end up with a better feeling.
If you applied this, should not use the LN on Beginner, Standard, Hyper.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/s9t3v/31541e18e7.jpg [Removed LN on all difficulties at the end.]