Did someone say revive?
Only checked for patterns
Using lane 1-2-3-4
Only checked for patterns
Using lane 1-2-3-4
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- 00:04:581 (4581|1) - Notes like these are inconsistent, the entire notes are focused on the piano, whilst that note is a kick. I suggest removing notes like these.
- 00:21:552 (21552|0) - Move to 2? (Is a bit easier to play)
- 00:22:238 (22238|1,22410|0) - Should be 1-2, makes more sense pitch-wise
- 00:22:924 (22924|1) - ? Should be on 00:22:752 (22752|1)
- 00:23:181 (23181|0,23352|3) - ? Should be on 00:23:095 (23095|0,23438|3), and 3 might be better than 4.
- 00:39:895 (39895|1) - Change to http://puu.sh/pCZNp/8e62ab2a0d.jpg, or something similiar
- 01:11:781 (71781|3) - Should stop 01:12:981 (72981|2) there, since the "eeee" sounds stops there.
- 01:21:381 (81381|3) - You're charting the percussion, but suddently you stop and start charting vocals? I suggest you add the percussion as well, in combination with the vocals, because 01:24:295 (84295|1) here you do that as well.
- 01:27:038 (87038|2) - I think these are guitar? 01:29:781 (89781|3), then why stop guitar there?
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- 00:39:895 (39895|2) - Wouldn't something like http://puu.sh/pD07Z/b159e51336.jpg that be more fun? Double holds is also an option.
- 00:49:838 (49838|1,49924|2,50010|3,50010|0) - [4][3][21] would be better
- 01:11:781 (71781|1) - Yay, Kamui patterns. Ditch the holds and make it little bit more fun to play. Or use a single hold on 1 and have some spins, or something.
- 01:29:781 (89781|2) - Maybe start charting guitar here? Makes the chart a little bit more interesting, just like in Standard?
- 01:55:838 (115838|3) - Sounds "aaaaa" stops at 01:56:867 (116867|0)
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Thanatos ?
- 00:02:524 (2524|2) - Could be doubles, 00:04:581 (4581|1) and that a triple, to spice up the beginning a bit more. 00:07:495 (7495|3) - This part is rather dense, anyways, so it wouldn't be too dense for the beginning.
- 00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2,17095|3,17610|3) - Makes no sense pitch-wise. 1-2-4-3 would be better.
- 00:38:867 (38867|3) - StepMania holds! Not sure what the QAT's / BN's think of this, but it might be better to remove those, not sure though...
- 00:39:895 (39895|2,40067|2) - Repeat the holds as well, so add 00:40:067 (40067|1,40067|0)
- 00:40:067 (40067|2,40238|3,40410|3,40410|2) - Is all 1/4's, so add those as well.
- 01:01:667 (61667|2) - The Kiai here should be connected, makes no sense to have a gap there, same there 01:48:295 (108295|3)
- 01:11:781 (71781|1) - Kamui please, same suggestion as Hyper
- 01:11:781 (71781|3,73067|3) - That is also very awkward
- 01:33:895 (93895|2) - Why not use 1/4's here?
- 01:36:981 (96981|0,97324|3,97667|1) - Doubles? Since you triple crash anyways